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|Learning foreign language in your own country or in the country which it is spoke
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Sep 15, 2011 / executive101 - Sep 15, 2011
|"coming from small village in Trinidad' - A profile about myself
NEW - I grew up in small village in Trinidad which is mainly dominated by Indians. In an Indian cultured home,...
Writing FeedbackRajsingh - Sep 15, 2011 / — -
|Essay: Going abroad for studying or not?
2 - There seems to be a few grammatical mistakes. for ex- newly is not a proper word, it should be...
Writing Feedbacksabrinayaa - Sep 14, 2011 / anik4546 - Sep 15, 2011
|ielts - what should the government do to make the country more successful
2 - Hence, the government must provide its citizens with rights of freedom. For example, to choose their own rulers, provided...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Sep 15, 2011 / soshianet - Sep 15, 2011
|In a team, those who do not accpet others' criticism cannot achieve success. Toefl.
Writing Feedbackdjyhu - Sep 13, 2011 / soshianet - Sep 15, 2011
|TOEFL-Is Money the most important aspect of a job?
9 - People should consider an occupation that they are passionate ABOUT in order to avoid an insipid life. Assuming...
Writing Feedbackbasawang - Sep 11, 2011 / Geenesh - Sep 15, 2011
|TOEFL- 'efforts are just in vain' - best way to improve the quality of education
NEW - Money can be a very powerful motivation for people's efficiency. It is common sense or a convention accepted by...
Writing Feedbackfannie88 - Sep 15, 2011 / — -
|GMAT essay--whether offensive words and behavior should be censored
NEW - "In some countries, television and radio programs are carefully censored for offensive language and behavior. In other countries, there...
Writing Feedbackfannie88 - Sep 15, 2011 / — -
|There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person. Do you agree
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Sep 9, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Sep 15, 2011
|[TOEFL] A professor with a good sense of humour is more successful in teaching
NEW - subject: Do you agree or disagree that a serious and strict is more effective than a teacher with humor...
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|"a cruise with my boyfriend" - Describe your perfect vacation
Writing Feedbackrchadwick - Sep 14, 2011 / djyhu - Sep 14, 2011
|'everything appears to be fun' - childhood is the happiest time of a person's life
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Sep 14, 2011 / djyhu - Sep 14, 2011
|SPENDING Money is easier than SAVING Money
2 - Enjoying money is much easier than saving, but you should have enough saved money for enjoying it These days,...
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Sep 14, 2011 / soshianet - Sep 14, 2011
|IELTS: people are losing their moral values
3 - the living quality -> word choice: living standard/ life quality concern anything -> concern about anything it would...
Writing Feedbackncm - Sep 2, 2011 / oonguyenminh - Sep 14, 2011
|Is money the most important aspect of a job? I THINK SO!
Writing Feedbackkarremflores - Sep 12, 2011 / karremflores - Sep 14, 2011
|TOEFL - Where should children grow up? Countryside or Big city?
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Sep 13, 2011 / mhh2531 - Sep 14, 2011
|'technology does not deteriorate the ability of humans to think' GRE essay
Writing Feedbackaleks - Sep 13, 2011 / aleks - Sep 14, 2011
|"gender equality should not be the concern" equal numbers of male and female students
2 - I have a few tips for you from reading your essay. In my experience, having a range of different...
Writing Feedbackmark83 - Sep 9, 2011 / CarrieC92 - Sep 14, 2011
|TOEFL- The importance of learning process - Do students need to attend classes?
NEW - Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should...
Writing Feedbackbasawang - Sep 13, 2011 / — -
|Reward for the performance of employees is a way of management (article review)
Writing Feedbacksoshianes - Sep 13, 2011 / soshianet - Sep 13, 2011
|[Toefl] One change that should be remembered about 20th century...
4 - You should write uppercase the first letter of these words "facebook", "orkut", "bing", "linkedin". As the basawang says these...
Writing Feedbackcombatant - Sep 13, 2011 / abc1400 - Sep 13, 2011
|IELTS: arranged marriage or not? Which system is better?
6 - However, the couple has not choice, leading to an imposed life which is un likely to not match personal...
Writing Feedbackmrscatoni - Sep 11, 2011 / marucat - Sep 13, 2011
|Freedom of artists-ielts task 2
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Sep 12, 2011 / beepro21 - Sep 13, 2011
|A profile article on an Idol's contestant who made it to the top 9
Writing Feedbackkhumalo - Sep 12, 2011 / khumalo - Sep 13, 2011
|TOEFL - Universities should give money to sport activities or libraries
2 - Dear abc1400, I revised your introduction as follows: Libraries and sport activities both play important roles in...
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Sep 12, 2011 / basawang - Sep 13, 2011
|IELTS - Firm discipline is a necessary part of teaching children . agree or disagree
2 - For this case i agree in firm discipline,but it depends in how you handled it,and how the way you...
Writing Feedbacknotaoom - Sep 12, 2011 / karremflores - Sep 12, 2011
|"a nail technician is not an easy and pleasant job" - why I dislike my job
2 - People always says , "A nail technician is a healthy and beautiful professional, who works to improve and decorate...
Writing Feedbackvsam - Sep 11, 2011 / Belle15 - Sep 12, 2011
|make comments or even criticism on teachers or not ----IELTS
Writing FeedbackIcecreamquest - Sep 9, 2011 / Icecreamquest - Sep 12, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY - GOVERNMENT SUPPORTING ARTISTS
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Sep 11, 2011 / khumalo - Sep 12, 2011
|Ielts test: compare three of these communicating tools and choose the best effective
7 - Dear Mai Chu, Your reasoning is unfounded. In the forth paragraph, you mentioned two advantages of films. The...
Writing FeedbackMai Chu - Aug 29, 2011 / basawang - Sep 11, 2011
|health risk assessment of fifty respondents [graph]
NEW - This graph illustrate about sample of health risk assessment of fifty respondent in age ranged between 20 years old...
Writing Feedbackalya - Sep 11, 2011 / — -
|"taking a break before starting higher education is a good idea" - IELTS
5 - Thanks Geenesh for your inputs/corrections. Thanks so much!! Thanks mrscatoni for pointing out the informality in my paragraph....
Writing Feedbackritu_168 - Sep 7, 2011 / ritu_168 - Sep 11, 2011
|Legal Studies Essay (Legalisation of Prostitution)
2 - Though it is generally tolerated, it is frowned upon in many societies for numerous reasons. it is sorta...
Writing Feedbackdancebaby279 - Sep 11, 2011 / ucfdream16 - Sep 11, 2011
|TOEFL-To eat at a restaurant or at home? What do you prefer?
5 - Dear isabellaclaudia, I can develop another paragraph about the advantage, but I am afraid that I will...
Writing Feedbackbasawang - Sep 10, 2011 / basawang - Sep 11, 2011
|IELTS - QUALITIES A PERSON NEED TO BE SUCCESSFUL
2 - The qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Sep 11, 2011 / mrscatoni - Sep 11, 2011
|World's economic status and lack of jobs - reasons for going to college or university
4 - Thank you to everybody. I just discover that even On conclusion is wrong...In conclusion is the right way.thank for...
Writing Feedbackmrscatoni - Sep 1, 2011 / mrscatoni - Sep 11, 2011
|traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods(agree/disagree)
2 - if you are writing IELTS essay, i think in your introduction, u should state to what extent do you...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1991 - Sep 8, 2011 / Geenesh - Sep 11, 2011
|"the young boy with a lady" - Dreams (narrative)
Writing FeedbackGladys1620 - Sep 3, 2011 / Angelad2012 - Sep 11, 2011
|TOEFL - The government should support science research
12 - I think you got a nice start though strating with 'some people' are generic.. however, i feel that conclusion...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 26, 2011 / hjy222 - Sep 10, 2011
|Toefl - Topic: Some young adults want independence from their parents quickly
NEW - Topic: Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live...
Writing Feedbackkrista - Sep 10, 2011 / — -
|Toefl-the best way to improve the education is to improve the salary of teachers
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in...
Writing Feedbackemma102 - Sep 10, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL-Television is the culprit for destroying communication between friends& family.
2 - most of the people do not have a plan for make a limitation or schedule for watching television. I...
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Sep 9, 2011 / soshianet - Sep 9, 2011
|TOEFL - "a chance of cooking" - food has become easier to prepare.
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Sep 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Sep 9, 2011
|People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons people work.
5 - yup u r right....i m not satisfied with my writhing skills,though i m going to write toefl on 18th...
Writing Feedbackwinchesters - Sep 9, 2011 / winchesters - Sep 9, 2011
|"majority of men would like to see additional sports programs on television" KICK GRE
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Sep 9, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Sep 9, 2011
|IELTS TOPIC:crime is a global problem .we can do nothing to prevent it .
3 - Nowadays, people wants the peaceful and safe lifelives .however,the fact always fail to satisified.even ,some people dsipoint about this...
Writing Feedbackzhangludan - Sep 9, 2011 / BarbieTsu - Sep 9, 2011
|Toefl essay: Playing computer games is a waste of time
NEW - it is no longer notorious as people think Because of the quick progress of computer science, subsequently coming...
Writing Feedbackyvonne2930 - Sep 9, 2011 / — -
|Children burden the hope of families and countries - be a good member of society
5 - don't give examples in brackets....write for instance in place of e.g and continue without brackets. >> From winchesters's...
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Sep 9, 2011 / BarbieTsu - Sep 9, 2011
|TOEFL-Work with a group of people on a team or to work independently
6 - Dear Asmita, I appreciate your valuable comment. Your revision clearly illustrates why cooperation is inevitable. Also, your word...
Writing Feedbackbasawang - Sep 8, 2011 / basawang - Sep 9, 2011
|IELTS Topic: Impact of International Tourism
4 - The essay has gracefully presented the social impacts of International Tourism which is true in most cases of developing...
Writing Feedbackthread_a - Sep 8, 2011 / Asmita_ - Sep 9, 2011
|TOEFL-Face-to-face communication is of great importance
Writing Feedbackbasawang - Sep 8, 2011 / winchesters - Sep 9, 2011
|Authority, professionalism, and preplanning -an important skill a person should learn
4 - Dear Winchesters, I look up in the dictionary and some Internet resources. I believe the correct spelling...
Writing Feedbackwinchesters - Sep 8, 2011 / basawang - Sep 9, 2011
|Definition paper - we have to explain a party through denotation and connotation
NEW - Prompt - to define a party by playing between the denotative and connotative meanings without using the words beer,...
Writing Feedbackjleu - Sep 8, 2011 / — -
|Technology makes our life to be more convenient and colorful, brings lots of benefits to children
4 - Practice makes perfect. I think you should do some grammar exercises and practice writing skills more. You can rewrite...
Writing Feedbackcarolyn1219 - Sep 1, 2011 / beepro21 - Sep 8, 2011
|"my first flight lesson" - Writing a memoir for my composition class
5 - This is where I really struggle because I find it hard to have a true emotional attachment to things...
Writing FeedbackKaramKozim - Sep 7, 2011 / KaramKozim - Sep 8, 2011
|Happiness-is it difficult to define? ielts task2
5 - Thank you so much for your ideas. Maybe, we have different viewpoints of the topic. I get your points...
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Sep 8, 2011 / beepro21 - Sep 8, 2011
|Statement of purpose for PHD in Mechanical eng - US
NEW - Hi guys, i have written a statement of purpose which needs grammatical and structure correction , can you...
Writing Feedbacksrd4ban - Sep 8, 2011 / — -
|Toefl essay-I prefer the movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain.
5 - it is depended....it depends which type of movies...which type of movie no need to write A before tremendous don't...
Writing Feedbackloveoaple - Sep 2, 2011 / winchesters - Sep 8, 2011
|Traditional skills and lifestyles-ielts test 2
NEW - Please check my writing and help me improve it! I highly appreciate your help! When a country develops its...
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Sep 8, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL- What subject is the most important for students?
3 - Dear abc1400, Thanks for your comment. I agree with you that the topic sentence is not clear enough....
Writing Feedbackbasawang - Sep 7, 2011 / basawang - Sep 7, 2011
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