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|TOEFL - People are put too much focus on making wealth and progress in technology
4 - Thank you, Spyridon. I know I have difficulty in writing. Even writing an essay like this spent me 1...
Writing Feedbackcht1128 - Feb 4, 2012 / cht1128 - Feb 9, 2012
|Weight of people is increasing-- causations and resolutions
4 - Hi, In conclusion To conclude, individuals should change their perception about life style and attempt to adopt healthy...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Feb 8, 2012 / Athena - Feb 8, 2012
|'visitors should make a basic effort to adapt their behaviour' - IELTS essay
7 - Some people recommend students to travel the world for a year before starting university. Others argue a "gap year"...
Writing Feedbackkatisss - Jan 21, 2012 / katisss - Feb 8, 2012
|250 Word Essay on Education Reform
2 - This is my suggestions....hopefully it can help you.... However, there are students below the average of....( better to...
Writing Feedbacksonya15 - Feb 8, 2012 / jajadiba - Feb 8, 2012
|'clean, beautiful, safe Shopping Center' - GRE-Argument
3 - Dear Jennifer, Thank you so much for your feedback. It is very helpful, I will be taking the GRE...
Writing FeedbackMRH - Feb 6, 2012 / MRH - Feb 8, 2012
|'Evaluation of Walk the Line' - evalution of a movie essay
Writing Feedbackomar1234 - Feb 7, 2012 / — -
|'seat belt laws' - GED Practice Essays
Writing FeedbackMK1993 - Feb 6, 2012 / MK1993 - Feb 7, 2012
|'Chanhe makes our lives better' - SAT test
Writing Feedbacksharon1012 - Feb 6, 2012 / roopali - Feb 7, 2012
|'I don't think people have to work hard to succeed' - Luck and success?
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 5, 2012 / MK1993 - Feb 7, 2012
|My essay about positive things about an accident - Introduction.
Writing Feedbackbldblade - Feb 3, 2012 / roopali - Feb 7, 2012
|E.E. Cummings "How have these aspects of life influenced the poet and his work?"
3 - Throughout his life, Cummings would often travel to many countries, which included France and even Soviet Russia. Cummings...
Writing FeedbackGigantron - Jan 30, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 7, 2012
|Classmate in schools can lead children to reach to progression and triumph
5 - i totally agree with what ur trying to prove but try rewording phrases like this one becuase it needs...
Writing FeedbackAMiNENGiNE - Jan 24, 2012 / waldo01 - Feb 7, 2012
|'Medical, nursing, and health care system in Iran' - THIS JOURNAL
4 - It is clear that the health care system is one of the most important organizations in each country. ...
Writing Feedbackshery - Jan 27, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 6, 2012
|Prostitution is often called the world's oldest profession. Should it be legal?
Writing Feedbackeriey - Feb 6, 2012 / eriey - Feb 6, 2012
|IELTS Task2 - academic subjects-
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|'Parents and Teachers play a vital role' - YOUNG HABITS DIE HARD
4 - Hi, i have some suggestions. On the contrary, when a child adopts good habits such as going to bed...
Writing Feedbackdr_pharmacy88 - Feb 5, 2012 / AmberAngel - Feb 6, 2012
|Religious extremism and militancy - essay outline and response
2 - Hi :) I can make some suggestions on improving your grammar: Our green plant is green no more...
Writing Feedbackfarhatsultana - Feb 5, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 5, 2012
|'no one should ever turn a blind eye to obvious signs of abuse' - Domestic Violence
2 - Wow, your essay is exemplary. I read it, and I cannot find any errors or changes to suggest- it...
Writing FeedbackPatrishaH77 - Feb 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 5, 2012
|educate wrongdoers or sending them to jail
2 - Hi :) I can make some suggestions: In developing countries, like China, most criminals are limited in a...
Writing Feedbackallen_wang - Feb 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 5, 2012
|IELTS-human activities harming Earth or improving quality of life
NEW - Hi, Please correct any errors and provide feedback on task achievement. Q. Some people say we humans are...
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|Art of writing, playing music; every have the right to choose any kind of music
Writing Feedbackpaul1911 - Feb 3, 2012 / paul1911 - Feb 5, 2012
|'Friendship is a kind of emotion in mind' - TOEFL writing
4 - The content is good, but you can develop the first and the last paragraph more. For the first...
Writing Feedbackchufan Chou - Jan 28, 2012 / fansr0731 - Feb 4, 2012
|'created memories playing arcades games' - descriptive essay and my first one
Writing FeedbackLinkinpark117 - Feb 2, 2012 / AmberAngel - Feb 4, 2012
|Deficient water resources: causes and solutions
Writing Feedbackakari - Jan 15, 2012 / paul1911 - Feb 4, 2012
|TOEFL-- One or two close friends vs. a large number of casual acquaintances
3 - It's better to repeat the topic with different words or sentence in tofel test instead of giving your opinion...
Writing Feedbackapplenjuice - Feb 1, 2012 / fansr0731 - Feb 4, 2012
|'Computer in the future has no limits' - What will Happen in the Future
2 - Amid all of the technological development that we are witnessing today, what can we expect to happen in the...
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Feb 2, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 2, 2012
|'learn to develop good characteristics in ourselves' - TOEFL
9 - Think you 2...
Writing FeedbackParvina - Jan 28, 2012 / mishal alzaid - Feb 2, 2012
|Taking a gap year, should or should not? IELTS writing test 2
NEW - In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and...
Writing FeedbackMai Chu - Feb 1, 2012 / — -
|writing and you
2 - Writing is what we do in everyday life. In fact, we are all writers. We write basic things like...
Writing Feedbackjenniijennjenn - Feb 1, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 1, 2012
|'people deserve to be known for what they did' - - TOEFL
Writing FeedbackNayara - Jan 31, 2012 / Nayara - Feb 1, 2012
|narrative essay: Snowboarding Accident. (Original Composition)
NEW - Discuss the topic: Our friends and family are important. Grade 12 As I was snowboarding down the mountain,...
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|[IELTS] Is air travel only benefit for the richest people?
NEW - In the present-day society, it is believed that air travel has become the best way to travel a far...
Writing Feedbackcocoyan - Jan 31, 2012 / — -
|'it was a completely new life' - memoir Essay
4 - memoir essay...
Writing Feedbackcalanka - Jan 31, 2012 / calanka - Jan 31, 2012
|'highly motivated, self-disciplined and well-organised' - Distance learning
NEW - The number of courses offered by distance has increased a great deal over the last few years. In the...
Writing Feedbackakari - Jan 31, 2012 / — -
|'the mental desire without money' - Happiness in life - Ielts writing.
Writing FeedbackMai Chu - Jan 31, 2012 / Mai Chu - Jan 31, 2012
|[IELTS]Can distance learning bring the same benefits of attending schools?
3 - Thank you so much, Susan. Your correction is very helpful. By the way, as for your correction of the...
Writing Feedbackchelseazcl - Jan 30, 2012 / chelseazcl - Jan 31, 2012
|Persuasive Writing - Travelling around the world
4 - Hi, I am a Canadian Language teacher based in Thailand. I teach academic & creative prose. I've read some...
Writing FeedbackVan19602 - Jan 30, 2012 / ranger_85 - Jan 31, 2012
|nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? Benefits and risks?
3 - The invention of nuclear technology came as a relief for humanity, in the advent of an all time deficit...
Writing Feedbackkapuriasonu - Jan 31, 2012 / calanka - Jan 31, 2012
|'They follow what their heart say' - Childhood Dreams essay
Writing Feedbackkabir1 - Jan 31, 2012 / kabir1 - Jan 31, 2012
|'work has become the most vital part' - help for ielts essay
NEW - Topic As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Jan 31, 2012 / — -
|(price of petrol increase / the cement making process) - IELTS ESSAYS
2 - After putting the power into the mixer, and it is then heated by Rotating heater So throughthanks for...
Writing Feedbackkiwiuua - Jan 30, 2012 / Mai Chu - Jan 31, 2012
|[IELTS] Parents should not Control What Children Learn at School
5 - For those parents who like to supervise their kids' learning at school, theysometimes worry about ]classes setting] class set-up...
Writing Feedbackjpplus - Jan 29, 2012 / dumi - Jan 31, 2012
|Fable story : the princess snail
Writing Feedbackthaoquyen - Jan 30, 2012 / thaoquyen - Jan 31, 2012
|Should the elderly be taken care by the society or family
2 - I really don't think you should restate the question in the first paragraph. Also, stay away from me an...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Jan 30, 2012 / reidabook - Jan 30, 2012
|The Addiction Stigma: Finding the Grey Area Between Immorality and Disease
2 - Hi :) I will proofread your essay, and suggest some changes. Now, at 46, after winning two rounds...
Writing Feedbackbeccaleigh - Jan 29, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 30, 2012
|Getting used to the madness! culture shock I encountered.
2 - From my experience, I would like to say that culture shock is an impact of travelling from a familiar...
Writing FeedbackMJKIM - Jan 27, 2012 / basawang - Jan 30, 2012
|'being a pharmacist' - which paragraph is better?
3 - I prefer the second. I'm not a native speak English, so I'm not able to correct the mistakes. However,...
Writing Feedbackunjh4545 - Jan 29, 2012 / Nayara - Jan 30, 2012
|'The New York Yankees are my favorite baseball team' - English II essay
NEW - I have yet to type up my intro paragraph and conclusion just because im not sure what she wants...
Writing Feedbackmcgee1095 - Jan 29, 2012 / — -
|How are we better than our fore fathers - my essay
3 - thank you so much for your nice analysis...i didnt high lighted the worest side of the issue although i...
Writing Feedbackfarhatsultana - Jan 28, 2012 / farhatsultana - Jan 29, 2012
|'building a factory near my community is really a catastrophe' - TOEFL writing
2 - I would provide with the third paragraph as well. All in all, good points. Can you please look through...
Writing Feedbackr00524025 - Jan 28, 2012 / Parvina - Jan 28, 2012
|'the invention of (mobile) phone has changed all' - technology and people interaction
3 - It brings great convenience for us I think is "to us " You want ideas? Think about situations...
Writing Feedbackkiwiuua - Jan 23, 2012 / chufan Chou - Jan 28, 2012
|TV & MOVIES have a great impact on the life of modern people ; TOEFL
Writing Feedbackfansr0731 - Jan 28, 2012 / fansr0731 - Jan 28, 2012
|'The most time-consuming housework' - bar chart for IELTS
NEW - The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Write a report for a university...
Writing Feedbackwendy90 - Jan 28, 2012 / — -
|knowledge; 'It's not true that young people enjoy more than older' - TOEFL
4 - Yes your arguments are very well-written. I just find one grammar error. They could save up some money during...
Writing FeedbackNayara - Jan 27, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 27, 2012
|Essay on the plight of children in Sub-Saharan Africa
4 - We need to help show these youthful children that someone loves them. We need to show them that even...
Writing Feedbackhc23881 - Jan 26, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 27, 2012
|IELTS: People should not be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65
2 - meo71 There is aare number of arguments in favour of not forcing people to retire. Firstly, the experience they...
Writing Feedbackmeo71 - Jan 27, 2012 / farina - Jan 27, 2012
|My Relationship With My brother, A memoir
Writing Feedbacksavstar26 - Jan 26, 2012 / savstar26 - Jan 26, 2012
|'I want to be a doctor in the future' - Describe your short and long-term goals
3 - --yes of cause I will read your essay! this is a 1000 characters paragraph. I cannot write it longer....
Writing Feedbackxinxin - Jan 26, 2012 / xinxin - Jan 26, 2012
|Does technology make us less creative or not?
3 - I made a few corrections. English is not my first language, but I think 'predicament' means similar to 'embarrassing...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Jan 26, 2012 / vargam91 - Jan 26, 2012
|'planning of up-to-date and metropolitan cities' - Ielts essay review
4 - however, it seems to me that governments would better handle this matter better than individual owners. Good essay.Keep it...
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