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|Short essay about air pollution
4 - Dear Anis, First of all, I am not sure your writing is stick to question's requirement . I think...
Writing Feedbackchlorof4 - Dec 21, 2011 / phuongthao15389 - Dec 23, 2011
|The other family in our house
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Dec 17, 2011 / Rajiv - Dec 22, 2011
|IELTS - we should not let technology and make our lives simple?
5 - both of statement in question is right, one hand, technology has dramatically improved the how we live in you...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 10, 2011 / apidjakfar - Dec 22, 2011
|Ielts graph_how the UK spent their time in the year 1982
3 - Thank you Susan, you're really dedicated to helping other people with writing skills (me involved) :D. Wish you have...
Writing Feedbackprincedynasty - Dec 21, 2011 / princedynasty - Dec 22, 2011
|"I saw my life flash before my eyes" - PERSONAL
2 - Ok, so I think it's definitely really well written and I love all the figurative language and allusions you...
Writing Feedbacktrgcook - Dec 21, 2011 / Alikap - Dec 21, 2011
|'giving international aid to poor countries' - IELTS
5 - you should avoid repeating the structure "there exist". maybe putting all the benefits into one paragraph and considering more...
Writing Feedbackswami12345 - Dec 18, 2011 / princedynasty - Dec 21, 2011
|Communication save our time without spending a lot of time in long distances or in traffic jams
3 - misinterpret -> misinterpretation These gestures have meaning which are related to the topic of conversation,-> you can use non-verbal...
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Dec 17, 2011 / princedynasty - Dec 21, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY_should children be taught to be co-operative or competitive?
3 - Susan, Thank you for your quick reply, which I have never expected. This English forum is really effective with...
Writing Feedbackprincedynasty - Dec 20, 2011 / princedynasty - Dec 20, 2011
|TOEFL - People work to earn money to have welfare
3 - To catch the idea why the organization works and how you can use that info to your advantage of...
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Dec 19, 2011 / Smiksha - Dec 20, 2011
|Paragraph Structure - Two Options - what is best or maybe propose a third?
2 - In many languages, the basic unit of cotent is the paragraph. A paragraph includes certain sentences which are arranged...
Writing FeedbackColin_S - Dec 19, 2011 / Smiksha - Dec 20, 2011
|Rising Sun Camp Essay
NEW - The topic of this essay is what position would you see yourself in 50 years if you changed how...
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|'Moin!' - Essay about cultural identity
2 - When you walk on the pier of Hamburg's harbor on a cloudy morning and somebody nods to you, saying...
Writing FeedbackEumi - Dec 19, 2011 / snowfairy10 - Dec 19, 2011
|Listening greater kinds, forms of music than ever; Traditional vs International
6 - whether traditional music outweighs International music ->whether traditional music outweight International music or not First of all, we...
Writing Feedbackprincedynasty - Dec 14, 2011 / lllpppricky - Dec 19, 2011
|GOVERNMENT SHOULD FOCUSMORE ON PREVENTIVE HEALTH
Writing Feedbackmuktimukti - Dec 18, 2011 / muktimukti - Dec 18, 2011
|IELTS:C7T2: Should there be fixed punishments for each type of crime?
3 - It is a collective noun, so you should use the singular form of the verb. When ever you collect...
Writing Feedbacksmilectt - Dec 16, 2011 / pitt4life01 - Dec 17, 2011
|PARENTS or TEACHERS? Who's responsible for making children good citizens?
2 - Discuss(Disscussions) about how to teach children may involve all the aspects of education.One of the discussion(s) is who have(has)...
Writing Feedbackspiritgg - Dec 17, 2011 / smilectt - Dec 17, 2011
|An essay about Pancreatic cancer
Writing Feedbackdon omar - Dec 17, 2011 / soroushx2x - Dec 17, 2011
|'Work too much?' - Ielts what contribute to job satisfaction?
4 - If you are preparing forIELTS you have to follow this rules: Your essay should have a introduction, at least...
Writing Feedbackhyperione - Nov 30, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 17, 2011
|Ielts 'fast food is becoming more and more popular even though it's junk'
4 - Dear milamiyamiila I completely disagree with the idea of avoid using Firstly, secondly, ... Because I am preparing for...
Writing Feedbackmilamiyamiila - Dec 14, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 17, 2011
|Ability to learn from own disappointments is key to personal growth; AP Calculus
NEW - Prompt: The ability to learn from one's disappointments is key to personal growth and success. Tell us about what...
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|The same necessity of giving money to libraries and sport
Writing Feedbacksoroushx2x - Dec 16, 2011 / soroushx2x - Dec 16, 2011
|Something for my Creative Writing Portfolio. "Meet me there."
NEW - The soil is richer there. It hasn't been touched by the invisible hands of coorperations. The sneering greed of...
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|Important ceremony - Vietnam graduation from high-school
2 - Please re-read it you will find the mistakes yourself. Still if you want, I shall help you. However...
Writing Feedbackjenly - Dec 16, 2011 / sohaibsiddiqui - Dec 16, 2011
|It is absolutely wrong to student to evaluate teacher's knowledge
Writing Feedbackshafi - Dec 15, 2011 / shafi - Dec 16, 2011
|How Writing Changed the World.
2 - Spoken languages were used thousands of years before languages began to be written. People have been now using...
Writing FeedbackDAV032195 - Dec 15, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 15, 2011
|'debate of modern genetic development' - AP English Analysis Essay
2 - Had he arranged the opposing quotes first, the reader would understand them to mean that eugenics development is inevitable,...
Writing FeedbackSohilShah - Dec 13, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 15, 2011
|TOEFL_Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more
2 - stellastella Thank you for your comment on my first essay at essayforum Now it's my turn :D although I'm...
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Dec 14, 2011 / princedynasty - Dec 15, 2011
|Should students who work very hard in a course earn very high grades,SAT WRITING
5 - I agree that general purpose of grading is complex topic.And -->, and we should provide that how we can...
Writing Feedbackmursel - Dec 14, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 15, 2011
|Good sense of humor plays an important role in people's life. Agree or not?
2 - take all of the SAT words out, you have to sound like your speaking colloquially to the reader, it...
Writing Feedbackrajankharel - Dec 14, 2011 / sjmiller1993 - Dec 14, 2011
|'the number CDs was saled' - description essay
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Dec 13, 2011 / lllpppricky - Dec 14, 2011
|A TOEFL topic essay, Should a professor focus on teaching or education?
2 - It is good answer, but I will reccomend for you to make introduction more longer and write hook in...
Writing Feedbackbbw - Dec 13, 2011 / ardak - Dec 13, 2011
|Expository essay - My opinion on cell phones
Writing Feedbacktsubaki016 - Dec 13, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 13, 2011
|TOEFL- The expression "Never,never give up" means keep trying and never stop working
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Dec 13, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 13, 2011
|A stereotype about America essay
3 - Just a few corrections: Americans are known for being patriotic, the people that will stand up for their...
Writing FeedbackEditor1010 - Nov 30, 2011 / collegesearcher - Dec 13, 2011
|Article - "Never stop Loving"
NEW - I need to write an interesting article about Animal Assistance Therapy, as we already had one so I decided...
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|'hesitate and miss good chance' TOEFL - Young People Enjoy Life more than older
4 - Hi It is better to use a pattern which is used in writing an academic essay First paragraph introduction,...
Writing Feedbackdelta - Dec 10, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 13, 2011
|'a request to produce new electronic device' - IELTS letter
3 - I am writing to request you to produce new electronic device for the Dick Smith electronic compay. I would...
Writing Feedbackroshan4 - Dec 11, 2011 / roshan4 - Dec 13, 2011
|Ruling The World With Ideas
3 - Thanks farina Ahmad, I am from Nigeria. I need you to suggest books that will enhance my writing ability....
Writing Feedbackmussy - Dec 11, 2011 / mussy - Dec 12, 2011
|'promote humanity and understanding among the people' - IELTS essay
NEW - Topic; Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagrees and thinks...
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|Without a clear goal to focus our energy and drive us to grow, we cease to be truly alive.
Writing Feedbackmursel - Dec 10, 2011 / purple_216 - Dec 11, 2011
|'a very beautiful young woman who is very ambitious' - Describing a friend
Writing FeedbackNii Kommey - Dec 6, 2011 / Nii Kommey - Dec 11, 2011
|Magazine article - "Road of Heart"
NEW - I need to write an article for a magazine about pets. It should be something about myself so here...
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|3 Hours-how 3 hours a week changed my life
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|IELTS essay - Whether children should go to school early or not
Writing Feedbackcsckid - Nov 29, 2011 / stmagar - Dec 10, 2011
|'the world of formidable evil, injustice and detest' - IELTS essay
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 8, 2011 / farina - Dec 10, 2011
|IELTS essay if children should be sent to school at an early age?
6 - Dear Farian, I think there are several problems in your writing: Firstly, You use too long and...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 7, 2011 / phuongthao15389 - Dec 9, 2011
|Essay about "at the city park"
Writing Feedbackteteh ayu - Dec 9, 2011 / Tobi - Dec 9, 2011
|success in life depends on active attitude
3 - This really doesn't say anything about you at ALL. Maybe you could talk about an encounter with failure, how...
Writing FeedbackJerah_85 - Dec 8, 2011 / leviator - Dec 9, 2011
|My Great Idea. Satirical Essay.
Writing FeedbackTownhopper - Dec 8, 2011 / kenyaboyfresh - Dec 8, 2011
|Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified
3 - EF_Susan first ! Nowadays, mostly animals are used for testing cosmetic products. >>> here, i think ! Nowadays ,...
Writing Feedbackmursel - Nov 28, 2011 / sniper_moon - Dec 8, 2011
|Should people always follow fashion?
3 - i can't agree more about the content of this essay , i firmly believe that following fashion is only...
Writing FeedbackTobi - Dec 8, 2011 / sniper_moon - Dec 8, 2011
|Cooking - Activity done for the pleasure
Writing Feedbackamanjain14 - Dec 8, 2011 / mursel - Dec 8, 2011
|The Achievement of Desire, response paper
Writing Feedbacknini89 - Dec 7, 2011 / Tobi - Dec 8, 2011
|'Better to attend a small college or a large university?' - TOEFL Essay
3 - Hi buddy, You can some particular points to your essay probably. 1. A bigger university will have a more...
Writing Feedbackkarthik21 - Nov 8, 2011 / ajit88rai - Dec 8, 2011
|'new international knowledge and experience' - The reason for studying abroad
Writing FeedbackDiyorbek - Dec 6, 2011 / Diyorbek - Dec 8, 2011
|IELTS should fathers take care of the children while their wives work?
3 - Buddy, after reading your whole essay, I am really finding it difficult to see what opinion you are having?...
Writing Feedbackhyperione - Nov 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Dec 8, 2011
|Two hundred years.. the British ruled our people
5 - I hope I am not interrupting you Mr. Rajiv. However don't you think it was our own inferiority that...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Dec 1, 2011 / ajit88rai - Dec 8, 2011
|How is your generation different from your parents generation? Differences?
3 - Introduction: It is crystal clear that our generation has many differences from our parents' generation in such ways as...
Writing Feedbackhedieh - Dec 7, 2011 / hedieh - Dec 8, 2011
|Because environmental issues are too complex, individuals can do nothing about them.
3 - Thanks a lot!!! Response was so fast :) I wanna reduce my mistakes and improve writing ability. I think...
Writing Feedbacklento333 - Dec 7, 2011 / lento333 - Dec 7, 2011
|ielts chart - information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Dec 4, 2011 / phuongthao15389 - Dec 7, 2011
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