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|'promote humanity and understanding among the people' - IELTS essay
NEW - Topic; Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagrees and thinks...
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|Without a clear goal to focus our energy and drive us to grow, we cease to be truly alive.
Writing Feedbackmursel - Dec 10, 2011 / purple_216 - Dec 11, 2011
|'a very beautiful young woman who is very ambitious' - Describing a friend
Writing FeedbackNii Kommey - Dec 6, 2011 / Nii Kommey - Dec 11, 2011
|Magazine article - "Road of Heart"
NEW - I need to write an article for a magazine about pets. It should be something about myself so here...
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|3 Hours-how 3 hours a week changed my life
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|IELTS essay - Whether children should go to school early or not
Writing Feedbackcsckid - Nov 29, 2011 / stmagar - Dec 10, 2011
|'the world of formidable evil, injustice and detest' - IELTS essay
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 8, 2011 / farina - Dec 10, 2011
|IELTS essay if children should be sent to school at an early age?
6 - Dear Farian, I think there are several problems in your writing: Firstly, You use too long and...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 7, 2011 / phuongthao15389 - Dec 9, 2011
|Essay about "at the city park"
Writing Feedbackteteh ayu - Dec 9, 2011 / Tobi - Dec 9, 2011
|success in life depends on active attitude
3 - This really doesn't say anything about you at ALL. Maybe you could talk about an encounter with failure, how...
Writing FeedbackJerah_85 - Dec 8, 2011 / leviator - Dec 9, 2011
|My Great Idea. Satirical Essay.
Writing FeedbackTownhopper - Dec 8, 2011 / kenyaboyfresh - Dec 8, 2011
|Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified
3 - EF_Susan first ! Nowadays, mostly animals are used for testing cosmetic products. >>> here, i think ! Nowadays ,...
Writing Feedbackmursel - Nov 28, 2011 / sniper_moon - Dec 8, 2011
|Should people always follow fashion?
3 - i can't agree more about the content of this essay , i firmly believe that following fashion is only...
Writing FeedbackTobi - Dec 8, 2011 / sniper_moon - Dec 8, 2011
|Cooking - Activity done for the pleasure
Writing Feedbackamanjain14 - Dec 8, 2011 / mursel - Dec 8, 2011
|The Achievement of Desire, response paper
Writing Feedbacknini89 - Dec 7, 2011 / Tobi - Dec 8, 2011
|'Better to attend a small college or a large university?' - TOEFL Essay
3 - Hi buddy, You can some particular points to your essay probably. 1. A bigger university will have a more...
Writing Feedbackkarthik21 - Nov 8, 2011 / ajit88rai - Dec 8, 2011
|'new international knowledge and experience' - The reason for studying abroad
Writing FeedbackDiyorbek - Dec 6, 2011 / Diyorbek - Dec 8, 2011
|IELTS should fathers take care of the children while their wives work?
3 - Buddy, after reading your whole essay, I am really finding it difficult to see what opinion you are having?...
Writing Feedbackhyperione - Nov 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Dec 8, 2011
|Two hundred years.. the British ruled our people
5 - I hope I am not interrupting you Mr. Rajiv. However don't you think it was our own inferiority that...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Dec 1, 2011 / ajit88rai - Dec 8, 2011
|How is your generation different from your parents generation? Differences?
3 - Introduction: It is crystal clear that our generation has many differences from our parents' generation in such ways as...
Writing Feedbackhedieh - Dec 7, 2011 / hedieh - Dec 8, 2011
|Because environmental issues are too complex, individuals can do nothing about them.
3 - Thanks a lot!!! Response was so fast :) I wanna reduce my mistakes and improve writing ability. I think...
Writing Feedbacklento333 - Dec 7, 2011 / lento333 - Dec 7, 2011
|ielts chart - information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Dec 4, 2011 / phuongthao15389 - Dec 7, 2011
|My development as a writer for an intro to my final English portfolio
2 - Hey Christian! Very interesting essay. I loved reading it, but it took some time to get through the second...
Writing Feedbackcmfelix - Dec 7, 2011 / tehfunkicookie - Dec 7, 2011
|'To improve my insight into medicine' - Why Medicine? Vanderbilt scholarship
2 - Well formulated essay. Some general advice for revising: 1.More focus should be laid on your perspective of 'medicine'. Your...
Writing Feedbackkenyaboyfresh - Dec 6, 2011 / hwei1994 - Dec 6, 2011
|Essay on Responding to September 11
Writing FeedbackLexill - Dec 3, 2011 / Lexill - Dec 6, 2011
|Life of a child star-rewards and problems
3 - Thanks for your interesting ideas on the subject of my essay:)Maybe I should discuss this subject both sides,not just...
Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Dec 5, 2011 / greentea93 - Dec 6, 2011
|Easier-prepared food cannot make a promotion to our own life and even could cause some consequences.
5 - ok, thanks!...
Writing Feedbackrolin - Dec 3, 2011 / rolin - Dec 5, 2011
|Middle school sex ed argument paper
NEW - This is a research based argumentative paper ... MLA format.. I really need help editing and making it flow...
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|IELTS writing - Describing a process
2 - The flow chart given shows the procedures followed after the IELTS exam has been completed. This article will...
Writing FeedbackJarret - Dec 4, 2011 / roshan4 - Dec 5, 2011
|Ordering a special electrode.
2 - Thank you for your helpful recommendation. As I said, I should use intramuscular electrodes for stimulating muscles in...
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Dec 3, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 5, 2011
|(Michele Morano's Grammar Lessons: The Subjunctive Mood) - English 101
2 - Using nine different sections of different subjects on the subjunctive mood, ... Morano extends her purpose of helping...
Writing FeedbackSabers011 - Dec 1, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 5, 2011
|Government has announced that it wishes to build a military base near your community
3 - Thank you so much for your invaluable suggestion.I wrote mine,a type of bomb hidden under ground, in a contest...
Writing FeedbackHarikumarsharma - Dec 4, 2011 / Harikumarsharma - Dec 5, 2011
|Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
2 - Throwing rubbish in our beautiful environment has created many problems in our lives. This essay will be discussed some...
Writing Feedbackroshan4 - Dec 4, 2011 / greentea93 - Dec 5, 2011
|city workers decide to live in the country. problem is with their transport system
4 - Ok my friends the topic of the essay is that ''nowadays city workers decide to live the countryside. The...
Writing FeedbackDiyorbek - Dec 2, 2011 / Diyorbek - Dec 5, 2011
|Should students learn music and art in secondary school ?
4 - I strongly agree with the statement that Should students learn music and art in secondary school,because at that age...
Writing Feedbackvivi870670 - Dec 2, 2011 / hamidtom - Dec 5, 2011
|What environment do you suggest for children to grow? Big City or Countryside?
3 - these are some of my suggestions Currently, living in a big city is dangerous especially for children because...
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Dec 2, 2011 / clin93 - Dec 5, 2011
|Money for students sports vs library activies
5 - You need to review your introduction because it is not clear.For example you can put it this way(this is...
Writing FeedbackHarikumarsharma - Nov 3, 2011 / clin93 - Dec 4, 2011
|boom Internet - people use the Internet more and more
2 - N owdays, as the wolrd becomes more develop the more people use internet. Bom internet rapidly of the people...
Writing Feedbackchickenbaby - Dec 4, 2011 / jasonty9 - Dec 4, 2011
|Reliance on Technology has deteriorated our ability to think
NEW - Man has been continuously inventing ever since he was a nomad. His desire to settle necessitated him to think...
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|'recently moved to new house' - IELTS Letter
NEW - You are recently moved to new house. There has been damage after you move into the house. Write a...
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|The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing.
3 - Hello jennfer, I really appreciate for your comment I will improve my essay. Could please add more comments...
Writing Feedbackroshan4 - Dec 1, 2011 / roshan4 - Dec 4, 2011
|The time I spent at Jamaica Hospital. Cardiology is something that I have always been zealous about.
NEW - Walking into the beautifully furnished hospital building, I scanned the area. There were hundreds of patients waiting for prescriptions,...
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|What is considered as a "bad behavior" in Morocco?
NEW - HEY ! recently, i have written some essays and poems but i didn't find anyone correct me my mistakes...
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|In the pages of human history, conflicts are unavoidable; Is conflict helpful? SAT
2 - The helpfulness of conflicts is unlimited. Conflicts can have significant impacts upon society and future generations. One such example...
Writing FeedbackLily Rose - Dec 3, 2011 / kkelsey82 - Dec 3, 2011
|Teachers and issues of marginalization (short essay)
2 - Here are a few things I would change for your introduction Since the beginning of our Western society,...
Writing Feedbackmyinterwebs - Dec 1, 2011 / kkelsey82 - Dec 3, 2011
|'The Power of Pilates' - my Eng 102 research paper
2 - Carrying extra weight effects more than just physical implications. This sentence needs editing. instead of effects put has. My...
Writing Feedbackhac411 - Nov 30, 2011 / kkelsey82 - Dec 3, 2011
|The average house prices in New York, Madrid Tokio, Frankfurt and London
2 - I believe that the sentence "In particular Tokio and London are achieved an equal rate of -7%" should be...
Writing Feedbackknip - Nov 24, 2011 / kkelsey82 - Dec 3, 2011
|'The alcohol lovers' - comparing paragraphs
NEW - please help me to editing several paragraphs! ALCOHOL LOVERS The alcohol lovers that love to drink alcohol...
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|SHOULD EDUCATION BE PLANNED?
3 - i agree with Harikumarsharma. my suggestion to your essay(clin93) to improve it. you should brainstrom and make a list...
Writing Feedbackclin93 - Dec 2, 2011 / Diyorbek - Dec 2, 2011
|'job-hunting' - University should offer students more preparation for the future
Writing Feedbackjohn hans - Nov 29, 2011 / john hans - Dec 2, 2011
|"New Soil" - a college essay about heinies, aliens, and rasberry jam.
3 - Yes I agree that the first paragraph needs some clarifying! I have to say this is so amazing. You...
Writing Feedbackkaunosielu - Nov 7, 2011 / blueshore - Dec 2, 2011
|'to change my current job status' (Career Plan)
NEW - Never been a good writer. I'm very anxious when it comes to writing any paper. Please help me out...
Writing Feedbackjenannebeard - Dec 1, 2011 / — -
|Paper on politcal car with bumper stickers
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|'Do we force students into college?' - English
2 - While some truly don't have the intellectual ability, should we be placing all the blame on college being too...
Writing Feedbackmelissatimms - Nov 29, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 1, 2011
|'Starvation' - Discuss some issue of concern
Writing Feedbackmohamed459 - Nov 30, 2011 / mohamed459 - Nov 30, 2011
|(the short jawbones and overcrowded teeth) my article summary
2 - There is a variety of detailed measurements on the skull and jawbone. These measurements are on 11 different cultures...
Writing Feedbacksmya - Nov 29, 2011 / bookerAs1 - Nov 30, 2011
|'How I viewed Islamic missionaries' - personal essay
2 - Upon constant insistence.I set out on a religious journey of 10 days with a team of 12 members. Our...
Writing Feedbackyasirsarosh - Nov 28, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 30, 2011
|'SECOND SEMESTER RESUMES' - personal essay: Experiencing life
2 - I was constantly bullied by my peers: they mocked at my running style, made fun of my debating and...
Writing Feedbackyasirsarosh - Nov 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 30, 2011
|Essay about the health and fitness -'People are getting lazier than ever before'
NEW - topic:in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing....
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|How many of you have experienced the EARTHQUAKE?
NEW - I am writing this essay to tell all of you something. Please give me advices if there is any...
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