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|Ielts - working abroad (the potential problems)
3 - joshuanderitu01 Thank you very much for your help joshuanderitu01. I really appreciate . But i am just wondering with...
Writing FeedbackAnthony89 - Jul 25, 2012 / Anthony89 - Jul 26, 2012
|why an increasing number of college students taking part-time jobs
NEW - Why college students take part-time jobs Living up to the expectation of society, catering for the desire of...
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|Parents and educational places as schools are crucial, as they can influence on children's behaviour
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|IBT - Studying abroad studying abroad is rewarding, pros and cons
2 - Hi, I like reasons you provided. Just try to work on below given points(just a suggestion): Third...
Writing Feedbackramtinms - Jul 25, 2012 / ana_p - Jul 25, 2012
|IELTS: Economies and the Environment
5 - Well I used past tense because the research was carried out years ago. But thanks for the suggestions. I'll...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Jul 23, 2012 / April April - Jul 25, 2012
|GRE ISSUE:leadership, cooperation or competition?
NEW - The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields...
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|'leadership is vital to a country to stay united' - essay
2 - Hi Yang, I think you will need to reference your explanations such as: or According to Mr.... leadership is...
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Jul 24, 2012 / gakimaa123 - Jul 24, 2012
|Questioning Authority: Agree or Disagree (GRE Issue Essay)
11 - wow great essay!!!! can you give me some suggestions on writing.. I have many ideas but I am poor...
Writing Feedbackdeepakbaniya - Jul 7, 2012 / supercool - Jul 24, 2012
|TOEFL Essay,"Earth is being harmed by human activities OR not..? "
2 - ( Ana, I suggest you to reorganize the idea you already presented. Use more vocabulary related to...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jul 24, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 24, 2012
|'long-time measure' - should wealthy nations help poorer nations ?
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Jul 24, 2012 / ana_p - Jul 24, 2012
|Rent a house vs buying a house essay
Writing Feedbackfrozener - Jul 24, 2012 / ana_p - Jul 24, 2012
|GRE-innovations such as video,computers, and the Internet offer schools improved...
NEW - Hi,everyone. I write some passages about the topic of "innovations such as video,computers, and the Internet offer schools...
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|'mobiles are useful and dangerous' - essay
Writing Feedbackabdushukur84 - Jul 23, 2012 / abdushukur84 - Jul 24, 2012
|Universities to take students in equal number of both genders?
3 - Yes, like Aprilapril said, it is necessary to disclose your "agreement " or "disagreement" in the first paragraph. Most...
Writing FeedbackAhmad sharifa - Jul 23, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 23, 2012
|The expert teachers to make students learn the material?
Writing Feedbacksourenss - Jul 23, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jul 23, 2012
|Consuming: People are never satisfied with what they have; Agree or disagree
3 - Hi, Try to explain your ideas with examples. For example, starting of your third para, seems like unclear...
Writing Feedbackboraceber - Jul 22, 2012 / ana_p - Jul 23, 2012
|TOEFL: A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than ...
4 - Hi, I think, in such types of essays, you have to agree or disagree, then clarify your opinion...
Writing FeedbackMariRangel - Jul 18, 2012 / ana_p - Jul 23, 2012
|Should the jury be given pastfacts of the defendant or not?
Writing FeedbackLinh Nguyen - Jul 20, 2012 / Linh Nguyen - Jul 22, 2012
|[IELTS]: The appearance of a building is more important than its function.
4 - Well you can either choose one side (agree OR disagree) and support only that side with the body paragraphs,...
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 18, 2012 / April April - Jul 22, 2012
|IBT writing - the happiest era in our life is our childhood
Writing Feedbackramtinms - Jul 22, 2012 / ramtinms - Jul 22, 2012
|Society should challenge what people in authority claim to be true
2 - ...
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|'Effects of Caffeine' - need to make this essay twice as long!
4 - I think you can make it twice by adding some scientific statement, religious prohibit and a little bit more...
Writing Feedbackcsomesan - Jul 19, 2012 / alphatio - Jul 22, 2012
|The causes of living poverty and presidents of poor countries
5 - I think you must improve your conclusion part by using expressions like To sum up briefly ... The aforementioned...
Writing Feedbackberatsancak - Jul 21, 2012 / ramtinms - Jul 22, 2012
|IELTS Task 1: School Spending_Pie Charts
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|IELTS Task 1: Participation in Extreme Sports_Table
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|Writer Ache such as Shoulder Blades Ache
2 - Benedict01 Some ingredientscomponents to have success in writing any essaysessay , research papers, term papers or any literary literature...
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|Too much reliance on technology will impede people from becoming successful and independent leaders
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|GRE Issue -should imaginative courses be required ?
2 - Hi Mingwei Hu, Here are my comments: 1. Please check grammar. On your first paragraph, we can see some...
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|'a balance between the environment and the economy'- GRE Issue 10
Writing Feedbackwangjy10 - Jul 21, 2012 / wangjy10 - Jul 21, 2012
|IELTS- encourage sense of competition or co-operative in children
2 - they educate => they ARE educateD I think you just have to write 1 sentence as the motivator. I...
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Jul 20, 2012 / April April - Jul 21, 2012
|[IELTS]: pubush drivers more harshly in order to improve safety on the road
2 - First paragraph you did not continue well with the statement:such as people will be detained if they found to...
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 20, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Jul 21, 2012
|IELTS: Skills instead of Knowledge_Advantage and Disadvantage
17 - I've learnt a lot from you and other members on this forum. And yeah, if native speakers could comment...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Jul 16, 2012 / April April - Jul 20, 2012
|'houses on another planet' - Should humans attempt to colonize space ?
8 - nguen, you are very welcome! I will try my best to help you, and consequently learn myself while...
Writing Feedbackchucnt - Jul 18, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 20, 2012
|'if she didn't show that behavior' - Best friend
Writing FeedbackPaul_james - Jul 20, 2012 / Paul_james - Jul 20, 2012
|IELTS - reasons for root-seeking trend, and is it good?
2 - And a closer connection => don't start a sentence with AND, use ALSO or BESIDES,... instead. Use whatever suits...
Writing Feedbackbingle2012 - Jul 19, 2012 / April April - Jul 19, 2012
|'mass media pays a lot of attention to public people's personal life' - toefl
3 - The intro "there are two areas of life area" doesn't really make sense. Simply try "there are two areas...
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|'Media can destroy reputation' - GRE ISSUE
3 - Thank you. I couldn't help myself writing about it. The topic just felt right :P But i'll make sure...
Writing Feedbackbarsa09 - Jul 18, 2012 / barsa09 - Jul 19, 2012
|TOEFL: Leisure activities - Spend your free time outdoors or indoors.
Writing Feedbackchizuru_shuchan - Jul 19, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 19, 2012
|IELTS:Some people like to travel with companion other people prefer to travel alone
3 - It's my opinion: - "Where do you travel this long holidays ? or Who enjoy with you travel?" ~~~~~~>...
Writing FeedbackAnan_WD - Jul 18, 2012 / chizuru_shuchan - Jul 19, 2012
|'Money Vs., Development' - my essay grammer, structure and overall quality
Writing Feedbackjuancho8897 - Jul 16, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 19, 2012
|IBT 'the best epoch in everyones life' - college time
Writing Feedbackramtinms - Jul 19, 2012 / ramtinms - Jul 19, 2012
|'Roommates Qualities' - IELTS
2 - Some of roommates don't know how important to be organized is => SOME ROOMMATES don't know how important IT...
Writing FeedbackDiyab77 - Jul 18, 2012 / April April - Jul 19, 2012
|'universal pills' - If you could create one invention ,what would it be?
8 - me neither!...
Writing Feedbackchucnt - Jul 15, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 18, 2012
|IELTS practice-Letter about major news in my country
Writing Feedbackanzdriz - Jul 15, 2012 / dumi - Jul 18, 2012
|[IELTS]: Telecommunications technology - making lives more exciting and efficient?
5 - Thank you bingle2012. However, some advice that you given are incorrect. 1. telecommunication= phones, mobile phones, radio,...
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 14, 2012 / welnorze - Jul 18, 2012
|Essay Ielts: topic Should companies use young people?
Writing Feedbackpandawii - Jul 16, 2012 / pandawii - Jul 17, 2012
|American continent accounted for the largest proportion of coca-cola sales in 2000
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Jul 17, 2012 / bingle2012 - Jul 17, 2012
|IELT essay - causes and solutions for poor work-life balance
6 - YES ,it is true that in ielts essay body paras are more important than intro. and conclu. However ,you...
Writing Feedbackbingle2012 - Jul 17, 2012 / jobymonpj - Jul 17, 2012
|'Caleb and Kylee' - comparing and contrasting these two people
Writing Feedbackrotra32000 - Jul 16, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Jul 17, 2012
|'Living in this generation' - [TOEFL essay]
Writing Feedbackbelial612 - Jul 17, 2012 / belial612 - Jul 17, 2012
|Building a new factory near community (away from the local people)
2 - on the other hand _ firstly or to begin with .because you are taking about advantages of building a...
Writing Feedbackbsm25 - Jul 16, 2012 / chucnt - Jul 17, 2012
|'Divorce' - Cause and effect essay on divorce
Writing Feedbackrandiadair10142 - Jul 16, 2012 / dumi - Jul 17, 2012
|Understanding the Pull-Essay about food addiction versus drug addiction
Writing FeedbackShelbyFields - Jul 16, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 17, 2012
|[IELTS]: Should unpaid community service be compulsory for secondary education?
2 - for young student as students in an early age cannot be competent => for young studentS (my suggestion: as...
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 16, 2012 / April April - Jul 17, 2012
|Claim and Reason. How much do you agree or disagree? -- Essay Evaluation
2 - Rachit, It is always helpful to include some example to make the context more clear. For example; you can...
Writing FeedbackRachit891 - Jul 16, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 16, 2012
|'building good relations with your coworkers' - toefl ibt
Writing FeedbackNataschaAbra - Jul 16, 2012 / NataschaAbra - Jul 16, 2012
|THE STUDY OF CHARACTER AND THEIR DEVELOPMENT OR THE STUDY OF LANGUAGE DEVELOPMENT
9 - This is about the research and describing it, is through alot of investigation that God's people have good...
Writing Feedbackjoshuanderitu01 - Jul 7, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Jul 16, 2012
|IELTS: Convenience foods cannot replace traditional methods of cooking
Writing Feedbacksmogito - Jul 12, 2012 / smogito - Jul 16, 2012
|Which do you prefer? Being leader of group or just a simple group member.
Writing Feedbackalaki - Jul 16, 2012 / dumi - Jul 16, 2012
|IELTS essay -- Discuss that consumer goods are cheaper to buy
2 - The question asks you whether advantages overweigh the disadvantages. You need to say you agree on this or...
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