why people work? mainly for pride, honor, fame, respect, enjoyment
Writing Feedbackadi sharma - Dec 22, 2012 / lynzee22 - Mar 18, 2015
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People's life would be completely different without Internet; IELTS essay
Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Mar 18, 2015 / SHanafi - Mar 18, 2015
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Reaching at the pinnacle of success requires dedication and determination
Writing Feedbacksamrooney - Jun 25, 2013 / SHanafi - Mar 18, 2015
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"Describe a person that inspires you in your career path". Write approximately 150 words.
Writing Feedbackbrooch_stone - Mar 18, 2015 / Komank Sukarma - Mar 18, 2015
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More attention should be paid on how people live - the society, people migrates from place to place
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Mar 18, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 18, 2015
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It's an argument essay in which finding of Dr. Field observation is challenged by Dr. Khap approach.
Writing Feedbackankushrastogi03 - Mar 18, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 18, 2015
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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test other products
Writing FeedbackAbIk - Mar 18, 2015 / ruslan321 - Mar 18, 2015
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People's activities have been changed as the way of serving food becomes an instant.
Writing FeedbackNiddumakhi - Mar 18, 2015 / brooch_stone - Mar 18, 2015
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The child care centres can provide more prefessional care than ordinary family.
Writing FeedbackZHANGYUNAN - Mar 18, 2015 / ZHANGYUNAN - Mar 18, 2015
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Initial steps have always been the most difficult and important in achieving something worthwhile.
Writing FeedbackSardor_lion - Mar 10, 2015 / Sardor_lion - Mar 18, 2015
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"Grades" - immense educational pressure put on the little children in our South Asian societies
Writing FeedbackRiyasat - Mar 17, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 17, 2015
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IELTS TASK2: there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 17, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 17, 2015
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Columbia and Yamhill - population in the state of Oregon by Country - IELTS writing
Writing Feedbacktikyu - Mar 15, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 17, 2015
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The components of a thermos flask to maintain hot liquid (IELTS 1)
Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Mar 13, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 17, 2015
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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 7, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 17, 2015
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The line graph compares and contrast data on the different percentage of unemployed women
Writing Feedbackilma - Mar 13, 2015 / Anfalia - Mar 17, 2015
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Modern lifestyles are increasingly stressful, therefore people in this world are faced by stress.
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IELTS TASK 2 : It is important to keep the circuses exhibition, without using rare animals.
Writing FeedbackNiddumakhi - Mar 17, 2015 / eddies - Mar 17, 2015
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These days everyone seems to have more and more possessions (e.g. computers, cars, mobile phones, et
Writing FeedbackSunnydayyy - Mar 15, 2015 / btrfly7 - Mar 15, 2015
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'fresh ideas of creating new successful starts-up' - should we follow customs of a visited country?
Writing FeedbackIoda_Julia - Mar 15, 2015 / Ioda_Julia - Mar 15, 2015
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Australian boys and girls of age 5-14 leisure activities
Writing Feedbacktiawulansari - Mar 15, 2015 / tiawulansari - Mar 15, 2015
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Whether to voice our opinions or not? Listening to your heart is of vital importance.
Writing FeedbackDoggy - Mar 12, 2015 / Doggy - Mar 15, 2015
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Opening scenes of God Father 1 & 2 ; NCEA Level 3 English Film Study Essay
Writing FeedbackNoble - Sep 4, 2013 / EF_Carol - Mar 15, 2015
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Firstly, when the rain falls, the dam is full for a period of time. How the rainwater is reused.
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Mar 7, 2015 / eddies - Mar 14, 2015
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My Thrilling Birth Day Surprise in Royal Boutique - simple narrative essay
Writing FeedbackKomank Sukarma - Mar 13, 2015 / gauravwalia1988 - Mar 14, 2015
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The number of population in the U.S. of Oregon - gradual rise in three different counties
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Mar 14, 2015 / Adhisti - Mar 14, 2015
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The process of pencil making from graphite and wood
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Mar 13, 2015 / eddies - Mar 14, 2015
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'my grandfather has diabetes' Young people enjoy more than older people?
Writing FeedbackVinusha - May 7, 2013 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 13, 2015
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The carbon cycle in our life - from fossil fuels to photosynthesis
Writing FeedbackZihni92 - Mar 13, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 13, 2015
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The process of the greenhouse effect in the earth' surface - too much gases accumulated
Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Mar 13, 2015 / eddies - Mar 13, 2015
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In developed countries like America, France and Germany nearly everyone seems to own a car.
Writing FeedbackCE317 - Mar 11, 2015 / CE317 - Mar 13, 2015
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Critique practice GRE "Analyze an Argument"(head of household)
Writing FeedbackMBA_bound - Oct 21, 2012 / lynzee22 - Mar 12, 2015
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Children of helicopter parents are more likely to feel depressed and less satisfied with their lives
Writing FeedbackESSAYGENIUS - Mar 12, 2015 / ESSAYGENIUS - Mar 12, 2015
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Forcing visitors to behave like host country would not bring anything new - no good changes for host
Writing Feedbackmaryla - Mar 10, 2015 / Freelanson - Mar 11, 2015
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Even though the internet is not completely flawless, in general his impact is positive for us
Writing Feedbackjakelly - Mar 10, 2015 / MisterWandering - Mar 10, 2015
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House of tramps, the owner unseen.
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 10, 2015 / EF_Carol - Mar 10, 2015
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//IELTS-1// the table and charts below - destination and employment of UK graduates
Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Mar 9, 2015 / shintacandrade - Mar 10, 2015
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Trying to rephrase a paragraph with unusual grammar to get intended message across
Writing Feedbacksabooakhter - Mar 9, 2015 / sabooakhter - Mar 9, 2015
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There have been growing concerns from many schools about the concentrate of students in class.
Writing FeedbackMisstuyet94 - Mar 6, 2015 / Misstuyet94 - Mar 9, 2015
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'I could bare feel the scalding handprint on my cheek' - Descriptive essay - A rash action
Writing FeedbackYierei - Mar 8, 2015 / EF_Carol - Mar 8, 2015
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House is a good place to protect you, to relax yourself as well as give you more freedom.
Writing Feedbackgara94 - Mar 8, 2015 / EF_Carol - Mar 8, 2015
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Riversdale University's Map in 1973 and in 2010 - IELTS Writing Task 1
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Mar 7, 2015 / RorA_IDC - Mar 8, 2015
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Preventing crime is the viable benefit of using body scanner and CCTV - IELTS
Writing Feedbackakhfan - Mar 7, 2015 / akhfan - Mar 8, 2015
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cultural identity lost because the emerge of internet. IELTS
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Changes in the proportion of online shopping to the film/music retail sector in New Zealand
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Mar 7, 2015 / — -
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I intend to argue that the general impacts of international tourism have in fact been negative
Writing Feedbackhuonghoavc94vn - Mar 4, 2015 / mumtazdinar - Mar 7, 2015
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The cool night breeze whistled softly, blowing lightly through my hair
Writing Feedbackmaddy1579 - Mar 3, 2015 / dquinlan11 - Mar 7, 2015
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Movement of population to cities becomes more popular in many countries for several reasons. IELTS
Writing FeedbackGaiavu - Mar 6, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 6, 2015
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In general, Social Sciences, Arts leads highly of the main fields of study than the other subjects.
Writing FeedbackKifti H Islami - Mar 6, 2015 / eddies - Mar 6, 2015
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Cultures .. one view of their dynamics; Pilgrims of Eastern origin
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 6, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 6, 2015
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"Engineering is an application of science to the purpose of life" said by Count Rumford
Writing Feedbackanhminh3105 - Mar 5, 2015 / anhminh3105 - Mar 5, 2015
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It is often alleged that many teenagers want to reach their higher education after finishing school.
Writing Feedbackdavechau - Mar 4, 2015 / anhminh3105 - Mar 5, 2015
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On the whole, people need to be aware of the value of food-consumed.
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 4, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 5, 2015
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Children are tomorrow asset for parent and nation. IELTS essay
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 4, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 5, 2015
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I do not agree to follow the same curriculum through all that period of time; GRE essay
Writing FeedbackBarrera77 - Mar 1, 2015 / Barrera77 - Mar 5, 2015
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IELTS TASK 2: One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 1, 2015 / SHanafi - Mar 5, 2015
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Knowledge from teachers, not from internet or TV? IELTS essay - Learning Resources
Writing Feedbackreplikatika - Feb 23, 2015 / dquinlan11 - Mar 4, 2015
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Trash bins at every nook and corner, more public toilets and regularly cleaned garbage piles
Writing Feedbackvidhyamouli - Mar 4, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 4, 2015
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Bad news in the media? Just to make money and to gain popularity.
Writing FeedbackBALAJISK - Mar 4, 2015 / Lbernal11 - Mar 4, 2015
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IELTS Writing Task 1: Online Sales for retail sectors in New Zealand
Writing Feedbacksomasalims - Mar 4, 2015 / audley - Mar 4, 2015
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