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|IELTS Essay : How is your generation different from your parent's generation
Writing Feedbackw_even - Oct 31, 2012 / Heina - Nov 2, 2012
|Fiction books are better than reality? - essay
3 - Contain means capable of holding something. So you should use it with what it is holding. Eg. contain...
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|IELTS examination; Adults and adolescents have many differences
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|Academic or non academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
4 - I admire your position. However, if you use shorter sentences, your main idea will undoubtedly stand out...
Writing FeedbackGagandeep - Oct 10, 2012 / rezwan3 - Nov 1, 2012
|'Pursuance, never succeed in track again' - College Essay Revision
2 - For the first time ever, my life, my passion, my love for track, was fading away from me like...
Writing FeedbackMeiling - Oct 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 1, 2012
|old buildings need to protected by government or not
NEW - Now a days government spend lot of money to protect old buildings which reflects the history of our nation.Some...
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|does cheap air travel damage the environment
2 - Your way of description is good . Straight to the point. I like your way of description and how...
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|Learning from Electronic Media: GRE essay topic
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|"each fresh crisis is an opportunity in disguise" - Grade My SAT Essay
Writing Feedbacksaanuu - Oct 26, 2012 / Obaid Allah - Nov 1, 2012
|'You helped America' - Patriots Pen-TELL MY FOUNDING FATHERS
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|GRE issue- #Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect...
NEW - Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect--- that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills. The...
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|'consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City' - GRE Argumentative
4 - mahsaa furthermore it is said that two-income families express more concern about healthful eating, Therefore, the new Captain Seafood...
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|It was a great EXPERIENCE; A day in shopping mall.
2 - During my vacation last month, I had been to the biggest mall in south India with my family. I...
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|Ielts - "culture shock" - nowadays more people traveling around the world
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|Stress is the body's reaction to a change
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|'spacious and desirable' - Apartment is better than a house
2 - I agree with the suggestions the prior contributor suggested, as well as I would advise for you to re-read...
Writing Feedbackmonaalvand - Oct 28, 2012 / BrwPrd - Oct 30, 2012
|IELTS - Traditional and International music complete each other.
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|Having unity and social skills through sports games
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their...
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|Living in the big cities is better than living in the country
NEW - Some people prefer to living in the big cities but some people prefer to living in the countryside, in...
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|'qualities of a good student and respect is earned' - illustraction Paragraph?
NEW - Qualities of a good student There are several different qualities of a good student. First as a good student,...
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|'Keep healthy and don't eat junk' - Convenience foods vs traditional foods
2 - It was really good essay. :) I don't have much confident to correct essays, but I commented below. Except...
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|[IELTS] (academic) What is the main function of a university?
Writing Feedbackspringflowers - Oct 27, 2012 / annguyen - Oct 29, 2012
|The World & Experience - UC Prompts
Writing Feedbackdresdenflyer - Oct 7, 2012 / shmegg - Oct 28, 2012
|'avoid prolonged exposure to the Sun' - My essay for term's examination
Writing FeedbackHeina - Oct 24, 2012 / ah_zafari - Oct 28, 2012
|TOEFL - People are not satisfied with what they have; they want something more
Writing FeedbackMunkhjin - Oct 28, 2012 / zhdevilla - Oct 28, 2012
|IELTS: I believe that poorer countries require rich ones support to develop their countries
3 - I do not know what books are you studying now, but for improving your writing you should write...
Writing Feedbacklayla88 - Oct 27, 2012 / ah_zafari - Oct 28, 2012
|Pregnant Working Women and Finance
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|College Essay on Dads Heart Attack
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|People should share domestic responsibilities - "equality depends on esteem"
NEW - Hello :-) I would really appreciate if someone helps me with my essay and fix my mistakes. I am...
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|'Understanding your child' - Essay about three things good parents do
2 - The second thing is too short I think. Maybe you can add that parents should give their children more...
Writing FeedbackJasmine92 - Oct 12, 2012 / lucy123 - Oct 27, 2012
|'It's not that easy' - The advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad
3 - Thank you so much, Mriytunjay :) Can you tell me more about structure of an essay? Thanks a lot...
Writing FeedbackLinhSua - Oct 19, 2012 / LinhSua - Oct 26, 2012
|(choosing fields of study based on job availability) - GRE issue
Writing FeedbackHalehh - Oct 25, 2012 / Halehh - Oct 26, 2012
|IElTS: 'fast food as an alternative'; the average weight of people is increasing
NEW - Hi everybody, here is my second essay over here wish you guys help me in elevating my writing level...
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|Gandhi - About a World Leader
5 - Sure. He would be the perfect example of a leader if you feel that he inspired others through his...
Writing Feedbackinform - May 31, 2012 / admission2012 - Oct 24, 2012
|Apartment Vs House; depends on individual financial status and areas of comfort
2 - Living in an apartment undoubtedly has many advantages. First of all, it is cheaper to rent or buy an...
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|This is my GRE awa practice essay - advance Thanks for Review
2 - All in all, pretty solid grammar wise and some great word choices (exaggerated, libertine, digress) I would do a...
Writing Feedbacknakul123 - Oct 19, 2012 / MBA_bound - Oct 24, 2012
|too much fat, salt and sugar; Weight of people is increasing, health decreasing
3 - Hi Gangster777 You have pretty good ideas for the body paragraphs. However, the problem is that your essay doesn't...
Writing FeedbackGangster777 - Oct 21, 2012 / April April - Oct 24, 2012
|IELTS essay: Whether reading is better than TV or internet?
2 - It seems much better now. Thanks very much to you, Elena. I have some questions here: 1. Basically Honestly...
Writing Feedbackbwithu - Oct 23, 2012 / bwithu - Oct 24, 2012
|IELTS TASK2 Pros and cons of building nuclear power plants
5 - In my opinion, the very first thing is that you'd better write more (IELTS Task 2 essay requires at...
Writing Feedbackz1z1z1z1 - Oct 9, 2012 / Chicken - Oct 24, 2012
|'People should not work as slow as turtles' - TOEFL Writing
NEW - Could anyone help me check this and correct my grammatical errors? Big thanks. :) Topic: In today's world,...
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|IELTS Essay : Reading fiction or watching movies : Introduction only
Writing Feedbackw_even - Oct 23, 2012 / w_even - Oct 23, 2012
|Support the arts or protect the environment? 'stop this massacre of the nature'
2 - [quote=juliamedeiross]The humans being hashave been deterioratingdoing lot of damage to the environment for a long time, and nowadays something...
Writing Feedbackjuliamedeiross - Oct 21, 2012 / dumi - Oct 22, 2012
|Going overseas for university study
5 - Countries try to exemplify their greatest traits and most beautiful architecture to entice internationalists to come and visit them....
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|My father and my eldest brother shaped my personality into what I am today
NEW - Please proofread my essay and correct if there is any grammatical mistake. Thank you in advanced. I have to...
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|GRE Analytical Argument Task: Memo to WWAC station
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|Media Analysis Essay - Vietnam War
2 - If you want to be more specific you could say, for example; that ...as independent news organizations presented real...
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|An aberrant curriculum in every other state of a nation would certainly be a reason of chaos
Writing Feedbackaaqibmir007 - Sep 30, 2012 / chiragjain - Oct 21, 2012
|Essay about my close friend, Sasha
4 - I really like how you`re approaching this piece of writing but I found that there were too many line...
Writing FeedbackSofi - Oct 21, 2012 / lollypop12 - Oct 21, 2012
|[TOEFL] Choose friends who are similar to yourself or different from yourself?
2 - We all have our own friends, and they can be either similar or different from us. Friends who are...
Writing Feedbackcrz_keane - Oct 20, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 21, 2012
|Females & males education [IELTS] Writing Task 1_2
2 - The charts show the number of girls per 100 boys in all levels of education. Compared with nineteen's nineteenth,...
Writing Feedbackcolor - Oct 1, 2012 / goldmanswalking - Oct 21, 2012
|'Life standards and food preparation these days' - criticize my essay
Writing FeedbackDcool - Oct 14, 2012 / humanx - Oct 20, 2012
|IELTS (academic) task 2 - leisure time
7 - Sure I will practice more :), thank you dumi. @Mriytunjay : IELTS task 2 writing requires at least 250...
Writing Feedbackdonniedarko - Oct 17, 2012 / donniedarko - Oct 20, 2012
|[TOEFL] Attending a live performance vs. TV? 'live football game at a stadium'
NEW - Hi everyone, I'm preparing for TOEFL iBT test. Please help me to improve my writing skills. This is my...
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|'county tournament' - narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience
Writing Feedbackalexgrey - Oct 17, 2012 / alexgrey - Oct 19, 2012
|IELTS Exam: people and technology
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|'Reducing the effort' - high salary or enjoyable job essay
5 - I think you should check your grammatical structure. See the corrections i made to the paragraph just above the...
Writing Feedbacksuperhero - Oct 17, 2012 / emmasaintly - Oct 19, 2012
|"International Study" - Higher education should be open to all (discuss)
2 - Chhan Naroth, I completely agree with you. This applies to me because, I am from a not very rich...
Writing Feedbackchhan naroth - Oct 18, 2012 / megsters99 - Oct 18, 2012
|I want to improve my writing for IELTS exam.Kindly indicate my mistakes in the essay
2 - But, these days there isIn recent years,there is an increase in sales oftrend of prepared and processed food, known...
Writing Feedbacknuroon - Oct 17, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 18, 2012
|'Effects of government's spending on culture and education' [IELTS] Writing Task 1_1
5 - I think it always helps to write the effects of something. You could do what cooldudebill suggested, and on...
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|news editors; country condition, citizens education, living condition; influence
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