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|Fatherless Essay (occurrences in my life)
4 - Periodically, I find myself daydreaming about my male parent, and how his warm embraces and a decent conversationswith him...
Writing Feedbackaishol - Apr 9, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 11, 2012
|'opinions regarding world culture' - essay for TOEFL
Writing Feedbackasdasd - Mar 29, 2012 / peterc - Apr 11, 2012
|IELTS topic. Testing on animals and keeping them in unnatural conditions
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 10, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 11, 2012
|Ielts Task 2: About one or more Careers; Which is better?
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 9, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 11, 2012
|Case Analysis on International Trade Law - Research essay comment
Writing Feedbackbaski - Mar 30, 2012 / sathiprakash - Apr 11, 2012
|An Essay About Maintaining Peace
4 - Thanks to both of you. I've rewritten the beginning. I' definitely going to do some more thorough research. Unfortunately,...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 10, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 11, 2012
|Essay on cooperation between nations
3 - Thanks lot Susan for the encouragements. I wish u spare little time to my new essay shortly. I don't...
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|Nowadays children have too much freedom. Economic problem and self-earning?
4 - Just an idea, The current world moves fast and is materialistic, with prices soaring for the necessities of life;...
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Mar 31, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 11, 2012
|Common Forms of Fraud
2 - Common Forms of Fraud In that case fraud sometimes comes first. Fraud is illegalI would omit such a...
Writing Feedbacksrtheesa - Apr 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 10, 2012
|"I'm so glad I found another person" - input on my short story
2 - A different approach or suggestion just to get you started. I'm not the best in grammar either so please...
Writing Feedbackhairywombat - Apr 10, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 10, 2012
|How Computer Affects My Life
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 9, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 10, 2012
|classification of clothing into three categories
Writing Feedbackveronicamosquer - Apr 9, 2012 / veronicamosquer - Apr 10, 2012
|Analyze an Argument for GRE--Riverside Recreational Facilities
6 - Hellow every one.I'm very eager to study the pattern of essay writting?Is there any rules for the five paragraph...
Writing Feedbackchalumeau - Mar 31, 2012 / srtheesa - Apr 10, 2012
|Essay about: Friends I have had
5 - I have a question very important. For what purpose did you write this essay? For some tests or undergraduate...
Writing FeedbackSaid Alwaili - Apr 1, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 10, 2012
|IELTS: Citizen's responsibilities
6 - You should try to strengthen your 2nd paragraph. Add examples to convince the readers....otherwise its a nice work...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 5, 2012 / Nitish - Apr 10, 2012
|Houston is not a Best Place to Visiting - essay
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 5, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 9, 2012
|'End of the world 2012' - my research writing
Writing FeedbackTimmy102 - Apr 5, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 9, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY - 'News editors should broadcast & print a mixture'
3 - Thanks a lot Jennifer! I really like your suggestions & i'l try my best to follow this. Hope u...
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 8, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 9, 2012
|Accident or Murder? The corruption on the entertainment business.
2 - Was Anna killed or was it just an accident? Doing research has lead me to believe that it was...
Writing Feedbackjallen18 - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|The life in Perth
2 - I have lived in Perth since I arrived. I have studied English at the Curtin University for two weeks...
Writing Feedbackissaouy - Apr 6, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|IELTS 'Parents and schooling is also essential to teach children'
Writing Feedbackvivianwei - Apr 8, 2012 / vivianwei - Apr 9, 2012
|'blessed by uncle for being so alert' - The greatest achievement of my life
Writing FeedbackNitish - Apr 8, 2012 / Nitish - Apr 8, 2012
|'Everyone considers that the perfect job is..' - essay
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|'a 80 years old widow had won five million dollars' - lucky person essay
3 - Hi Jeecee, Your passage is very interesting. It stimulates my thoughts and I really like it! By...
Writing FeedbackJeecee - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS topic. Modern society benefits greatly from computer technology.
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 7, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS (no country can progress without the co-operation of other countries)
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 7, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS; Problem with tutoring job/ issue with part-time job
4 - Hi jaijagadeesh, You have an affluent set of vocabularies. I've learnt so much from you... thank you very...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS: Amount of control on media information
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Mar 31, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|The Meaning of Silence- a research project
NEW - This is supposed to be a research project on The Meaning of Silence. 20 marks goes to the structure...
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|What is happiness? Why is it difficult to define?
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012
|Narrative/Description Essay About An Unforgettable Vacation
4 - Furthermore, on this vacation, I was aware of how fear I was when I reached nearly to the dead....
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|Toefl writing: to become well-informed, don't rely on one source of news information
Writing FeedbackRomera - Mar 26, 2012 / Romera - Apr 7, 2012
|Are you too dependent on computers? [Argumentative essay outline + work]
5 - Can you give some statistic to prove your point that we are dependent to computer like how many hours...
Writing FeedbackDen - Mar 30, 2012 / bansmart06 - Apr 6, 2012
|'Jared High and I used to be best friends' - bullying cause and effect essay
4 - Thank you for fixing my mistakes. My teacher does not say about citation so you can skip it. She...
Writing Feedbackbansmart06 - Mar 26, 2012 / bansmart06 - Apr 6, 2012
|Essay on what shoud mass media broadcast on TV?
NEW - Mass media undoubtedly plays an important and crucial role in our diurnal life. All the various segments of the...
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|Should students be given homework daily?; 'enhancing understanding, awareness'
Writing Feedbacktuongvi - Mar 29, 2012 / tuongvi - Apr 6, 2012
|'decline of care and concern for the high need-school' position with teach charlotte
NEW - I am applying for a position with teach charlotte and I have to complete a short essay for the...
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|'Nguyen Dinh Chieu Park' - MY FAVORITE PLACE
8 - I'm too bad. I'm Vietnamese but I do not know much about Nguyen Dinh Chieu. Thanks for your essay....
Writing Feedbacknonnon91188 - Apr 2, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 5, 2012
|KEEPING ANIMALS INSIDE ZOOS; DISCUSS
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 5, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 5, 2012
|IELTS: Teenager or adult years are the happiest?
2 - one thing i felt is paragraphi should be long enough and explained as much as possible one or two...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 4, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 5, 2012
|'obliged to do what you don't like' - essay on doing jobs people don't like
6 - Well, both of them came from Morocco. They are extremely good in what they do. So I just wanted...
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Mar 27, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 4, 2012
|Sat essay: is an idealistic approach less valuable than a practical approach?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012 / Athena - Apr 4, 2012
|Schools should decide whether they continue with School Uniforms ; Persuasive Paper
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|'the head of English language Panel' - important event in my life
Writing Feedbacktinie - Apr 3, 2012 / tinie - Apr 4, 2012
|'By travelling I will be able' your favourite leisure activity, an expository writing
3 - I have a lot of important events in my life That changed me significantly. That there wasone event made...
Writing Feedbacktinie - Mar 21, 2012 / tinie - Apr 3, 2012
|Comparison/Contrast of paintings depicting the conquest of Jericho
4 - I haven't found this website to be unnecessarily banning people. I've been here less than one month and have...
Writing Feedbackgillygilly - Apr 3, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|'Nadie, Como Vai, and Pass the Peas songs' - examine three songs essay
2 - I found this song to be exceptional because ; it blew me away. :) Firstly ,Secondly IN ADDITION,...
Writing Feedbackdiiemnguyen - Mar 31, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 3, 2012
|sat essay: Do people succeed by emphasizing their difference from others?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012
|FEATURE ARTICLE- Culture Shock
2 - I have attached my comments about the lead paragraph. Let me know what you think. Some questions for...
Writing FeedbackPraiseYou - Apr 2, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|'death penalty should be reinstated in Canada' - argumentative essay
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|Essay - Homosexual Parents | Does Sexuality Impact Children?
3 - I just have one question. In the third paragraph, there is the assumption that pressure would create parental awareness....
Writing Feedbackm_d_r_rio - Mar 27, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012
|'reading fictions is more pleasant' - essay for Toefl
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more...
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|sat essay:Do highly accomplished people achieve more because they expect more?
NEW - Currently, people tend to regard the unsatisfied will to achieve more as the source of their unhapiness and frustration,...
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|Americas number one killing disease - research essay
4 - ... ... 76&codcch=26 mdanderson.org dana-farber.org/ If I were writing a short research paper, I would...
Writing Feedbacknsfvball - Mar 31, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 2, 2012
|Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free?
2 - Art is a form of expressing one's inner thoughts in the form of music, dance, sculptures, and carvings on...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 29, 2012 / EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2012
|'fading the role of family life in society...' - correct this essay
3 - hi said... your notes are great...thank you... :) ...you are right...this is not a scientific essay with real numbers...
Writing Feedbackrabbasi - Apr 1, 2012 / rabbasi - Apr 2, 2012
|Having long hair - Essay - Feedback
Writing FeedbackMaite - Mar 29, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Apr 2, 2012
|Reasons for the increasing anti-social behavior and the lack of respect to others
2 - You should give your claims on the issue at first , then clearly and throughly explain them in the...
Writing FeedbackWay - Mar 31, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012
|'Travel is always interesting' - Essay correction
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Mar 27, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 2, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY "Ban sail of bottled water"
NEW - What is a natural resource that always should be free. Government should bend the sail of bottle water! To...
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