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|IELTS Topic: Urban Sprawl: (causes and prediction)
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|write a paragraph of effects of early marriage.
8 - As a result, they have no time to enjoy the pleasures of teenage life. Comn sequently, they divorce...
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|'Types of news: Local, national and international' - news and types essay
5 - Hi, in general your writing is good and you could convey the message in the effective and short sentences....
Writing Feedbackveronicamosquer - Apr 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012
|IETLS GT writing task 2: Should children follow strict rules of behaviour?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|Review on my paper "What Price: Plastic"
3 - Please review my essay and answer the following questions. 1. What does the writer do well in this...
Writing FeedbackNkowalski - Apr 12, 2012 / Nkowalski - Apr 13, 2012
|IELTS: Financial success enables individuals to acquire a comfortable and relaxing life
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|A wonderful trip with new experience (Toronto / Global village)
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012
|sat essay: should all people's opinions opinions be valued equally?
8 - You really make a good point. But i think the word can just be defined in many different ways....
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 11, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 13, 2012
|My toefl essay - If you could change one thing about your hometown, what would it be?
Writing Feedbackicez - Apr 12, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|'encourages to devoting'; Successful sports professionals can earn big money
5 - Your introduction have no motivator. Before expressing the main idea of the essay you should prepare a reader's mind....
Writing Feedbackhales - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 12, 2012
|'Adams real estate may be superior to Finches' - GRE argument topic
NEW - The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend. "Of the two leading real estate firms...
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|IETLS GT writing task 1: bad meal experience in a restaurant
3 - Hi scarlet_bouquet, Thanks for the comment, it is very helpful!! I will try to post another letter later,...
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|The Oversea Vietnamese Youth camp
Writing FeedbackThanh Huyen - Apr 10, 2012 / Thanh Huyen - Apr 12, 2012
|'the daily demand of electricity in summer'; IELTS
NEW - The line chart above illustrates the different amount of electricity demanded daily in England in winter and summer and...
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|ESSAY FOR CLASSIFICATION - Curriculums designed for elementary school students
Writing Feedbackcarmelitahu - Apr 11, 2012 / carmelitahu - Apr 12, 2012
|IELTS: Why do we need music? - traditional music is used in vast level
3 - Hi. Jiya. For your essay, I am not sure about how ielts essay pattern should be organized. But...
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 11, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|"Education is the key to success" discuss your view about this.
3 - I think your ideas and how you organize your essay is good. But you should concentrate about paraphase and...
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Apr 7, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|'Online classes versus conventional classes' - my argumentative essay
Writing Feedbackskarlet - Apr 11, 2012 / missy7779 - Apr 11, 2012
|IELTS Question: Freedom of Creative Artists: restriction or not?
9 - Hi there, thank you for your message. I have no problem to your opinion. But my conclusion is...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Mar 16, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012
|IELTS: early retirement for 55+ employees to help younger people
7 - Thank you for your message. It is undeniable some IELTS examiners prefer to read a clear objective essay rather...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Mar 15, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012
|IELTS: Government should contol Violent Movies and TV programs?
3 - Thank you for your message. "Actually, this is correct in many real life situation. " this is my...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Mar 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012
|IELTS topic. Smoking tobacco, like other dangerous drugs, should be made illegal.
4 - How about video games, the Internet, coffee, or sweets? All of these can be 'addicting and killing habit'...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Team - Apr 11, 2012
|'all companies want to have a good business life' - Importance of Business Strategy
Writing FeedbackCanGokalp - Apr 11, 2012 / CanGokalp - Apr 11, 2012
|GRE issue question about the value of scandals
3 - thank you! i am trying to prepare for the GRE and am quite nervous..more essays to come..please keep reading...
Writing Feedbackjharris1125 - Apr 10, 2012 / jharris1125 - Apr 11, 2012
|Fatherless Essay (occurrences in my life)
4 - Periodically, I find myself daydreaming about my male parent, and how his warm embraces and a decent conversationswith him...
Writing Feedbackaishol - Apr 9, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 11, 2012
|'opinions regarding world culture' - essay for TOEFL
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|IELTS topic. Testing on animals and keeping them in unnatural conditions
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 10, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 11, 2012
|Ielts Task 2: About one or more Careers; Which is better?
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 9, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 11, 2012
|Case Analysis on International Trade Law - Research essay comment
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|An Essay About Maintaining Peace
4 - Thanks to both of you. I've rewritten the beginning. I' definitely going to do some more thorough research. Unfortunately,...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 10, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 11, 2012
|Essay on cooperation between nations
3 - Thanks lot Susan for the encouragements. I wish u spare little time to my new essay shortly. I don't...
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Apr 10, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 11, 2012
|Nowadays children have too much freedom. Economic problem and self-earning?
4 - Just an idea, The current world moves fast and is materialistic, with prices soaring for the necessities of life;...
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Mar 31, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 11, 2012
|Common Forms of Fraud
2 - Common Forms of Fraud In that case fraud sometimes comes first. Fraud is illegalI would omit such a...
Writing Feedbacksrtheesa - Apr 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 10, 2012
|"I'm so glad I found another person" - input on my short story
2 - A different approach or suggestion just to get you started. I'm not the best in grammar either so please...
Writing Feedbackhairywombat - Apr 10, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 10, 2012
|How Computer Affects My Life
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 9, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 10, 2012
|classification of clothing into three categories
Writing Feedbackveronicamosquer - Apr 9, 2012 / veronicamosquer - Apr 10, 2012
|Analyze an Argument for GRE--Riverside Recreational Facilities
6 - Hellow every one.I'm very eager to study the pattern of essay writting?Is there any rules for the five paragraph...
Writing Feedbackchalumeau - Mar 31, 2012 / srtheesa - Apr 10, 2012
|Essay about: Friends I have had
5 - I have a question very important. For what purpose did you write this essay? For some tests or undergraduate...
Writing FeedbackSaid Alwaili - Apr 1, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 10, 2012
|IELTS: Citizen's responsibilities
5 - You should try to strengthen your 2nd paragraph. Add examples to convince the readers....otherwise its a nice work...
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|Houston is not a Best Place to Visiting - essay
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 5, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 9, 2012
|'End of the world 2012' - my research writing
Writing FeedbackTimmy102 - Apr 5, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 9, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY - 'News editors should broadcast & print a mixture'
3 - Thanks a lot Jennifer! I really like your suggestions & i'l try my best to follow this. Hope u...
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 8, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 9, 2012
|Accident or Murder? The corruption on the entertainment business.
2 - Was Anna killed or was it just an accident? Doing research has lead me to believe that it was...
Writing Feedbackjallen18 - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|The life in Perth
2 - I have lived in Perth since I arrived. I have studied English at the Curtin University for two weeks...
Writing Feedbackissaouy - Apr 6, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|IELTS 'Parents and schooling is also essential to teach children'
Writing Feedbackvivianwei - Apr 8, 2012 / vivianwei - Apr 9, 2012
|'blessed by uncle for being so alert' - The greatest achievement of my life
Writing FeedbackNitish - Apr 8, 2012 / Nitish - Apr 8, 2012
|'Everyone considers that the perfect job is..' - essay
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|'a 80 years old widow had won five million dollars' - lucky person essay
3 - Hi Jeecee, Your passage is very interesting. It stimulates my thoughts and I really like it! By...
Writing FeedbackJeecee - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS topic. Modern society benefits greatly from computer technology.
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 7, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS (no country can progress without the co-operation of other countries)
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 7, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS; Problem with tutoring job/ issue with part-time job
4 - Hi jaijagadeesh, You have an affluent set of vocabularies. I've learnt so much from you... thank you very...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS: Amount of control on media information
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Mar 31, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|The Meaning of Silence- a research project
NEW - This is supposed to be a research project on The Meaning of Silence. 20 marks goes to the structure...
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|What is happiness? Why is it difficult to define?
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012
|Narrative/Description Essay About An Unforgettable Vacation
4 - Furthermore, on this vacation, I was aware of how fear I was when I reached nearly to the dead....
Writing FeedbackNettie - Mar 15, 2012 / huongdoan - Apr 7, 2012
|Toefl writing: to become well-informed, don't rely on one source of news information
Writing FeedbackRomera - Mar 26, 2012 / Romera - Apr 7, 2012
|Are you too dependent on computers? [Argumentative essay outline + work]
5 - Can you give some statistic to prove your point that we are dependent to computer like how many hours...
Writing FeedbackDen - Mar 30, 2012 / bansmart06 - Apr 6, 2012
|'Jared High and I used to be best friends' - bullying cause and effect essay
4 - Thank you for fixing my mistakes. My teacher does not say about citation so you can skip it. She...
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|Essay on what shoud mass media broadcast on TV?
NEW - Mass media undoubtedly plays an important and crucial role in our diurnal life. All the various segments of the...
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|Should students be given homework daily?; 'enhancing understanding, awareness'
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