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|Topic 1: Traditional food is undergoing great changes and being replaced by new diets.
4 - @Oscar Tam Thank you for your advice. It has a good point in your idea that I haven't thought...
Writing FeedbackTamia - Mar 2, 2018 / Tamia - Mar 12, 2018
|The great advertising affects people's willing of purchasing - Ielts work
5 - HI LUCY, Your essay actually seems fine with advanced vocabulary as well as approriate organization that follow Ielts...
Writing FeedbackLUCYLUCY - Mar 10, 2018 / Sophia Yang - Mar 12, 2018
|Evaluate viable solutions to the problem of workplace stress.
NEW - Could anyone give me some feedback about my essay? Thank you and have a good day! reducing stress...
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|When people fail at schools, it doesn't mean that they miss a chance to reach success in the future
Writing FeedbackOscar Tam - Mar 10, 2018 / Oscar Tam - Mar 11, 2018
|Raising Successful Children. [IELTS Writing Task2 ] Children are require to help with household task
2 - The given topic shows a statement, (no need ",") that some parents require their children to give a help...
Writing FeedbackBarneywu - Mar 7, 2018 / chiehpower - Mar 10, 2018
|Should we learn a foreign language? Provide your thoughts.
4 - Thanks for your advice. It is very helpful for me, but I think that writing the essay within 40...
Writing Feedbackchiehpower - Mar 7, 2018 / chiehpower - Mar 10, 2018
|In today's society, success is often measured in terms of wealth and possessions. Is it right?
Writing Feedbacklvi - Mar 6, 2018 / chlu - Mar 10, 2018
|Questions about transitions of paragraphs and ideas in personal statement for CDC job
2 - Shristi, your first two paragraphs are irrelevant to the prompt questions. The questions posed before you all require you...
Writing Feedbackshumagai - Mar 6, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Education should be free for everyone. Do you Agree or disagree? Write an essay to present your idea
4 - Pham, your essay is wrong from the very beginning. The prompt paraphrase is incomplete and / or inaccurate. I...
Writing Feedbackmeocon800 - Mar 4, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Loan for a music club [GRE Argument] I am new to GRE and need help on AWA writing
Writing Feedbackchlu - Mar 6, 2018 / chlu - Mar 8, 2018
|Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case?
5 - Alex, in a direct question essay, you must always refer to the discussion type when you develop your draft...
Writing Feedbackalecen - Mar 3, 2018 / Holt - Mar 8, 2018
|Studying in foreign countries gradually become an upward trend - a positive one or not?
3 - Ha, a completely accurate discussion review of your essay cannot be completed without the complete prompt requirement. I need...
Writing Feedbackhathubui2001 - Mar 3, 2018 / Holt - Mar 8, 2018
|A recent movement in education has been called "Back to Basics." Current curriculum controversy.
3 - @sungin115 I am going to review this as an actual research paper and not an English grammar exam since...
Writing Feedbacksungin115 - Mar 2, 2018 / Holt - Mar 8, 2018
|Effects of TV on positive or negative culture
3 - Rosita, the choice of discussion comes with the word "or" separating the two opinions. That word indicates that this...
Writing Feedbackrosita12 - Mar 2, 2018 / Holt - Mar 8, 2018
|IELTS | TASK 2 | Full-time education until adulthood/18 years old
2 - The opening paragraph should not present an opinion coming from the writers, as you did, in the topic paragraph.The...
Writing Feedbacksumomoakiko - Mar 1, 2018 / Holt - Mar 7, 2018
|New, modern buildings - is it a good investment?
Writing FeedbackIrisyLuna - Feb 13, 2018 / Ashkan123 - Mar 6, 2018
|Essay: A TRIP TO THE COUNTRYSIDE - the most amazing experience I ever had
Writing FeedbackHappyBoy2003 - Mar 4, 2018 / HappyBoy2003 - Mar 5, 2018
|The internet and its effect on academic learning
3 - Thanks for sending your essay here. Please allow me to give you some valuable feedback towards the essay posted....
Writing Feedbackrosita12 - Mar 3, 2018 / eddies - Mar 5, 2018
|Ielts Essay : Brain drain from poor countries - seeking for solutions
Writing Feedbacksenuthilini - Feb 26, 2018 / senuthilini - Mar 5, 2018
|Should women have the right to join the army? Their motherhood role may be affected. IELTS question
2 - Hey Jawad. You certainly have some interesting ideas for the essay. The errors that I find are mainly...
Writing FeedbackRumi2020 - Mar 4, 2018 / DoctorWho - Mar 4, 2018
|Parents of obese children should be punished for making their children fat? Do you agree or disagree
Writing Feedbackxuanlengoc - Feb 28, 2018 / Ashkan123 - Mar 4, 2018
|Computer skills vs three integral subjects which have always been taught in education
2 - Yuka, this is a pretty good presentation that fails in only one aspect. As this is an "extent" essay,...
Writing Feedbackmelody14 - Mar 1, 2018 / Holt - Mar 2, 2018
|In modern society, ambition is more and more important? How important is ambition for success?
2 - Hoang, is this essay for an IELTS or TOEFL test? Please tell me what test this essay is meant...
Writing Feedbackminhphuong275 - Feb 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|The best way to study English - the most popular language in the world
2 - Elena, this is a pretty good presentation. You have a clear flow of thought coming out of every paragraph....
Writing Feedbackgreetings - Feb 28, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|There's an opinion that the benefits of nuclear technology are more valuable than its disadvantages.
2 - Vu, your opening statement is highly confusing to read. You need to refrain from beginning the discussion in that...
Writing Feedbackvuhoang19 - Feb 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|Writing an essay about how to become a person with good writing skills
Writing Feedbackchanhtruc123 - Feb 26, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|IELTS, task2, Government payment for nursery homes.
3 - mazen, your opening statement is a bit in error when it comes to representing the opinion discussion. The prompt...
Writing Feedbackmazenteet123 - Feb 23, 2018 / Holt - Feb 27, 2018
|Essay about the choice of the people between following a healthy lifestyle and relying on medicine
Writing Feedbackdolelongan - Feb 26, 2018 / senuthilini - Feb 27, 2018
|A request letter for accommodation transfer to an another room
2 - adam, don't use a dictionary to write letters like these. Using terms such as "nocturnal" and "diurnal" indicate that...
Writing Feedbackadamjhons123 - Feb 23, 2018 / Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|The lack of discipline in universities is a serious problem today
2 - Long, you will not get a passing grade for this essay. The main reason for the failure of your...
Writing FeedbackOscar Tam - Feb 24, 2018 / Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|IELTS 2 - Solving food waste issue by raising awareness and generating energy
Writing Feedbackthuydungle - Feb 22, 2018 / happyfunny - Feb 25, 2018
|Qualities of a good person - faithful, responsible, kind, helpful...
2 - Phuong, if you are writing this essay only as a part of your English vocabulary development, then you have...
Writing FeedbackPhuong nguyen - Feb 23, 2018 / Holt - Feb 23, 2018
|Student Loan Debt, High Price to Pay For a Bright Future
3 - Claudia, this is not the sort of essay that is helped by telling a fictitious anecdote at the start....
Writing Feedbackcmartinez13 - Feb 22, 2018 / Holt - Feb 23, 2018
|The essay for CBEST about a rejection or defeat
3 - Thank you @ Holt for giving feedback. I have not passed the CBEST test yet, but it's just for...
Writing Feedbackbnilakshi101 - Feb 21, 2018 / bnilakshi101 - Feb 23, 2018
|How to Deal with Depression; Three bad influences
Writing FeedbackQiuChen - Feb 13, 2018 / box_wizard - Feb 22, 2018
|Essay about the contrast between current generation and my parents generation - IELTS
Writing Feedbackahmed_kishk - Feb 11, 2018 / cmartinez13 - Feb 22, 2018
|Descriptive essay: TEN MINUTES - a nuclear war scene topic
4 - @Holt Here is the revised version of this essay~ ((I'm quite worried that this turned out to be...
Writing Feedbackbox_wizard - Feb 20, 2018 / box_wizard - Feb 21, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Importance of Economics or Other Type of Progess
2 - Ying, this essay is lacking a proper opening paraphrase of the original prompt, an accurate 3 body paragraph discussion,...
Writing Feedbackying_chen - Feb 20, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|New Zealand and spending money - Ielts taks1 the pie chart
3 - weiling, aside from an incomplete summary overview, your essay also lacks a proper paragraph representation. You are prone to...
Writing Feedbackbig0321lala - Feb 19, 2018 / Holt - Feb 20, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: cause &solution- anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others
3 - Hi Kuan, For the two questions type of essay, I agree with your current paragraph structure. -Introduction -Main...
Writing Feedbackccalvin97 - Feb 19, 2018 / ying_chen - Feb 20, 2018
|Consumer Spending Trends and Statistics
2 - Hello Kien! It's very hard to judge your work without the graph/chart for analysis. Make sure you upload...
Writing Feedbackenorman - Feb 19, 2018 / DoctorWho - Feb 20, 2018
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
3 - Tra, your essay is missing an appropriate summary overview, that should have been the first paragraph of this essay....
Writing Feedbacknguyenthikimdung - Feb 18, 2018 / Holt - Feb 19, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Agree/Disagree Community Service as a part of study
2 - Hey!! You have a well written essay. I have a few suggestions to improve on your material. It's...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flip - Feb 16, 2018 / DoctorWho - Feb 19, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinions of the Constructing New or Existing Transportation
3 - Thank you for your detail explanation and point out the mistakes I made. I'll improve all the above you...
Writing Feedbackying_chen - Feb 16, 2018 / ying_chen - Feb 18, 2018
|Facebook, Twitter etcetera. What have they done to our society as a whole?
5 - @inderGTR Hi Thanks for your feedback could you elaborate it by giving me some examples? I would really appreciate...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Feb 11, 2018 / PeterBrown - Feb 18, 2018
|Ielts Writting Part 2: In many city, the population is increasing...
3 - Thank you very much Holt, I really got your points and understand it. I will try to do better....
Writing Feedbackminhtrang2710 - Feb 3, 2018 / minhtrang2710 - Feb 16, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Two Opinions of the Internet
3 - Hi, few of my suggestions 1. social media, such as Facebook, "L"ine and so forth. (Line should be...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flip - Feb 15, 2018 / ying_chen - Feb 16, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Agree or Disagree of Local Police Officer Recruitment
2 - Ulfa, you need to understand something important about the opening statement. This is always presented as a paraphrase of...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flip - Feb 14, 2018 / Holt - Feb 15, 2018
|Choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas or to focus on a single subject area?
3 - KevinLove, your English grammar is simple enough to warrant only a few minor corrections. You have 2 problems when...
Writing FeedbackStephenYoung - Feb 14, 2018 / Holt - Feb 15, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Causes and Solutions of International Tourism
2 - Ulfa, your opening statement is expressive but confusing to read due to your lack of English grammar knowledge. The...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flip - Feb 14, 2018 / Holt - Feb 15, 2018
|IELTS TASK 2, Are celerities setting bad role models for the young because of their glamour?
3 - In Paragraph one, you should write one or more sentence about thesis statement beacuse it can make your essay...
Writing FeedbackRumi2020 - Feb 13, 2018 / Nuval_flip - Feb 14, 2018
|Participating in sports and exercises in Australia. Reporting bar charts - IELTS
4 - Thank you so much for your feedback! Can you give me an example of a complete summary overview?...
Writing Feedbackindrasti - Feb 12, 2018 / indrasti - Feb 14, 2018
|International Tourism and its Influence on the Destined Countries
2 - Hi Sanufal, I have read your essay closer and found a few suggestions for improving yours. In the first...
Writing FeedbackNuval_flip - Feb 13, 2018 / akbarmappiare - Feb 14, 2018
|Discuss the differences between the way of life in your country now and the way of life in the past
Writing Feedbacktrangnguyen2612 - Feb 11, 2018 / PeterBrown - Feb 11, 2018
|The diagram illustrates how often Australia men and women in different age groups exercise regularly
4 - @Holt I have re-written it as below, hope to have some feedbacks on this one. Or any other welcome....
Writing Feedbackziminhong - Feb 10, 2018 / ziminhong - Feb 11, 2018
|Marriage or employment? PTE academic
3 - Peter, your presentation is not coming from a general point of view. You are thinking about the disadvantages of...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Feb 9, 2018 / Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|"Cause and effect of studying abroad" This is my IELTS task 2 (recommendations and band score)
3 - Andrew, you will have to disregard the score that you were given by Peter because the lack of original...
Writing Feedbackandrew_andy - Feb 9, 2018 / Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|"You are my sunshine, my only sunshine. You make me happy when skies are gray.." Childhood flashback
4 - @sungin115 your approach to the essay covers multiple memories. This runs counter to the prompt requirement of one, single,...
Writing Feedbacksungin115 - Feb 9, 2018 / Holt - Feb 9, 2018
|In recent years, a lot of readers are choosing to read e-books and not the regular books.
5 - Hello @senuthilini Thank you so much. Its really mean for me when you appreciate my reply to this...
Writing Feedbacksenuthilini - Feb 6, 2018 / priyu323 - Feb 9, 2018
|Face to face communication will become a thing of the past. Opinion essay.
5 - @Holt, I will stick with the method that you provided, and thanks for the clarification on the word usage!...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Feb 5, 2018 / Jimmy879873 - Feb 8, 2018
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