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|'Corrupt-free governments and stable economy' - IELTS preparation
Writing FeedbackTrave - Nov 12, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 12, 2012
|Old buildings and nation's history; History in pages can fade out from our minds
NEW - hi, I am preparing for IELTS can any one correct my essay and tell me how can i improve.thank...
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|'experience of survival life, South Pole' - Ielts, task 2
3 - Thank you very , very much !!! Could you just point me if isn't there any other mistake, pleasee...
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 12, 2012 / skop - Nov 12, 2012
|Computers overweigh schools so schools will disappear
NEW - Some people think computers and the Internet have more benifit than schools so schools will disappear from our lives....
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|'Competitive life' - Ielts essay
5 - thank you writersmyth what do you mean about "make it more effective by pros and cons" can you give...
Writing Feedbackabtin - Nov 12, 2012 / abtin - Nov 12, 2012
|'all writers started career at their 20s' - Ielts - graph
Writing Feedbackgop - Nov 10, 2012 / dumi - Nov 12, 2012
|IElLTS - reducing pollution and damage to the remote environments
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 8, 2012 / skop - Nov 12, 2012
|Rich countries should share wealth among poor countries!
3 - Thank you very much Scientiana for your valuable advices and corrections.Ä°n the third paragraph i have considered that if...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Oct 29, 2012 / orkhan - Nov 12, 2012
|'The source of media and private information about famous people' band according to IELTS
4 - Dear Scientiana, Thanks for providing me your feedback and the impressive correction and suggestion .That for sure help me...
Writing Feedbackdeep9012 - Oct 25, 2012 / deep9012 - Nov 11, 2012
|'Electing a representative in government' - Essay help for midterm
2 - The entire third paragraph seems to drag on. Maybe try spacing out the essay a little better. It appears...
Writing Feedbackalexnsarria - Oct 16, 2012 / mhk1294 - Nov 11, 2012
|'positive and inspirational trend' - IELTS: Creative artists' freedom
Writing Feedbackhumanx - Nov 8, 2012 / humanx - Nov 11, 2012
|'Good atmosphere' - What change to hometown more appealing to people your age?
4 - "Although there are many buses in the urban and rural area, but it is pretty hard for people to...
Writing Feedbackpurplepotato - Nov 7, 2012 / zahras93 - Nov 11, 2012
|IELTS: WHETHER BOTTLED WATER SHOULD BE BANNED
3 - Thank you dumi and scientiana, I greatly appreciate your comments. I will write as many essay as I can...
Writing FeedbackChuHa - Oct 25, 2012 / ChuHa - Nov 11, 2012
|'Harmful effects' - IELTS Essay about the influence of advertisement
Writing Feedbackying0216 - Nov 7, 2012 / ying0216 - Nov 11, 2012
|'better standard of living for people' - ielts - 2 task
4 - I've changed the pointed mistakes by you guys thank you very much, I really need to get down to...
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 10, 2012 / skop - Nov 11, 2012
|'From Qatar and an independent school for girls' - about yourself
Writing Feedbackdmj - Nov 10, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 11, 2012
|'Coral Gables, Miami' - My lost palace
3 - What about Coral Gables makes you like getting lost? Getting lost is usually not pleasant, so what about the...
Writing Feedbackjincera1 - Nov 10, 2012 / cezyou - Nov 10, 2012
|'museum can attract visitors' - [ielts] topic with museum
8 - Plz every one comment on this There are different kinds of people having different personalities and opinions living...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 7, 2012 / ibadullah - Nov 10, 2012
|TECHNOLOGICAL FOODS IS HARMFUL TO PEOPLE'S HEALTH ( IELTS )
3 - HI.dzung1991 Beside motivator, general background should be given in the introduction. However, ah_zafari said that the opinion should...
Writing Feedbackdzung1991 - Nov 6, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 10, 2012
|'What I taught myself' - Essay Revision
Writing Feedbackdudeman - Nov 6, 2012 / ysysysys - Nov 10, 2012
|Power of advertisements are overrated!
3 - Thankyou ah_zafari for your suggestions, I will try to improve those fiels which you highlited....
Writing Feedbackpriya9991 - Nov 7, 2012 / priya9991 - Nov 10, 2012
|[ielts task 1] report on quantities of goods transported in UK
2 - Your writing is very good with good use of a variety of vocabulary. However, try to use more linking...
Writing Feedbackgandora1510 - Oct 23, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 9, 2012
|How dependent we are on machines? / Are machines going to take over the world?
NEW - We are living in a society which is called a "technologically civilized" society. Every small work that we do...
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|'complicated thinking skills' - IELTS: the main function of university
5 - .... when you rearrange the order it reads well; Should they give knowledge and skills to the graduates.......
Writing FeedbackAida - Oct 16, 2012 / dumi - Nov 9, 2012
|Essay about taxation to reduce air traffic - feedback
Writing FeedbackMSMK - Nov 9, 2012 / MSMK - Nov 9, 2012
|TOEFL - Improving conditions - Has human harmed the Earth or made it a better place?
Writing FeedbackMunkhjin - Nov 7, 2012 / dumi - Nov 9, 2012
|How many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities
2 - The graphic shows how many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities between televisions and...
Writing FeedbackWal - Nov 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|'my priorities and goals' - Meaning of life essay
2 - I believeThe world is inhabited by millions of individuals, each defining the meaning of life differently. Corresponding to...
Writing Feedbackmeme123456 - Oct 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|Is money synonymous to success?
Writing FeedbackCharmaine VC - Nov 7, 2012 / Charmaine VC - Nov 8, 2012
|Governor's School essay on social issue (apathy) that concerns me
3 - Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, the deadline has passed and I just went with what my teachers said. Although,...
Writing Feedbackselemi - Oct 14, 2012 / selemi - Nov 8, 2012
|This is a research paper on whether Social Networks causes relationships to end
NEW - The guidelines for this paper are as follows Transition sentence to get from the previous paragraph Topic sentence Supporting...
Writing Feedbackmcotton79 - Nov 8, 2012 / — -
|Fast food brings us more avails than drawbacks (IELTS task 2)
Writing Feedbackclackkent - Nov 6, 2012 / humanx - Nov 8, 2012
|'money-centered people' - Judging person by his social status and material possessions - ielts
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 8, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 8, 2012
|Dishonesty in relationship / Should you be always truthful?
3 - thanks a lot!...
Writing FeedbackMai_Alexei - Nov 6, 2012 / Mai_Alexei - Nov 8, 2012
|IELTS TASK: support fixed punishment for each type of crime or not
2 - no two crimes happen (appear) in totally the same conditions there's not always one simple punishment which suit every...
Writing Feedbacksydaisy - Oct 22, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 8, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 2, topic about yongsters
2 - Your essay is great! Well organization and well argument! However, you have to be careful with your grammar and...
Writing Feedbackgoldmanswalking - Oct 21, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 8, 2012
|History shows us how forgetful human beings are
Writing Feedbackrkandil - Nov 7, 2012 / jincera1 - Nov 7, 2012
|'exotic tourist attractions' - a comfortable living in exchange of money?
2 - Very good work. Few ideas might be added here and there, last but one paragraph is a bit confused.overall...
Writing Feedbackqwertyui - Oct 18, 2012 / priya9991 - Nov 7, 2012
|What are seasons? Are they as different as they seem? - essay
2 - Hello! First, I recommend changing your title; unless, of course, the title was assigned. Given the ambiguity of the...
Writing FeedbackNVShouaXyooj - Oct 15, 2012 / Sheri_Editor - Nov 7, 2012
|"Love, Loyalty, Trust are the three things to lead a good relationship in life"
Writing Feedbackpal - Nov 5, 2012 / pal - Nov 7, 2012
|[graph] Percentage of students giving good ratings - IELTS review
Writing Feedbackbigbang15101990 - Nov 7, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 7, 2012
|'consuming less beef, lamb or fish' [ielts] Cambridge 7, test 1
2 - Beef was the most favouring meat, until 1989 it lost the first position. It, however, still maintained its second...
Writing Feedbacksliver1510 - Oct 19, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 7, 2012
|The power of advertising and ads in the commerce essay
4 - ah_zafari Thanks for your valuable advice. Please see If this change can be helpful in introduction :- ...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 7, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 7, 2012
|IELTS,ESSAY with topic Relationship between different countries
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 6, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 7, 2012
|'years to build' - WILL I EVER TRUST AGAIN?
3 - Thanks for the reply it really helped i changed it to "I will remember that conversation until the day...
Writing Feedbacktata98 - Nov 6, 2012 / tata98 - Nov 6, 2012
|Higher education of advanced learning and teaching - better jobs for graduates?
3 - I have some suggestions on your second essay. Hope you find them helpful. No doubt, humans beings that are...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 6, 2012
|Bad sides in public hospitals and the gap between the rich and the poor
4 - I think you should write more about the problem stated in the prompt. Reword the topic as a thesis...
Writing FeedbackHeina - Nov 4, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 6, 2012
|Feedback- Has technology isolated us from society and nature?
Writing Feedbackmap181 - Nov 5, 2012 / sailinalbion - Nov 6, 2012
|IELTS; Rural depopulation- Effects and Suggestions to reverse the trend
NEW - Hi guys, I'm practicing for the IELTS test and here is my essay. Could you please help me to...
Writing Feedbackbibica - Nov 6, 2012 / — -
|Friendship and financial matters essay - money can harm relationship?
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 5, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 6, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY: PARENTS ARE THE BEST TEACHERS
Writing Feedbackjohnz777z - Nov 3, 2012 / MaryMary - Nov 6, 2012
|[IELST task 2] Topic parents or school should teach children
2 - This opening statement sounds a bit deviated from the topic which deals more with teaching children social skills...
Writing Feedbacksilentwarrior - Nov 5, 2012 / dumi - Nov 6, 2012
|Advantages of learning English
3 - Thank to Jennyflower81 for adjusting my writing. The adjusted writing is very helpful for me in the next English...
Writing Feedbackhuybinh111 - Nov 5, 2012 / huybinh111 - Nov 5, 2012
|Learners have different preference s ; Self assessment
2 - You have really good ideas here, but in many cases you don't have complete sentences. Sometimes, it's just a...
Writing Feedbackrsantiago - Oct 13, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|"in text Referencing" - This essay is correted by my teacher
2 - I think your teacher is right that you should expand your conclusion somewhat. Think about expanding your idea. Perhaps...
Writing FeedbackBraveheart - Oct 13, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|Teacher vs parent role in children's intellectual and social development IELTS Task2
Writing FeedbackIris77 - Oct 9, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|IELTS: World literacy rates by region and by gender; 'lower for men than women'
2 - Hello! This makes sense, but has a few grammatical errors. Lack of literacy skills IS found (currently you have...
Writing Feedbackding - Oct 10, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|Is talent a key element for children to become professionals?
3 - Thank you very much. The question is "Discuss should we teach all of children to be expert or only...
Writing Feedbackzzzz - Oct 29, 2012 / zzzz - Nov 5, 2012
|[AWS] Pros and cons of permissive parenting style
2 - Hello symptom, Your essay is clear, but needs more examples to back up why you do not agree with...
Writing Feedbacksymptom - Oct 24, 2012 / linmark - Nov 5, 2012
|IELTS Essay : Borrowing money from a friend is harmful to friendship
Writing Feedbackw_even - Nov 4, 2012 / dumi - Nov 5, 2012
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