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|The squirrel on the roof, basking in the morning sun
2 - about the time when I am done with my own morning routine, bath and toilet, meditation and yoga, and...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jan 29, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 30, 2013
|IELTS- Most schools planning to replace sports classes with more academic sessions
4 - Thanks dumi, arun, I forget to proofread this essay that is why some places it is incomplete. They...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 30, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 30, 2013
|Far-sighted/ Persevering/ Help my progres; Important qualities of a good boss
Writing FeedbackQingye - Jan 29, 2013 / Qingye - Jan 30, 2013
|IELTS; INTERNET BRINGS THE WORLD TOGETHER AND MAKE IT SMALLER
3 - The Internet havehas becomea big part of our daily life. It existedexists everywhere; office, home and even your cell...
Writing Feedbackmanson20 - Jan 29, 2013 / somysojan - Jan 30, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Economical developments degrade Social values?
4 - let me suggest this way as its an introductory sentence and it should have a punch. Nowadays,...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 29, 2013 / somysojan - Jan 30, 2013
|Parents have an exceptionally great impact on their children; TOEFL
Writing FeedbackIcebird - Jan 7, 2013 / Qingye - Jan 29, 2013
|Today television is an important object which help people to connect each other from far places
6 - Some program in television allows people to connect with officials and experts. They can talk about their individual problems...
Writing Feedbackashkanboorboori - Dec 31, 2012 / Qingye - Jan 29, 2013
|We shouldn't rely on the easier-prepared food too much, even though it has made our life much easier
2 - This is a good essay you have raised some relevant points but in some cases you are reiterating what...
Writing FeedbackQingye - Jan 29, 2013 / Dr Seus - Jan 29, 2013
|(IELTS ESSAY) pros and cons of technology in human life.
3 - Hai Somy... Good attempt...): :In addition to....causes...:===> causes pollution to our environment and therby direct.... :In...
Writing Feedbacksomysojan - Jan 29, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 29, 2013
|IELTS LETTER-historical building in town and the city council wants to pull it dow
4 - ..."demolishing" is a good key word to use for destroying buildings. This was a shocking news...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 29, 2013 / dumi - Jan 29, 2013
|Childcare training course for parents. Agree or Disagree?
7 - Thanks Dev...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Jan 28, 2013 / Arun0506 - Jan 29, 2013
|[IELTS Essay] Government - Investments in Arts is not a waste of money
2 - This is too close to the prompt introduction. You may take the idea, but present it differently; Governments...
Writing Feedbackmt22 - Jan 29, 2013 / dumi - Jan 29, 2013
|IELTS : museum is for education or for entertainment? BOTH
5 - Hai somy.. Overall good attempt.. Your opinion about why museums to be enjoyable is weak in terms of...
Writing Feedbacksomysojan - Jan 28, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 29, 2013
|IELTS-Countries develop economies improve living standards.degradation social values
6 - .... In my view, unemployment cannot be eradicated, but can be controlled or reduced. Even in highly develped...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 28, 2013 / dumi - Jan 29, 2013
|TECHNOLOGY HAS BEEN VIEWED AS A TWO EDGED SWORD, preparing for IELTS in Feb...
3 - Hai... :The basic example is THE invention.... :now distance===> now LONG distances... :this luxury has brings...
Writing FeedbackSKhan - Jan 27, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 29, 2013
|IELTS- Advertisement encourages consumers to buy in bulk, instead of high quality
3 - ... I feel the postive form sounds better; Advertisements play a major role Sometimes they motivate...
Writing FeedbackSKhan - Jan 28, 2013 / dumi - Jan 29, 2013
|(IELTS ESSAY) necessity of child rearing programs for parents?
Writing Feedbacksomysojan - Jan 29, 2013 / somysojan - Jan 29, 2013
|IELTS: all parents should take children training courses
5 - i think it would be better if you agreed to the question to list out your ideas perfectlty.. but...
Writing FeedbackCallie0202 - Jan 28, 2013 / somysojan - Jan 28, 2013
|'my first day on a new job' - narrative essay
2 - Yes, I like where you're getting but I suggest you add an anecdote in this essay. I really like...
Writing Feedbackevadfa - Jan 28, 2013 / janajackson - Jan 28, 2013
|GRE essay/Topic: job satisfication is an important element of individual wellbeing.
Writing Feedbackmultivariate - Jan 28, 2013 / evadfa - Jan 28, 2013
|Advertisement encourages to buy in bulk, whereas it should promote high quality of the products sold
5 - but it is not showing importance to the quality of the product ă‹other than reflect the quality of products...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 26, 2013 / caoxue - Jan 28, 2013
|I pinch myself but easily notice this isn't a dream; Creative Writing
3 - Bent!...
Writing Feedbackh4rry - Jan 28, 2013 / LewisBirty - Jan 28, 2013
|Film review on MEN IN BLACK - A-list stars, an excellent production team
Writing Feedbackwroeykid09 - Jan 28, 2013 / wroeykid09 - Jan 28, 2013
|We were in a terrible state, trapped by all exits; Creative Writing
3 - I burnt essay...
Writing FeedbackLewisBirty - Jan 28, 2013 / LewisBirty - Jan 28, 2013
|All I knew was that I was safe; creative writing piece
Writing Feedbackwroeykid09 - Jan 28, 2013 / wroeykid09 - Jan 28, 2013
|[IELTS] Learning foreign languages is common now. Good or Not? Can prevent drawbacks
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Dec 24, 2012 / devabe2005 - Jan 27, 2013
|IELTS; Museums are meant for educating people or entertaining them?
3 - skeleton of skeleton of -->typing mistake The role of the museums in teaching visitors that they do not...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 27, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 27, 2013
|UNIVERSITY EDUCATION IS IMPORTANT OR NOT?
3 - not uncommon -- common As an ordinary person, we would be well-advised to attend university to gain knowledge...
Writing FeedbackYukiCat - Jan 27, 2013 / niesaysi - Jan 27, 2013
|IELTS: Ageing population. What are the advantages and disadvantage
Writing Feedbackcolin - Jan 20, 2013 / colin - Jan 27, 2013
|IELTS-Nowadays people becoming parents later in life. Some think not good development
5 - hello. i think that there are not various ideas in this essay. For example, late childbearing causes...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 25, 2013 / gsisland - Jan 26, 2013
|Modern cooking offers convenient solutions for preparing food
11 - Thank you sooooo much for your revise, Dumi. ^^ To be honest, i'm still confuse about using inappropriate word...
Writing FeedbackSalikron - Dec 2, 2012 / Salikron - Jan 26, 2013
|CLIMATE CHANGE AND GLOBAL WARMING
2 - I think you did a good job of addressing all of your points. Do you need an introduction before...
Writing Feedbackmrice4 - Jan 26, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 26, 2013
|Adolescence - Are parents the best teachers? No they are not.
Writing FeedbackEnhsaruul - Jan 26, 2013 / dumi - Jan 26, 2013
|strict rules of children's behavior, children are allowed to do anything they like
2 - The strict education of behavior means that --> The strict education system shows that which contributes to the...
Writing Feedbackgsisland - Jan 25, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 26, 2013
|What difficulties do you foresee in living away from home? Essay.
2 - Reading the prompt over, I feel like they were asking for your own personal experience rather than asking what's...
Writing FeedbackSchoolWorkHard - Jan 25, 2013 / megciso - Jan 26, 2013
|GOVERNMENT SYSTEM; Important thing I want to change in my country
2 - If i could change one important thing about my country, it would be a proverty. Poverty is a a...
Writing FeedbackXAVI XAVY - Jan 26, 2013 / sadammar - Jan 26, 2013
|Which kind of friendship and respect is required?
Writing FeedbackXAVI XAVY - Jan 23, 2013 / XAVI XAVY - Jan 26, 2013
|BODY PARAGRAPH OF SINGLE SEX VS CO-ED
2 - in my opinion, co-ex education is much better. About the distraction between girls and boys is too old-fashioned. Right...
Writing Feedbackmissdee - Jan 25, 2013 / lily41628 - Jan 26, 2013
|TOEFL - Contribution of young people to their communities is not sufficient.
Writing Feedbacklily41628 - Dec 12, 2012 / lily41628 - Jan 25, 2013
|IELTS - Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. Cause
6 - Dear devabe2005, Well, your writing is ok. There are some grammar mistakes, but you can sort them out...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 24, 2013 / Agustin - Jan 25, 2013
|GOVERNMENT SHOULD BARE THE COST FOR SPECIAL UNDERGRADUATE COURSE
Writing Feedbacknida khan - Jan 25, 2013 / nida khan - Jan 25, 2013
|Laughter is the best medicine. Keeping everyone's happy makes us happy too
Writing Feedbackanjali1 - Jan 11, 2013 / anjali1 - Jan 25, 2013
|SAT; Always essential to tell the truth? Or should lie under special circumstances?
NEW - Is it always essential to tell the truth, or are there circumstances in which it is better to lie?...
Writing FeedbackRose96 - Jan 25, 2013 / — -
|IELTS; Children should learn science in school or not?
3 - Good introduction. Pleas start your sentences with capital letters because it is a distraction for us to follow what...
Writing Feedbackcaoxue - Jan 25, 2013 / dumi - Jan 25, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Doing jobs for a long spell ; Good or bad..?
3 - he is doing a very high salary job --> working is better vocabulary -->he is working in high salary...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 25, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 25, 2013
|IELTS-Elder people should be looked after by family members or professionals?
7 - Hai... Dumi, Dev and Han, Hai Dumi.. Thanks for the site id.. It was filttered from here, but...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 22, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 25, 2013
|What kinds of places do you avoid visiting when you travel?
Writing Feedbackelmar91 - Jan 21, 2013 / faizan - Jan 25, 2013
|Art Management; Colleges and universities should offer Job preparation training
Writing FeedbackAseaDai - Jan 24, 2013 / dumi - Jan 25, 2013
|RAPID ECONOMIC DEVELOPMENT RESULTED HIGHER LIVING STANDARDS IN TOWNS, NOT IN VILLAGES
6 - Well... you should not be worried... With practicing you can improve a lot...There's a tip that EF_Kevin used to...
Writing Feedbacknida khan - Jan 24, 2013 / dumi - Jan 25, 2013
|Safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today
3 - I am in favor of the argument: safe alternative to fossil fuels should be our global priority. ......
Writing Feedbacknida khan - Jan 24, 2013 / Pahan - Jan 25, 2013
|IELTS - Many countries spend large amounts of sports events. Agree or Disagree
4 - Hi Devraj / Tessy / Duminda, I got my IELTS results. Listening - 7.5 , Reading -7.5, Speaking -...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 24, 2013 / Arun0506 - Jan 24, 2013
|Qualified people moving from poor to rich countries _Ielts
3 - hai... you have some good points ... Try not to copy the words from the question, use other words.....
Writing Feedbacksalmav - Jan 24, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 24, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Globalization:Negative sides should not be forgotten.
5 - Hai..Dumi, dev and Sayed.. Hai Dumi.. Thanks for your comments and time especially for the tip...): Thanks...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 21, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 24, 2013
|advantages & disadvantages of high rise apartments - (IELTS essay)
5 - Hai Katrina... Thanks for the comments.. I specially mentioned in my essay a point that if it is...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 23, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 24, 2013
|Do we behave differently in different clothes? Well, It is a complex issue
NEW - DO we behave differently in different clothes? Well, It is a complex issue and there is no straightforward answer...
Writing Feedbackriyak - Jan 24, 2013 / — -
|IELTS-Do children behave better when they are rewarded or punished? Discuss both view
4 - I think you have an interesting idea and the structure is well organized but with mistakes. I think you...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 23, 2013 / ritared - Jan 24, 2013
|Career in today's world; Chances for a good job
2 - Your essay sounds like an IELTS or TOEFL one. But without the prompt, it is difficult to understand for...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Jan 24, 2013 / dumi - Jan 24, 2013
|Number of Japan tourists travelling abroad within 10 years
2 - This sentence is too long. Avoid very lengthy sentences because they require your examiner to remember too much...
Writing Feedbackaayaan - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 24, 2013
|IELTS - making money would never replace a teddy bear for a child
Writing FeedbackChilie - Jan 23, 2013 / ritared - Jan 24, 2013
|Book vs Experience; Which is more important?
4 - dear Dumid. I appreciate your comments. They are really helpful for a non-native speaker like me. However I don't...
Writing Feedbackducanhhut - Jan 23, 2013 / ducanhhut - Jan 24, 2013
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