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|'pressure of covering up for my brother' - Grade 10 Turning Point Essay
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|Toefl essay- the same amount of money to students' sports activities as to libraries
3 - So what's the good of sports and social activities for the university students? this sentence should be eliminated...
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|'the leadership or talented architects' - Successful sport professionals
Writing Feedbackminhtung9x - Feb 24, 2012 / minhtung9x - Feb 24, 2012
|IELTS- Travelling benefits for the travellers
6 - Hi Jay, I just thought that you could edit on the following sentences: People travel places for...
Writing Feedbackjayk - Feb 13, 2012 / Athena - Feb 24, 2012
|Today more people are travelling than ever before. Benefits and why?
Writing Feedbackmarpl - Feb 16, 2012 / marpl - Feb 23, 2012
|Wearing the Ao dai
4 - Secondly, the Ao dai not only is very elegant, but also is one of the Vietnamese's pride, so it...
Writing Feedbackl4v3nd3r_hl - Feb 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|what other factors should be considered to meause the success of a nation?
4 - Many social issues nowadays, taking high crime rates mostly caused by lack of education as an example, may disturb...
Writing FeedbackHELLOROSE - Feb 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|Essay about - Are SAT/ACT good indicators of ones academic abilities?
4 - Students stress so much over these standardized tests that they may become ill, physiologically exhausted and stressed which might...
Writing FeedbackMememars - Feb 15, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|'better to marry a similar partner' - TOEFL
5 - First of all, conflicts about everything between two individuals who have just finished the freedoms of single lives popularly...
Writing FeedbackH_H - Feb 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|'traditions, history and language in China' - IELTS WRITING
Writing Feedbackzengtingzi - Feb 22, 2012 / zengtingzi - Feb 23, 2012
|A Mother's Love - she influenced my life
2 - Thank for yours essay. This essay is full of new and useful vocabularies to me. I can improve...
Writing Feedbackfitnessgirl8 - Feb 22, 2012 / jimmy_nguyen - Feb 23, 2012
|Comparative/argumentative: Classifying Logical Fallacies: Two Schemes Compared
NEW - Classifying Logical Fallacies: Two Schemes Compared In logic and rhetoric, a fallacy is a deliberate or unintentional error...
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|'living in a higher pace is better' - TOEFL practice 59
4 - Some people tend to be in a hurry to complete their tasks, while others seem to prefer the opposite...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|Should Immigrants adapt to adopted country?
Writing FeedbackJoanne Lee - Feb 22, 2012 / Joanne Lee - Feb 22, 2012
|'My lifetime goal was to attend an American university' - 2 sentences
2 - Hi, Your sentences don't flow together but that's fine as were here to help :). I understand what...
Writing Feedbackinternational3 - Feb 22, 2012 / waldo01 - Feb 22, 2012
|'Successful people do something new or take risks' - TOEFL
2 - I favorfavour the latter; that is, successful people still do things they already know. The first and foremost reason...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 22, 2012 / farina - Feb 22, 2012
|"independence day" and "mother's day" - are important? IELTS
2 - hi Ielts essays are argumentative essays you cannot write an essay in only one para. your essay must have...
Writing Feedbackrithamanyewe - Feb 21, 2012 / farina - Feb 22, 2012
|'Students are developing more and more interest in arts and literature' - ielts essay
4 - Thanks for your corrections. I have checked the dictionary somber and sombre words have the same meaning so they...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Feb 21, 2012 / farina - Feb 22, 2012
|'More convincing' -TOEFL whether face-to-face communication is better
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 17, 2012 / zxc123 - Feb 21, 2012
|'public to use more public transportation' - IELTS band
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|Causes of loafing among youths, essay
Writing Feedbackjajadiba - Feb 8, 2012 / HelpmeWrite - Feb 21, 2012
|'types of goals we set in life' - CLEP College Comp Essay
Writing FeedbackHSaucy - Feb 16, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 21, 2012
|Don't Focus Only on Grades
Writing Feedbacktlampard - Feb 19, 2012 / Athena - Feb 21, 2012
|ielts: learn a language in primary school or secondary school?
6 - hi deep i have been earning english since one month.. i am well in reading and listening but while...
Writing Feedbackiceblade - Feb 18, 2012 / deep0757 - Feb 21, 2012
|'Better a job with more vacation time but a low salary' - essay
3 - It's a good topic, but are you writing for admissions? Because, the paper did not tell much about you....
Writing Feedbackrobust - Feb 20, 2012 / byeung1489 - Feb 20, 2012
|'In realizing my ambition to be a doctor the biology course..' - reflective essay
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|'being an adult needs a sound skill' - TPO 24 Writing
2 - There are few aspect to like in your essay howvere, punctuation, prepositions, article, grammar, I simply cannot mention it...
Writing FeedbackYunfengHu90 - Feb 17, 2012 / Glorenet - Feb 18, 2012
|Print and electronic media feeding us with information
2 - It is NOT ONLY a form of communication which is feeding us with information from all corners of the...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Feb 17, 2012 / uzakova - Feb 17, 2012
|do you agree that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits?
Writing Feedbackrobust - Feb 16, 2012 / robust - Feb 17, 2012
|'The advantages of exam out ways its disadvantages' - Help for ielts essay
3 - The benefits of testing are various. Firstly, the justice of tests can't be denied, tests provide a fair stage...
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|Young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.
3 - an important mistake: the last paragraph should not only has one sentence. Try to balance the length of each...
Writing Feedbackliwenxin - Feb 17, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 17, 2012
|English 102 Paper - Stem Cell Research Paper
NEW - Stem Cells have the potential to make a large positive impact in the medical field. It is important to...
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|'job with more vacation time' - IBT
4 - It is not hard to figure out that a regular communication helps the generation gap decrease. Especially, we...
Writing FeedbackAlice Ren - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 16, 2012
|Colleges Suffer from a Lack of Diversity of Ideas
2 - below are my revisions. Spelling/grammer corrections are in red, and the sentences in blue are ones that I think...
Writing FeedbackEstherwriter - Feb 16, 2012 / HSaucy - Feb 16, 2012
|'What is abortion?' or "Don't get me started on.." essay
Writing Feedbacksawlytia - Feb 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 16, 2012
|'governments should not move their capitals without necessity' - IELTS
Writing Feedbackkkshwesin - Feb 15, 2012 / kkshwesin - Feb 16, 2012
|whether or not students should wear uniforms to school :)
3 - Thanks so much! I didn't actually think people would reply to this, but you did!! Haha your FARTERS method...
Writing Feedbacksjm979 - Jan 17, 2012 / sjm979 - Feb 16, 2012
|'working in an individual way and get the grades is better' - TOEFL
4 - Hi; I found other mistakes that might be considered ... I completed the all tasks myself lacking of any...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 16, 2012 / bahareh - Feb 16, 2012
|Should we have to always pay attention to the opinions from celebrities?
5 - Hi Goku123, In my opinion, your English is quite good. . Howver, I'm much concerned if your essay addressed...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 13, 2012 / H_H - Feb 15, 2012
|Money can be ineffective and counterproductive part of the job
Writing Feedbackokbu - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 15, 2012
|Nuclear war v.s. the Unitied Nations
2 - i think this is great. if you want you could relate this to today's problems with nuclear weapons between...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Feb 13, 2012 / Mememars - Feb 15, 2012
| comics books radio television film theatre (media communication) IELTS
2 - Books as a media have superiority in transmitting the information, because it is easy to acquire the knowledge which...
Writing Feedbackkiwiuua - Feb 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 15, 2012
|Advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need, should be regulated?
2 - Hi :) I can make some suggestions to help you improve your paper. You have some excellent ideas and...
Writing Feedbackcate_lovygina - Feb 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 15, 2012
|Essay on 'Dreams for the future rely on the work of Today'
Writing Feedbackkumailxp - Feb 8, 2012 / kumailxp - Feb 15, 2012
|Write about an occasion when your arrogance caused you to make a wrong decision.
2 - During the years in mid-school , i joined the school`s swimming club as a way to keep myself fit...
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Feb 12, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 15, 2012
|Courage the Cowardly Dog: "Freaky" Fred Analysis (Weekly Essay to improve writing)
3 - Courage the Cowardly Dog may or may not have been meaningful to everyone, but it is unique when compared...
Writing FeedbackEddie94 - Feb 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 14, 2012
|Studying people and their employers assistance - Ielts charts
2 - The two bar charts illustrate why people of different age groups study, and how their employers assist them in...
Writing FeedbackCoolmam - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 14, 2012
|what does it mean to live in a democratic society and how has it affect you.
Writing FeedbackMememars - Feb 13, 2012 / Athena - Feb 14, 2012
|'Opportunities to go out in a quiet town' - TOEFL
3 - In terms of the configuration of this essay, I think it is not enough to only have 3 paragraph...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 12, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 13, 2012
|'Akron Catholic Church Closings' - essay 1 - describing a local issue
2 - Great introduction! For those who share in some denominationparticipate in religious activities and believe in some higher being,...
Writing Feedbackmdunbar824 - Feb 13, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 13, 2012
|Being gay and overcoming myself.
2 - People in the town are well-politically oriented... Not sure what you mean by this.. can you be more clear?...
Writing Feedbackbyeung1489 - Feb 13, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 13, 2012
|Essay regarding the influence of technology on the way people react to each other
Writing Feedbackjuel33 - Feb 12, 2012 / juel33 - Feb 13, 2012
|The teaching approach: 'I recommend the teachers to be friendly'
NEW - Hi guys I expect at least 7 in IELTS writing...Please help me by assessing my essay..Any suggestions will be...
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|"Studying English in an English-Speaking Country" - IELTS Writing
2 - Hi Kadrick, Sentence you used is more readable that way - According to a recent survey, International...
Writing Feedbackjai124 - Feb 10, 2012 / jayk - Feb 13, 2012
|'a person should have several careers' - career essay
Writing Feedbackkashkaldakus - Feb 10, 2012 / kashkaldakus - Feb 13, 2012
|argumentative essay on technology...whether to stand with or against it
2 - I'm guessing you're going to write about how technological advancement signifies the decline of human morals? I couldn't really...
Writing Feedbackmakma7 - Feb 12, 2012 / mylo_zyloto - Feb 12, 2012
|Personal essay on any experience, My Grandfather my hero , Has to be descriptive
NEW - I haven't written my first paragraph yet , pleasetell me if i need any corrections with the below writing...
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|A good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities.
Writing FeedbackScientist - Feb 9, 2012 / mariagaston - Feb 10, 2012
|(food/drinks/tobacco category) "National spending in 3 categories"
NEW - The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Country...
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|Essay is about Dieting which can change a person's life
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