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|Effects of Working and Studying at the Same Time
4 - Hi; There are some repeated phrases and words; Their lives will be routine as living in a circle, waking...
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|Fixed punishments and taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discussion
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Apr 19, 2012 / leeminh - Apr 19, 2012
|'A Scholarship to China, I cannot forget that day' - essay
2 - Nice job. Your grammar and sentence structure could be brushed up a bit. I would also advise you to...
Writing Feedbackhaitham - Apr 19, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 19, 2012
|Aadvantages of negative criticism clearly outweigh the positive criticism
2 - Although I do not necessarily agree that this is a topic than can realistically go just one way or...
Writing FeedbackBalamurugan - Apr 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 19, 2012
|Songs and chants are useful learning materials for teaching listening ad speaking.
Writing Feedbacktinie - Apr 17, 2012 / tinie - Apr 19, 2012
|TOEFL essay - 'The importance of games for adults comparing to children'
8 - Sorry for my (very) late answering, but I got numerous assignments in school and I was unable to peruse...
Writing Feedbackll931110 - Mar 16, 2012 / ll931110 - Apr 19, 2012
|IETLS GT 2: should there be free health services?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 15, 2012 / peterc - Apr 19, 2012
|REM Sleep Research Paper - A Better Way to Open Up?
2 - Everyone craves sleep, especially during those long hours at work. The way the sleep process works is impressive. ...
Writing Feedbackkalvin126 - Apr 19, 2012 / basawang - Apr 19, 2012
|The study essay on Insect Entomopathogenic Nematode
Writing Feedbacksahel12 - Apr 15, 2012 / sahel12 - Apr 19, 2012
|My essay about transport-related foods
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Apr 18, 2012 / dumi - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2: About Fatherhood V/S Mother
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 15, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 18, 2012
|Bribery in Politics and Corruption in Government Essay
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 17, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 18, 2012
|TOEFL essay: Times are changing - is progress always good?
Writing Feedbackjen4enka - Apr 17, 2012 / sherxon - Apr 18, 2012
|IELTS: Richer nations should help poorer nations in health, education and trade.
4 - Thanks Ali Sayed, you're really helpful. I would love to get comment on the rest of the paragraphs, will...
Writing Feedbackapoklypz - Apr 17, 2012 / apoklypz - Apr 18, 2012
|('my strong curiosity in computer..') - pragraph more beautiful and functional?
4 - Hi , i think you are writing a statment of purpose to get an admission. SOP should represnt about...
Writing Feedbacksherxon - Apr 3, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 18, 2012
|Responsible women? - Fatherhood ought to be emphasisde as much as motherhood
NEW - I hav written it for my IELTS examination can u plz check it for me.thanx "Fatherhood ought to...
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|Tolerance, driving the road of life - essay
4 - thx all:)...
Writing Feedbacksara alawieh - Apr 17, 2012 / sara alawieh - Apr 18, 2012
|Euthanasia: for or against? Is it a solution for those terminally ill?
4 - any time:)...
Writing Feedbacknawnas86 - Apr 16, 2012 / sara alawieh - Apr 18, 2012
|'avoid causing harm and pain' - Is animal testing necessary ?
2 - ...For example, the necessary amount of oxygen for any species and it's nonexistence on moon is found when a...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2012
|"The best way to give advice to other people .....attain it.
2 - .I, therefore, firmly believe the notion that yes, we should give the advice to the others, in a way...
Writing Feedbackdolly - Apr 15, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2012
|'Making cement, limestone and clay' - the IELTS Exam
5 - Here is my work with your suggestions. The figures provide information of the cement meking prcess and how...
Writing Feedbackjimmy_nguyen - Apr 16, 2012 / jimmy_nguyen - Apr 18, 2012
|IELTS GT 2: reason and solution of poverty
3 - Hi ajit88rai, Thanks for the points. I am desperate for ideas since the exam is coming really soon...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 16, 2012 / peterc - Apr 17, 2012
|Toulmin Essay "Should Uniform Be Implemented for College Students "
Writing Feedbackleeza - Apr 14, 2012 / leeza - Apr 17, 2012
|In your opinion what factors contribute to a good movie?
2 - Movies were being produced since many years. have been produced for The quality of movies produced in terms...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 17, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 17, 2012
|Pro Gun Ownership Research essay comments
2 - ...generating the notion that that A weapon is always used for bad ...All non-criminal, law-abiding citizens should have the...
Writing Feedbackearoman - Apr 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 17, 2012
|Compare and contrast the literate and the illiterate
3 - Therefore, prolific writers spend hours at their desks churning out manuscripts These mobile vendors make books accessible to...
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|An Entrance Exam to Enter a University essay
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|'I have a wonderful support system' - Planning and reflections Ashford
2 - When I first started online here at Ashford, I was really nervous on how much stuff I had forgotten.and...
Writing Feedbackmissy7779 - Apr 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 17, 2012
|History - a real science, or a meaningless waste of students' time?
2 - Thanks very much. As for the explanation of the first sentence - some scientists made a definition of what...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 15, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 16, 2012
|IETLS essay - If a product is of good quality and meets people's needs
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Apr 16, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 16, 2012
|IEITS: topic about adverting for goods
Writing FeedbackANN123 - Apr 14, 2012 / jaijagadeesh - Apr 16, 2012
|IETLS GT 1: Bus problems
3 - Hi Jennyflower81, Thank you for the correction! I think I would focus on essay writing first, as it...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 15, 2012 / peterc - Apr 15, 2012
|Tutoring in Morocco (English language essay)
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Apr 13, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 15, 2012
|Essay - Street knowledge vs. book knowledge
Writing Feedbackicez - Apr 4, 2012 / icez - Apr 14, 2012
|"Intellectual Journals" Globalization after the Cold War
2 - sorry about that, here's the journals I have so far. I copy pasted it from my Microsoft Word, so...
Writing FeedbackkacieN - Apr 14, 2012 / kacieN - Apr 14, 2012
|Essay About Me - born in Indonesia
4 - To chalumeau: Well, it should be an application essay, shouldn't it? So some points why to choose this particular...
Writing FeedbackFitri Pratiwi - Apr 1, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 14, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Same job for a same company VS change job frequently
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012 / leeza - Apr 14, 2012
|'Violence and video games' - My essay on video games
NEW - Violence and video games ENG 102 Royere Jonathan The future of entertainment revolves around technology. Video games become...
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|IELTS topic. Behaviour in school is getting worse
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 11, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 14, 2012
|'injustice ruins the peaceful life' - THE INJUSTICE ESSAY
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Apr 13, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 14, 2012
|to what extent should government be able to censor television or radio programs
Writing Feedbackdolly - Apr 10, 2012 / dolly - Apr 14, 2012
|Petrol price increase and its impact on traffic & pollution levels
Writing Feedbackscarlet_bouquet - Apr 9, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|IELTS Topic:Environmental issues"international Cooperation vs National participation"
7 - Hi Alirulez, I am sending now. big file, takes a while, cheers. This is a reading practice,10 tests,...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|IELTS task 1 - bar and pie charts (the results of a survey of adult education)
5 - Hi Leeminh, writing a mix charts, you have check out any relationship between them, if not, a simple...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Urban Sprawl: (causes and prediction)
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|write a paragraph of effects of early marriage.
8 - As a result, they have no time to enjoy the pleasures of teenage life. Comn sequently, they divorce...
Writing Feedbackvinh - Apr 9, 2012 / dumi - Apr 13, 2012
|'Types of news: Local, national and international' - news and types essay
5 - Hi, in general your writing is good and you could convey the message in the effective and short sentences....
Writing Feedbackveronicamosquer - Apr 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012
|IETLS GT writing task 2: Should children follow strict rules of behaviour?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|Review on my paper "What Price: Plastic"
3 - Please review my essay and answer the following questions. 1. What does the writer do well in this...
Writing FeedbackNkowalski - Apr 12, 2012 / Nkowalski - Apr 13, 2012
|IELTS: Financial success enables individuals to acquire a comfortable and relaxing life
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|A wonderful trip with new experience (Toronto / Global village)
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012
|sat essay: should all people's opinions opinions be valued equally?
8 - You really make a good point. But i think the word can just be defined in many different ways....
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 11, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 13, 2012
|My toefl essay - If you could change one thing about your hometown, what would it be?
Writing Feedbackicez - Apr 12, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|'encourages to devoting'; Successful sports professionals can earn big money
5 - Your introduction have no motivator. Before expressing the main idea of the essay you should prepare a reader's mind....
Writing Feedbackhales - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 12, 2012
|'Adams real estate may be superior to Finches' - GRE argument topic
NEW - The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend. "Of the two leading real estate firms...
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|IETLS GT writing task 1: bad meal experience in a restaurant
3 - Hi scarlet_bouquet, Thanks for the comment, it is very helpful!! I will try to post another letter later,...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 11, 2012 / peterc - Apr 12, 2012
|The Oversea Vietnamese Youth camp
Writing FeedbackThanh Huyen - Apr 10, 2012 / Thanh Huyen - Apr 12, 2012
|'the daily demand of electricity in summer'; IELTS
NEW - The line chart above illustrates the different amount of electricity demanded daily in England in winter and summer and...
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|ESSAY FOR CLASSIFICATION - Curriculums designed for elementary school students
Writing Feedbackcarmelitahu - Apr 11, 2012 / carmelitahu - Apr 12, 2012
|IELTS: Why do we need music? - traditional music is used in vast level
3 - Hi. Jiya. For your essay, I am not sure about how ielts essay pattern should be organized. But...
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 11, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
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