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|How I got my title as Prince of Nigeria-revision/shortening
2 - Well, first, try not to repeat yourself. Look for any less valuable feedback and eliminate it. Keep true to...
Writing Feedbackayolegit - Jun 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 7, 2012
|'You must be humble' - exemplification paper on respect
3 - Throughout my whole life, I was taught to have respect for others and myself. If you believe someone...
Writing Feedbackbentleysmomma - Jun 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 7, 2012
|Argumentative essay- Thesis Statement - Watching television makes people smarter?
Writing Feedbackjulienruyter - Jun 6, 2012 / julienruyter - Jun 7, 2012
|essay on manufactured landscapes video
3 - Some people assert that old buildings should not be in the way of new buildingshould be taken down to...
Writing Feedbackaurora1995 - Jun 6, 2012 / aurora1995 - Jun 7, 2012
|'great to see you again'
NEW - An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 7, 2012 / — -
|IELTS TASK 2 MODERN TECHNOLOGY HAS GIVEN US MORE LEISURE TIME THAN BEFORE
4 - Hi hadi1981, I'm sorry to say that I mention argument but not opinion before. Opinion comes with arguments,...
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 6, 2012 / peterc - Jun 7, 2012
|Changing jobs frequently or loyal to the same jobs?
3 - Yes, I am preparing for my IELTS exam which happens the end of this month. I need to practice...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 5, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 7, 2012
|IELTS - Boys naturally more agressive than girls?
5 - The expression of physical strength is common and may be related to the genetic coding that is prevalent in...
Writing Feedbackakhtarkhan - Jun 3, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 7, 2012
|IELTS writing: moving big companies out of cities
5 - there appears a bunch of problems which have already been heated social issues. 1 stimulate maybe better than appear....
Writing Feedbackjasmine4gjc7 - May 27, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 7, 2012
|(Persuasive Request) Help in writing a Memo for my English assignment
2 - Hi Tony, When you write memos, you usually follow a general format, which sometimes may vary according to...
Writing Feedbacktonloc1234 - May 30, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|'the earliest teachers we have in our lives' - ielts task2
2 - Obviously, the earliestfirst teachers we have in our lives in most cases are m our parents, and they are...
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|TOEFL (The passage and lecture is about autobiography)
2 - According to the passage, book makers are focused on the factor which the readers want to be heard,...
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 6, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|Draft: Women's Health vs. Religious Freedom
2 - It is also noted that, "Women who use OCs have more regular and predictable menstrual cycles, with a reduction...
Writing FeedbackWilliamMorton - May 30, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS - national consumer expenditure on different goods in 5 different countries in 2002
2 - Hi, In the introduction you should state that how many items were investigated. At the end of...
Writing Feedbackandrea23694 - Jun 6, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS Writing- Spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other.
3 - wow....really thanks for all your help...!!! i didn't notice these mistakes before... really appreciated!!!...
Writing Feedbackwudimopa - Jun 3, 2012 / wudimopa - Jun 6, 2012
|'it would increase the sales in the Central Plaza store' - GRE essays
3 - please check for content, grammatical errors and sentence formations. Thank you ! The following appeared in a letter...
Writing FeedbackNJiya - May 31, 2012 / NJiya - Jun 6, 2012
|'leading enviable lives to have a deeper education'
4 - thx a lot...
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 4, 2012 / hehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012
|College - the best time when a person participates in other activities which broadens his knowledge
Writing Feedbackinform - May 26, 2012 / inform - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS importance of co-operation rather than competition in children's education
Writing Feedbackcocoyan - May 20, 2012 / cocoyan - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL(Physical exercise is more important for older people than for younger people)
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL: (more productive, energetic) EASIER FOOD PREPARATION IMPROVED PEOPLE'S LIVES
5 - Dear Jason, Nice essay. I am also preparing TOEFL, so it was very helpful for my brainstorming....
Writing Feedbackjhundais - May 23, 2012 / vickey - Jun 6, 2012
|HOME SCHOOLING IS ACCURATE OPTION
3 - You definitely need to develop a more inviting, and more broad, introductory statement rather than just jumping right in...
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|essay about "a fake beauty"
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 30, 2012 / kersise - Jun 5, 2012
|IETLS 2-Why young people tend to spend less free fime with family?
NEW - Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are...
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|International tourism: 'foreigners should study local cultures before traveling'
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 4, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 5, 2012
|'media may distort the image of the hero' - GRE AWA PRACTICE: Issue topic
NEW - I am horrible at writing and would like some feedback on this AWA Issue topic for the GRE, Thank...
Writing FeedbackGuest - Jun 5, 2012 / — -
|IELTS:1 - 'wish you the best in the city' A letter to a friend
2 - Dear John, Firstly,I appreciated your acceptance ofThank you fortakingagreeing tocare ofwatch my littleKitty cat whenwhile I spend my...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 5, 2012 / BachChaconne2 - Jun 5, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: machine made goods are cheaper and more durable than handmade ones
7 - Hi, I mean the body should include three paragraphs. Yes, you should add another idea as the fourth paragraph....
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jun 1, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 5, 2012
|'Some people ignore the importance of history' - IELTS essay
5 - Thank you so much, it's really helpful. I'm afraid i have a long way to go...!! Thanks again!!...
Writing FeedbackFuzzyBunny - Jun 4, 2012 / FuzzyBunny - Jun 5, 2012
|'the factory will develop city' -essay about building a new factory in the community.
2 - Hi Bebe, I would like to suggest some points: 1. Try to concentrate on sentence structure. 2....
Writing Feedbackbebetxx - Jun 4, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 4, 2012
|Should artists be given total freedom?
4 - Hi Ahmad, I really appreciate your support. The only thing I should add is that " the world-renowned artist"...
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Jun 4, 2012 / sophie789 - Jun 4, 2012
|'our municipality should build a plant for burning trash'
NEW - "In order to avoid serious health threats associated with many landfills, our municipality should build a plant for burning...
Writing Feedbacksarb - Jun 4, 2012 / — -
|Natural energy sources are limited, and cannot be replenished - alternative sources are important
2 - there is an alarming issue that nowadays governments, at present, are too reliant on gas, oil, coalfossil fuels. ...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 4, 2012
|Sex trafficking paper
Writing Feedbackamarie - Jun 3, 2012 / chincheta - Jun 4, 2012
|Is the use of animals as the object of sport and entertainment ethically justifiable?
Writing Feedbackarcan - May 27, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 4, 2012
|'living without parents can give freedom' - TOEFL Essay
5 - Hi Mari Koshka, Yes.... you should start your own thread and you cannot post essays in other's threads......
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 2, 2012 / dumi - Jun 4, 2012
|TOEFL; House OR Business? I would purchase a house if I have money
2 - It is easy to spend it but makeing money is too difficult, say what'swhich one is better, we should...
Writing Feedbackmarikoshka888 - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 4, 2012
|Computer is an electronic device made by the humans for the welfare of human being.
4 - thanks AHMAD and MUSTAFA for correction. i am doing preparation for the IELTS, i hope that with your help...
Writing Feedbackhoshmp - Jun 2, 2012 / hoshmp - Jun 4, 2012
|TOEFL Writing Exercise : Smoking should not be permitted in restaurants
3 - Hi Stefina, Nicely done. Thank you for sharing nice TOEFL topic. I am also preparing TOEFL exam....
Writing Feedbackpetitsourire - May 28, 2012 / vickey - Jun 3, 2012
|'the scale of new technologies is overwhelming' - IETLS 2: Technology is good or not?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Jun 3, 2012 / — -
|'TV is not that bad' - Television's positive and negative effects.
NEW - Television is now wide spread in all communities almost every one has access to this medium on a daily...
Writing Feedbackrajgill378 - Jun 3, 2012 / — -
|IELTS essay about CDs or DVDs in the libraries
6 - You should not copy the topic, but also you must restate it. The structure of an introduction for this...
Writing Feedbackshelley G - Jun 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 3, 2012
|'Internet has exceeded the newspapers demand' - IELTS writing
5 - hey,Archu. I think that your essay is too short,you can add more points,for instance, you can talk about that...
Writing FeedbackArchu - Jun 2, 2012 / shelley G - Jun 2, 2012
|Hat culture in Britain essay.
Writing Feedbackxitrona - Jun 1, 2012 / xitrona - Jun 2, 2012
|(disobeying citizens / doctor cat) - Short articles
2 - blue means add red means delete It is reported that the Government is making a new plan to struggle...
Writing FeedbackSandra0805 - Jun 2, 2012 / chessman567 - Jun 2, 2012
|IETLS 2: Discussions on travelling
3 - Mustafa is right, first two bodies are related to the questions were given, but why do you need the...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Jun 2, 2012 / Saidakhror - Jun 2, 2012
|Should University Education be provided free? Yes
2 - Education is important to everyone as it gives them the ability to think differently. I do agree that university...
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 2, 2012 / sophie789 - Jun 2, 2012
|(Five Point Someone by Chetan Bhagat) - My Favorite Book
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 1, 2012 / inform - Jun 2, 2012
|'Exercising indoors or outdoors?' -TOEFL essay review
2 - Hi, The essay has only one paragraph at the body. A body should involve at least three paragraphs. I...
Writing Feedbackbebetxx - Jun 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 2, 2012
|'Temperature and Ice melt' - Global Warming Essay
3 - EF_Susan Hi Susan, Thank you so much for your help, I have learned a lot from your correcting. Thanh...
Writing Feedbacktranclack - May 27, 2012 / tranclack - Jun 1, 2012
|TOEFL: Is first impression enough to know about person's character..?
4 - Hey Athena, Thank you very much. That was very useful. I 'll start accordingly and my essay practice...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 25, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|Eating home-made food is better than eating out in restaurants or food stands
Writing Feedbackvickey - May 31, 2012 / inform - Jun 1, 2012
|Are there some heroes who will be remembered forever (Marie Curie)
Writing Feedbacksanya119 - May 27, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: Advantages and disadvantages of sports.
8 - Hi Vickey & Sudhir, I think, this is a Description/Explanation type of essay and not a preference or...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 30, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: Compare different modes of transportation to travel.
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 31, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|'he is right people to work and learn from' - reflective Journal
2 - Even thoughwe had only a few months of working together, he has contributed a great deal to the group...
Writing Feedbackphabee007 - May 29, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|GRE issue essay (Effects of technology, human interaction)?
2 - The rapidly shifting world of technology has drastically changed the way in which people behave in society. Technologies...
Writing FeedbackBucketOfFish - May 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|Writing report about "Convenient Computers" - feedback
3 - Hi, There is no relationship between the first sentence of the introduction and what you wrote in the other...
Writing FeedbackLulz94 - May 28, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 31, 2012
|Essay : Which type of movie do you prefer? seious or entertaining?
2 - i really liked your essay...your ideas are clear and it is easy to follow them for the reader. The...
Writing Feedbackbuituandung231 - May 31, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 31, 2012
|'leisure activities are necessary for students' - IELTS 2
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 29, 2012 / Athena - May 31, 2012
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