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|narrative essay : the wonderful annoucement
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|Essay about The Child is father of the Man
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|Over-reliance on technology & ability of humas to think for themselves
2 - Hi! I think it's great you are trying to improve your writing skills. What I noticed in your essay...
Writing Feedbackshkh23 - Sep 30, 2012 / abbieflis - Oct 14, 2012
|Human cloning - is it moral or immoral?
2 - The meaning of the humans cloning is that scientist creates the lab human. They copy the genetic real human,...
Writing Feedbackabcdefgh - Sep 29, 2012 / Ownpudi - Oct 14, 2012
|IELTS :I would prefer to run my business than to own a new house
3 - Thank you phasetwozero for your valuable comments. I am unable to understand what is the problem with following...
Writing Feedbackw_even - Oct 14, 2012 / w_even - Oct 14, 2012
|Is giving the same grade to every student in a group a good way to evaluate students?
5 - One more thing: your second last paragraph presents the opposite view. I am not sure about this but I...
Writing Feedbackhywb2 - Oct 13, 2012 / w_even - Oct 14, 2012
|IELTS TASK 1: GRaph/ consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat
2 - Hi, Williamcosta "Overall, there was a gradual decrease...." => I think you should replay Overall with In the case...
Writing Feedbackwilliamcosta - Oct 13, 2012 / annguyen - Oct 14, 2012
|Dilemma whether it is right decision to make Free health care for the POOR
Writing Feedbackfizuli - Oct 14, 2012 / kathytheson - Oct 14, 2012
|Problems in relationships have led to separation ; Conflict and Relationship
5 - As this is my first essay I really require your reviews on structure , grammer , sentences , punctuations....
Writing Feedbackiamtrying - Oct 8, 2012 / iamtrying - Oct 13, 2012
|Daily schedules and the glorious life are main reasons that the individuals work to gain money
2 - I do agree that some people work only for money. However, there are also those who work to make...
Writing Feedbackuzbek_sheikh - Oct 12, 2012 / sophiezhu - Oct 13, 2012
|IELTS 'university students' tuition fees - beneficial to the public
Writing Feedbackcarole - Oct 11, 2012 / carole - Oct 12, 2012
|Average weight of people is increasing, causes and solutions; 'burgers & pizzas'
3 - Your essay is good 1- Good vocabulary. 2- Good supporting ideas. however you have to think about the essay...
Writing Feedbackwilliamhayt - Oct 12, 2012 / Nemoo - Oct 12, 2012
|If you want to become an expert in a certain field, do you need talent or motivation?
3 - Thank you :)...
Writing FeedbackDiana Safiy - Oct 12, 2012 / Diana Safiy - Oct 12, 2012
|SAT: disagreement makes progress
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|(SAT Essay) Can knowledge be a burden? (grade it based on the SAT criteria)
4 - excellent writing skill and ideas are good, but the structure of the article is a little bit messy....
Writing FeedbackGuest - Sep 30, 2012 / beibeibajin - Oct 12, 2012
|'Farmers and unemployment' - Factory near my community TOEFL
2 - This sentence has several issues; first grammer and then about clarity and its presentation. These issues tend...
Writing Feedbackhang123 - Oct 11, 2012 / dumi - Oct 12, 2012
|Narrative essay about the time I went on a date with my current boyfriend / "Shelby"
2 - What is the prompt? For the first paragraph, I'd recheck the punctuation. You might want to replace some semicolons...
Writing Feedbacklourdesl - Oct 1, 2012 / zeppy1995 - Oct 11, 2012
|'Weekly money expenditure on fast food' - IELTS
NEW - Hi everybody, I really just need someone to read it over for me.This is Ä°ELTS writing task 1....
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|school attend: to further knowledge, to experience new things, to earn a degree
2 - to furtherget knowledge, to experience new things, and to earn a degree. use parallel structures...
Writing Feedbackmmouse - Sep 28, 2012 / navid_zarif - Oct 11, 2012
|Work in a company vs. have your own business, TOEFL
NEW - Society is often divided into two groups regarding major issues involving occupation. Some people like to have their own...
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|I am preparing for TOEFL iBT - Students choice of places to live
Writing Feedbackaniketkumar - Oct 7, 2012 / navid_zarif - Oct 11, 2012
|I really need help next month I have TOEFL and your comment will help me
Writing Feedbackparnian - Oct 7, 2012 / navid_zarif - Oct 11, 2012
|SAT - Is it always necessary to find new solutions to problems?
Writing FeedbackJenny_ysy - Sep 28, 2012 / kathytheson - Oct 10, 2012
|'Time of judgement' - college essay
Writing Feedbackjustintubbs - Oct 10, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 10, 2012
|Causes, effects, and solutions to DIVORCE
2 - Causes, effects, and solutions to DIVORCE Be sure to discuss each of these topics equally. If you were to...
Writing Feedbackphantan252 - Oct 10, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 10, 2012
|Property prices and rents affected the livelihood of many Hong Kong people?
Writing Feedbackzer000 - Sep 20, 2012 / Tran Tong - Oct 10, 2012
|Harmful human activity damages the Earth
2 - Sorry for my bad english because i'm still beginner with the language. I think is very interesting the comment...
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 10, 2012 / Chapapote - Oct 10, 2012
|"Traditional Market"- Narration for a theme : Look before you leap
2 - Shopping with my mother in traditional market has become a nightmare for me recently. - Recently, shopping in...
Writing FeedbackAlyssa - Oct 9, 2012 / skinbag - Oct 9, 2012
|'Norwegian Philosopher Arne Naess' article correction
3 - Can anyone with good english correct this A Norwegian Philosopher Arne Naess invented the term 'Deep Ecology'. An environmental...
Writing Feedbackbat - Oct 9, 2012 / bat - Oct 9, 2012
|'A person of good moral character' - Writing Sample
Writing Feedbackgospelkeys - Oct 9, 2012 / anniejerry - Oct 9, 2012
|Essay: compare and contrast between communicating by mobile phone and letter
Writing Feedbackthao phuong - Oct 8, 2012 / thao phuong - Oct 9, 2012
|IETLS writing practice: university education-preparation for employment or knowledge?
Writing FeedbackWang Ying - Oct 5, 2012 / Wang Ying - Oct 9, 2012
|visitors going to music sites / sales and prices of Coca Cola - IELTS Writing task 1
4 - Thank you for your feedback, really appreciate your correction. I don't see the thanks button here to click on...
Writing Feedbackding - Oct 8, 2012 / ding - Oct 9, 2012
|side effect to the society; Higher petrol price Vs Level of traffic & pollution
NEW - Hi, I need to improve my writing skill. kindly give me feedback so that i can improve. Pollution...
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|The process of making tea
Writing FeedbackHeina - Oct 7, 2012 / Heina - Oct 9, 2012
|IELTS: Investment in public transportation to against pollution; Agree/ Disagree
NEW - The policy to increase spending on public transportation to reduce air pollution has been common in many cities in...
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|Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment of crime. Others however
2 - Mankind is subject to imperfection and its own mistakes. There are to ways to live a life either honorably...
Writing Feedbackpgaur - Oct 5, 2012 / Tran Tong - Oct 8, 2012
|'Myths are the symbols of humans primitive cognition about the world' TOEFL ESSAY
3 - Really appreciate your correction,I think I have realized the problem you mentioned,I'll try to avoid passage structure like this...
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 7, 2012 / Jue - Oct 8, 2012
|"Afraid" - Filipinos and reptiles essay
2 - Hello, Theresa) Welcome to EssayForum) Always include a topic or question of your essay next time. Your essay is...
Writing Feedbackoptimus3 - Sep 24, 2012 / KhanhZ - Oct 7, 2012
|The best aspect of the job is the money one earns
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Sep 29, 2012 / chadenlabiad - Oct 7, 2012
|Read the selection below on glycolysis. Rewrite this in your own words
2 - splitting sugar also known as glycolisis, is split into three carbon sugar These smaller sugars are then oxidized then...
Writing Feedbackclarke13 - Sep 18, 2012 / chadenlabiad - Oct 7, 2012
|IELTS_importance of academic qualifications and personality in employment
2 - After reading your passage,in addition to some of the influent sentences,I feel you'd better think about how to make...
Writing Feedbackchfrank - Oct 7, 2012 / Jue - Oct 7, 2012
|SAT essay -Which is more powerful? Conscience Vs Money, Fame, or Power
NEW - I would like some feedback on improving this, also, I would like to know what score I would get,...
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|IELTS: Impacts of Technology and its crucial part of our lives
18 - Thank you all of you, Nancy, Clark, Van, FU, and vignesh for checking my essay. Really appreciate it!...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / April April - Oct 6, 2012
|IELTS; parents and schools are able to share the responsibility to educate children
Writing FeedbackTran Tong - Oct 2, 2012 / April April - Oct 6, 2012
|Report on culture shock between China and French for exchange student
NEW - Hey, it is a little bit longer. Please help me look at the structure and writing. Thank you ...
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|IELTS letter: requesting some information about the scholarship
3 - jue, thanks for your suggestions by which make the viewpoint more convinced by giving more elabration on the application...
Writing Feedbackredstone - Oct 5, 2012 / redstone - Oct 6, 2012
|Nuclear Family Essay - needs a LOT of reconstructing
2 - On the first sentence i think you shld remove 'or not' because it will sound better if there's only...
Writing Feedbacksamanthaxo - Oct 5, 2012 / jomk - Oct 6, 2012
|TOEFL essay,I'll be appreciated with your help
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 5, 2012 / Jue - Oct 6, 2012
|Factors influencing job satisfaction; salary and high level position in ranking
Writing Feedbackjahan - Oct 3, 2012 / jahan - Oct 6, 2012
|Outline-- Responses in relation to the attacks of September 11
5 - Man that must be a big essay, for the general idea, try to include things about how the planes...
Writing Feedbackttc1234 - Apr 21, 2009 / saichicka39 - Oct 5, 2012
|Movies expand our knowledge and information about other countries. TOEFL Essay
2 - The last and most important but not the least reason is that movies enhance/escalate our knowledge about other countries....
Writing Feedbacknavid_zarif - Oct 5, 2012 / krishnakant - Oct 5, 2012
|IELTS: Should University education be free? 'Everything has two sides'
Writing Feedbackquy - Oct 5, 2012 / pgaur - Oct 5, 2012
|Essay about a car incident
6 - First try to focus on maintaining the structure of the essay. I mean there should be introduction which clearly...
Writing FeedbackArmo - Jan 27, 2009 / quy - Oct 5, 2012
|Government expenses for roads and highways or public transportation - TOEFL essay
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 5, 2012 / Jue - Oct 5, 2012
|Sat essay; punishment as kids teaching method. Intro and Body - grade it, any ways to improve it?
2 - Hi, I made a few corrections/suggestions to your essay. Hope they help. Sorry I couldn't get the strike through...
Writing FeedbackAminemouj - Oct 4, 2012 / Duffy1513 - Oct 4, 2012
|IELTS task 2 - What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
2 - This statements is too broad and does not establish a close link to your topic theme.... Specify the...
Writing Feedbacklavinia94 - Oct 3, 2012 / dumi - Oct 4, 2012
|IELTS - International travel and mass media: Duchess Kate topless
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|ancient humans formed rhythms by stones; traditional vs international music
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Sep 26, 2012 / orkhan - Oct 3, 2012
|IELTS TASK 1 - Immigration figures for the UK
3 - Thank you so much. Those are basic errors. Unacceptable. Normally, I cannot see all of my errors, even I've...
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