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|TOEFL Essay - 'disagree with building the new military base here'
2 - In conclusion, military base camps givebring a lot of disadvantages to the people. The last reason I disagree...
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 11, 2012 / dumi - Jun 12, 2012
|Narrative writing on "we all had different ideas about the parcel"
Writing Feedbackaleen - Jun 10, 2012 / aleen - Jun 12, 2012
|Does advertising make people be the same?
3 - critisms = criticisms sucessful = successful adolesents = adolescents (and no comma after) " her peers...
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Jun 11, 2012 / lovekayliex - Jun 12, 2012
|Interview paper with an entreprenuer, Cynthia Odo
2 - ...Twelve years ago, she started her business, while leaving LIVING in New Jersey. Her decision to move forward was...
Writing Feedbacknmckenziedesign - Jun 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 11, 2012
|ROSARY, MY BEST FRIEND
2 - Ever since I met my good friend Rosary, ---You don't need a comma here.---several years ago, she has been...
Writing FeedbackAdragotto - Jun 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 11, 2012
|A college or university should be open for every student or only for good ones?
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 11, 2012 / dumi - Jun 11, 2012
|'change is a great investment for everyone' - GRE essay
4 - this change has bettered students' lives off This type of change will let retirees see things in different...
Writing Feedbackviviana15077 - Jun 10, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 11, 2012
|Encourage to take private health care insurance or maintain free health care systems?
4 - okkkkkkk.... now I get your point :) especially during the period that the price of health care services...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 10, 2012 / dumi - Jun 11, 2012
|Should Students (not administrators) control their own education?
3 - Hi Sudhir, Even though it is important that students should be given full control in planning their education,...
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 10, 2012 / dumi - Jun 10, 2012
|TEACHERS SHOULD NOT DISTURB THEIR STUDENTS QUESTIONING
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 8, 2012 / dumi - Jun 10, 2012
|IELTS Taks 2 - People resist to changes in their lives/ Problems & Solutions
Writing FeedbackIELTSPT - Jun 10, 2012 / lovekayliex - Jun 10, 2012
|'Scientists renew people daily life' - IELTS
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 8, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 10, 2012
|IELTS 2-- old buildings should be knocked down?
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 7, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 10, 2012
|'The house' - IELTS, A letter to ask your friend for help.
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 10, 2012 / nina2 - Jun 10, 2012
|Children with different levels of intelligence should be taught separately???
11 - dont criticize your paper because of the length because trust me, i did that once and i submitted an...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 8, 2012 / nina2 - Jun 10, 2012
|Classification Paper on Reality TV
2 - Some more reasons on popularity of the reality show :- Reality Show is a change from the usual...
Writing Feedbackdberryhill - Jun 9, 2012 / inform - Jun 10, 2012
|AIR POLLUTION AND HOW TO REDUCE IT
3 - aponiiik Oh. Thank you very much. I am so grateful to you for having corrected my essay.It is really...
Writing Feedbackkissingyou0912 - Jun 9, 2012 / kissingyou0912 - Jun 9, 2012
|'Modern culture understanding'/ GRE AWA
Writing Feedbacksicong - Jun 3, 2012 / sicong - Jun 9, 2012
|Essay about - Is spending a lot on parties is worthwhile or not?
2 - From a purely social point of view, the main purpose of inviting relatives and friends to a party is...
Writing Feedbackfk6268 - Jun 5, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 9, 2012
|'Rumblefish'(Rob and Renee ) - Summary
2 - After five years of marriage, Rob lost his wife Renee to a pulmonary embolism, a blockage of the main...
Writing Feedbacklovekayliex - Jun 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 9, 2012
|TOEFL:both books recording real things and imaginative things is worth reading.
2 - But if we read books that record fabricated facts like what had been wrotewritten in the autographautobiography of Hitler,...
Writing Feedbackhywb2 - May 13, 2012 / dumi - Jun 9, 2012
|Should violent films that have adverse effects be controlled?
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Jun 9, 2012 / greencactus - Jun 9, 2012
|'The Kitchen' - IELTS, Neighbours complain
2 - You stated this before explaining the reason of the noise. I think you should mention this after the...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 9, 2012
|IELTS: 'more and more international' - world is becoming a global village
3 - If you record your essay then play it back after you have done the Reading practice you will find...
Writing Feedbackwillywonka - Jun 8, 2012 / ernhen - Jun 9, 2012
|'reports on vicious crime attract a lot of viewers' - IELTS2 Essay
Writing Feedbackrt2012 - Jun 7, 2012 / Mriytunjay - Jun 9, 2012
|ielts 2 - 'parents are superior to the teachers in terms of development'
4 - I hope this could help :) Today-In this day and age. In conclusion-With all things taken into consideration/account....
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012 / willywonka - Jun 8, 2012
|[TOEFL] - living on campus in a dormitory is the best choice to live the campus life.
4 - Thanks for your comment! :) It's really helpful to me. I'll try to improve my writing and rewrite this....
Writing Feedbackjanetyang - Jun 7, 2012 / janetyang - Jun 8, 2012
|essay about technology and traditional skills and life ways--feedback
2 - Hi! In the first paragraph, I would suggest that you give a basic and general overview stating the...
Writing FeedbackTISIA000 - Jun 8, 2012 / sean_neuman - Jun 8, 2012
|Should restrict detailed descriptions of crime reports?
NEW - Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on...
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|Computers make some jobs easier.
4 - Madman59770 thanks indeed Anthony Nguyen. I am Moroccan and my first language is Amazigh (= Berber)/ Arabic is the...
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Jun 5, 2012 / hafidgg - Jun 8, 2012
|Globalization leads to cultures identity loss?
5 - initially i would want you to know that you have done tremendous work which resulted to this well written...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 6, 2012 / ashaban - Jun 8, 2012
|Essay: Are books more important than experience?
3 - It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books". ------------- I think you may loose...
Writing FeedbackGenki - Jun 4, 2012 / dumi - Jun 8, 2012
|'right to agree to disagree' - Presidental Election 2012 essay
2 - Currently with an approval rating at less than fifty percent, many would say that President Obama has several weaknesses,...
Writing FeedbackMEG2028568 - Jun 1, 2012 / dumi - Jun 8, 2012
|How I got my title as Prince of Nigeria-revision/shortening
2 - Well, first, try not to repeat yourself. Look for any less valuable feedback and eliminate it. Keep true to...
Writing Feedbackayolegit - Jun 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 7, 2012
|'You must be humble' - exemplification paper on respect
3 - Throughout my whole life, I was taught to have respect for others and myself. If you believe someone...
Writing Feedbackbentleysmomma - Jun 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 7, 2012
|Argumentative essay- Thesis Statement - Watching television makes people smarter?
Writing Feedbackjulienruyter - Jun 6, 2012 / julienruyter - Jun 7, 2012
|essay on manufactured landscapes video
3 - Some people assert that old buildings should not be in the way of new buildingshould be taken down to...
Writing Feedbackaurora1995 - Jun 6, 2012 / aurora1995 - Jun 7, 2012
|'great to see you again'
NEW - An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 7, 2012 / — -
|IELTS TASK 2 MODERN TECHNOLOGY HAS GIVEN US MORE LEISURE TIME THAN BEFORE
4 - Hi hadi1981, I'm sorry to say that I mention argument but not opinion before. Opinion comes with arguments,...
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 6, 2012 / peterc - Jun 7, 2012
|Changing jobs frequently or loyal to the same jobs?
3 - Yes, I am preparing for my IELTS exam which happens the end of this month. I need to practice...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 5, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 7, 2012
|IELTS - Boys naturally more agressive than girls?
5 - The expression of physical strength is common and may be related to the genetic coding that is prevalent in...
Writing Feedbackakhtarkhan - Jun 3, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 7, 2012
|IELTS writing: moving big companies out of cities
5 - there appears a bunch of problems which have already been heated social issues. 1 stimulate maybe better than appear....
Writing Feedbackjasmine4gjc7 - May 27, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 7, 2012
|(Persuasive Request) Help in writing a Memo for my English assignment
2 - Hi Tony, When you write memos, you usually follow a general format, which sometimes may vary according to...
Writing Feedbacktonloc1234 - May 30, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|'the earliest teachers we have in our lives' - ielts task2
2 - Obviously, the earliestfirst teachers we have in our lives in most cases are m our parents, and they are...
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|TOEFL (The passage and lecture is about autobiography)
2 - According to the passage, book makers are focused on the factor which the readers want to be heard,...
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 6, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|Draft: Women's Health vs. Religious Freedom
2 - It is also noted that, "Women who use OCs have more regular and predictable menstrual cycles, with a reduction...
Writing FeedbackWilliamMorton - May 30, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS - national consumer expenditure on different goods in 5 different countries in 2002
2 - Hi, In the introduction you should state that how many items were investigated. At the end of...
Writing Feedbackandrea23694 - Jun 6, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS Writing- Spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other.
3 - wow....really thanks for all your help...!!! i didn't notice these mistakes before... really appreciated!!!...
Writing Feedbackwudimopa - Jun 3, 2012 / wudimopa - Jun 6, 2012
|'it would increase the sales in the Central Plaza store' - GRE essays
3 - please check for content, grammatical errors and sentence formations. Thank you ! The following appeared in a letter...
Writing FeedbackNJiya - May 31, 2012 / NJiya - Jun 6, 2012
|'leading enviable lives to have a deeper education'
4 - thx a lot...
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 4, 2012 / hehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012
|College - the best time when a person participates in other activities which broadens his knowledge
Writing Feedbackinform - May 26, 2012 / inform - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS importance of co-operation rather than competition in children's education
Writing Feedbackcocoyan - May 20, 2012 / cocoyan - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL(Physical exercise is more important for older people than for younger people)
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL: (more productive, energetic) EASIER FOOD PREPARATION IMPROVED PEOPLE'S LIVES
5 - Dear Jason, Nice essay. I am also preparing TOEFL, so it was very helpful for my brainstorming....
Writing Feedbackjhundais - May 23, 2012 / vickey - Jun 6, 2012
|HOME SCHOOLING IS ACCURATE OPTION
3 - You definitely need to develop a more inviting, and more broad, introductory statement rather than just jumping right in...
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|essay about "a fake beauty"
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 30, 2012 / kersise - Jun 5, 2012
|IETLS 2-Why young people tend to spend less free fime with family?
NEW - Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are...
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|International tourism: 'foreigners should study local cultures before traveling'
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 4, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 5, 2012
|'media may distort the image of the hero' - GRE AWA PRACTICE: Issue topic
NEW - I am horrible at writing and would like some feedback on this AWA Issue topic for the GRE, Thank...
Writing FeedbackGuest - Jun 5, 2012 / — -
|IELTS:1 - 'wish you the best in the city' A letter to a friend
2 - Dear John, Firstly,I appreciated your acceptance ofThank you fortakingagreeing tocare ofwatch my littleKitty cat whenwhile I spend my...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 5, 2012 / BachChaconne2 - Jun 5, 2012
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