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|Is pollution a concern of the government, the society or the individual?
2 - Besides the almost rhythmic pattern of your sentences, everything looks good. Your content is great. Personally I would mix...
Writing Feedbackyanigarcia - Nov 11, 2011 / M_Marie - Nov 13, 2011
|Write an essay about weather technology makes out lives easier.
3 - pretty good, a little more explanation Although technology has made some aspects of life easier, it has not...
Writing Feedbacknicodorable - Nov 12, 2011 / danny411 - Nov 13, 2011
|'Knockout' My mid- term essay on my autobiographical incident.
Writing Feedbackjobo - Nov 12, 2011 / jobo - Nov 13, 2011
|The role of parents is significant. They teach their children how to live and face problems.
4 - Each (plays) major (role), but among them parents have the most strongest(or profound ,or noticeable) impact on their future....
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Nov 10, 2011 / fabaca - Nov 13, 2011
|(History books) what kind of reading do you prefer?
3 - Well I think you did a good job, especially describing your favourite subject and you gave strong points. Although...
Writing Feedbackmojde - Nov 12, 2011 / nicodorable - Nov 12, 2011
|Addiction of computer leads to ignorence of family
Writing Feedbackyunus - Nov 6, 2011 / yunus - Nov 12, 2011
|One man's terrorist is another's freedom fighter
3 - Thanks for the response, I ended up doing well on the overall exam. This was 1 of 4 questions....
Writing Feedbackbrohammer26 - Oct 31, 2011 / brohammer26 - Nov 12, 2011
|Are people overly influenced by misleading images? Score my SAT essay:
3 - The question is more about intentional deception, which is why the examples of business leaders and advertisers were used....
Writing FeedbackDanny154 - Oct 26, 2011 / fiametta00 - Nov 12, 2011
|IELTS- TWO VIEWS ESSAY ABOUT TECHNOLOGY
2 - To begin with, it cannot be denied that technology may have negative effects on human health. Use the computer...
Writing FeedbackK88 - Nov 11, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 12, 2011
|'television is nothing more than entertainment' - SAMPLE QUESTION FROM IELTS
NEW - Some people believe that television is a powerful educational tool. Other people believe that television is nothing more than...
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|'Life without such little creatures as pets' - IELTS
Writing FeedbackAnuar KZ - Nov 10, 2011 / Anuar KZ - Nov 11, 2011
|IELTS Essay about British and Australian laws re criminal records
Writing Feedbacktsaida - Nov 7, 2011 / tsaida - Nov 10, 2011
|TOEFL-Schools should teach students about specific jobs or general subjects
Writing Feedbackmelody_2204 - Nov 10, 2011 / melody_2204 - Nov 10, 2011
|English 107 - money can't buy long-term happiness
3 - Doctors and lawyers are people, while "jobs" are not, making this part of the sentence incorrect. You could...
Writing FeedbackAddow - Nov 10, 2011 / Guest - Nov 10, 2011
|Factors that influence the decisions of news editors who control news on TV & papers
2 - News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What ---It's important to remember...
Writing Feedbacktintukuriakose - Nov 7, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 10, 2011
|Promoting Firearm Safety in Children, A personal essay about a "Radical Act"
2 - In my opinion I feel that gun safety should be taught to all people, especially to families and homes...
Writing Feedbackjohnnymayer - Nov 6, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 10, 2011
|Should we increase punishments for youth's crime?
3 - you need to explain more on what u mean when u say prevention is more effective than increasing punishment...
Writing Feedbackvangphu - Nov 9, 2011 / Addow - Nov 10, 2011
|'A small truck ran over a two-year-old girl' - This is argument essay
Writing Feedbackthaolam77 - Nov 5, 2011 / Jhangir - Nov 9, 2011
|TOEFL - Teenagers have jobs while they are students? UNICEF discourages states
NEW - TOEFL - In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a...
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|Universities should teach students about their chosen degree subject
NEW - I will appreciate your advices. thank u in advance! Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?...
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|employees for entire live? I completely disagree; people get old during time
3 - Each company, business and enterprise uses their own method and strategy to make progress. One of the most important...
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Nov 9, 2011 / abc1400 - Nov 9, 2011
|TOEFL-course grades are based solely on exams while in other classes on participation
3 - There are several ways for professors to assess their students. They either can give an exam at the end...
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Nov 8, 2011 / abc1400 - Nov 9, 2011
|Education: teachers have more influence than parents
Writing FeedbackAbzal - Nov 6, 2011 / stellastella - Nov 9, 2011
|A sense of competition is necessary for success in life, and should therefore be encouraged.
NEW - Statement: Competition or co-operation? --------- Would like to ask for correction from all of you! Thank from my heart!...
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|Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are not.
4 - The grammar is pretty good. I pointed out a couple sentences that I thought could use some work. Nice...
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Nov 5, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 8, 2011
|The Old & New Testament - Compare/contrast Paragraph
Writing FeedbackKohana - Nov 6, 2011 / Kohana - Nov 8, 2011
|Topic - Suitable age for new language learning - IELTS
2 - It is common and sound nice to end up your essay with a conclusion. Try to begin your conclusion...
Writing FeedbackMohini - Nov 5, 2011 / stellastella - Nov 8, 2011
|'tackle complicated problmes'; Students with organized rooms are more succesful
2 - Hi If you are practicing for TOEFL exam you have to indicate your paragraph by phrases like To begin...
Writing Feedbackqier - Nov 8, 2011 / stellastella - Nov 8, 2011
|Only movies that can teach us about real life is worth watching.
Writing Feedbacklily wang - Nov 6, 2011 / lily wang - Nov 8, 2011
|TOEFL- Personal lives of people are affected by media
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspaper, magazine and other media pay too much attention...
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|College years remains fruitful over whole life
NEW - Hi everyone, Here is my essay.Please review my essay. I really appreciate your effort in advance. The college...
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|'Attitude for the changing world' Ielts Writing Task 2
Writing Feedbackdinhquangthinh - Nov 6, 2011 / ieltsbuddy - Nov 7, 2011
|Do not accept others' criticism cannot succeed?
Writing Feedbackamanda guo - Nov 6, 2011 / amanda guo - Nov 7, 2011
|TOEFL - For me eating at home is necessity and eating out is luxury
2 - For me eating at home is necessary and eating out is luxury. The main reason behind it is health....
Writing Feedbackrupsi - Nov 7, 2011 / ge1992113 - Nov 7, 2011
|Modern technology has made a negative impact on societies
4 - It`s my essay, almost about technology you can benefit if possible: boxca.com/5404ov48ozj8/21ci_esr.docx.html...
Writing Feedbacksepehr - Oct 3, 2011 / Husseinova - Nov 7, 2011
|receive the best direction and education from their parents as well as teachers
5 - Thanks you, Mohini. Admittedly that I thought of it when I was writting this essay, but I was really...
Writing Feedbackkirilenko - Nov 6, 2011 / kirilenko - Nov 7, 2011
|TOEFL - In general, people live longer now. Why?
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Nov 6, 2011 / Mohini - Nov 7, 2011
|Higher education is an indispensable part of today's society;Purpose of University Ed
2 - Students gain not only the necessary knowledge for their future careers, but also the life skills that are inevitably...
Writing Feedbackengnoob - Nov 1, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 7, 2011
|Second Lang Acquisition Position Statement (how do we learn 1st and 2nd lang?)
Writing FeedbackPrinnyS04 - Nov 2, 2011 / iamzj - Nov 6, 2011
|SHORT ESSAY Describe your favorite food- Instant-boiled mutton
8 - First: Describe what a crepe is. Second: Elaborate on what makes a crepe unique, yummy. Third: Wrap it up,...
Writing Feedbackayida365 - Sep 2, 2010 / vinhstuh - Nov 6, 2011
|toefl- professors should pay more attention on researching or education?
5 - I think it is better use this style in your writing: Introduction --- consider two different side of idea...
Writing Feedbackjcclscl - Oct 24, 2011 / abc1400 - Nov 6, 2011
|Things that people find boring and do not like to do can be required for them or benefit them. TOEFL
3 - I think it is better use this style in your writing: Introduction -> consider two different side of...
Writing Feedbackandy314 - Nov 1, 2011 / abc1400 - Nov 6, 2011
|'Heer - Ranja' - immortal love story
5 - a very fine introspection into love, indeed thought provoking. the way u expressed it was very nice btw...:)....
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 8, 2011 / abhikuravi - Nov 6, 2011
|Da Nang and Da Lat, Vietnam: Compare and contrast two places you have visited
Writing Feedbackdinhquangthinh - Nov 4, 2011 / dinhquangthinh - Nov 6, 2011
|Role ModelDaria presents a smart and mindful teenager; Essay on Role Model
2 - and pretending and to try to stray away from the crowd what society's perceiveptionabout to be influenced by thesocialsocieta...
Writing FeedbackEstarburst12 - Nov 5, 2011 / Prettywings - Nov 6, 2011
|Teenage pregnancy and sexual education at schools
2 - The overall message and content is very interesting. However, you can make this essay even stronger if you organize...
Writing Feedbackbdemerdan - Nov 4, 2011 / hesaves - Nov 4, 2011
|"Some pig!" (the power of language frames)
2 - ...Charlotte's Web by E. B. White is a children's book ->(I think that) a typical book for children (is...
Writing Feedbackb357 - Nov 3, 2011 / dinhquangthinh - Nov 4, 2011
|Ielts topic_Trying to save endangered animal is a waste of valuable resource
2 - Despite the undeniable cost of money and resource it may brought to in protecting them , IS NOT UNDERSTANDABLE...
Writing Feedbackwxq198820 - Nov 3, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 4, 2011
|Knowledge is more significant. Experience refers to a direct contact, often comes after a long time.
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Nov 1, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 4, 2011
|'Baby Tiger' - Analyzing an Advertisement
2 - As time goes on, the number of problems faced by conservationists continues to cultivate.---I could definitely be wrong, but...
Writing FeedbackChocodile - Oct 31, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 3, 2011
|work 3 days a week with long hours VS work 5 days a week with short hours
Writing Feedbackamanda guo - Nov 3, 2011 / natsheriff - Nov 3, 2011
|To Cheat or not to Cheat?
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|Private schools are better than public schools. "storytellers"
2 - also books, which Moreover, almost develop the educational system Gradually, schools dividesinto two groups choose a type of An...
Writing Feedbackaraikin - Nov 2, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 2, 2011
|Work and travel become new trend for youngsters these days.
NEW - In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and...
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|Essay about watching someone die. Odd, I know.
4 - My hopefully improved edit: Never would I have thought that the person who has impacted me the most...
Writing Feedbackelijahcrago - Oct 31, 2011 / elijahcrago - Nov 1, 2011
|4. A government's role is only to provide defense capability and urban infrastructure
2 - high- quality labor some might want to pursuitpursue highest educations, whereas others are satisfied with only a university degree....
Writing Feedbackthanhomenh_nq99 - Oct 29, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 1, 2011
|GRE:Educationors should dissuade students from pursuing fields unlikely to succeed.
5 - thanks for your advice my friend! I appreciate it more than I could say :P Your answer is kinda...
Writing Feedbackdaliqin - Oct 28, 2011 / daliqin - Nov 1, 2011
|Favorite Ride at Amusement Park and my Approach to Life
Writing Feedbackrifatmursalin - Oct 31, 2011 / blynnleon - Oct 31, 2011
|Mothers have and will always impact our lives
Writing Feedbackjuliajohnson12 - Oct 31, 2011 / amanda guo - Oct 31, 2011
|TOEFL:The expression "Never, never give up"
4 - Hi; Indeed, development is the most important purpose of human, such as develop in medicine, technology, and so on....
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Oct 28, 2011 / bahareh - Oct 31, 2011
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