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|'ways of becoming mature and courageous' - There's no success like failure
5 - Yes, you should use two or three examples. Try to use the structure: 1)Make introduction on what you are...
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|"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation
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|You can learn a lot about people by clothes they wear.
NEW - In our daily life we meet different people; they have different characters, different hairstyles and different clothing style. I...
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|'busy work and modern entertainment' - lack a sense of community
3 - You should write about the 2 causes in 1 paragraph, don't seperate them in 2 different ones. Also, in...
Writing FeedbackMarylin_Monroe - Aug 3, 2012 / April April - Aug 11, 2012
|'spending twelve years at high school' - Student Should Work Part-time While Studying
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|GRE ISSUE 207:Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies
NEW - I really need your recommendation! The speaker asserts that rituals and ceremonies help define a culture and it...
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|Same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be applied to tobacco?
Writing Feedbackhiren46 - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|IELTS：globalisation... hold demerits
Writing Feedbackxiaoyu - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|The future of our society is partly depended on the socialization of our children
NEW - I really appreciate your help! p.s. some of sentences refer to kevin's answer. The speaker asserts that how...
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|"Help for Depressed Teenagers" - summarization of my article
NEW - can you guys check my article if i have a grammar mistakes or suggestion of how can i improve...
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|Lying is always wrong, no matter whether it is a big lie or a white lie
8 - your essay is really good, but there some grammar mistakes. Try to expand you essay to mak it more...
Writing Feedbackhizaza - Aug 6, 2012 / cherry_09 - Aug 9, 2012
|'children play too much computer games?' - IELTS exam criteria
Writing Feedbackbeibeibajin - Aug 9, 2012 / beibeibajin - Aug 9, 2012
|[TOEFL] finding traces of the past - Does past pass values on our present lives?
Writing Feedbacksolitaire - Aug 9, 2012 / dumi - Aug 9, 2012
|'rising cities and living in them' - essay
5 - Why do people prefer to live in cities? How should cities be designed? Every week a millions of...
Writing Feedbackmatilda - Aug 9, 2012 / naijaprincess - Aug 9, 2012
|[TOEFL] Small town vs. Big city (opportunities, entertainment, job places)
8 - Yeah I'd agree Deepak. Well, I could'nt find much mistakes as I'm just 13, but still I found it...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 7, 2012 / Msx punk - Aug 9, 2012
|Education is long life task. Do u agree or disagree
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|Heroes risk their reputation and their lives
2 - OtherAnother example is,Elvis Aaron Presley. H is novel versions of existing songs - don't forget capital letters, and another...
Writing FeedbackNada Amer - Aug 8, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 8, 2012
|Do we ourselves cause change in our lives by making certain decisions?(SAT prep)
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|Training for work is more important than providing a broad base education?
Writing Feedbacksohle143 - Aug 7, 2012 / April April - Aug 8, 2012
|IELTS Task 2: Art or other essential service? Discuss both views, give your opinions
Writing Feedbacksophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012 / dumi - Aug 8, 2012
|Are relationships between people and pets good? [TOEFL]
6 - Pats has to be "strikethrough" or not be there at all... Sorry, I noticed it too late to edit...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 4, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 7, 2012
|Studying alone vs. with a group - both sides of the story
6 - It is chit-chat not chit-chit. While writing my laptop's "a" button some times takes "i" , now after repair...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 4, 2012 / amitt - Aug 7, 2012
|IELTS 2: Are formal 'pen and paper' examinations useful as evaluation?
Writing Feedbacksmogito - Aug 6, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 7, 2012
|'need creativities and imaginations' - People are never satisfied with what they have
2 - Hi :) I can help you with your grammar People havepossess numerous things, namely, asuch ascostlyexpensive jewelry, an...
Writing Feedbacksy_318 - Aug 7, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 7, 2012
|IELTS Task 1: Reasons for Study and Support Received
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|IELTS Task 1: Fish and Meat Consumption
3 - First the topic sentence must mention the unit in the graph. I don't know what your graph looks like...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Jul 31, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|Has junk food changed the way people live?
6 - It is much clearer I think. However, you should not mention it doesn't take much time and skills to...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 5, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|GRE Issue Essay - Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are
7 - ThisSuch organization of labor achieved more effective results forin primitive societies as a whole . and theyThis kind...
Writing Feedbackalf10087 - Aug 4, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 6, 2012
|'the class passed in silence' - Intro to a short romantic story
Writing Feedbackmaroon5 - Aug 2, 2012 / Pkeeton - Aug 6, 2012
|IELTS Task 1 main source of energy in US in 1980 and 1990
2 - The graphs illustrate the percentage of five different energy sources of energy in the USA infrom 1980 and 1990....
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 5, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 6, 2012
|IELTS Task 2: Some people consider thinking about the future to be a waste of time?
2 - Good work! Try to use a variety of vocabulary and to introduce in your essay a discussion of arguments...
Writing Feedbacksophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012 / smogito - Aug 6, 2012
|Work has the most remarkable effect on our pursuit to happiness.
2 - In my own personal opinion, it really depends on the job itself. There are so many factors to this...
Writing Feedbackshallbytwo - Aug 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 6, 2012
|IELTS TASK:Popular events are essential in easing internatiol tensions.
7 - In my opinion, the structure is not good. Usually there are at least 4 paragraphs including introduction, body and...
Writing Feedbackhunkar - Aug 4, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|Not enough time to study for students?
2 - Hi there! I think you should organize it a bit better: leave some spaces, maybe organize it into paragraphs......
Writing Feedbacknadalhoang - Aug 5, 2012 / Tucayana - Aug 5, 2012
|TOEFL: The government should collect fees from those who drive cars during rush hour.
Writing Feedbackanniejhs - Aug 2, 2012 / anniejhs - Aug 5, 2012
|'The additional facility at Tusk University' - Gre argument
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|'computers have made life easier' - TOEFL essay
Writing FeedbackGulnar - Aug 4, 2012 / alf10087 - Aug 4, 2012
|GRE: Educational institutions should encourage students to succeed
3 - Hello. You should add an example to the second paraghraph. Maybe mention a case where the situation presented in...
Writing Feedbacknaughtyangel - Jul 31, 2012 / alf10087 - Aug 4, 2012
|Should companies use young people for work? - [IELTS ]
2 - I will try to express my own opinion and show advantages, disadvantages of this type of policy. - It...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 4, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 4, 2012
|Three reasons for Overpopulation in Vietnam or India
6 - Ways: # government rules and regulation: Rewards for small family parents like increase in salary and punishment such As...
Writing Feedbackhanh - Sep 26, 2011 / deepakbaniya - Aug 4, 2012
|IELTS Task 2 University education should be limitted for the best students
3 - I would like to express my personal views regarding these two ways of accepting students. Based on evidence and...
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 2, 2012 / faruqiumair - Aug 4, 2012
|Should cell phones or pagers be allowed in class?
Writing Feedbackbsm25 - Aug 3, 2012 / gauravwalia1988 - Aug 4, 2012
|'My wife and I get along great' - Life goal paper for human relation class
NEW - Have to write a life goals paper for human relations class. He wants it to go like this. I.Life...
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|Compared to previous generations an increasing number of people are traveling oversea
2 - in my opinoin, you have some grammar mistakes the younger generation this has both positive and negative impacts it...
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|'beyond our imagination' - essay on advantages of reading
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 3, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 3, 2012
|Disadvantages of taking a break after high school essay- college essay
2 - Hey Lisa, honestly it is an "OK" essay, but it can be better. 1) Your thesis statement is too...
Writing FeedbackLeelee93 - Aug 3, 2012 / ariellw2013 - Aug 3, 2012
|Technology and the communication between people
2 - You got really good ideas and divided them into good format- Introduction, bodies and conclusion. I suggest...
Writing Feedbacknadalhoang - Aug 3, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 3, 2012
|'living in a house better than in an apartment' - IELTS General Writing 2
Writing FeedbackThelma - Aug 2, 2012 / Thelma - Aug 3, 2012
|THE PHILOSOPHICAL SCIENCE OF CLIMATE CHANGE
2 - Hi, I'm new to these boards, so I'm still trying to figure everything out. Hopefully this works! ...
Writing FeedbackJohnboscoNwogbo - Aug 1, 2012 / egl0722 - Aug 3, 2012
|'Conflicting Nations: A Duel of Cultures' - Essay on Native and American conflicts
2 - I read your essay about conflicting nations and it was very comic to read about sources of your work,...
Writing FeedbackWhydee - Jul 26, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Aug 3, 2012
|IELTS Task 1 division of houeshold tasks by gender
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 3, 2012
|'not only money' - IELTS: Reasons why people go to work.
3 - Inconclussion To conclude or In conclusion, there are a lot of motivations for people to work, not only money...
Writing Feedbacksmogito - Jul 15, 2012 / gauravwalia1988 - Aug 3, 2012
|Multinational companies and globalization - negative or positive?
Writing Feedbacknadalhoang - Aug 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 3, 2012
|Freedom for creative artists is essential for the development of society and art
Writing Feedbackselena y - Aug 2, 2012 / selena y - Aug 3, 2012
|TOEFL -Computers have made it possible for office workers to do their work
6 - Oh, ^^. Thank you so so much. Your advices are really necessary for my writing. I still try to...
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jul 28, 2012 / xucoi - Aug 2, 2012
|9/11 Afghanistan paper to review; "little temporary safety"
Writing Feedbackbowen74 - Aug 1, 2012 / egl0722 - Aug 2, 2012
|'...without a bold guess' - Select One quote [my intro]
Writing Feedbacknatekim - Jul 26, 2012 / natekim - Aug 2, 2012
|IELTS Task 2 coeducational VS single
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 2, 2012 / samenmohammad - Aug 2, 2012
|'in Rome' - What are your hobbies during your leisure times?
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 1, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 2, 2012
|'merchandise transported by various means' - ielts- writting task 1
NEW - Provided multiple-line graph exhibits the volume of merchandise transported by various means throughout the period from 1974 to 2002...
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