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|Theoretical knowledge or practical skill.
3 - Hmmm.. The sentence is a little too long. Try to break it down. Firstly, many school graduates find...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|Beubg Friendly and considerate ; characteristics of good neighbors
3 - This sentence doesn't sound very good. Try this. Since the stone age, man has always lived in groups....
Writing Feedbackbahar - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|'Not being hopeless' - Working in a group or working independently?
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|IELTS writing: Similarity of different places.
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 8, 2012 / my88626 - Dec 8, 2012
|Privacy of celebrates on newspapers and magazines Ielts essay
6 - The topic of privacy of celebrities on magazines and newspapers has sparked a heated debate in the recent...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park ,a national park, regional park
2 - Correct grammar would be; park has always been / parks have always been / park had always been/...
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 8, 2012
|IELTS: The concept of only mothers raising their kids has become an old one
Writing FeedbackIEC - Dec 6, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 7, 2012
|Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. Essay Contest: "The Drum Major Instinct"
Writing Feedbackmimilambie77 - Nov 29, 2012 / mimilambie77 - Dec 7, 2012
|should wealthy nations take responsiblity to help the poorer countries?
Writing Feedbackcu_chuoi - Dec 5, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 7, 2012
|describe the table illustrating expenses
NEW - the table is given in the file attachment.^^ The given table illustrates the percentage of expenses consumers spent...
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|Spanking is not okay! (Argumentative Essay)
Writing Feedbackkristenbrooke97 - Dec 6, 2012 / kristenbrooke97 - Dec 7, 2012
|Annual spending by a British school in 1981 - ielts task1
11 - Well, it means that a group of people think that the number of university students is too high and...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 7, 2012
|the compare and contrast between A and B Ice Cream
Writing Feedbackcnancysr - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 7, 2012
|Group Essay - "Warning! Teen Dating Hurts!"
7 - Where are those paragraphs? You need to do a draft and post it here.... Then others would be able...
Writing Feedbackplant4therice - Dec 5, 2011 / dumi - Dec 7, 2012
|Why do you believe you will be an effective teacher in a high-need school?
3 - Hi,Abby5, Your essay is so impressive! You develop the topic fluently and explain your dream clearly. I think...
Writing FeedbackAbby5 - Dec 6, 2012 / yisha - Dec 7, 2012
|Most important benefits from a job: relax, and fulfilling - even if less money
Writing Feedbackundidiamaka - Dec 5, 2012 / undidiamaka - Dec 6, 2012
|(IELTS essay) MNC's are good or bad..?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 6, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 6, 2012
|Analysing argument estate agents GRE
3 - There are some grammar issues here and that disturbs conveying your idea to the reader; The homeowner who...
Writing Feedbackbusybee - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 6, 2012
|What would you change if you are given a chance?
3 - This road creates problems to people stuck in traffic. Especially, people who drive a motorbikes will...
Writing FeedbackJonni - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 6, 2012
|Life with Courage
Writing Feedback672jade - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 6, 2012
|IELTS essay, Will letter writing disappear?
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 5, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 6, 2012
|Multicultural societies are becoming more and more popular due to...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 1, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 6, 2012
|( IELTS essay) foreign visitors should be charged more?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 5, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 6, 2012
|My Not-So Predetermined Destiny
Writing Feedbackgeebs5 - Dec 6, 2012 / dumi - Dec 6, 2012
|Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students.
2 - Most teachers used to make their class more interesting by employing various strategies to help students to understand their...
Writing Feedbackamd123 - Nov 19, 2012 / kartiprabhu - Dec 6, 2012
|My struggle with my dad on a day from coming from school going home
Writing FeedbackGenerous - Dec 4, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
|I love the different facets of Taipei
4 - And I'm sorry I did not know that facet actually meant aspect. And now it makes much more sense...
Writing Feedbackaszxxccv - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
|IELTS; High Sales Vs Power of Advertising - Discuss
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 5, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|The End Is Near! English Portfolio
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|'Mercedes-Benz E-Klasse and Misogyny ' - My analysis on Gender in commercials
2 - Your paper is very well done, I enjoyed reading about this interesting topic. I cannot find many mistakes, i...
Writing FeedbackChiletran01 - Nov 23, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 5, 2012
|TOEFL Topic: The Influence of the Internet's knowledge on life
Writing Feedbackminh11081995 - Dec 5, 2012 / minh11081995 - Dec 5, 2012
|Is saving endangered species worth? 'maintain the balance of ecological systems'
3 - This is a wonderfully constructed essay. :) I could not find much faults in it as it had been...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
|analytical Argument GRE
4 - Yes... you have come up with very logical points that need to be considered before taking a decision. Language...
Writing Feedbackbusybee - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|How would Public Funds be spent? IELTS
6 - wouldn't be better...existing sicknesses ? I wouldn't use Nevertheless 2 times I am new in the...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 4, 2012 / colorado - Dec 5, 2012
|Be cooperative/ Global village/ Importance of English
Writing Feedbackr01521232 - Dec 3, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 5, 2012
|Argumentative essay on Space and ocean exploration
2 - I love the way you have expressed this idea.... you have an interesting and unique style of presenting...
Writing FeedbackWheelchairEC - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|Internet is a great information provider, but also dangerous tool.
2 - You've written a great essay... Excellent writing with rich vocabulary and sentence structures. However, this task has to...
Writing Feedbacksomemela - Dec 5, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|Arranging My Thoughts on Marriage - ENG101 Essay
Writing Feedbackcrackhamster - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|the largest percentage was presented in teacher; Ilets task 1 pie charts
Writing Feedbackhonghanh763 - Dec 4, 2012 / honghanh763 - Dec 5, 2012
|Underground Railway Systems: IELTS | GRAPH - date, km, passengers # per year
2 - For me it's just like you give those five cities a title of being a metrapolitan with subway, the...
Writing Feedbackkeytolife - Dec 4, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 5, 2012
|IELTS topic: Skills of letter writing will soon disappear
3 - First of all, I'm not agree your opinion. The skill of letter writing is still being used, when...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 4, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 5, 2012
|'the aging tendency and burden on the society' - my ielts essay
4 - hai.. Ageing is a process and not a tendency.. 1st sentance =>...poses..i did nt get the meaning...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 2, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 4, 2012
|I believe parents shape the way you see life!
3 - Hai... Good essay, good flow to read, and interesting too.. The question asked you agree or disagree...? ...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 4, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 4, 2012
|politicians have the greatest influence on the world.
6 - I like the way you have organized the essay. Its very clear. One paragraph for the politicians and one...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 4, 2012
|Writting a argument synthesis essay about Divorce and children
3 - this is a very interesting topic to write on and you have presented some very good facts. :) Here...
Writing FeedbackBarzakh1 - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 4, 2012
|IELTS; Exterior of buildings is more important than their functions.
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / valency - Dec 4, 2012
|IELTS essay, teenagers should encouraged to do unpaid community work
6 - It's easy to follow the ideas that you've given. The topic sentence of each paragraph is quite clear. Good...
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Nov 29, 2012 / Edna - Dec 4, 2012
|One Page of Taipei
Writing Feedbackbilly790203 - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 4, 2012
|Did Mother Goddess ever exist? stories circulating over 3000 to 4000 years before Christ
2 - Hi jcfriend; Your essay caught my eyes because its topic aroused interest in me... However, I feel you have...
Writing Feedbackjcfriend - Dec 1, 2012 / dumi - Dec 4, 2012
|IELTS--people prefer to follow sports events on TV rather than take part in sport
Writing Feedbackaugustine - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 3, 2012
|IELTS writing - Criticism is useful for improving education system?
NEW - Please help me polish the essay. thanks buddy. In order to improve a country's education system, young students...
Writing Feedbackker0r0 - Dec 3, 2012 / — -
|media focus too much on celebrites
3 - hai.. You have good ideas.. I feel you need little bit more organization. Some ideas for the 1st...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 3, 2012
|IELTS essay, should all children's leisure activities be educational?
2 - quote=my88626]Today, many parents want their children's leisure activities to have educational component, while their kids may just want...
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 3, 2012
|TOEFL ESSAY Success is something which is so dear that everyone seeks
Writing FeedbackTiablo - Dec 1, 2012 / Tiablo - Dec 3, 2012
|Young people VSăď˝ď˝ď˝-ď˝...ď˝'ď˝ď˝ď˝...ď˝ď˝"
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 2, 2012 / valency - Dec 3, 2012
|What can we do to save our environment?
3 - hai... As ah_zafari pointed out lots of mistaks..i will give you some ideas.. :Reduce use of plastic and...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Nov 29, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 3, 2012
|IELTS|the effects of long-distance programs can never be as good as face to face prog
NEW - TOPIC: Nowadays,people can work and study at home through internet. However,the effects of long-distance programs can never be as...
Writing Feedbacktitanseer - Dec 3, 2012 / — -
|Talents; Born with them or not? IELTS
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 2, 2012 / valency - Dec 2, 2012
|The Fruit Section - story for english 9
3 - What is the message of this story? I think you should work on this point. You found you mother,...
Writing Feedbacknowel - Dec 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 2, 2012
|Person should never make an important decision alone; 'faculty choosing'
8 - Thank you so much joythblessy and snaacks. ^_^ Your suggest are so useful for me. I will try to...
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