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|My dog spoke to me! Essay for a writing contest
2 - that was wonderful MAN... hats off... your age and your narration. vocabulary was more than enough. how excited i...
Writing FeedbackJoanne123 - Jun 9, 2013 / temptprovidence - Jun 9, 2013
|IELTS - It's better to learn how to communicate with opposite sex before entering universities
Writing FeedbackArezuF - Jun 6, 2013 / lilythuy2289 - Jun 8, 2013
|"If at first you don't succeed, try and try again" - TOEFL essay
9 - Things you might consider to take your essay to the next level: 1.) Include personal experience relevant to...
Writing Feedbackdesertrose - May 24, 2013 / amorphous1 - Jun 8, 2013
|TOEFL: HOW TO BE A QUALIFIED CO-WORKER?
3 - Great essay! I particularly like your conclusion. Only a few nitpicks: Run-on sentences. Split into two sentences...
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - Jun 4, 2013 / amorphous1 - Jun 8, 2013
|I plan to retire when I am no longer in healthy ;Retirement / Answers 4 questions
Writing Feedbackfsolano94 - May 25, 2013 / dumi - Jun 7, 2013
|"Marshrutka"; FEMALE LOGIC - funny story
Writing FeedbackVyyy96 - Jun 7, 2013 / dumi - Jun 7, 2013
|IELTS; New fashion of doing multiple careers
3 - You should work more on your grammar, like ArezuF stated above. Also, work on the structure of an Ielts...
Writing Feedbackbmtcute - Jun 6, 2013 / April April - Jun 7, 2013
|financial preparedness; wealthy nations sharing their wealth with poorer nations
Writing Feedbackbmtcute - Jun 5, 2013 / bmtcute - Jun 6, 2013
|Country has a lot of special things to offer and many of them are reflected in movies
Writing Feedbacklele1987 - Jun 2, 2013 / lele1987 - Jun 4, 2013
|TOEFL: PEOPLE WHO CANT ACCEPT CRITISISM ARE NOT GOOD TEAM PLAYERS
2 - I wish you started this essay with a more meaningful statement. Get more help from your prompt and Introduce...
Writing Feedbackj0937065063 - Jun 3, 2013 / dumi - Jun 4, 2013
|IELTS: Richer nations shoul assist poorer nation in their development efforts?
2 - Yes.... I can see you have excellent writing skills. You only need to pay attention to time management and...
Writing FeedbackNewUser - Jun 4, 2013 / dumi - Jun 4, 2013
|IELTS ....Fast Food is becoming more popular?
Writing FeedbackNewUser - May 30, 2013 / NewUser - Jun 4, 2013
|IELTS: TASK 2: Problems caused by Internet and its solutions.
2 - Some suggestions .. bigger is comparative, bigger than what ?!?! acknowledged as a key source ... ...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 31, 2013 / NewUser - Jun 3, 2013
|IELTS : Which behaviour of teachers is efficient; Strict or friendly?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Jun 2, 2013 / JangGemini - Jun 3, 2013
|Are rich people generally more happy than poor people?
5 - Hi, im new here too. For this topic, I think most religiouses teach mankind the happiness is depend on...
Writing FeedbackPhilosophy Essa - Jun 2, 2013 / Borworn01 - Jun 3, 2013
|To what extent do you agree with going abroad for university studies?
5 - You shouldn't use abbreviation. In the essay, you merely analyze the 1st opinion and ignore the 2nd one. I...
Writing Feedbackrndxpert - Jun 1, 2013 / nellylovekelly - Jun 3, 2013
|I'm a mechanical engineer; Academic background and work experience
3 - Thank you so much Didgerigoo. Could i ask you one more question? About the sentence " I work in...
Writing Feedbacklespeed - May 31, 2013 / lespeed - Jun 2, 2013
|IELTS;It's important to support artists,but important things should get priority
Writing Feedbacknellylovekelly - Jun 2, 2013 / rememberwhen - Jun 2, 2013
|'technology and media' - CAS Essay of a non-English Speaker
Writing FeedbackLolaya - Aug 20, 2012 / Lolaya - Jun 1, 2013
|IELTS; Water Cycle/ Life cycle of butterfly/ Letter /Process fo digital photography
3 - For each idea below, continue the sentence or write a follow-on sentence using your own ideas to express Result...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 30, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 31, 2013
|Review of the film ''Mongol'' by Sergei Bodrov.
NEW - Please check my essay. I don't know how many mistakes are there. Thank you! Not until I watched...
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|Marketing assistant position - IELTS Letter check Request
4 - I don't think you need to add the last sentence as it makes you sound desperate (anxious part), besides...
Writing Feedbacksophisticated - May 29, 2013 / dragonking88 - May 31, 2013
|IELTS: Selfsufficiency OR Import Food
3 - You need to pay attention to the essay to the essay structure for this task. I generally recommend the...
Writing Feedbackmahash - May 31, 2013 / dumi - May 31, 2013
|Governments money for artsists; 'Artists have been seen as talented people'
7 - Hi, lilythuy2289. Investing too much resources on artists will have a negative impact on the development of...
Writing Feedbacklilythuy2289 - May 28, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013
|TOEFL: (Dis/Agree) Establish a large shopping center in our community or not?
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013
|IELTS: Arranged and love marriages. Discuss both views.
2 - To begin with, one of the biggest advantages of love marriage is that it freesexempt the parents from their...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 29, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013
|Assignment: Is it best to determine how wise people are by how happy they are?
3 - Really? That encourages me so much xD Thank you thank you!! I thought no one would fix it for...
Writing FeedbackJangGemini - May 28, 2013 / JangGemini - May 29, 2013
|Psychological Effects of War on Soldiers
4 - Didgeridoo You might not be a grad student or a professor but you pointed out the mistakes and made...
Writing Feedbackrtyler - May 28, 2013 / rtyler - May 29, 2013
|Many childhood experiences leave a lifelong impression
Writing Feedbacknorthernbell - May 22, 2013 / northernbell - May 29, 2013
|IELTS: Nature of Holidays is changing, do you agree or disagree
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 28, 2013 / shaddy - May 29, 2013
|Factors which influence a good movie ( your opinions )
Writing Feedbacklilythuy2289 - May 27, 2013 / shaddy - May 29, 2013
|IELTS : Nowadays people are producing more and more rubbish. Reasons and actions.
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 27, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 29, 2013
|IELTS - Report an island before and after construction
Writing Feedbackseabird88 - May 26, 2013 / shaddy - May 28, 2013
|Ielts: % of Australian men and women with 5-levels of post-school qualifications
2 - Your chart seem to direct in introduction. The horizontal bar chart differentiates Australian men and women on post...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 27, 2013 / sophisticated - May 28, 2013
|IELTS ; Letter to Football Team-mate to inform why I leave the team
5 - I hope this letter finds you in good spirit and health. The purpose of this letter is to bring...
Writing Feedbacksophisticated - May 27, 2013 / nicktheB - May 28, 2013
|TOEFL; Some people think that family has more influence on the young adult
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 27, 2013 / April April - May 28, 2013
|Computer Addiction (Causes/Effect/Solution )
4 - ... technology has literary influenced everybody's life and therefore you can keep this very general .......
Writing Feedbackyasser - May 27, 2013 / dumi - May 27, 2013
|Cracking Down The Laws of Bullying by Pandora Campbell
Writing FeedbackPandora0510 - May 18, 2013 / Pandora0510 - May 27, 2013
|ARGUMENT ESSAY ON IMPORTANCE OF COMMUNITY SERVICE AMONG STUDENTS AT PLEASANTVILLE
NEW - Q- Several charitable organizations in Pleasant-ville provide opportunities for teenagers to engage in community service. Write a response...
Writing Feedbacktaanyakhare2312 - May 27, 2013 / — -
|IELTS; In our society child's education have never been a simple task
9 - never need comma Some people argue that, children should be taught to be avaluevaluablemembemembers in their...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 27, 2013
|IELTS : Reason of being overweight in children is due to fast food outlets or parents
4 - Thanks guys for the corrections \ suggestions. I was busy with some stuff so couldn't come here earlier....
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 15, 2013 / shaddy - May 27, 2013
|IELTS, the reasons for increasing rubbish, and provide the measures for governments.
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 21, 2013 / April April - May 27, 2013
|Advantages of living in the dormitory rooms and apartment buildings - COMPARISON
3 - --> Moreover, the dorm buildings are usually close to the class buildings and departments; therefore, students do...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 26, 2013 / April April - May 26, 2013
|A story about desert survival; Creative writing
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|Lord Arragorn has returned short story.
2 - It is an engaging read, but it gets kind of confusing after the narrator gets hacked and shot. I...
Writing Feedbackchessman567 - May 26, 2013 / Didgeridoo - May 26, 2013
|Lincoln Paper - Introductory Paragraph
Writing FeedbackGlenn900 - Jan 3, 2009 / mussy - May 26, 2013
|IELTS: Importance of studying History in school.
3 - thanx Habib. I really appreciate ur time and effort. But there are few corrections. Do not put comma after...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 25, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 26, 2013
|Report on the likely effects of Global warming on the capital city of my country
Writing Feedbackxucoi - May 18, 2013 / xucoi - May 26, 2013
|Life itself is a big recipe- COURAGE; Concept Essay/ Grand Canyon U
Writing FeedbackJeremyofAL - May 18, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 25, 2013
|IELTS - good changes can be brought in life without major difficulties.
6 - thank u o much. i really appreciate ur opinion but please can ye explain how to gather the ideas...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 24, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 25, 2013
|IELTS: profits from natural resources make people ignore to preserve natural world
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 24, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 25, 2013
|GRE: Mason City residents & Water sports - Argumentive Essay
3 - Residents of Mason city constantly complain forabout the quality of river water and the river's smell but that doesdo...
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Reliance on Technology to solve problem will deteriorate humans ability to think
4 - ... exactly :) .... this is a well written introduction... The only point I notice is that you...
Writing Feedbackmavericksid - May 22, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|TOEFL Students are more interested in politics today than those in the past.
4 - ...need to improve :( In this advance society, politics too have become very complicated and they, either directly...
Writing FeedbackIvy_Missing - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Happiness of working that one can achieve is the best in this world
Writing Feedbackninasalimi - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Today, new media is springing out and bringing convenience to everyday life
2 - ... another way of expressing this ; As a result of rapid globalization, media industry keeps flourishing stronger...
Writing Feedbackfrancy - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|"The words like Justice only exist in dictionaries"; Rich men have no fault
Writing Feedbackkingmaker - May 25, 2013 / dumi - May 25, 2013
|Teacher should relate well with students than having an excellent knowledge.
5 - Put away the thesaurus and rewrite this using words you already know (no matter how simple). Then I'll be...
Writing Feedbackjunisha rai - May 19, 2013 / jkjeremy - May 24, 2013
|Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together
3 - ....when you say "communication gap" it has a much broader meaning than talking about communication between people. Here...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|TOEFL: I think that there are still a lot of different types of movies
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