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|Some people believe that pressures of modern life are having negative effects on fami
2 - Thanks to the development of advanced technologies, Since Socialists often blame the pressure of modern life as a...
Writing Feedbackthuytrangenglis - Jul 2, 2013 / fred123 - Jul 2, 2013
|Parents should send their children to school and let them live happily
Writing Feedbackkuz7204 - Jul 1, 2013 / dumi - Jul 2, 2013
|IELTS; Number of Heart cases of in England during four decades(1960 to 1990)
4 - The graph illustrates the statistics of people who suffered from heart diseases from the year 1960 to 1990....
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jul 1, 2013 / dumi - Jul 2, 2013
|Not only families and schools job, but also the whole society, to solve students behavioral problems
2 - one reason is the education from students' families, especially their parents you can write this as only family...
Writing Feedbackpiggiepolly - Jul 1, 2013 / orxan88 - Jul 2, 2013
|IELTS essay - How can young people be made responsible drivers?
Writing Feedbackkuz7204 - Jul 1, 2013 / gmad06 - Jul 1, 2013
|IELTS ; We are getting more and more greedy & selfish; Should we go back to the past?
6 - As everybody else above, I too suggest you to write simple sentences with more clarity. Don't have the habit...
Writing Feedbacksunnyback - Jun 16, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 1, 2013
|parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt
Writing Feedbackvioletkau1 - Jun 16, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 1, 2013
|IELTS : The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of ads
3 - First, you need to select "Writing Feedback" Forum for IELTS essays and make sure you open new threads in...
Writing Feedbackuhanna - Jul 1, 2013 / dumi - Jul 1, 2013
|TOEFL:How should people spend money? Personal Enjoyment or Fulfilling Duties?
3 - This essay should focus on the consequences of people "spend[ing] too much time on personal enjoyment." In other...
Writing Feedbacksubinjp - Jul 1, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jul 1, 2013
|Universities should require every student-take a variety of courses outside-course
Writing FeedbackGREASPI - Jun 30, 2013 / GREASPI - Jul 1, 2013
|Older generations consumed healthy food compared to what is consumed by people today.
2 - First, I have two requests ; Post this type of essays into "Writing Feedback" forum. Then also give a...
Writing Feedbackj0937065063 - Jun 30, 2013 / dumi - Jul 1, 2013
|IELTS; Should there be a law to get every child immunized?
Writing Feedbacksally12390 - Jun 28, 2013 / sydney5555 - Jun 30, 2013
|TOURISM and its IMPACT on our society
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 26, 2013 / sydney5555 - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS; Letter to a friend - request to look after my sick dog Pooh
3 - huyenanh1508 If there wasn't you, I wouldn't know who to ask for help. this just does not sound...
Writing Feedbackhuyenanh1508 - Jun 29, 2013 / kyh8252 - Jun 30, 2013
|Difference between Two Close friends
Writing Feedbackkieulinhbs - May 29, 2013 / JangGemini - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS- begin language learning from elementary school compared to secondary school
3 - Learning a foreign language is becoming increasingly essential in the modern globalized world. ... teaching what?...
Writing Feedbackvenise - Jun 29, 2013 / dumi - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS- Task 1.The number of houses sold of UK in 2000
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jun 27, 2013 / shinichi75 - Jun 30, 2013
|Children who grew up with hardships are better prepared to deal with problems; Agree?
2 - I wish you wrote this in two sentences; Personally I agree with this statement. However, I also...
Writing FeedbackMuath1987 - Jun 29, 2013 / dumi - Jun 30, 2013
|TOEFL; Integrated writing task - Team Work is the best way to handle a new project
5 - First, the reading passage claims that a team exerts a greater power than that of an individual in...
Writing Feedbacksinafrm1365 - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|Same laws should be applied to Tobacco as they are applied to Heroin
3 - Follow the outline suggested by jkjeremy. Also don't forget to support your reasons with a specific example that can...
Writing Feedbackdrodriguez_38 - Jun 16, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|Break after high school has advantages and disadvantages
8 - Yes.... you are right because it is the easiest way to handle this task. Considering the time factor, you...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 11, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|My sister, my roommate - MY COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ESSAY
2 - My sister and i usually argue about somthing whereas my sister I wonder how she can talk consecutive over...
Writing Feedbackchauuyenbinh - Jun 29, 2013 / sally12390 - Jun 29, 2013
|The Effects of TV on Society, especially on children;
Writing Feedbackkieulinhbs - Jun 15, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Main reasons for migration to and from the UK
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 28, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 29, 2013
|Universities should provide both knowledge and skills needed in the workplace
Writing Feedbackvenise - Jun 27, 2013 / venise - Jun 29, 2013
|IELTS, To some people, studying HISTORY has very little value; what is your view?
10 - This goes in the introduction. . Which difficulties? Pick ONE and write a paragraph about it....
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 28, 2013
|Now a days technologies have became a very important aspect of everybodys lives!
4 - "Now a days" should be spelled "nowadays," but is a word that is no longer used frequently by...
Writing Feedbackgangadhar - Jun 16, 2013 / IntheClouds - Jun 28, 2013
|What's more influencial on child's development? Family influence or Other factors?
Writing Feedbackleotimothy - Jun 27, 2013 / leotimothy - Jun 28, 2013
|IELTS; Is CHANGE good or bad? / People's preferences
3 - ...I guess your prompt asks you about your stand on this. To which side you belong? Those like to...
Writing Feedbackbluesoly - Jun 28, 2013 / dumi - Jun 28, 2013
|Global water scarcity - a Global concern
2 - we will be concerned about the next generation . our lives on earth depends on water so everyone should...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / sally12390 - Jun 27, 2013
|goverment has a plan to plant trees , dose this have affect on ecosystem and water ?
2 - Each organism of the ecosystem has heavy dependence on other living beings and vice verse contributing to...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 27, 2013
|Social networks create more harm than good to teenagers. What are your views ?
Writing Feedbackelfailure - Jun 11, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 27, 2013
|Imported fruits &vegetables can affect the home grown vegetable market
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS task 1: The highest qualification attained by sex...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS ; MOBILE PHONES - Essential or Unnecessary?
4 - It seems you are new to this forum. Please select the forum "writing feedback" for your essays written on...
Writing Feedbacksally12390 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY- Graphic describing; Differences of an island
Writing Feedbackhuyenanh1508 - Jun 26, 2013 / huyenanh1508 - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to inform a friend about his accomodation
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 24, 2013 / IntheClouds - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1; GDP Growth for 3 different countries
3 - 6.5% and 6.4%...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 26, 2013
|IETLS TASK 2; More money should be spend on education and sports?
4 - First, you need to give a meaningful topic for your essays when you open a new thread. That helps...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS; 'benefits of technology' What older people can learn from young people?
3 - .... Wish you broke this up to two sentences; With the advent of new technologies, our generation has...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|Learning English through Social Issue - Teen Smoking
Writing Feedbackdavylsc910 - Jun 9, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:who should take care of the elderly,family or professionals?
4 - Receiving this compliment from a renowned forumer like you made me the most proud student here..thanks.. tell you...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 25, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 26, 2013
|Ielts: Libraries should not waste their money on hi-tech media. Agree or disagree?
6 - Thanks for your suggestion! If I didn't sum up my ideas in the conclusion, should I give some recommendations...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 25, 2013
|IELTS; Why attend Universities or Colleges? Specific reasons and examples
5 - I think you should change this sentence a bit: I believe that career preparation is the main reason...
Writing Feedbacksalmah1997 - Jun 18, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Imprisonment levels in 5 countries
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Talent vs Training - Talent is more important!
5 - Your essay structure definitely needs improvement. Seems like you have two conclusion paragraphs, you have a paragraph with a...
Writing FeedbackAnnaLimetta - Jun 5, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|What's more useful: purchasing a business or a house?
6 - I think you can get a better structure for this essay if you could share some insights also on...
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 21, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS; Consumer durables(telephone,refrigerator,etc)owned inBritain
4 - The rate of people using this item fluctuated between 93% to 98% during the period Refrigerator...
Writing Feedbacklytetdi - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTs---competition is much more importance than cooperation in school. do you agree?
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts: The cement and concrete making process
11 - I see. I guessed I could add a sentence about the fire to supplement the preceded sentence. Thank...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 14, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Compare and Contrast: Two kinds of transportation/ DRIVING & FLYING
Writing Feedbackastuart - Jun 8, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS:Why Do People Feel Isolated from Each Other and what are the solutions?
3 - .... yes of course.... great start! .... How about introverts? They love isolation and do not...
Writing FeedbackYasir1994 - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|Young adults are full of dreams and passion about their future. Do they need more independence?
Writing Feedbackdeepi - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: International travel brings more benefits than its de-merits
5 - .... You need to attend to grammar, but with practice you'll be alright. Follow the corrections suggested by...
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 23, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|TOEFL: Studying at home or at traditional school?
3 - Hi MisterWandering, I made a few revisions and here's what this sentence means. However, students can...
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013
|Reason why you want to buy carbon filter comforter mask
3 - ...it's good if you can improve clarity of this line; [i]The industrial enviroments are often polluted by noise,...
Writing Feedbacklespeed - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|Eaqual number of male & female students in universities
5 - ....yes... shinichi75 has a very valid point. It appears that you are preparing for IELTS or TOEFL and...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: Select 3 effective media and write about their effectiveness
3 - .... The media is a "catch-all" term which caters to any type of activity whether it involves current...
Writing Feedbackwinny239 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: Many people are busy with work and not enough time for famliy
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: business and financial grew noticeably and become the most advanced area
3 - -> ... the UK in the twentieth century -> business and financial services grew/developed the most...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
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