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|What catches your attention more ; Are Scandals useful ?
2 - Okay ,firstly there are too many spelling mistake here. Scandals - be it political or otherwise, are scandalous -they...
Writing Feedbackhellokitty - May 22, 2012 / tanvi3595 - May 22, 2012
|'War in Afghanistan and Iraq' essay reviewed with the top 3 areas of improvement
2 - Hello. Well, I can offer you some suggestions for improvement. Firstly, I don't know if this assignment was to...
Writing Feedbackfuse15k - May 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 22, 2012
|Write a letter to the local English teacher to arrange some English lessons; IELTS
2 - Dear Mr. Johns, This letter is a letter in corresponding toregarding your advertisement in athe Sunday daily newspaper about...
Writing Feedbacksheikhnabeel - May 17, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 22, 2012
|[Toefl] improvements in transportation will make daily life more convenient
NEW - Traffic congestion in a narrow road costs people a long time to get rid of it; we even have...
Writing FeedbackMiffy - May 21, 2012 / — -
|Aurangzeb; great emperor, or a failure as a ruler?
Writing FeedbackPip3mAn - May 21, 2012 / Pip3mAn - May 21, 2012
|Task 1 IELTS - Letter about defective kitchen product
4 - Hi Pedro, I like your approach, though I would suggest a more formal tone throughout the letter as...
Writing FeedbackPBeltrao - May 19, 2012 / Athena - May 20, 2012
|IELTS:narrow the gap; should wealthy nations share their wealth with poorer ones
3 - Hi, I feel that you are contradicting yourself in the essay. Instead, try to stick to one perspective...
Writing Feedbacknmcong95 - May 15, 2012 / Athena - May 20, 2012
|Should or should not following local culture when travelling?
2 - Dear Sophie, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your essay. The manner in which you put forward your thought and...
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - May 20, 2012 / Athena - May 20, 2012
|Cell phones, make life easier or make human depend on it?
4 - Oh, thank you very, Ahmad Zafari. When I'm working on this essay, I know little information about that. I...
Writing FeedbackAlice3105 - May 19, 2012 / Alice3105 - May 20, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY 1: a letter of complaining about the class schedule changes
3 - Dear sir, I am an undergraduate student of the computer science college and currently completing my third year,...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - May 20, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 20, 2012
|IELTS: Extra coaching classes
NEW - Topic: Nowadays children are joining extra coaching classes apart from their school studies. Some think it is important for...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - May 20, 2012 / — -
|GRE issue:instead of requiring students to take courses in a varied of disciplines...
Writing Feedbackagoodweather - May 19, 2012 / agoodweather - May 19, 2012
|300 Word Analysis of Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken"
2 - hey I am also major in literature :) so far, that's the analysis of the poem. you exlplain it...
Writing FeedbackAztec1 - May 17, 2012 / xitrona - May 19, 2012
|Children can handle school and work simultaneously, but that can lead to some health problems.
Writing FeedbackAbdumannon - May 18, 2012 / Abdumannon - May 19, 2012
|ielts task 2: married women nowadays are not at home to take care for their children
3 - Hi Ahmad Zafari thank you very much indeed Cuz of your feedbacks I learn many useful thing how to...
Writing Feedbacknmcong95 - May 17, 2012 / Ikboljon - May 19, 2012
|WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF BEING FAMOUS?
2 - As a resulIn conclusion t, whilealthough it is true to say that famous people live a great life, I...
Writing Feedbackrosa44 - May 17, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 18, 2012
|my first motorcycle ride
Writing Feedbackkskwings - May 17, 2012 / schickdamih - May 18, 2012
|IELTS Essay about Immigration and adapting the local laws
3 - Lee and Tommy ur thoughts: On the other hand, forming a minority community will help the people become...
Writing FeedbackHani Lee - May 16, 2012 / sheikhnabeel - May 17, 2012
|most people prefer shopping in super markets to small shops or local markets
2 - Nowadays, I think we need supermarket than small shop because when we go to supermarket, we can buy a...
Writing Feedbackgsrinu_78 - May 17, 2012 / Alice3105 - May 17, 2012
|Integrity of family - Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood.
3 - Dear, Thanks for your reply. Its having the following context on which I have written "Fatherhood ought to...
Writing Feedbacksheikhnabeel - May 16, 2012 / sheikhnabeel - May 17, 2012
|'Finding my Mother' - TITLE BASED ON "A MEMORABLE DAY"
3 - I was not aware that posting my essay online to recieve help and feedback was considered plaigarism. I was...
Writing Feedbacknegon503 - May 3, 2012 / negon503 - May 17, 2012
|the same national curriculum until college; real world is rarely black and white
2 - i totally agree with u,considering my example.i was totally against learning the dates or years when a king was...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - May 16, 2012 / kskwings - May 17, 2012
|Sat essay - worrying too much about other people's opinions...
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - May 17, 2012 / kimuratakuya - May 17, 2012
|'Forms of entertainment' + 'a court to maintain the society balance' -topics of IELTS
NEW - Hi all, I am taking IElts test next month, trying to practise writing as much as possible. but the...
Writing Feedbackcaotinh87 - May 16, 2012 / — -
|financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program
2 - it's great writing abot financial education,but i think, you should add more negative effects about financial education. you can...
Writing Feedbackloandinh - May 13, 2012 / jessiangela - May 16, 2012
|ielts - Can technology alone solve the world's environmental problems?
2 - just one small thing, in the conclusion paragraph, it should be "impractical" not "unpractical"...
Writing Feedbackgulim - May 16, 2012 / nmcong95 - May 16, 2012
|TOEFL Essay " Business Research Center OR Agriculture Center"
2 - I've just done a grammatical correction but that still does'nt save the essay . Firstly, your essay has a...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 15, 2012 / Elena_lovSL - May 16, 2012
|'Born in Thailand, majoring in finance' - Introduce myself essay
NEW - Welcome to my sites. My name is Chokkhana Trisuwan but most people call me Tonkla. I am a PC2...
Writing Feedbackchokkhana - May 16, 2012 / — -
|IELTS: wealthy nations vs poorer nations; 'Children and Charity Foundation'
NEW - Hello Everybody, Please check my essay and give your comments, Thank you very much in advance, Kh. ...
Writing Feedbackkhumayra - May 15, 2012 / — -
|Why Golf is my favorite Sport?
Writing FeedbackNajah1987 - May 14, 2012 / Najah1987 - May 15, 2012
|'Immigration Reform - Necessary or Not?
2 - our immigrant population accesssaccess to our lands that they cost us so much money. from the entry level,...
Writing Feedbackchristian_edge - May 15, 2012 / Zubaida - May 15, 2012
|Advantages of an early creating family
NEW - This is my first IELTS essay too. Could you please correct it? In recent times it is common...
Writing Feedbackphysiart - May 15, 2012 / — -
|The Influence of Homework on Students' Learning
2 - Hi, You have covered all important points. I don't think that there is a need of any corrections....
Writing Feedbackdeetoon - May 15, 2012 / ana_p - May 15, 2012
|Ielts essay. A letter.You and your family are living in rented accommodation
NEW - You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking city, and you are not satisfied...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - May 15, 2012 / — -
|IELTS essay. International music vs traditional ('music is vital to us')
6 - It is great job to open Ielts essays forum But I would like to suggest a sort of categorization...
Writing Feedbackkhumayra - May 12, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 15, 2012
|Job satisfaction and meeting employees needs - essay IELTS
4 - thanks...
Writing Feedbackvincentyoung - May 15, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 15, 2012
|Don't stereotype - One should never judge a person by external appearance
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. " Don't judge a book by its cover "....
Writing Feedbacksushiking - May 15, 2012 / — -
|do you prefer to have big or small family? and Why?
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - May 14, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 15, 2012
|'advertisement is very important for cosmetic company' - essay to modify
2 - OH My ! You have so many wording in one paragraph? I think you better get it organized otherwise...
Writing Feedbackessaybiubiubiu - May 12, 2012 / Jeecee - May 14, 2012
|'Computer' is the greatest change in the 20th of century?
3 - I have to choose only one topic: computer, the Internet, radio or World War II) I chose computer...
Writing Feedbackbek23 - May 14, 2012 / bek23 - May 14, 2012
|Sat essay: Is conscience a more powerful motivation than fame, power or money?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - May 13, 2012 / kimuratakuya - May 14, 2012
|TOEFL Essay "Work by hand OR machine"
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 7, 2012 / ana_p - May 14, 2012
|Essay on Barbara Kruger
2 - Barbara Kruger's works deals with mass media. Kruger's works expose the deception by re-constructing works in mass media...
Writing Feedbackfrank88 - May 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 14, 2012
|TOEFL:We should never make judgments about a person's character based on appearance
NEW - Please revise my essay for TOEFL independent writing Question: We should never make judgments about a person's character...
Writing FeedbackZook - May 14, 2012 / — -
|SINGLE SEX SCHOOLS have many benefits and are as equally good as Co-ed schools
NEW - (Some people) might say the single sex schools are wrong, because girls and boys need to know how to...
Writing FeedbackAshrehm - May 13, 2012 / — -
|With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more info...
Writing Feedbacksushiking - May 11, 2012 / tormented chap - May 13, 2012
|The average educational spending on each student have rocketed continuously for more than 20 years
NEW - School should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Agree or disagree. Some of my expressions are not accurate. Please...
Writing Feedbacktommyzhu - May 13, 2012 / — -
|Enjoyment? We have responsibility to support our family and contribute to improvement of society
2 - There=> This is where the controversy arises your essay has good structure, the supporting ideas are clear enough to...
Writing Feedbacktonywenlxf - May 13, 2012 / loandinh - May 13, 2012
|'Chance to change life?' - Going overseas for university study
2 - most of Vietnamese students who chose to continue study=> continue studying abroad have got better jobs than the ones...
Writing Feedbackthaomeo - May 12, 2012 / loandinh - May 13, 2012
|IELTS: News editors are objective and have their own agendas on what to publish
NEW - Topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on TV and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - May 13, 2012 / — -
|IELTS: There are many effective ways to motivate employees
Writing FeedbackScientiana - May 5, 2012 / Scientiana - May 13, 2012
|SAT essay-What gives us more pleasure and satisfaction?
Writing Feedbacktanvi3595 - May 12, 2012 / tanvi3595 - May 13, 2012
|Education, The world's most powerful tool
7 - I was glad to help. I love helping others. I am really happy that you scored good! Please help...
Writing FeedbackNajah1987 - Apr 30, 2012 / kusanagi1981 - May 12, 2012
|IELTS- SHOULD FOREIGNERS RESPECT LOCAL CUSTOMS OR VISE VERSE
Writing FeedbackJaishri - May 11, 2012 / Jaishri - May 12, 2012
|Persuasive essay: it's okay to strive for perfection. 3 claims + intro and conc
3 - its not a quote it was written in a discussion about perfection by someone anonymous. I just want to...
Writing Feedbackfoo488 - May 11, 2012 / foo488 - May 12, 2012
|'4 ways of life goals' - personal story essay
Writing Feedbackstorygirl18 - May 11, 2012 / An312406 - May 12, 2012
|'long term investing vs. short term investing' - Clep Exam Composition
Writing FeedbackCajamez - May 5, 2012 / Cajamez - May 11, 2012
|'exposed to the ever-accelerated technology' - ielts : an essay written by myself
10 - dear xiang wei, a good essay with newly learnt words/phrases. but i'd love to suggest you to improve your...
Writing Feedbackzhangxiangwei - Apr 15, 2012 / phyu - May 11, 2012
|GMAT AWA Essay (Falling Revenues and Manufacturing delays)
Writing Feedbackredpearl - May 8, 2012 / redpearl - May 11, 2012
|TOEFL: selecting / processing information- very important skill a person should learn
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