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|IELTS - Full time employed men & women should share house hold chores evenly
3 - use more acadimice words. write it as 4 part intro agree disagree con it will be more acadimice...
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Apr 23, 2012 / nouf - Apr 28, 2012
|Toefl; universities should provide an internship or educational work for students.
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Apr 24, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 27, 2012
|We should recognize the valuable information and eject the junk one
Writing FeedbackYunfeng - Apr 24, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 27, 2012
|Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world.
3 - I think you've really done a good job except for some unnatural expressions. For example, I think...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 26, 2012 / Yunfeng - Apr 27, 2012
|'Music is a great way of communication' - my essay
6 - Music is a great way of communication and people all over the world listen to the music of other...
Writing Feedbackhakan - Apr 26, 2012 / loandinh - Apr 27, 2012
|CHCI essay: ss an issue,its effects,and possible solution
NEW - "Hey, Jose can you help me with this problem I don't understand the process of getting the solution?" "Claro...
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|Humanities summarizing paper
4 - I would love to help you because this sounds like an interesting essay topic, however I am unclear as...
Writing Feedbackmandymoore - Oct 21, 2007 / faithcarson - Apr 26, 2012
|TOEFL Essay " Watching television is a waste of time"
NEW - Do you agree with the following statement? Watching television is a waste of time. Use specific reasons and examples...
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|IELTS TASK 2: About Prevention V/S Cure
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 18, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 26, 2012
|"We need to increase the funding for the movie" - ARGUMENT ESSAY FOR GRE
2 - The argument stated here, in my opinion, is seriously flawed. It makes alot of claims which are baseless. There...
Writing Feedbacku1b604 - Apr 26, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 26, 2012
|IELTS 2: Repeat the same or Try new things?
5 - Hi apoklypz, I think the sentence structures are too similar. You can make some variances, otherwise it's unlikely...
Writing Feedbackapoklypz - Apr 21, 2012 / peterc - Apr 26, 2012
|We never know the value of water until the well is dry
Writing FeedbackBahrom_4474 - Apr 25, 2012 / Bahrom_4474 - Apr 26, 2012
|Flipping Useless Land into a Parking Lot
Writing Feedbackhaitham - Apr 24, 2012 / u1b604 - Apr 26, 2012
|'NOT taking away all their civil rights and basic neccesities' ISSUE ESSAY
NEW - TOPIC: A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil...
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|'People to be realistic or optimistic?' - grade my SAT essay
Writing FeedbackMimo - Apr 18, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 26, 2012
|Consequences of Media Violence - What psychological science tells about bad effects?
NEW - What are the consequences of media violence? Communicate to your audience why they should care about this issue, what...
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|My opnion is that smoking should be banned in public places
3 - I agree with Susan, it all looks great, just be sure you are persuading the reader one way or...
Writing FeedbackJVE - Apr 24, 2012 / faithcarson - Apr 25, 2012
|The advantages of globalization are still superior to disadvantages?
NEW - Topic: even though globalization affects the world's economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be...
Writing Feedbackloandinh - Apr 25, 2012 / — -
|IELTS: In certain cultures old age is considered to be more important
Writing Feedbackalirulez - Apr 12, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|Is playing computer games by youngsters a good or a bad thing?
2 - The twenty first century brings a gradual shift away... This first sentence makes sense but in my opinion, is...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - Apr 24, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|Informative essay on How to improve writing skill?
2 - ... Because of this, I improved my writing skill by exercising some of the following steps. ...I also know...
Writing Feedbackbarbiegirl - Apr 24, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|'telling truth is a virtual and important in any relationship' - essay
NEW - Truth is something that not be modified. Telling the truth is always a big decision to make for everyone...
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|If you were in contention to be the new Minister of Education, what would you say.
2 - ...But we have too many problems with it. I will now mention some of them.some of which are as...
Writing Feedbackbudgerel - Apr 22, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Will letter writing replaced by technology completely?
2 - With the advent"surge" or "rush" might fit better here... of personal phones and computer in recent decades,.. Personally speaking,...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|IELTS Topic: advanced fertilisers and machine for farmers, good or bad?
4 - I mean in Biology 101 I learned that run off by fertilizers into local streams causes algae bloom which...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012 / ice2991 - Apr 25, 2012
|IELTS Topic :Overpopulation is causing problem in poor and developed both nations
2 - Hi; some of the sentences are run off, and needed to be changed. for example, Firstly, dramatic increased population,...
Writing Feedbackdiksu - Apr 25, 2012 / bahareh - Apr 25, 2012
|WHY SHOULD RECKLESS DRIVERS BE PUNISHED SEVERELY
2 - Some teenagers like speeding. Although they know that it is dangerous, they like speeding without thinking of the consequences;(...
Writing Feedbackandrew_li - Apr 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 24, 2012
|Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel better in apartment
2 - Hi, in general your essay looks good. I have some suggestions that I mentioned them as follow: With the...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 24, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 24, 2012
|The most difficult thing for us is to live in peace and harmony with people
3 - i think your essay has lack of support, some usage of non-academic words, but overall pretty good...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 18, 2012 / Saidakhror - Apr 24, 2012
|IELTS topic- reduction in traffic jam by decrease in travel from home to other areas
3 - Hi Yangfan, I really glad that my suggestions about your essay were useful. Thank you very much for your...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 23, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 24, 2012
|Some important qualities of a good supervisor
Writing Feedbackkarinab - Feb 13, 2011 / Jeecee - Apr 24, 2012
|'a personal style statement' - it is important to follow fashion?
Writing Feedbackxitrona - Apr 21, 2012 / xitrona - Apr 23, 2012
|Spanking or No Spanking (argumentative essay)
3 - Thank you very much for your feedback. I will make the necessary correction. Again thank you....
Writing Feedbackjoalex7 - Apr 20, 2012 / joalex7 - Apr 23, 2012
|IETLS-the only way to protect the environment is at an international level
7 - You paragraph shows a wide range of vocabulary. YOU should change the concluding sentence like this: In conclusion, international...
Writing Feedbacklynnyang - Apr 18, 2012 / trang - Apr 23, 2012
|Student to Pay Tuition Fees? - Yes or No
3 - Well, actually this is a scholarship application essay, so none of the types mentioned. Then I would like to...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 22, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 23, 2012
|Essay about my racial, cultural, and social identity
Writing FeedbackHightower - Apr 22, 2012 / kusanagi1981 - Apr 23, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Win a sport competition is everything ?
2 - Hi, in general the essay looks fine,. Here some suggestions: "the discussion about the purpose of playing the (delete...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 21, 2012
|IELTS topic. Violence shown on TV and in the cinema
2 - Hi In recent years, the discussion about whether a series of violent contents from TV programs and...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 21, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012
|'In Mongolian it sounds like rice' - I have a destination to reach!
Writing Feedbackbudgerel - Apr 21, 2012 / apoklypz - Apr 21, 2012
|IELTS topic: Your view of "Pen and Paper" Examination
7 - Hi all, I agree with you, I have prepare another similar question, but chance the content, I will...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012
|IELTS Topic: In the past, study only for the young, nowadays is changed
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 20, 2012
|Anthropology, culture and business relations essay
NEW - Hi, well I really don't know how this essay sounds and so would really appreciate it if someone could...
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|IELTS Topic: Female Juvenile delinquency
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|Government should control some of exhibitions (admisssion in cinemas, theatres)
3 - Hi Veru, There is no denying that innovative artists have the rights to express their ideas and...
Writing Feedbackveru - Apr 19, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS topic. There will be soon no role for teachers in classrooms.
7 - Hi Luca Emma, That's why I am here for. I have serious grammatical errors couple of months ago....
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 17, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|MODERN HISTORY ESSAY - GANDHI
Writing Feedbackjesspark95 - Apr 19, 2012 / sherxon - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Air travel should be restricted or not?
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 18, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Pay a fee when drivers enter to city centre
3 - Hi Luca Emma, I strongly recommend you to read my writing carefully and question carefully! This...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 18, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|THEY SAY LIFE IS HARD - essay
8 - I don't know life is hard or easy. But I know you should be suspended. The feedback you provided...
Writing Feedbacksally awada - Apr 19, 2012 / basawang - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS GT: request to look after the house and pet on holiday
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 19, 2012 / peterc - Apr 19, 2012
|Change in life- Two different opinions.
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012 / leeminh - Apr 19, 2012
|A discussion about two views toward talent
3 - Hi Susan, thank you for the corrections. would you pleas give your idea about the other essay that I...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 19, 2012
|Effects of Working and Studying at the Same Time
4 - Hi; There are some repeated phrases and words; Their lives will be routine as living in a circle, waking...
Writing Feedbackhaitham - Apr 18, 2012 / bahareh - Apr 19, 2012
|Fixed punishments and taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discussion
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Apr 19, 2012 / leeminh - Apr 19, 2012
|'A Scholarship to China, I cannot forget that day' - essay
2 - Nice job. Your grammar and sentence structure could be brushed up a bit. I would also advise you to...
Writing Feedbackhaitham - Apr 19, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 19, 2012
|Aadvantages of negative criticism clearly outweigh the positive criticism
2 - Although I do not necessarily agree that this is a topic than can realistically go just one way or...
Writing FeedbackBalamurugan - Apr 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 19, 2012
|Songs and chants are useful learning materials for teaching listening ad speaking.
Writing Feedbacktinie - Apr 17, 2012 / tinie - Apr 19, 2012
|TOEFL essay - 'The importance of games for adults comparing to children'
8 - Sorry for my (very) late answering, but I got numerous assignments in school and I was unable to peruse...
Writing Feedbackll931110 - Mar 16, 2012 / ll931110 - Apr 19, 2012
|IETLS GT 2: should there be free health services?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 15, 2012 / peterc - Apr 19, 2012
|REM Sleep Research Paper - A Better Way to Open Up?
2 - Everyone craves sleep, especially during those long hours at work. The way the sleep process works is impressive. ...
Writing Feedbackkalvin126 - Apr 19, 2012 / basawang - Apr 19, 2012
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