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|'The source of media and private information about famous people' band according to IELTS
4 - Dear Scientiana, Thanks for providing me your feedback and the impressive correction and suggestion .That for sure help me...
Writing Feedbackdeep9012 - Oct 25, 2012 / deep9012 - Nov 11, 2012
|'Electing a representative in government' - Essay help for midterm
2 - The entire third paragraph seems to drag on. Maybe try spacing out the essay a little better. It appears...
Writing Feedbackalexnsarria - Oct 16, 2012 / mhk1294 - Nov 11, 2012
|'positive and inspirational trend' - IELTS: Creative artists' freedom
Writing Feedbackhumanx - Nov 8, 2012 / humanx - Nov 11, 2012
|'Good atmosphere' - What change to hometown more appealing to people your age?
4 - "Although there are many buses in the urban and rural area, but it is pretty hard for people to...
Writing Feedbackpurplepotato - Nov 7, 2012 / zahras93 - Nov 11, 2012
|IELTS: WHETHER BOTTLED WATER SHOULD BE BANNED
3 - Thank you dumi and scientiana, I greatly appreciate your comments. I will write as many essay as I can...
Writing FeedbackChuHa - Oct 25, 2012 / ChuHa - Nov 11, 2012
|'Harmful effects' - IELTS Essay about the influence of advertisement
Writing Feedbackying0216 - Nov 7, 2012 / ying0216 - Nov 11, 2012
|'better standard of living for people' - ielts - 2 task
4 - I've changed the pointed mistakes by you guys thank you very much, I really need to get down to...
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|'From Qatar and an independent school for girls' - about yourself
Writing Feedbackdmj - Nov 10, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 11, 2012
|'Coral Gables, Miami' - My lost palace
3 - What about Coral Gables makes you like getting lost? Getting lost is usually not pleasant, so what about the...
Writing Feedbackjincera1 - Nov 10, 2012 / cezyou - Nov 10, 2012
|'museum can attract visitors' - [ielts] topic with museum
8 - Plz every one comment on this There are different kinds of people having different personalities and opinions living...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 7, 2012 / ibadullah - Nov 10, 2012
|TECHNOLOGICAL FOODS IS HARMFUL TO PEOPLE'S HEALTH ( IELTS )
3 - HI.dzung1991 Beside motivator, general background should be given in the introduction. However, ah_zafari said that the opinion should...
Writing Feedbackdzung1991 - Nov 6, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 10, 2012
|'What I taught myself' - Essay Revision
Writing Feedbackdudeman - Nov 6, 2012 / ysysysys - Nov 10, 2012
|Power of advertisements are overrated!
3 - Thankyou ah_zafari for your suggestions, I will try to improve those fiels which you highlited....
Writing Feedbackpriya9991 - Nov 7, 2012 / priya9991 - Nov 10, 2012
|[ielts task 1] report on quantities of goods transported in UK
2 - Your writing is very good with good use of a variety of vocabulary. However, try to use more linking...
Writing Feedbackgandora1510 - Oct 23, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 9, 2012
|How dependent we are on machines? / Are machines going to take over the world?
NEW - We are living in a society which is called a "technologically civilized" society. Every small work that we do...
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|Essay about taxation to reduce air traffic - feedback
Writing FeedbackMSMK - Nov 9, 2012 / MSMK - Nov 9, 2012
|TOEFL - Improving conditions - Has human harmed the Earth or made it a better place?
Writing FeedbackMunkhjin - Nov 7, 2012 / dumi - Nov 9, 2012
|How many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities
2 - The graphic shows how many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities between televisions and...
Writing FeedbackWal - Nov 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|'my priorities and goals' - Meaning of life essay
2 - I believeThe world is inhabited by millions of individuals, each defining the meaning of life differently. Corresponding to...
Writing Feedbackmeme123456 - Oct 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|Is money synonymous to success?
Writing FeedbackCharmaine VC - Nov 7, 2012 / Charmaine VC - Nov 8, 2012
|Governor's School essay on social issue (apathy) that concerns me
3 - Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, the deadline has passed and I just went with what my teachers said. Although,...
Writing Feedbackselemi - Oct 14, 2012 / selemi - Nov 8, 2012
|This is a research paper on whether Social Networks causes relationships to end
NEW - The guidelines for this paper are as follows Transition sentence to get from the previous paragraph Topic sentence Supporting...
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|Fast food brings us more avails than drawbacks (IELTS task 2)
Writing Feedbackclackkent - Nov 6, 2012 / humanx - Nov 8, 2012
|'money-centered people' - Judging person by his social status and material possessions - ielts
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 8, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 8, 2012
|Dishonesty in relationship / Should you be always truthful?
3 - thanks a lot!...
Writing FeedbackMai_Alexei - Nov 6, 2012 / Mai_Alexei - Nov 8, 2012
|IELTS TASK: support fixed punishment for each type of crime or not
2 - no two crimes happen (appear) in totally the same conditions there's not always one simple punishment which suit every...
Writing Feedbacksydaisy - Oct 22, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 8, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 2, topic about yongsters
2 - Your essay is great! Well organization and well argument! However, you have to be careful with your grammar and...
Writing Feedbackgoldmanswalking - Oct 21, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 8, 2012
|History shows us how forgetful human beings are
Writing Feedbackrkandil - Nov 7, 2012 / jincera1 - Nov 7, 2012
|'exotic tourist attractions' - a comfortable living in exchange of money?
2 - Very good work. Few ideas might be added here and there, last but one paragraph is a bit confused.overall...
Writing Feedbackqwertyui - Oct 18, 2012 / priya9991 - Nov 7, 2012
|What are seasons? Are they as different as they seem? - essay
2 - Hello! First, I recommend changing your title; unless, of course, the title was assigned. Given the ambiguity of the...
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|"Love, Loyalty, Trust are the three things to lead a good relationship in life"
Writing Feedbackpal - Nov 5, 2012 / pal - Nov 7, 2012
|The power of advertising and ads in the commerce essay
6 - Thanks a lot... What i think, I am emphasizing more upon how to present rather what to present... Will...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 7, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 7, 2012
|[graph] Percentage of students giving good ratings - IELTS review
Writing Feedbackbigbang15101990 - Nov 7, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 7, 2012
|'consuming less beef, lamb or fish' [ielts] Cambridge 7, test 1
2 - Beef was the most favouring meat, until 1989 it lost the first position. It, however, still maintained its second...
Writing Feedbacksliver1510 - Oct 19, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 7, 2012
|IELTS,ESSAY with topic Relationship between different countries
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 6, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 7, 2012
|Higher education of advanced learning and teaching - better jobs for graduates?
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 3, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 7, 2012
|'child support program' - research on welfare for ENG 102
2 - I like the essay, great information, dont forget to cite your information that your putting out there, even if...
Writing FeedbackTabby - Nov 3, 2012 / Wolter - Nov 6, 2012
|'years to build' - WILL I EVER TRUST AGAIN?
3 - Thanks for the reply it really helped i changed it to "I will remember that conversation until the day...
Writing Feedbacktata98 - Nov 6, 2012 / tata98 - Nov 6, 2012
|Bad sides in public hospitals and the gap between the rich and the poor
4 - I think you should write more about the problem stated in the prompt. Reword the topic as a thesis...
Writing FeedbackHeina - Nov 4, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 6, 2012
|Feedback- Has technology isolated us from society and nature?
Writing Feedbackmap181 - Nov 5, 2012 / sailinalbion - Nov 6, 2012
|IELTS; Rural depopulation- Effects and Suggestions to reverse the trend
NEW - Hi guys, I'm practicing for the IELTS test and here is my essay. Could you please help me to...
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|Friendship and financial matters essay - money can harm relationship?
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 5, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 6, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY: PARENTS ARE THE BEST TEACHERS
Writing Feedbackjohnz777z - Nov 3, 2012 / MaryMary - Nov 6, 2012
|[IELST task 2] Topic parents or school should teach children
2 - This opening statement sounds a bit deviated from the topic which deals more with teaching children social skills...
Writing Feedbacksilentwarrior - Nov 5, 2012 / dumi - Nov 6, 2012
|Advantages of learning English
3 - Thank to Jennyflower81 for adjusting my writing. The adjusted writing is very helpful for me in the next English...
Writing Feedbackhuybinh111 - Nov 5, 2012 / huybinh111 - Nov 5, 2012
|Learners have different preference s ; Self assessment
2 - You have really good ideas here, but in many cases you don't have complete sentences. Sometimes, it's just a...
Writing Feedbackrsantiago - Oct 13, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|"in text Referencing" - This essay is correted by my teacher
2 - I think your teacher is right that you should expand your conclusion somewhat. Think about expanding your idea. Perhaps...
Writing FeedbackBraveheart - Oct 13, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|Teacher vs parent role in children's intellectual and social development IELTS Task2
Writing FeedbackIris77 - Oct 9, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|IELTS: World literacy rates by region and by gender; 'lower for men than women'
2 - Hello! This makes sense, but has a few grammatical errors. Lack of literacy skills IS found (currently you have...
Writing Feedbackding - Oct 10, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|Is talent a key element for children to become professionals?
3 - Thank you very much. The question is "Discuss should we teach all of children to be expert or only...
Writing Feedbackzzzz - Oct 29, 2012 / zzzz - Nov 5, 2012
|[AWS] Pros and cons of permissive parenting style
2 - Hello symptom, Your essay is clear, but needs more examples to back up why you do not agree with...
Writing Feedbacksymptom - Oct 24, 2012 / linmark - Nov 5, 2012
|IELTS Essay : Borrowing money from a friend is harmful to friendship
Writing Feedbackw_even - Nov 4, 2012 / dumi - Nov 5, 2012
|'improvement of education' - change something in your hometown
5 - That is something you can fix quickly through learning. However, in essay writing you need more things; good...
Writing Feedbackyammm95 - Nov 4, 2012 / dumi - Nov 4, 2012
|Do the Right Thing Violence Paper
3 - Thank you!...
Writing FeedbackLyndsey9201 - Nov 3, 2012 / Lyndsey9201 - Nov 4, 2012
|Common App (Essay B) - The Importance of Worldwide Cooperation
Writing FeedbackThePirateKing - Nov 4, 2012 / rezwan3 - Nov 4, 2012
|[IELTS TOPIC] - In many countries, students who behave badly in class are expelled
4 - children should not be out of school for any reason this sentense seems a little wired ,but i don't...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Nov 1, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 4, 2012
|Design Rationale - Essay about advertising for communication class
2 - Instead of saying this "Advertisements surround us, they appear everywhere" you could maybe say something to the fact of...
Writing FeedbackmBluebear - Oct 9, 2012 / Tabby - Nov 3, 2012
|moving to America when I was three as the biggest struggle - personal statement
2 - Why not start with "the people,the environment...unfamiliar to me" this will keep the reader wondering up until the 4th...
Writing FeedbackMemona - Nov 3, 2012 / Phoebe Africa - Nov 3, 2012
|capital punishment is a brustal decision and should be abolished?
2 - Honestly, this essay is not very convincing. I stand with you, but if I didn't, then this would not...
Writing Feedbackphamngocduy - Nov 3, 2012 / ericramon - Nov 3, 2012
|IELTS Essay severe punishment for traffic offensese
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