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|Defiantly, our parents have a depth and direct effect in the whole of our life.
7 - Well, what I notice throughout your essay is that you tend to include many new key words, but...
Writing Feedbackabcdefgh - Jan 12, 2013 / dumi - Jan 14, 2013
|Land in natural condition? In Vietnam more lands for housing and industry needed
Writing Feedbacklw_sab - Jan 14, 2013 / Pahan - Jan 14, 2013
|Who deserves to get higher pays ? _Ielts
5 - Thanks, dumi :) I want to get over 7.0 in writing, plz give me corrections as well as estimated...
Writing Feedbacksalmav - Jan 12, 2013 / salmav - Jan 14, 2013
|Memorable phase of my life; My School Days Experience
NEW - Hellow Guys!!! Guys...as a means to improve my English grammar, i would like to share my school days...
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|( IELTS essay) who is valued more: young or old
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 10, 2013 / ash5005 - Jan 14, 2013
|IELST task 1: Graph shows the percentage of four different types of fuels in use
3 - Your essay is not high appriciated because you did not show the general trend. Without it, the essay would...
Writing Feedbackmoon25 - Jan 9, 2013 / mcuong01 - Jan 14, 2013
|Nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? IELTS
4 - You should use " strong/positive points" instead of benefits, "hindrances/drawbacks" replaces "risk" to lessen repetitions in the essay....
Writing Feedbackledlong - Jan 11, 2013 / salmav - Jan 14, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY; job for lifetime or multiple career which is best. Give opinion
3 - "disadvantage then advantage" ->than You can use the word "proficiency" instead of repeating "knowledge"...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 13, 2013 / salmav - Jan 14, 2013
|Who are more important? Older people or children (IELTS)
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 11, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|Solution to our healthcare system
4 - America spends more than seven thousand dollars per patient while countries such as Japan, England, and Finland spend an...
Writing FeedbackAlexis95xx - Jan 13, 2013 / etrane7 - Jan 13, 2013
|Do you think the salaries of professional sport players are two high? Why or why not?
4 - Successful athletes certainly deserve their high salaries. but they keep on working hard so that they...
Writing Feedbackgollu - Jan 11, 2013 / Pahan - Jan 13, 2013
|To spank or not to spank?
2 - I'm assuming this is a persuasive essay, not an informative one... OK.. My biggest suggestions: 1. Organization...
Writing FeedbackzemsMarwa73 - Jan 13, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 13, 2013
|( IELTS essay) scientific researches in public sector..?
6 - Hai Dumi... Thanks for your clarification... I was realy wondered what it did... exam will be according...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 10, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 13, 2013
|Your home movies & television programs are better than foreign ones! TOEFL
4 - Good essay. Your language sentences are flowing freely. They might not understand why, but I have several reasons...
Writing FeedbackLydia Moon - Jan 13, 2013 / colin - Jan 13, 2013
|Greenhouse Effect;GSPIA ESSAY- International problem
NEW - Provide a brief analysis of what you consider a national or international problem today. (character limit is 5000)...
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|My first memoir essay since 10 years
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|Exploration & development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels - A PRIME IMPORTANCE
Writing Feedbackmavischang - Jan 11, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|TV is replacing books as the new devices for people to learn in modern society
Writing Feedbackjessy - Jan 11, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students.
Writing Feedbackclaudio94 - Jan 12, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|IELTS:The most important characteristic of a leader is the good communication skill?
4 - ...when you say "social influence" it gives a different meaning. My suggestion; The leader can be described as...
Writing Feedbackcolin - Jan 12, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|Students should be required to take regular standardized tests - TOEFL
Writing Feedbackdauren95 - Jan 13, 2013 / dauren95 - Jan 13, 2013
|IELTS:The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase salary
Writing Feedbackcolin - Jan 12, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|'organise yourself' Should teenagers work while they are students? (TOEFL)
8 - Good introduction. Very direct and factual. : ) ...and do not have a clear vision about their...
Writing Feedbackclaudio94 - Jan 10, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|University should teach us to psychologically prepare for the cruel competitions
Writing Feedbackaaggbbb - Jan 10, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|a Short Story on "Carry On"
2 - peiting94 It's 2 o' clock in the morning, I woke up to the sound of silence. Well, my partner...
Writing Feedbackpeiting94 - Jan 10, 2013 / keleigh24 - Jan 12, 2013
|How most people in my country earn a living!
3 - It is tasted by many people around the world. People are fond of Shri Lankan tea sounds better....
Writing Feedbackthaladanushkar - Jan 12, 2013 / manjot - Jan 12, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY; animal species become extinct because of natural processes
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 12, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 12, 2013
|Smoking effects and smoking ban; IELTS
10 - "solution for them" -> solution to sth :) "smoking shortens a human significantly." -> smoking shortens lifespans/ longevity "governments...
Writing Feedbackjupiter - Jan 2, 2013 / salmav - Jan 12, 2013
|First letter to my pen pal; IELTS TASK 1
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Jan 10, 2013 / dumi - Jan 11, 2013
|Should children spend their free time on school work? IELTS
9 - .... try to present the core idea without lengthening the sentence. It helps improve the clarity. Here your...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Jan 10, 2013 / dumi - Jan 11, 2013
|CLASSROOM STUDYING or SELF STUDYING? TOEFL
2 - Is their a word limit? Personally I feel like you should take one side not say I prefer both....
Writing Feedbackriyak - Jan 11, 2013 / dinoyolk - Jan 11, 2013
|IELTS:To increase economic growth, government can neglect environmental concerns?
6 - are does. grammer mistake~! really admire ur essay. well developed and have a big vocabulary....
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 19, 2012 / jessy - Jan 11, 2013
|IELTS writing task 2: The use of CCTV (close circuit television)
7 - Oh thanks u a lot! just followed all links! And sorry, that previous comment of dopq01 made me feel...
Writing FeedbackJanett - Jan 3, 2013 / Janett - Jan 11, 2013
|SAT Essay Topic: What must we do to truly understand ourselves?
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|Essay on how our lives have improved due to better cooking methods available
3 - I am sorry, my essay was from the perspective of life in Singapore, where people mostly eat out specially...
Writing Feedbackriyak - Jan 9, 2013 / riyak - Jan 10, 2013
|( IELTS )Why student find it hard to study at university: Reasons and Solutions
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 9, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 10, 2013
|EILTS task 2 - causes and solutions for overweight
3 - hai.. the growing number of ....many countries. ====>this much o.k..balance sentance is not in a good flow.. your...
Writing Feedbackmcuong01 - Jan 10, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 10, 2013
|( IELTS essay) universities should give importance in theoretical or practical educat
5 - hai..Cuong... Thank you so .... Much for your valuable comments... I am agreeing that my essays are...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 8, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 10, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY, Private companies spending more than government in scientific research
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 10, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 10, 2013
|Hardships of university studies than schools: IELTS prepartion essay
11 - wikipedia Hostel_(disambiguation) Hostel may also refer to: In India, a Hostel is a Boarding school or dormitory for resident...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Jan 9, 2013 / nps - Jan 9, 2013
|Always telling the truth is the most important consideration?Yes honesty is important
Writing Feedbackaaggbbb - Jan 9, 2013 / aaggbbb - Jan 9, 2013
|The trend that damages our quality of life: Multinational Companies
8 - That's fine. My intention was to make you understand the difference between "abandon" and "abundant" Examples; He abandoned...
Writing Feedbacksalmav - Jan 8, 2013 / dumi - Jan 9, 2013
|TV is most effective; parents should choose which programme is suitable for kids
3 - Thank you for the reply. About the sentence"Books are the only source that provides us with information about...
Writing FeedbackCallie0202 - Jan 9, 2013 / Callie0202 - Jan 9, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Brain drain: wealthy nations should compensate poor countries?
5 - I do not fell it should be compensated by developed nations. -> feel. Is that the word you aim...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 9, 2013 / salmav - Jan 9, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY; Students find it hard to university studies compared to school studies
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 9, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 9, 2013
|What are some causes of stress among young people and How could this be ameliorated?
7 - .... I guess what you mean by physical lives is about physical activities. ...people do not need to...
Writing Feedbackhannahphan - Jan 8, 2013 / dumi - Jan 9, 2013
|[IELTS ESSAY] Successful athletes can earn a great deal more money than others
2 - spelling mistake demined i think it is determined demined by their popularity to the public instead of their contributions...
Writing FeedbackCrazySnailer - Jan 9, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 9, 2013
|Vacation can be boring, more complicated and less sophisticated without friends
Writing FeedbackChaz - Jan 8, 2013 / Chaz - Jan 9, 2013
|Brain Drain; More and more qualified professionals move from poor to rich countries!
5 - Dear Duminda Thanks a lot for your comments. To be honest, I am really getting confident due to...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Jan 9, 2013 / Arun0506 - Jan 9, 2013
|PORT DICKSON; School holiday exprience
5 - .... I think you should talk more about the experience rather than talking every little detail of the...
Writing Feedbackefinurfatihah - Jan 6, 2013 / dumi - Jan 9, 2013
|In many countries children engaged in some kind of paid work.(IELTS)
4 - Today the trend of youngchildrenbeing employed shows an alarming growth. This situation can be observed in...
Writing Feedbacknono824 - Jan 3, 2013 / dumi - Jan 9, 2013
|Machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation - IELTS
10 - It is also worth noting that MT frequently gives us the most common meanings of the words. Maybe you...
Writing Feedbacksalmav - Jan 2, 2013 / Callie0202 - Jan 9, 2013
|be a good model; Parents should teach children how to be good members of society
2 - I feel this sounds a bit controversial as even in previous eras, education had always been directed to...
Writing FeedbackBestjjrkm - Jan 3, 2013 / dumi - Jan 9, 2013
|University education or Work experience? Uni is more helpful in getting a job; IELTS
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Jan 7, 2013 / salmav - Jan 8, 2013
|IELTS-There can be many negative effects caused by people resisting to new changes!
5 - This is not a strong sentence.This gives an impression that this has begun in recent times. In my...
Writing Feedbackntdang92 - Jan 3, 2013 / dumi - Jan 8, 2013
|'Strictly executed measures' - essay about traffic problems and solutions
Writing Feedbackdongta - Dec 16, 2012 / bongxugalaxie - Jan 8, 2013
|Which way is the best for a student to make new friends? (TOEFL)
3 - for me, this part is a little bit confused. You should explain clearer (if you have good points...
Writing Feedbackheadshot0313 - Jan 8, 2013 / sir_alex92 - Jan 8, 2013
|Formal education start at early ages? Let children play and enjoy childhood (IELTS)
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 2, 2013 / dumi - Jan 8, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY, International law will not reduce crime rate in different countries
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 8, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 8, 2013
|Many parts of the world are losing important natural resourses
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