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|Christmas & continuity of traditions; Stanford/ What matter to you and why?
4 - Your Christmas essay was very warm and fuzzy :) Your roommate note, however, felt disorganized and very list-y, if...
Writing Feedbackblondie51295 - Dec 23, 2012 / haneom94 - Dec 27, 2012
|IELTS - petrol price increment (Traffic and pollution)
3 - Hi, You are really wise in limiting your essay length with just slightly over 250 words, which enables yourself...
Writing FeedbackYanSun - Dec 26, 2012 / mcuong01 - Dec 27, 2012
|Sports & no risky behavior; What do you do for good health ?
Writing Feedbackaqeel - Dec 26, 2012 / aqeel - Dec 26, 2012
|PHOTOGRAPHY ESSAY, it would take too much time to build a time machine.
Writing Feedbackhelloitsjoi - Nov 16, 2012 / helloitsjoi - Dec 26, 2012
|Shifting large factories to countryside helps solve traffic&housing issues... I agree
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 24, 2012 / dumi - Dec 26, 2012
|Changed from being a loner
Writing FeedbackBeza101 - Dec 26, 2012 / luying9682 - Dec 26, 2012
|Having children late in life; 'A family without children is not a really family'
Writing FeedbackMorain - Dec 26, 2012 / Morain - Dec 26, 2012
|You created something using your bare hands, and your takeaway from the experience
3 - Thanks...
Writing FeedbackIkennaBlack - Dec 25, 2012 / IkennaBlack - Dec 25, 2012
|American Literature Literary Criticism Unit - "Easy A"
Writing Feedbackcollege13 - Dec 25, 2012 / hongyen2192 - Dec 25, 2012
|Changing jobs frequently?I feel it's good to continue at least for six years (IELTS)
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 25, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 25, 2012
|'Guitar is my friend' - Essay on my hobby of playing guitar
4 - It seems like you play guitar as well, cool!! Glad I can have comments from other guitar player....
Writing Feedbackhanksze - Nov 20, 2012 / hanksze - Dec 25, 2012
|External/ internal Reasons for School dropouts & possible measures ;IELTS
4 - Hi, I think you can talk about the mesures in the same sequence as the resons you listed external:...
Writing Feedbackash5005 - Dec 23, 2012 / christyzhongs - Dec 25, 2012
|my perspective on how one should live life to obtain happiness and success!
Writing Feedbackaaldana1 - Dec 24, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 25, 2012
|( IELTS essay) Advertisements encourages to buy unwanted things?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 21, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 25, 2012
|Studying abroad or in our own country? Both options have plus and minus results
NEW - Question: The idea of going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. However, while it...
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|Magical Girl Warrior; Sailor moon essay
7 - I don't watch the show, but you should just bring out more of your personality in your essay if...
Writing Feedbacksailorjupiter - Dec 24, 2012 / NRessay - Dec 24, 2012
|Main function of universities; Well-rounded graduates
3 - Hi, I like your conclusion. clear state your ideas. I feel the below sentence is a bit strange....
Writing FeedbackFrenzyzqq - Dec 24, 2012 / christyzhongs - Dec 24, 2012
|IELTS ; Veg or Non Veg? Veg is healthier!
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 23, 2012 / y0_3mma - Dec 24, 2012
|Intentional tourism can promotes people to understand and respect other cultures
13 - Thanks all for the good suggestions, may I know how to change the title? It seems that someone...
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Dec 12, 2012 / christyzhongs - Dec 24, 2012
|Competition and Co-operation should be there moderately ;IELTS
3 - i guess unless groups have competed to each means ''unless groups have cooperated with each other.'' by the way,...
Writing Feedbackmcuong01 - Dec 20, 2012 / Frenzyzqq - Dec 24, 2012
|Facebook Users - Classification Essay
3 - Well written and very informative. The last sentence doesn't make sense at all. Maybe say 'the friend seekers, the...
Writing FeedbackpirFena - Dec 19, 2012 / blondie51295 - Dec 23, 2012
|Time & how it passes by; should we blame distance or time?
4 - Hey.. Thanks for your comments... I was actually kind of mad when I wrote it, especially the conclusion... Lol.....
Writing FeedbackSRabia - Dec 23, 2012 / SRabia - Dec 23, 2012
|Government should support student's or professional athelets ? Students!
3 - Hai Alphy.. You have some good points.. But it didn't come out nicely..You have lots of spelling mistakes. Careless...
Writing Feedbackalphy - Dec 22, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 23, 2012
|( IELTS essay) Cigarette advertisements should be banned completely?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 23, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 23, 2012
|IELTS topic. animal experiments have more disadvantages over their advantages
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 23, 2012 / alphy - Dec 23, 2012
|[iels task 2]The government spends about 220 million pounds a year supporting museums
2 - .... what do you mean by "unnecessary to be substantially" ? .... that part sounds a bit confusing...
Writing FeedbackLunate - Dec 23, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|(IELTS ESSAY) merits and demerits of MNCs in developing countries..
3 - .... the presence of many multinational companies in the developing countries have a mushrooming effect. The...
Writing Feedbackash5005 - Dec 23, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|IELTS Topic. the power of advertising and its impact on high sales
2 - ....Very interesting : )... Good introduction ! ....I feel "specialists in advertising" sounds better ...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 23, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|Gender and Language in Advertisements
Writing Feedbackalyney - Dec 22, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|(IELTS essay) Effect of action movies on young children/ Solutions
7 - thanks a lot for correcting my essay. i am always grateful to u guys..dumi, pahan , collin,ozia tessy..etc.....
Writing Feedbackash5005 - Dec 21, 2012 / ash5005 - Dec 23, 2012
|Ä°ELTS TASK1:children's leisure activities; pie chart illustrations
Writing Feedbacksrns - Dec 22, 2012 / dumi - Dec 22, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Video games - positives and negatives
Writing FeedbackYanSun - Dec 22, 2012 / April April - Dec 22, 2012
|IELTS:best way to make new friends?sports, community activities or travelling?
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 22, 2012 / YanSun - Dec 22, 2012
|Toefl subject : Nowadays, spending budget on space exploration is not reasonable
4 - Space exploration, for the exploration of space, has been possible for human in the 20th century. The United...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Dec 14, 2012 / colin - Dec 22, 2012
|( IELTS essay) Computer will diminish the writing skills
3 - ... This is a strong opening statement. It sounds general but it has relevance to your topic. ...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 22, 2012 / dumi - Dec 22, 2012
|GRE- Argument on letter by Central Plaza store owners; Hidden factors
Writing Feedbackkettyabc - Dec 21, 2012 / kettyabc - Dec 22, 2012
|Advantages of living in a big city; Jobs and Entertainment
Writing FeedbackAslan - Dec 17, 2012 / alphy - Dec 22, 2012
|Children are very sensitive about what they see or hear from their friends
5 - ????? I don't understand this sentence. Please rephrase it. First and foremost, it is proven psychologically...
Writing FeedbackDibaa - Dec 21, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 22, 2012
|GRE ANALYTICAL-relationships can only develop after a CONFLICT
2 - this is a really interesting topic, I have experienced this before and for me things got better after conflict....
Writing Feedbackkethsaxena - Dec 16, 2012 / loth - Dec 22, 2012
|IELTS - Technology: taking control our lives or positive developements
3 - Ozia In the modern era, the topic of technological influence is controversial. There is clear divergence of opinions on...
Writing FeedbackOzia - Dec 21, 2012 / Frenzyzqq - Dec 21, 2012
|[IELTS Essay] Serveral langages die out every year, Is it not important? AD
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Dec 20, 2012 / Ozia - Dec 21, 2012
|( IELTS essay) ageing population: impacts on society.
5 - Hai Dumi... Thanks for the correction and support.. I mean the less productive workforce may leads to...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 20, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 21, 2012
|IELTS:The best extra-curriculum activity, sports, community activities or traveling?
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 20, 2012 / alphy - Dec 21, 2012
|Toefl:Should children grow up in coutryside or in a city?
Writing Feedbackartin - Dec 19, 2012 / dumi - Dec 21, 2012
|Toefl: A good neighbor should be honest, cooperative and considerate!
Writing Feedbackartin - Dec 18, 2012 / dumi - Dec 21, 2012
|Technology has influenced the way that people interact; Is this positive or negative?
3 - Thanks for your reply colin!What would you give me band about my this essay.I am a student of intermediate...
Writing Feedbackcaiden sanetor - Dec 20, 2012 / caiden sanetor - Dec 21, 2012
|IELTS:Cash and coins will be replaced by credit cards in the future.Positive/Negative
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 20, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 21, 2012
|five paragraph essay about where should company spend his money on art or environment
Writing FeedbackAliAkbarzarei - Dec 15, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 20, 2012
|IELTS:Young people today are more likely to help others than young people in the past
4 - Your introduction contains good points; follows the right structure for this task. However, I feel the above sentence...
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 19, 2012 / dumi - Dec 20, 2012
|American Dream is deeply rooted in the America culture and ideology
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|TOEFL : parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life
2 - Nowadays, the society has become exceedingly competitive than ever before, parents have the responsibilitis to teach their children to...
Writing Feedbacktmartin - Dec 19, 2012 / colin - Dec 19, 2012
|may 1990 was my final in hight school
3 - I agree that you should take the essay to an English teacher. You chose a good topic, but you...
Writing Feedbackundidiamaka - Dec 15, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|About New Hobby - Reading can change my life
2 - I suggest that you rewrite your essay. It is quite short and throws in arguments without elaborating on them....
Writing Feedbackturtkbdr - Dec 19, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|IELTS; Guns should be better controlled or even banned
Writing FeedbackFrenzyzqq - Dec 18, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|News of "End of world"
Writing Feedbacksiamak - Dec 19, 2012 / ellstudent - Dec 19, 2012
|although some works may be rewarding, social life has more influence on people
2 - colin The over all essay is good but this correction I feel necessary to replace this opening: With...
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 18, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 19, 2012
|Cheating at examinations - Must find solutions for this problem!
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 17, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 19, 2012
|This is an informative essay on culture creating conflict - rough draft.
2 - Double in(in in) in the second line I believe the influx of dates and serious facts makes it a...
Writing Feedbackjheisler - Dec 16, 2012 / Genieo - Dec 19, 2012
|Should cyber bullying get more punishment?
2 - In an era where the internet and cell phones are being used... ...schoolyard bully's it but also to...
Writing Feedbackiccalove - Dec 17, 2012 / pirFena - Dec 19, 2012
|Toefl:Television destroys communication among friends and family; Reasons & Examples
6 - heartstation I rated your essay using the free online tool available at gmatawa.com. Your essay scored 4.68 on a...
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