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|College - the best time when a person participates in other activities which broadens his knowledge
Writing Feedbackinform - May 26, 2012 / inform - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS importance of co-operation rather than competition in children's education
Writing Feedbackcocoyan - May 20, 2012 / cocoyan - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL(Physical exercise is more important for older people than for younger people)
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL: (more productive, energetic) EASIER FOOD PREPARATION IMPROVED PEOPLE'S LIVES
5 - Dear Jason, Nice essay. I am also preparing TOEFL, so it was very helpful for my brainstorming....
Writing Feedbackjhundais - May 23, 2012 / vickey - Jun 6, 2012
|HOME SCHOOLING IS ACCURATE OPTION
3 - You definitely need to develop a more inviting, and more broad, introductory statement rather than just jumping right in...
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|essay about "a fake beauty"
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 30, 2012 / kersise - Jun 5, 2012
|IETLS 2-Why young people tend to spend less free fime with family?
NEW - Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are...
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|International tourism: 'foreigners should study local cultures before traveling'
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 4, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 5, 2012
|'media may distort the image of the hero' - GRE AWA PRACTICE: Issue topic
NEW - I am horrible at writing and would like some feedback on this AWA Issue topic for the GRE, Thank...
Writing FeedbackGuest - Jun 5, 2012 / — -
|IELTS:1 - 'wish you the best in the city' A letter to a friend
2 - Dear John, Firstly,I appreciated your acceptance ofThank you fortakingagreeing tocare ofwatch my littleKitty cat whenwhile I spend my...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 5, 2012 / BachChaconne2 - Jun 5, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: machine made goods are cheaper and more durable than handmade ones
7 - Hi, I mean the body should include three paragraphs. Yes, you should add another idea as the fourth paragraph....
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jun 1, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 5, 2012
|'Some people ignore the importance of history' - IELTS essay
5 - Thank you so much, it's really helpful. I'm afraid i have a long way to go...!! Thanks again!!...
Writing FeedbackFuzzyBunny - Jun 4, 2012 / FuzzyBunny - Jun 5, 2012
|'the factory will develop city' -essay about building a new factory in the community.
3 - A factory can influence an entire city not only economically, but also architecturally and healthy.hygienically. There are many...
Writing Feedbackbebetxx - Jun 4, 2012 / dumi - Jun 5, 2012
|'our municipality should build a plant for burning trash'
NEW - "In order to avoid serious health threats associated with many landfills, our municipality should build a plant for burning...
Writing Feedbacksarb - Jun 4, 2012 / — -
|Natural energy sources are limited, and cannot be replenished - alternative sources are important
3 - there is an alarming issue that nowadays governments, at present, are too reliant on gas, oil, coalfossil fuels. ...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 4, 2012
|Sex trafficking paper
Writing Feedbackamarie - Jun 3, 2012 / chincheta - Jun 4, 2012
|Is the use of animals as the object of sport and entertainment ethically justifiable?
Writing Feedbackarcan - May 27, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 4, 2012
|'living without parents can give freedom' - TOEFL Essay
5 - Hi Mari Koshka, Yes.... you should start your own thread and you cannot post essays in other's threads......
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 2, 2012 / dumi - Jun 4, 2012
|TOEFL; House OR Business? I would purchase a house if I have money
2 - It is easy to spend it but makeing money is too difficult, say what'swhich one is better, we should...
Writing Feedbackmarikoshka888 - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 4, 2012
|Computer is an electronic device made by the humans for the welfare of human being.
4 - thanks AHMAD and MUSTAFA for correction. i am doing preparation for the IELTS, i hope that with your help...
Writing Feedbackhoshmp - Jun 2, 2012 / hoshmp - Jun 4, 2012
|TOEFL Writing Exercise : Smoking should not be permitted in restaurants
4 - Hi Stefina, Nicely done. Thank you for sharing nice TOEFL topic. I am also preparing TOEFL exam....
Writing Feedbackpetitsourire - May 28, 2012 / vickey - Jun 3, 2012
|'the scale of new technologies is overwhelming' - IETLS 2: Technology is good or not?
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|IETLS 2: Discussions on travelling
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Jun 2, 2012 / peterc - Jun 3, 2012
|'TV is not that bad' - Television's positive and negative effects.
NEW - Television is now wide spread in all communities almost every one has access to this medium on a daily...
Writing Feedbackrajgill378 - Jun 3, 2012 / — -
|IELTS essay about CDs or DVDs in the libraries
6 - You should not copy the topic, but also you must restate it. The structure of an introduction for this...
Writing Feedbackshelley G - Jun 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 3, 2012
|'Internet has exceeded the newspapers demand' - IELTS writing
5 - hey,Archu. I think that your essay is too short,you can add more points,for instance, you can talk about that...
Writing FeedbackArchu - Jun 2, 2012 / shelley G - Jun 2, 2012
|Hat culture in Britain essay.
Writing Feedbackxitrona - Jun 1, 2012 / xitrona - Jun 2, 2012
|(disobeying citizens / doctor cat) - Short articles
2 - blue means add red means delete It is reported that the Government is making a new plan to struggle...
Writing FeedbackSandra0805 - Jun 2, 2012 / chessman567 - Jun 2, 2012
|Should University Education be provided free? Yes
2 - Education is important to everyone as it gives them the ability to think differently. I do agree that university...
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 2, 2012 / sophie789 - Jun 2, 2012
|(Five Point Someone by Chetan Bhagat) - My Favorite Book
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 1, 2012 / inform - Jun 2, 2012
|'Temperature and Ice melt' - Global Warming Essay
3 - EF_Susan Hi Susan, Thank you so much for your help, I have learned a lot from your correcting. Thanh...
Writing Feedbacktranclack - May 27, 2012 / tranclack - Jun 1, 2012
|TOEFL: Is first impression enough to know about person's character..?
4 - Hey Athena, Thank you very much. That was very useful. I 'll start accordingly and my essay practice...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 25, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|Eating home-made food is better than eating out in restaurants or food stands
Writing Feedbackvickey - May 31, 2012 / inform - Jun 1, 2012
|Are there some heroes who will be remembered forever (Marie Curie)
Writing Feedbacksanya119 - May 27, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: Advantages and disadvantages of sports.
8 - Hi Vickey & Sudhir, I think, this is a Description/Explanation type of essay and not a preference or...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 30, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: Compare different modes of transportation to travel.
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 31, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|'he is right people to work and learn from' - reflective Journal
2 - Even thoughwe had only a few months of working together, he has contributed a great deal to the group...
Writing Feedbackphabee007 - May 29, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|GRE issue essay (Effects of technology, human interaction)?
2 - The rapidly shifting world of technology has drastically changed the way in which people behave in society. Technologies...
Writing FeedbackBucketOfFish - May 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|Writing report about "Convenient Computers" - feedback
3 - Hi, There is no relationship between the first sentence of the introduction and what you wrote in the other...
Writing FeedbackLulz94 - May 28, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 31, 2012
|Essay : Which type of movie do you prefer? seious or entertaining?
2 - i really liked your essay...your ideas are clear and it is easy to follow them for the reader. The...
Writing Feedbackbuituandung231 - May 31, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 31, 2012
|'leisure activities are necessary for students' - IELTS 2
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 29, 2012 / Athena - May 31, 2012
|'important to make large amount to money' - essay
3 - Thanks Ahmad for your advice. Request you review the whole essay I have corrected the sentence below. Nowadays...
Writing Feedbackinform - May 30, 2012 / inform - May 31, 2012
|Definition of heroes - Gandhi, Luther King, Lincoln essay
4 - go to this website it will help articulate info.gcsu.edu/intranet/univ_senate/Feb_23_04/Feb_04/newsat_scoring.pdf...
Writing Feedbackrishav25 - May 29, 2012 / chessman567 - May 30, 2012
|Crime news should not be reported in newspapers or tv
7 - Ahmad, i really appreciate your words and you are 100 percent right. But someone who has got so called...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - May 30, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|'to promote medical standard and science through sports facilities' - IELTS TASK II
2 - is play ----->is palying.? sorry..my writting is so bad. so...I can't correct it for you. but.that's my little suggestion......
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 30, 2012 / vickywang - May 30, 2012
|'more money has to be spent on the road system' - IELTS Essay
3 - this essay is partially out of topic. the question asks to discuss both views are government's and users' payment...
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 29, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|'Science deserves more attention' - IELTS Task2
4 - Thanks for your advices. I do need to structure the paragraphs. maybe.I think,when i was writting a essay, i...
Writing Feedbackvickywang - May 28, 2012 / vickywang - May 30, 2012
|Parents know better their children than teachers -To be a good member of society
3 - Some sentences are simple and there are some minor grammatical mistakes. I would recommend you to work on coherence...
Writing Feedbacklamck - May 29, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|(development studies / Japan / WB president) - Reflective Journal essays
NEW - Hi all, i am writing my reflective journals, it woul be nice if some body can correct my grammar...
Writing Feedbackphabee007 - May 29, 2012 / — -
|About me and my big dreams
2 - My name is Suhartini and I come from Johor Bahru. My English teacher in secondary school was named Tini...
Writing Feedbacktinie - May 28, 2012 / BaileyLeong - May 29, 2012
|Effects of theBaby Boom Generation on society.
Writing Feedbackfdm1995 - May 28, 2012 / fdm1995 - May 28, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY PRACTICE: Computers replace human teachers.
3 - I am a teacher. the present use of computers is very helpful in teaching but we can not summarily...
Writing Feedbacksharkondiet - May 24, 2012 / tinie - May 28, 2012
|"The technology connecting people" - The gre issue 1
2 - Hmm... well, there's a lot of grammatical errors in there, which I'll get into below. However, the structure is...
Writing Feedbackforever299 - May 27, 2012 / BucketOfFish - May 28, 2012
|Multi-cultured has more benefit...
NEW - Some people think there is no drawback to ethnic in the multi-cultured country. Multi-cultured does more benefit than the...
Writing Feedbackrachel yang - May 27, 2012 / — -
|GRE- 'Scandals can be useful'? Do they focus our attention on problems better ?
3 - i ve just read the essay; it run smoothly to its closing. It is a good essay, containing much...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - May 19, 2012 / hafidgg - May 27, 2012
|(Hamburger, Fish & Chips, Pizza) - IELTS - help with writing task 1 line graph
NEW - Question and line graph is the attached .png My task 1 writing is below The presented information from...
Writing Feedbackdon - May 27, 2012 / — -
|'wonder woman' - write about a person you admire - my mum
Writing Feedbackawesome123 - May 27, 2012 / muslim24 - May 27, 2012
|WHY DRUGS are used by teenagers?
Writing Feedbackburssuztalebe - May 26, 2012 / burssuztalebe - May 27, 2012
|Visual Arts Essay Writing on Post Modern artisits, architects or designers -feedback
NEW - Discuss how Post Modern artisits, architects or designers have used appropriation to represent cultural and emotional reactions. "The...
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|Dallas- the town you were raised in...
NEW - -discuss the town you were raised in how has it and the people in it help develop certain traits...
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