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|WHY SHOULD RECKLESS DRIVERS BE PUNISHED SEVERELY
2 - Some teenagers like speeding. Although they know that it is dangerous, they like speeding without thinking of the consequences;(...
Writing Feedbackandrew_li - Apr 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 24, 2012
|Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel better in apartment
2 - Hi, in general your essay looks good. I have some suggestions that I mentioned them as follow: With the...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 24, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 24, 2012
|The most difficult thing for us is to live in peace and harmony with people
3 - i think your essay has lack of support, some usage of non-academic words, but overall pretty good...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 18, 2012 / Saidakhror - Apr 24, 2012
|IELTS topic- reduction in traffic jam by decrease in travel from home to other areas
3 - Hi Yangfan, I really glad that my suggestions about your essay were useful. Thank you very much for your...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 23, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 24, 2012
|Some important qualities of a good supervisor
Writing Feedbackkarinab - Feb 13, 2011 / Jeecee - Apr 24, 2012
|'a personal style statement' - it is important to follow fashion?
Writing Feedbackxitrona - Apr 21, 2012 / xitrona - Apr 23, 2012
|Spanking or No Spanking (argumentative essay)
3 - Thank you very much for your feedback. I will make the necessary correction. Again thank you....
Writing Feedbackjoalex7 - Apr 20, 2012 / joalex7 - Apr 23, 2012
|IETLS-the only way to protect the environment is at an international level
7 - You paragraph shows a wide range of vocabulary. YOU should change the concluding sentence like this: In conclusion, international...
Writing Feedbacklynnyang - Apr 18, 2012 / trang - Apr 23, 2012
|Student to Pay Tuition Fees? - Yes or No
3 - Well, actually this is a scholarship application essay, so none of the types mentioned. Then I would like to...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 22, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 23, 2012
|Essay about my racial, cultural, and social identity
Writing FeedbackHightower - Apr 22, 2012 / kusanagi1981 - Apr 23, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Win a sport competition is everything ?
2 - Hi, in general the essay looks fine,. Here some suggestions: "the discussion about the purpose of playing the (delete...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 21, 2012
|IELTS topic. Violence shown on TV and in the cinema
2 - Hi In recent years, the discussion about whether a series of violent contents from TV programs and...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 21, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012
|'In Mongolian it sounds like rice' - I have a destination to reach!
Writing Feedbackbudgerel - Apr 21, 2012 / apoklypz - Apr 21, 2012
|IELTS topic: Your view of "Pen and Paper" Examination
7 - Hi all, I agree with you, I have prepare another similar question, but chance the content, I will...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012
|IELTS Topic: In the past, study only for the young, nowadays is changed
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 20, 2012
|Anthropology, culture and business relations essay
NEW - Hi, well I really don't know how this essay sounds and so would really appreciate it if someone could...
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|IELTS Topic: Female Juvenile delinquency
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|Government should control some of exhibitions (admisssion in cinemas, theatres)
3 - Hi Veru, There is no denying that innovative artists have the rights to express their ideas and...
Writing Feedbackveru - Apr 19, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS topic. There will be soon no role for teachers in classrooms.
7 - Hi Luca Emma, That's why I am here for. I have serious grammatical errors couple of months ago....
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 17, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|MODERN HISTORY ESSAY - GANDHI
Writing Feedbackjesspark95 - Apr 19, 2012 / sherxon - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Air travel should be restricted or not?
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 18, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Pay a fee when drivers enter to city centre
3 - Hi Luca Emma, I strongly recommend you to read my writing carefully and question carefully! This...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 18, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|THEY SAY LIFE IS HARD - essay
8 - I don't know life is hard or easy. But I know you should be suspended. The feedback you provided...
Writing Feedbacksally awada - Apr 19, 2012 / basawang - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS GT: request to look after the house and pet on holiday
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 19, 2012 / peterc - Apr 19, 2012
|Change in life- Two different opinions.
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012 / leeminh - Apr 19, 2012
|A discussion about two views toward talent
3 - Hi Susan, thank you for the corrections. would you pleas give your idea about the other essay that I...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 19, 2012
|Effects of Working and Studying at the Same Time
4 - Hi; There are some repeated phrases and words; Their lives will be routine as living in a circle, waking...
Writing Feedbackhaitham - Apr 18, 2012 / bahareh - Apr 19, 2012
|Fixed punishments and taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discussion
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Apr 19, 2012 / leeminh - Apr 19, 2012
|'A Scholarship to China, I cannot forget that day' - essay
2 - Nice job. Your grammar and sentence structure could be brushed up a bit. I would also advise you to...
Writing Feedbackhaitham - Apr 19, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 19, 2012
|Aadvantages of negative criticism clearly outweigh the positive criticism
2 - Although I do not necessarily agree that this is a topic than can realistically go just one way or...
Writing FeedbackBalamurugan - Apr 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 19, 2012
|Songs and chants are useful learning materials for teaching listening ad speaking.
Writing Feedbacktinie - Apr 17, 2012 / tinie - Apr 19, 2012
|TOEFL essay - 'The importance of games for adults comparing to children'
8 - Sorry for my (very) late answering, but I got numerous assignments in school and I was unable to peruse...
Writing Feedbackll931110 - Mar 16, 2012 / ll931110 - Apr 19, 2012
|IETLS GT 2: should there be free health services?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 15, 2012 / peterc - Apr 19, 2012
|REM Sleep Research Paper - A Better Way to Open Up?
2 - Everyone craves sleep, especially during those long hours at work. The way the sleep process works is impressive. ...
Writing Feedbackkalvin126 - Apr 19, 2012 / basawang - Apr 19, 2012
|The study essay on Insect Entomopathogenic Nematode
Writing Feedbacksahel12 - Apr 15, 2012 / sahel12 - Apr 19, 2012
|My essay about transport-related foods
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Apr 18, 2012 / dumi - Apr 19, 2012
|TOEFL essay: Times are changing - is progress always good?
6 - to Sherxon. Thanks Finally I understood :) to basawang. Thank for your comment. Your version of my sentences is...
Writing Feedbackjen4enka - Apr 17, 2012 / jen4enka - Apr 18, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2: About Fatherhood V/S Mother
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 15, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 18, 2012
|Bribery in Politics and Corruption in Government Essay
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 17, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 18, 2012
|IELTS: Richer nations should help poorer nations in health, education and trade.
4 - Thanks Ali Sayed, you're really helpful. I would love to get comment on the rest of the paragraphs, will...
Writing Feedbackapoklypz - Apr 17, 2012 / apoklypz - Apr 18, 2012
|('my strong curiosity in computer..') - pragraph more beautiful and functional?
4 - Hi , i think you are writing a statment of purpose to get an admission. SOP should represnt about...
Writing Feedbacksherxon - Apr 3, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 18, 2012
|Responsible women? - Fatherhood ought to be emphasisde as much as motherhood
NEW - I hav written it for my IELTS examination can u plz check it for me.thanx "Fatherhood ought to...
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|Tolerance, driving the road of life - essay
4 - thx all:)...
Writing Feedbacksara alawieh - Apr 17, 2012 / sara alawieh - Apr 18, 2012
|Euthanasia: for or against? Is it a solution for those terminally ill?
4 - any time:)...
Writing Feedbacknawnas86 - Apr 16, 2012 / sara alawieh - Apr 18, 2012
|'avoid causing harm and pain' - Is animal testing necessary ?
2 - ...For example, the necessary amount of oxygen for any species and it's nonexistence on moon is found when a...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2012
|"The best way to give advice to other people .....attain it.
2 - .I, therefore, firmly believe the notion that yes, we should give the advice to the others, in a way...
Writing Feedbackdolly - Apr 15, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2012
|'Making cement, limestone and clay' - the IELTS Exam
5 - Here is my work with your suggestions. The figures provide information of the cement meking prcess and how...
Writing Feedbackjimmy_nguyen - Apr 16, 2012 / jimmy_nguyen - Apr 18, 2012
|IELTS GT 2: reason and solution of poverty
3 - Hi ajit88rai, Thanks for the points. I am desperate for ideas since the exam is coming really soon...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 16, 2012 / peterc - Apr 17, 2012
|Toulmin Essay "Should Uniform Be Implemented for College Students "
Writing Feedbackleeza - Apr 14, 2012 / leeza - Apr 17, 2012
|In your opinion what factors contribute to a good movie?
2 - Movies were being produced since many years. have been produced for The quality of movies produced in terms...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 17, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 17, 2012
|Pro Gun Ownership Research essay comments
2 - ...generating the notion that that A weapon is always used for bad ...All non-criminal, law-abiding citizens should have the...
Writing Feedbackearoman - Apr 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 17, 2012
|Compare and contrast the literate and the illiterate
3 - Therefore, prolific writers spend hours at their desks churning out manuscripts These mobile vendors make books accessible to...
Writing FeedbackPapsjay - Apr 16, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 17, 2012
|An Entrance Exam to Enter a University essay
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 17, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 17, 2012
|'I have a wonderful support system' - Planning and reflections Ashford
2 - When I first started online here at Ashford, I was really nervous on how much stuff I had forgotten.and...
Writing Feedbackmissy7779 - Apr 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 17, 2012
|History - a real science, or a meaningless waste of students' time?
2 - Thanks very much. As for the explanation of the first sentence - some scientists made a definition of what...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 15, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 16, 2012
|IETLS essay - If a product is of good quality and meets people's needs
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Apr 16, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 16, 2012
|IEITS: topic about adverting for goods
Writing FeedbackANN123 - Apr 14, 2012 / jaijagadeesh - Apr 16, 2012
|IETLS GT 1: Bus problems
3 - Hi Jennyflower81, Thank you for the correction! I think I would focus on essay writing first, as it...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 15, 2012 / peterc - Apr 15, 2012
|Tutoring in Morocco (English language essay)
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|Essay - Street knowledge vs. book knowledge
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