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|About comparing between our parents lives and our lives
NEW - When it is comes in mind anyone that asked to compare between the life of our parents and our...
Writing Feedbacktota08 - Mar 7, 2012 / — -
|ielts exam - beneficial for international situations to hold large-scale competitions
2 - Hi Wang, I edited your first two paragraphs... In popular events, for instance, the Football World Cup...
Writing Feedbacksissi199005 - Mar 6, 2012 / Athena - Mar 7, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY: Why people are getting more and more weight and more and more unhealthy
2 - Nowadays, suffering from heavy burdens come from study or work, every individualone is eager to lead alive a more...
Writing FeedbackMartin2012 - Mar 7, 2012 / Arthur - Mar 7, 2012
|'improving facilities is the best way' - toefl
2 - Yes, there are subtle differences on those words. They depend on the contents. I took toefl three years ago,...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 24, 2012 / moongtajoo - Mar 7, 2012
|IELTS Task 2: How important is sport or PE in a young person's education?
3 - Hi Susan, thanks a lot for correcting my essay. I've learn much from your corrections. Thank you again...
Writing Feedbackningningya - Mar 6, 2012 / ningningya - Mar 7, 2012
|TOEFL 'phone and e-mail make my communication easier'
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Mar 6, 2012 / eradulova - Mar 7, 2012
|A tree .. I am
4 - Thanks for the comments Thors Hammer. On the clarification .. its meant as .. though 'the tree' concerns them...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 2, 2012 / Rajiv - Mar 7, 2012
|We should get benefits in the present - the investing in space research
3 - In recent years, the development of the space technology is becoming a hot topic in many science forums and...
Writing Feedbackfanmanga90 - Feb 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|'felicitousness' Happiness is considered very important in life.
4 - I agree with the two other comments. You need to be a little more specific with the definition/examples and...
Writing Feedbackuzakova - Feb 17, 2012 / thecarboneraser - Mar 6, 2012
|'This crystal is in remembrance of me' - story narration essay
4 - All the items are covered with a thick jacket of dust, it seemed like no one had touched them...
Writing FeedbackAmberAngel - Feb 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|'being an adult needs a sound skill' - TPO 24 Writing
3 - Giving them the chance to experience the colorful life and live on their own is more significant. First...
Writing FeedbackYunfengHu90 - Feb 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|'College pressures' - on Illustration, narrative, cause, effect, contrast, compare.
3 - Many college students face a number of pressures. For instance, many college students have graduated from high school face...
Writing Feedbacknawal - Feb 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|'Evolution of artificial lighting' - research paper
2 - Since the dawn of time, light has played aenormously critical role in the evolution of humans, animals and even...
Writing FeedbackFortnight - Mar 2, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 6, 2012
|'What is Civilization?' - First essay in 15 years
4 - Oh, great feedback! This is just what I needed! Unfortunately I had to turn the assignment in last night...
Writing Feedbacklindsaystumped - Mar 5, 2012 / lindsaystumped - Mar 6, 2012
|The Solar System - "system of the Sun"
Writing FeedbackTimothy - Mar 4, 2012 / esparanza - Mar 6, 2012
|IELTS - 'advertisements are worthless but a form of entertainment'
Writing Feedbacksunwei5864658 - Mar 3, 2012 / minhtung9x - Mar 6, 2012
|"Kant' duty ethics" - Help with my research essay
4 - OK, it is a hard topic. Try to start with diversity of transcendental and transcendent. Write about human and...
Writing Feedbackwhyhappy12 - Oct 6, 2009 / eradulova - Mar 6, 2012
|I support the fact that grades encourage the students to learn
Writing Feedbackchocolate3 - Mar 5, 2012 / Athena - Mar 6, 2012
|TOEFL - High schools must be responsible for their future with well-planned curriculum.
3 - Thank you for your help. I need to make more efforts. And I enjoyed your essay. You must have...
Writing FeedbackTaku - Mar 5, 2012 / Taku - Mar 6, 2012
|'Melchett appears to have...' - How can I phrase this better?
4 - If I had to choose between the two paragraphs presented, I would go with the second one because it...
Writing FeedbackTeemaaa - Mar 4, 2012 / Thaliak - Mar 5, 2012
|'behaviour of the wind-flow and concentration fields' - paragraph.
Writing Feedbacklcherif - Mar 5, 2012 / lcherif - Mar 5, 2012
|'A doctor in a foreign country' - your long term goals (paragraph)
2 - My goals are to become a doctor in a foreign country and to become an individual who is exceptional...
Writing Feedbackboyeboy - Mar 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 5, 2012
|'John Halas a cartoonist' - the cartoonist research essay
Writing FeedbackRhettgray - Mar 3, 2012 / Rhettgray - Mar 5, 2012
|My TOEFL Essay- "Smoking should not be permitted in restaurants" Agree !
3 - hey improve on you intro.. add more general topic than just starting as i prefer... say like this., many...
Writing Feedbackvivian0926 - Mar 5, 2012 / chocolate3 - Mar 5, 2012
|'London is my favourite place' - My Favourite Essay
2 - In a formal essay, refrain from exclamation points, capitalized phrases, and slang such as cool. Also, I feel like...
Writing Feedbackolivia_16 - Mar 4, 2012 / nicolejadeyee - Mar 4, 2012
|Being honest is the most important thing taken into account of the relationships
Writing FeedbackRuthXue - Feb 23, 2012 / Bahrom_4474 - Mar 4, 2012
|Hidden Treasures Essay - Bahamians
2 - I enjoyed your informative essay, as it was well written besides a handful of easily correctable grammar errors ,...
Writing FeedbackBahamasEssay - Mar 2, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Mar 3, 2012
|What is Marxism?
Writing Feedbackcbarlo2 - Feb 28, 2012 / gage - Mar 3, 2012
|IELTS task2 ---influence of parents on children
4 - No scientific reason has been found related to this subject This issue was never be proved by scientific, Mother...
Writing FeedbackMawarday - Mar 2, 2012 / gage - Mar 3, 2012
|"get rid of our life's pressure" -spend their free time outdoors or stay indoors.
2 - Another thing we can do is going on a picnic in a quiet green nature, talking about special moments...
Writing FeedbackDohaakhateeb - Mar 2, 2012 / bellalove123 - Mar 2, 2012
|Business and culture - losing ourselves in the rapid pace of development of society
2 - In the recently years , the situationlevel of interaction between countries in the world has intensified in teams of...
Writing Feedbackfanmanga90 - Mar 1, 2012 / dumi - Mar 2, 2012
|Creating a descriptive paragraph on the subject of: Library
Writing FeedbackLori - Feb 26, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 1, 2012
|(Background knowledge) - the notion of space and place in relation to everyday life
3 - Foucault, in this perspective, argues that power is linked to everyday practices onat all levels of social life. ...
Writing FeedbackMichelluu - Feb 29, 2012 / dumi - Mar 1, 2012
|ACCOMPLISHMENT REPORT: ENCOUNTERS UPON OUR OUTREACH PROGRAM WE CONDUCTED
2 - To eradicate illiteracy and promote functional literacy for the out of school children; this is our main goal which...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - Mar 1, 2012 / dumi - Mar 1, 2012
|As an young adult people, we can still be independent, even when we live with our families.
Writing Feedbacksophie56665518 - Feb 29, 2012 / sophie56665518 - Feb 29, 2012
|'family living arrangements' - CBEST writing - about extended families
2 - CBEST must be really hard because I think this is really nice Lily Lee, You have some great pointers...
Writing Feedbackliuxin3562 - Feb 26, 2012 / Jovine - Feb 28, 2012
|It is more important for students to study science (government help)
2 - Hi everybody; please put your effort to find my mistakes in the essay (It is more important for students...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Feb 27, 2012 / bahareh - Feb 28, 2012
|'To read or not to read?' - Cause and effect essay
Writing Feedbacktxle - Feb 23, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 28, 2012
|TOEFL essay - 'University education should be only available for good students'
2 - The purpose of education is always a controversial topic among people and society, especially in high level education such...
Writing Feedbackll931110 - Feb 23, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 28, 2012
|TOEFL - technology make our work more convenient and faster than before, we can save so many time
NEW - Would you help to correct this essay, thank you. Nowadays, as the society's rapidly changing there is a controversy...
Writing FeedbackArthur - Feb 28, 2012 / — -
|Are the youths of today irresponsible?
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Feb 17, 2012 / bahamaessay - Feb 26, 2012
|"No, no, not my brother! Anyone but him!" - narrative essay about my tragedy
3 - zhey new here. i very much like this essay. I think you could have made the Second paragraph a...
Writing Feedbacknawal - Feb 23, 2012 / bahamaessay - Feb 26, 2012
|'Ciggarettes Kill' - ESSAY ON SMOKING
Writing Feedbacknadia1 - Feb 26, 2012 / nadia1 - Feb 26, 2012
|'to improve the portion of society' - What is the purpose of higher education?
3 - how should i start out my second phargraph that is going to talk about my frist point impros skills...
Writing FeedbackJodyherr - Feb 21, 2012 / Jodyherr - Feb 26, 2012
|IELTS: consumer expense on different items (food/drink/tobacco/clothes/leisure etc)
3 - Many thanks for your help I think using present tense is possible here!isn't it?!would u please explain more? what...
Writing Feedbackfahime - Feb 24, 2012 / fahime - Feb 26, 2012
|Essay about whether creative artists should express their ideas in public freely
Writing FeedbackMartin2012 - Feb 25, 2012 / Athena - Feb 26, 2012
|(Subccumb to / Athlete, singer, honor / Mascara) Help my introduction
3 - You spelled "aliments" incorrectly in the fourth line. If you were looking for the word, "ailments" just switch the...
Writing Feedbackuagwuncha - Feb 24, 2012 / skmbrdn59 - Feb 25, 2012
|'pressure of covering up for my brother' - Grade 10 Turning Point Essay
Writing Feedbackjadarox - Feb 23, 2012 / jadarox - Feb 25, 2012
|Toefl essay- the same amount of money to students' sports activities as to libraries
3 - So what's the good of sports and social activities for the university students? this sentence should be eliminated...
Writing FeedbackRuthXue - Feb 22, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 24, 2012
|'the leadership or talented architects' - Successful sport professionals
Writing Feedbackminhtung9x - Feb 24, 2012 / minhtung9x - Feb 24, 2012
|IELTS- Travelling benefits for the travellers
6 - Hi Jay, I just thought that you could edit on the following sentences: People travel places for...
Writing Feedbackjayk - Feb 13, 2012 / Athena - Feb 24, 2012
|Today more people are travelling than ever before. Benefits and why?
Writing Feedbackmarpl - Feb 16, 2012 / marpl - Feb 23, 2012
|Wearing the Ao dai
4 - Secondly, the Ao dai not only is very elegant, but also is one of the Vietnamese's pride, so it...
Writing Feedbackl4v3nd3r_hl - Feb 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|what other factors should be considered to meause the success of a nation?
4 - Many social issues nowadays, taking high crime rates mostly caused by lack of education as an example, may disturb...
Writing FeedbackHELLOROSE - Feb 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|Essay about - Are SAT/ACT good indicators of ones academic abilities?
4 - Students stress so much over these standardized tests that they may become ill, physiologically exhausted and stressed which might...
Writing FeedbackMememars - Feb 15, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|'better to marry a similar partner' - TOEFL
5 - First of all, conflicts about everything between two individuals who have just finished the freedoms of single lives popularly...
Writing FeedbackH_H - Feb 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|'traditions, history and language in China' - IELTS WRITING
Writing Feedbackzengtingzi - Feb 22, 2012 / zengtingzi - Feb 23, 2012
|A Mother's Love - she influenced my life
2 - Thank for yours essay. This essay is full of new and useful vocabularies to me. I can improve...
Writing Feedbackfitnessgirl8 - Feb 22, 2012 / jimmy_nguyen - Feb 23, 2012
|Comparative/argumentative: Classifying Logical Fallacies: Two Schemes Compared
NEW - Classifying Logical Fallacies: Two Schemes Compared In logic and rhetoric, a fallacy is a deliberate or unintentional error...
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|'living in a higher pace is better' - TOEFL practice 59
4 - Some people tend to be in a hurry to complete their tasks, while others seem to prefer the opposite...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
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