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|Explore some of the aspects or even a single aspect of "identity".
5 - Thanks so much Kevin! Wish you could have edited the whole thing, instead of just the last post I...
Writing FeedbackEditor1010 - Sep 26, 2011 / Editor1010 - Sep 29, 2011
|college education is necessary in the U.S society
2 - Thanks a lot Yao and Kory. I'm appreciated your ideas. I agree with you, Yao. This essay is too...
Writing FeedbackKathyLala - Sep 26, 2011 / KathyLala - Sep 29, 2011
|TOEFL ESSAY ; Course grades are based on exams or based more on class participation?
6 - monamona In the independent essay we should write at least 300 words. In my opinion we should write...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Sep 27, 2011 / muge - Sep 29, 2011
|Process Analysis paper -- Essay about dressing well
2 - We had always attended several Indian weddings in conventions centers located all throughout Louisiana. She had pointed out...
Writing FeedbackSagar_Patel12 - Sep 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Sep 29, 2011
|IELTS LETTER> REPLYING A COMPLAINT ABOUT NOISE
2 - I am writing to you to reply your letter REGARDING THE COMPLAINT YOU HAVE MADE about the noise from...
Writing Feedbacksupernoob101 - Sep 29, 2011 / Geenesh - Sep 29, 2011
|combining and optimizing - 'improve the quality of the education in a country is to'
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|IELTS-scientific research not driven for economic benefits should be suspended?
5 - wjxjj123, Economic model is a research topic in economics. When people talk about scientific research, usually they...
Writing Feedbackwjxjj123 - Sep 23, 2011 / basawang - Sep 29, 2011
|TOEFL - Becoming successful is almost an endless endeavor for every individual.
3 - just refer back to my own thread that you worte advice for. my idea has been clearly laid out....
Writing Feedbackbasawang - Sep 23, 2011 / wjxjj123 - Sep 29, 2011
|Companies to spend time on listening to its employees instead of consultants
Writing Feedbacktanmaymathur89 - Sep 28, 2011 / tanmaymathur89 - Sep 29, 2011
|'how the funding for reseach and development was allocated in the UK' - IELTS
2 - You have not given introduction for the second table in the introduction. Try to give numbers instead what is...
Writing Feedbackspyrosessay - Sep 28, 2011 / BINUDANIEL - Sep 29, 2011
|'the nature of the advertising' - most advertisements make products seem much be
Writing Feedbackrichard35568 - Sep 27, 2011 / richard35568 - Sep 29, 2011
|'spend your life in your own way' - GMAT ESSAY - "SUCCESS"
Writing FeedbackAsmita_ - Sep 27, 2011 / pouriah - Sep 28, 2011
|TOEFL- Should university give the same amount of money to its departments?
2 - Hi, The prompt is about sport activities and university libraries. So, I think you should focus on...
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Sep 28, 2011 / basawang - Sep 28, 2011
|Toefl: communal investments should be focused on which part
Writing FeedbackLaser - Sep 25, 2011 / monamona - Sep 28, 2011
|Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money
2 - Hi, There are some grammatical errors. Nevertheless, I want to talk about your structure because it may be...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Sep 28, 2011 / basawang - Sep 28, 2011
|'The American themes of opportunity and success' - US History Paper
Writing Feedbackcomp13 - Sep 27, 2011 / BINUDANIEL - Sep 28, 2011
|Distance Education is not practical for everyone. To what extent you agree / disagree
NEW - QUES: More and more colleges and universities are offering courses through distance learning. Distance learning has many benefits, but...
Writing FeedbackBINUDANIEL - Sep 28, 2011 / — -
|IELTS> HOW TO DEFINE FRIENDSHIP
2 - Childhood friendship might not be that good at the end of the day. The important to look out for,...
Writing Feedbacksupernoob101 - Sep 28, 2011 / ORTEGA EFE - Sep 28, 2011
|Patrick Garland's movie based on "A Doll's House" - Film Analysis Paper
Writing Feedbackmtjames0211 - Sep 27, 2011 / mtjames0211 - Sep 28, 2011
|IELTS TASK 1: The Consumer Dollar : Where it goes. (Pie Chart)
Writing Feedbackkoei1982 - Sep 26, 2011 / yahiawestlife - Sep 27, 2011
|Topic: Approach to problem-solving - TOEFL IBT
3 - Some people prefer to think about and analyze a certain issue and to do it afterwards, yet others would...
Writing Feedbackziya - Sep 27, 2011 / okme_2008 - Sep 27, 2011
|Toefl Essay Topic: Telecommuting, working in an office?
4 - Hi! The word-structure I uesed last day to you essay is not proper. The structure of your essay is...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Sep 26, 2011 / okme_2008 - Sep 27, 2011
|Good healt care - honours college UH write a research paper with a central thesis
2 - I come from a developing country in Africa, and every day I see people die.---I added the conjunction AND....
Writing Feedbackchigirl - Sep 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2011
|Toefl----moving to a new place can lose old friends
Writing Feedbackmhh2531 - Sep 27, 2011 / basawang - Sep 27, 2011
|'stricter gun control laws equals more safety?' - G.E.D. Test Essay.
3 - How's this? ... ... Decreasing the availability of firearms will do very little, if anything, to make America...
Writing FeedbackSara_sheppard - Sep 26, 2011 / Sara_sheppard - Sep 27, 2011
|'people have to work and experience new things' - When people succeed
4 - I think the essay is not clear enough to deliver the intended view. As well, it lacks strong reasoning....
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Sep 26, 2011 / Asmita_ - Sep 26, 2011
|A successful person must be something specially, otherwise the fate would not smile at him.
2 - I read first paragraph of your essay, and did some re-wording. I hope you don't mind. I'm not professional,...
Writing FeedbackEminent - Sep 26, 2011 / koei1982 - Sep 26, 2011
|IELTS -- Modern shopping habits change
3 - marucat you wrote 368 words, that's too much, apart from that, it's better than the last one you worte....
Writing Feedbackmarucat - Sep 19, 2011 / wjxjj123 - Sep 26, 2011
|the recipe to success is in fact failure.
NEW - There is perhaps no greater pursuit in life than that of success. Our endeavour, either it be at school...
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|Mistake I Ever Made - suggestions
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|[graph] 'the number of international students in the USA'
2 - The first graphicgraph gives (information about) the quantities of abroad students in the USA between 2000 and 2004 yearswhile...
Writing FeedbackGangster777 - Sep 24, 2011 / MisterWandering - Sep 25, 2011
|THE PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION IS AWFUL IN TOWN
Writing FeedbackSaray007 - Sep 24, 2011 / Zeinab1383 - Sep 25, 2011
|compare the advantages of living in dormitories with living in an apartment
NEW - Choosing a place to live often confuses students at universities. Most of them think living in university or living...
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|Should English be the official language in Asia?
3 - Ditto what the above said, I think you using different sentence structures would help you the most. Try different...
Writing FeedbackDande - Sep 23, 2011 / Calmador - Sep 24, 2011
|To solve the problems of the present and future,people should review the past.TOEFL
NEW - Do you agree or disagree, in order to solve the problems of the present and the future, people should...
Writing Feedbackpepsi - Sep 24, 2011 / — -
|Key Issues to Make City Better to Live in for The Future
5 - Basically, SAT essay ask your own opinion on certain issue or idea, and therefore it's very important to...
Writing Feedbackmuizzupr - Sep 23, 2011 / Paul Jo - Sep 24, 2011
|Teofl - I support that businesses hire somebody as their employees or workers.
3 - Hi, Some people agree with this statement that businesses should hire employees, but some people disagree with that...
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Sep 24, 2011 / dumi - Sep 24, 2011
|Children compitition or co-operation?
Writing Feedbackisqun1 - Sep 23, 2011 / isqun1 - Sep 24, 2011
|Toefl - 'the Earth is being damaged through human activities?'
NEW - Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes...
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Sep 24, 2011 / — -
|"Sunday's meal a delectable delight"
3 - Sunday meals are the best! Yum! In my household Sunday is that long day from church and you come...
Writing Feedbacklevin11 - Sep 22, 2011 / rayganwebster94 - Sep 23, 2011
|"Enjoyment" - The College Years are the Best Time in a Person's Life.
4 - I really like this essay. I think it's helpful to me because, I'm a senior in high school right...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Sep 21, 2011 / rayganwebster94 - Sep 23, 2011
|O level (Some people say that the Internet does more harm than good.)
Writing Feedbackwraithseeker - Sep 21, 2011 / rayganwebster94 - Sep 23, 2011
|"advantages in groupthink" - Toefl
2 - Dear Mostafa, drawing out its intellectual resources for arriving at a better decision. will not be worry...for making a...
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Sep 23, 2011 / Dande - Sep 23, 2011
|The young slave boy - Freedom (narrative)
3 - Thanks for the comments! I can see i still have a huge problem with my commas...sobs...(sorry for the parts...
Writing Feedbackclaralw - Sep 22, 2011 / claralw - Sep 23, 2011
|"a holiday overseas" - Letter to your friends - IELTS
Writing FeedbackiCan - Sep 23, 2011 / basawang - Sep 23, 2011
|IELTS- : favorite pastime of people in different countries
Writing Feedbacknguyenminh - Jul 30, 2011 / nguyenminh - Sep 23, 2011
|Should universities accept the equal men and women? -- Ielts Test
Writing FeedbackMai Chu - Sep 16, 2011 / isqun1 - Sep 23, 2011
|'A Lesson I'll Never Forget' - Narrative Essay
2 - I found myself staring at the ceiling; every time I closed my eyes the flashbacks would come back began...
Writing Feedbackmtruninger - Sep 22, 2011 / dumi - Sep 23, 2011
|TOEFL-study history and literature or science and mathematics
4 - Dear Dumi, I searched on the Internet. Some references suggest that "cannot" and "can not" are both...
Writing Feedbacktrochanter - Sep 20, 2011 / basawang - Sep 22, 2011
|Keep analyzing the decisions of the authority to prevent fraud and promote democracy
Writing Feedbacktanvik - Sep 21, 2011 / tanvik - Sep 22, 2011
|IELTS - positive aspects and drawbacks when children engage themselves in work
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Sep 21, 2011 / Geenesh - Sep 22, 2011
|TOEFL- love marriage versus arranged marriage.
Writing FeedbackDande - Sep 21, 2011 / Dande - Sep 22, 2011
|TOEFL - working at home V.S. working in the office
Writing Feedbackfreekyidea - Sep 21, 2011 / soshianet - Sep 21, 2011
|'born in Ikoyi, Lagos Island, Nigeria" - childhood memories
3 - adegbola88 Thanks for the comment Am trying to make a topic outline for my essay, how do i go...
Writing Feedbackadegbola88 - Sep 20, 2011 / adegbola88 - Sep 21, 2011
|IELTS TASK1: Avg daily milk consumption
3 - Dear...I believe your original intention is good, but there are so many gramma errors in your post. And, I...
Writing Feedbackthehot - Sep 21, 2011 / thehot - Sep 21, 2011
|'writing complains" - When people need to complain about a product or poor service
Writing FeedbackIeltsDeamon - Sep 16, 2011 / IeltsDeamon - Sep 20, 2011
|'Even video conference won't help' -TOEFL- Face- to- face communication
3 - Thank Ican and Basawang for your response! I rewrite "Although e-mail is convenient, it often leaves us with...
Writing Feedbacktrochanter - Sep 20, 2011 / trochanter - Sep 20, 2011
|'Thinking like a Gastronomist' - Writing about eating...
2 - Every Saturday of the week my immediate family, which comprises of about ten people, depending on whom is in...
Writing Feedbackarmaanbindra93 - Sep 19, 2011 / l_borras - Sep 20, 2011
|"Cowboys on Ice" - Descriptive/Narrative essay
NEW - Cowboys on Ice As our U-haul crawled down the southern freeway of Minnesota I remember saying to Cowboy,...
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|"Telepathy" - short story for dystopia
2 - Wow! Telepathy, that got me hooked.(I get fascinated about anything that has to do with the human mind) Although,...
Writing Feedbackyulwan - Sep 20, 2011 / Rechy - Sep 20, 2011
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