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|Narrative/Description Essay About An Unforgettable Vacation
4 - Furthermore, on this vacation, I was aware of how fear I was when I reached nearly to the dead....
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|Toefl writing: to become well-informed, don't rely on one source of news information
Writing FeedbackRomera - Mar 26, 2012 / Romera - Apr 7, 2012
|Are you too dependent on computers? [Argumentative essay outline + work]
5 - Can you give some statistic to prove your point that we are dependent to computer like how many hours...
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|'Jared High and I used to be best friends' - bullying cause and effect essay
4 - Thank you for fixing my mistakes. My teacher does not say about citation so you can skip it. She...
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|Essay on what shoud mass media broadcast on TV?
NEW - Mass media undoubtedly plays an important and crucial role in our diurnal life. All the various segments of the...
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|Should students be given homework daily?; 'enhancing understanding, awareness'
Writing Feedbacktuongvi - Mar 29, 2012 / tuongvi - Apr 6, 2012
|'decline of care and concern for the high need-school' position with teach charlotte
NEW - I am applying for a position with teach charlotte and I have to complete a short essay for the...
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|'Nguyen Dinh Chieu Park' - MY FAVORITE PLACE
8 - I'm too bad. I'm Vietnamese but I do not know much about Nguyen Dinh Chieu. Thanks for your essay....
Writing Feedbacknonnon91188 - Apr 2, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 5, 2012
|KEEPING ANIMALS INSIDE ZOOS; DISCUSS
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 5, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 5, 2012
|IELTS: Teenager or adult years are the happiest?
2 - one thing i felt is paragraphi should be long enough and explained as much as possible one or two...
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|'obliged to do what you don't like' - essay on doing jobs people don't like
6 - Well, both of them came from Morocco. They are extremely good in what they do. So I just wanted...
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|Sat essay: is an idealistic approach less valuable than a practical approach?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012 / Athena - Apr 4, 2012
|Schools should decide whether they continue with School Uniforms ; Persuasive Paper
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|'the head of English language Panel' - important event in my life
Writing Feedbacktinie - Apr 3, 2012 / tinie - Apr 4, 2012
|'By travelling I will be able' your favourite leisure activity, an expository writing
3 - I have a lot of important events in my life That changed me significantly. That there wasone event made...
Writing Feedbacktinie - Mar 21, 2012 / tinie - Apr 3, 2012
|Comparison/Contrast of paintings depicting the conquest of Jericho
4 - I haven't found this website to be unnecessarily banning people. I've been here less than one month and have...
Writing Feedbackgillygilly - Apr 3, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|'Nadie, Como Vai, and Pass the Peas songs' - examine three songs essay
2 - I found this song to be exceptional because ; it blew me away. :) Firstly ,Secondly IN ADDITION,...
Writing Feedbackdiiemnguyen - Mar 31, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 3, 2012
|sat essay: Do people succeed by emphasizing their difference from others?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012
|FEATURE ARTICLE- Culture Shock
2 - I have attached my comments about the lead paragraph. Let me know what you think. Some questions for...
Writing FeedbackPraiseYou - Apr 2, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|'death penalty should be reinstated in Canada' - argumentative essay
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|Essay - Homosexual Parents | Does Sexuality Impact Children?
3 - I just have one question. In the third paragraph, there is the assumption that pressure would create parental awareness....
Writing Feedbackm_d_r_rio - Mar 27, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012
|'reading fictions is more pleasant' - essay for Toefl
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more...
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|sat essay:Do highly accomplished people achieve more because they expect more?
NEW - Currently, people tend to regard the unsatisfied will to achieve more as the source of their unhapiness and frustration,...
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|Americas number one killing disease - research essay
4 - ... ... 76&codcch=26 mdanderson.org dana-farber.org/ If I were writing a short research paper, I would...
Writing Feedbacknsfvball - Mar 31, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 2, 2012
|Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free?
2 - Art is a form of expressing one's inner thoughts in the form of music, dance, sculptures, and carvings on...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 29, 2012 / EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2012
|'fading the role of family life in society...' - correct this essay
3 - hi said... your notes are great...thank you... :) ...you are right...this is not a scientific essay with real numbers...
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|Having long hair - Essay - Feedback
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|Reasons for the increasing anti-social behavior and the lack of respect to others
2 - You should give your claims on the issue at first , then clearly and throughly explain them in the...
Writing FeedbackWay - Mar 31, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012
|'Travel is always interesting' - Essay correction
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|IELTS ESSAY "Ban sail of bottled water"
NEW - What is a natural resource that always should be free. Government should bend the sail of bottle water! To...
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|'homeschooling offers their children more' - Essay Introduction
4 - I am pretty satisfied with your comment but I was wondering if you could elaborate on providing real examples...
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|'transportation of fruits and vegetables by air' - Essay
NEW - Some people believe that we should not use air transportation to carry fruits and vegetables. To what extent do...
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|'children workforce has become popular' - essay help
2 - Many people argue that adults should not encourage children to work by paying them. In my view, this issue...
Writing Feedbackjenk - Apr 1, 2012 / dumi - Apr 1, 2012
|IELTS 'children in present times are given too much individual freedom'
7 - I know it is not good as ours ,i made some mistakes,i think my first sentence is not appropriate,but...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - Mar 23, 2012 / jaijagadeesh - Apr 1, 2012
|'Childhood obesity has many bad effects on society' - essay
Writing Feedbackjenk - Mar 31, 2012 / jenk - Apr 1, 2012
|Many animals and plants are dying out today. What are the causes and solutions
2 - Many animals and plants are dying out today. What are the causes and what are your solutions Please...
Writing Feedbackwoyaokaoyasila - Mar 31, 2012 / 15_dreams - Mar 31, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line Graph (Comparing Upward Trends)
3 - Before the first half of 1998,the own rate of home computer was higher than that of mobile phone. After...
Writing FeedbackDENNISHA - Mar 28, 2012 / woyaokaoyasila - Mar 31, 2012
|Dealing with first-time offenders and criminals - essay
3 - A million thanks。you give me much help.this essey is getting much better under you instruction.thanks again,have a good day....
Writing Feedbackwoyaokaoyasila - Mar 30, 2012 / woyaokaoyasila - Mar 31, 2012
|Essay About the Importance of Plural Opinions
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|English Essay on Residential Schools and Monkey Beach
Writing Feedbackpjltr - Mar 27, 2012 / blazer - Mar 31, 2012
|'the opportunity to receive education from university' - My essay for Toefl
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Nowadays it is much easier to achieve success with the...
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|Discuss both views and give your opinion about the advocates of international aid
2 - All things considered, the strength of grant campaigns international aid overwhelms its weaknesses, persuading me to assert operating aid...
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|'fulfilment is main factor which make people become happy' - IELTS exam
NEW - Topic: Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in...
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|Write a process paragraph of the following topic: " How to study for an exam?"
NEW - If you want to get good results in an exam, you should carry out three steps.Firstly, you should revise...
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|Good habits make good human being - essay
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|Equality in workplace for women
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Writing FeedbackWay - Mar 26, 2012 / Way - Mar 30, 2012
|An essay on "Protecting the Environment" campaign
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|The difference in drugs and alcohol in women.
Writing Feedbacksanderson8907 - Mar 24, 2012 / zogi maral - Mar 29, 2012
|"Some people think that schools are merely turning children into good citizens,,,
3 - 1. "Extreme" is an adjective. You need to use "extremely", an adverb to qualify the adjective "important". 2. "Almost"...
Writing Feedbackpearly - Mar 23, 2012 / basawang - Mar 29, 2012
|'studying abroad offers students many necessary skills' - paragraph pro/cons
5 - Moreover, they have to adapt many other things.It's which is very useful for them to be more confident...
Writing Feedbacktrang - Mar 20, 2012 / tuongvi - Mar 28, 2012
|'My Incredible Woman' - about a person I admire
3 - Every human being born into the world because of a woman. Sentence lacks a verb. Born into the world...
Writing FeedbackWid - Mar 26, 2012 / kthanhpn - Mar 28, 2012
|Reflection Essay on a cognitive-related school activity/event
2 - " Out of the many cognitive-related opportunities I was offered, the two week long overseas learning trip to Cambridge,...
Writing FeedbackLOLL - Mar 28, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 28, 2012
|fatherhood and motherhood, IELTS writing task
Writing Feedbackahmadkaky - Mar 17, 2012 / TanvirBD - Mar 27, 2012
|INEQUALITY REDUCTION AND POVERTY ALLEVIATION IN AFRICA
Writing Feedbacknse - Mar 22, 2012 / TanvirBD - Mar 27, 2012
|Now more and more workplaces are hiring an equal number of women and men.
NEW - Now more and more workplaces are hiring an equal number of women and men. Do you think it is...
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|The overlook among basic science
3 - Hi Jennifer Your advice is really helpful for me.Thank you so much. I've already taken the notes and will...
Writing Feedbackfyc920527 - Mar 27, 2012 / fyc920527 - Mar 27, 2012
|Students who get suitable time they can opt in to work part-time
2 - What is the prompt of the essay? Is it a newspaper article? This affects the presentation style of this...
Writing Feedbacktipi - Mar 19, 2012 / kthanhpn - Mar 27, 2012
|should smoking be banned completely?
2 - Grammatical errors at couple of places, you need to work on framing your sentences in more organized way....
Writing Feedbacktuongvi - Mar 27, 2012 / alirulez - Mar 27, 2012
|Computers' negative & positive effects on children; 'strategic games'
6 - I have experience, so I may predict that it is 6.0-6.5 band essay. I would recommend you writing your...
Writing Feedbackalirulez - Mar 24, 2012 / Saidakhror - Mar 27, 2012
|Organic Foods - there are benefits of eating of organic foods essay
2 - Just a few suggestions PG1: Organic products entered the mainstream market in 2003, when pesticide and fertilizer lobbyist...
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