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|Exemplification essay - All about clothes
2 - The essay flows good, intro and ending are well separated. I like how you include specific information about Gothic...
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|'embraced the culture and US history' meaningful achievements and your field of study
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|GLOBAL WARMING - many causes of the worldwide phenomenon
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|Argumentative Essay - students with good grades should be paid
2 - In my opinion you provided good arguments. But there are a few who can be improved. For example [...]...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 20, 2012 / Nightmelody - Mar 20, 2012
|Negative experiences and priceless lessons (My first SAT essay)
3 - Thanks so much for your meticulous revision ! It should be somehow helpful for an apprentice like me !...
Writing Feedbackhvnguyen1311 - Mar 19, 2012 / hvnguyen1311 - Mar 20, 2012
|'Preparation' - What events, activities have contributed to your own self-development
2 - Preparation is all of my events, activities and achievements for my development which has completely changed my attitude. "You...
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|'The Lucky Boy' - CHILDRENS SHORT STORY
3 - Thanks so much for your response, it was written for a summative assignment in English class, and due in...
Writing FeedbackThors Hammer - Mar 19, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Mar 19, 2012
|'An Equal Distribution for a Better World' - the rogerian style argument
3 - Here are your main points: 1) "The main causes for malnourishment and undernutrition in the world today: unequal...
Writing Feedbackmabedico - Feb 21, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 19, 2012
|Traditional culture; West java culture
2 - In this global era, traditional culture is starting to be forgotten especially in teenage point of view. ***In this...
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|I read the note from my mom;Home alone - essay
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|IELTS essay: Student behavior in schools, causes and solutions
3 - Jennyflower81 HI JENNY THANKS FOR YOUR TIME AND CONCENTRATION. ABOUT THE LAST POINT THAT YOU MENTIONED, I TRY...
Writing Feedbackamirameri83 - Mar 18, 2012 / amirameri83 - Mar 19, 2012
|Argumentative Essay - Should students be paid for good grades?
Writing FeedbackAmberAngel - Mar 17, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 18, 2012
|Computer will replace teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
5 - Only write one side of the argument, so you should change it around so that your argument only disagrees...
Writing Feedbackmarpl - Feb 23, 2012 / coult777 - Mar 18, 2012
|Nowadays, radio has still reliable means of transmission worldwide
3 - Dear Linh Vuong Nguyen, Thank you so much for correction. I am very glad. For the bellow sentence can...
Writing Feedbacktipi - Mar 16, 2012 / tipi - Mar 18, 2012
|'Supply and consumption are two major engines' - Assesment of current affairs =)
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|'Government should not waste tax payer money on exploring space' - TOEFL No. 95
NEW - 95. Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to...
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|Computer essay - 'becoming increasingly dependent on computers'
2 - We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. Can you be more specific when you say "we" I assume you...
Writing FeedbackNurkhan - Mar 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 17, 2012
|'Medical advances are growing faster' - Evaluation Essay
2 - I have some ideas for improving your wording, i hope this helps :) Medical advances are growing faster...
Writing Feedbacksarabean718 - Mar 15, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 17, 2012
|[Toefl]-The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food we eat today
Writing Feedbackcensem - Mar 17, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 17, 2012
|IELTS: Petrol price, traffic problems and pollution; Any other effective measures?
2 - hash conditions ? firing petrol is not the proper usage. instead of saying "Single driver" it would be more...
Writing FeedbackStephen Chen - Mar 16, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 17, 2012
|dressing style is not a good indication of character
Writing Feedbackcensem - Mar 16, 2012 / pinkhelicopter - Mar 16, 2012
|Juvenile delinquents should undertake such punishments as cleaning the streets or
Writing Feedbacktipi - Mar 13, 2012 / xyx0905 - Mar 16, 2012
|younger workers are preferred than elders
2 - Hi there, I have just submitted an essay writing which was about: why some companies encourage employees who...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 15, 2012 / xyx0905 - Mar 16, 2012
|(IELTS) Charitable organizations should help all people?
3 - Rkerur...quite appreciate your help...your suggestions are vary useful...My Endlish grammar, coherence and logical reasoning are not good...I will continue...
Writing FeedbackAshlin - Mar 15, 2012 / Ashlin - Mar 16, 2012
|ENGLISH 101 - FETAL ALCOHOL SYNDROME APA FORMAT
2 - The thesis is supposed to be the heart of your essay after every body paragraph you should have a...
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|Narrative paragraph on "The worst Job I ever Had"
Writing FeedbackJustJeff - Mar 15, 2012 / JustJeff - Mar 15, 2012
|Jane Eyre 2011 Film Review Critical Essay (Cary Fukunaga's 2011 film adaption)
4 - :( In that case, what Jane is preserving is her honor, her faith, and her role in the household...
Writing Feedbacklittlemonster - Mar 15, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 15, 2012
|'Earth is the only planet' - Planet Earth essay
Writing FeedbackTimothy - Mar 3, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 15, 2012
|TOEFL - new technology helps students a lot
3 - I think in general, your essay is good in explaining and developing ideas. However, you should use more linking...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Mar 15, 2012 / ll931110 - Mar 15, 2012
|'sales (in 1000s) of cigarettes in Tobado' - Describe a graph
4 - The graph shows sales in thousands of cigarettes in Tobado from 1994 to 2010, with a prediction to 2020....
Writing FeedbackNTC - Mar 14, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 15, 2012
|What extent to you agree on that capital punishment essential to control violence?
2 - I wrote a similar topic: the advantages and disadvantages of the introduction of fix punishments Advantages of fix...
Writing FeedbackRafiullah - Mar 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Mar 15, 2012
|ielts - the proportion of older people and positive / negative effects
2 - This is IELTS exam topic on the 10th March 2012 (Academic Module) - Australia I wrote 4 paragraph,...
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Mar 15, 2012 / xyx0905 - Mar 15, 2012
|'Oslo, Norway' - creative writing: write about someone important to you
Writing Feedbacknchowder - Mar 14, 2012 / darthpotato94 - Mar 15, 2012
|Old Ones Essay! Describe an elderly person in your life who has effected you
Writing Feedbackkenzie5369 - Feb 28, 2012 / nchowder - Mar 14, 2012
|'The Wishing Chair' - a story on my worst experiance
Writing Feedbackellamaya - Mar 13, 2012 / ellamaya - Mar 13, 2012
|(Antonio Salazar) "a person who's influence was significant for the history"
2 - J. Kennedy and M.L. King have made a lot of progress for democracy, think about other personamong many people...
Writing Feedbackath - Mar 13, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 13, 2012
|'experience-based and academic-based learning' - CLEP
2 - Experience-based learning is a very valuable tool and teaches many important skills needed to succeed throughout life as a...
Writing FeedbackHSaucy - Feb 24, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 13, 2012
|The Advantages Of Being A Good Speaker
Writing FeedbackCLT - Mar 11, 2012 / rzlearner - Mar 13, 2012
|"When I First Met Him" - How can this Descriptive/Romantic story be improved?
Writing Feedbackgoto124 - Feb 17, 2012 / aj shahzad - Mar 13, 2012
|(the types of entertainment you like the most) comparision essay
2 - You should expand the last paragraph! Other than that I think you have a solid piece and solid points....
Writing Feedbacktamminhthai - Mar 13, 2012 / Rkerur - Mar 13, 2012
|IELTS-the proportion of older people is increasing,, positive or negative on society?
Writing FeedbackHemera - Mar 13, 2012 / Hemera - Mar 13, 2012
|Compare and Contrast 3 hostels (Nomads (NM), the Elizabeth Hostel, Habitat)
Writing FeedbackPhat Tran Van - Mar 6, 2012 / Phat Tran Van - Mar 13, 2012
|Government should spend more money on education than recreation and sports, essay
2 - Investment should be more for education rather than public entertainment and games by national authorities. Nice job answering the...
Writing Feedbacktipi - Mar 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 12, 2012
|Have you ever experienced culture shock? in Arab world?
Writing FeedbackDomi - Mar 12, 2012 / Domi - Mar 12, 2012
|What is the major factor of our personality and development?
Writing Feedbackuzakova - Mar 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 12, 2012
|'each and every lesson interesting with examples' - my best teacher
Writing Feedbackmominah - Mar 12, 2012 / ali_alqaisy93 - Mar 12, 2012
|GRE argument (the number of shoppers in Central Plaza)
Writing FeedbackMindyjianjian - Mar 9, 2012 / Mindyjianjian - Mar 12, 2012
|TOEFL - 'earning money became one of the main goals'
2 - You can improve upon your use of grammar and the statements you have written. for example, consider the first...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Mar 12, 2012 / kbihani - Mar 12, 2012
|Direction and planning - Gre essay
Writing Feedbackabhi27_90 - Mar 10, 2012 / abhi27_90 - Mar 12, 2012
|Enjoying a Job Rather Than Earning Money
3 - I would not suggest using the second-person point of view in your essay. It's hard to keep it from...
Writing Feedbackslomnia - Mar 11, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 11, 2012
|"...ethnic unity and cultural identity are routinely defined by language.."
2 - There are many differences between that exist between countries, with language being the obvious one. One of the greatest...
Writing Feedbackfatima89 - Feb 28, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 11, 2012
|FIRM DISCIPINE IS PART OF TEACHING CHILDREN (AGREE OR DISAGREE)
Writing Feedbacktomcruise231293 - Mar 9, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 11, 2012
|IELTS Task1 Post-school qualifications according to gender in Australia
Writing Feedbackadam1992 - Mar 8, 2012 / adam1992 - Mar 11, 2012
|'we need sometimes to compromise' - TOEFL preparation
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Mar 7, 2012 / eradulova - Mar 11, 2012
|'People first' - a society cannot put its own overall success
3 - Does some other reasons or facts need to put into this essay?Can you help me make it longer and...
Writing FeedbackMeiYu0414 - Mar 11, 2012 / MeiYu0414 - Mar 11, 2012
|"student's lifestyle in university" - ielts, task 2
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Mar 10, 2012 / lllpppricky - Mar 10, 2012
|Grass-fed cow vs grass fed beef - essay
Writing Feedbackmaemae04 - Mar 10, 2012 / maemae04 - Mar 10, 2012
|IELTS: Many people are moving to big cities. Why is that?
Writing Feedbackwesterfield - Mar 9, 2012 / westerfield - Mar 10, 2012
|Louis Riel. Hero, Traitor or Both? Louis Riel is a hero, and it still shows today!
7 - That is VERY helpful. My teacher gave an extension anyway. Is there anyway to remove an essay from...
Writing Feedbackthecarboneraser - Mar 6, 2012 / thecarboneraser - Mar 9, 2012
|'achieving personal wealth is no longer at the root of the US' -Diversity in the USA
5 - Thanks a lot...
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