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|(IELTS) protect animals, zoos should be banned?
2 - I'll make a lot of small changes... Please study these changes and type the sentences to practice the correct...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|IELTS - school or parents have equal nurturing on students
NEW - It has been controversial issue, which of these have more influence on behaviour of children; parents or school. However,...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|We can know about ourselves more from animals just by watching them
2 - As we get more knowledge about human beings, people start to be interested in... I realized humans and...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|economic development vs environment ---IELTS
8 - Great question!! 1、Thus, a great number of people firmly believe we will keep up this upward trend and...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|TOEFL:Businesses had better not employ the workers for the whole of their life
NEW - Hi everyone, please help me to check my essay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot! Businesses should hire employees for their...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|IELTS; Fonton and Meadowside Maps
Writing Feedbacknabila72 - Jul 29, 2011 / nabila72 - Jul 31, 2011
|Parents should not allow their children to watch television so they are good students
NEW - TOPIC : DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? Parents should not allow their children to watch...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|"No more fears and doubts" - Experience/s that define you as a person
Writing Feedbackgsvr27 - Jul 30, 2011 / gsvr27 - Jul 31, 2011
|a clear understanding of oneself can be a great driving force to one's ultimate goal
NEW - Does the perception of our potential determines whether we can accomplish our goals? Everyone has his or her...
Writing FeedbackLauratwilight - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|Japan: special interest/passion+ how you have developed knowledge in these area?
Writing Feedbackwn2870 - Jul 27, 2011 / wn2870 - Jul 30, 2011
|Toefl】teachers should take courses every five years to update their knowledge?
6 - Hi, Dumi has given the most appropriate corrections required in your essay. There are several grammatical and spelling mistakes...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 29, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 30, 2011
|Should the term FAILURE be used in educational system?
NEW - In the pursuit of becoming an educational hub, Singapore strives to maintain its competitiveness in this ever-modernizing society by...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|'Medicine, technology, and lifestyle changes' - The 21 century has begun
2 - Hei Aysel! :D Your essay structure is flawless and you definitely have thought of some strong points to...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Jul 29, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 30, 2011
|IELTS- SHOULD PRACTICAL SKILLS BE TAUGHT AT SCHOOL?
4 - Moreover, with timetables are already full... This sentence, it seems to me, has a little problem. "Moreover, since...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011 / Fiasdo - Jul 30, 2011
|(IELTS) Should all countries joint efforts to solve the environmental problems?
2 - The green house effect is changing the atmosphere of the Earth which and poses a grave threat to the...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011
|Watching movies in a theater is more fun than watching them at home.
5 - IMO, there are some advice i have ever taken toefl test training class in China, my teacher told...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 26, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 29, 2011
|Results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain
2 - This pie chart shows the results of a survey about the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|Free mobile phone and access to the Internet to find jobs sponsored by tax payers?
9 - I don't know how those are scored. I would be guessing. Somebody told me about the way they score...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|TOEFL: If no food at home we should have a restaurant in the neighborhood
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 26, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 29, 2011
|IELTS- CRIMINALS RE-OFFEND AFTER HAVE BEEN PUNISHED. WHAT ARE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS?
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011
|IELTS; Widespread use of the Internet and its problems/ solutions
NEW - The widespread use of internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 29, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL: 'school memories'; Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
5 - I think there is an error. First, in childhood, most people are happier than in adulthood. Your...
Writing Feedbackzuika94 - Jul 10, 2011 / sunglyeol - Jul 29, 2011
|Ielts Topic:Some people say that physical exercises should be a required part
2 - Different people possess their different reasons for their different choices. From my perspective, physical exercises need to be...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 29, 2011
|ILETS ESSAY ON SIGNIFICANCE OF LEARNING HISTORY.
3 - In the conclusion, learning about past culture, art and lifestyle can bring profound influences to the society. Knowledge about...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 28, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 28, 2011
|SPEND Vs SAVE; Most youngsters today are not hesitant to spend their money!
3 - Hey, Linh202, I see your efforts through good conjunctions at every begining of every paragraph. There is just...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 28, 2011
|"wheat export among three areas in 1985" - ielts exam
Writing Feedbacklllppp333 - Jul 27, 2011 / lllppp333 - Jul 28, 2011
|Tourism could be very important for the development of many countries
6 - It is believed that tourism is playing an important part in the economy of different countries and it also...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 22, 2011 / linh202 - Jul 28, 2011
|CAMBRIDGE ESSAY; Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students.
2 - The majority of people acquire a substantial amount of notions. ---This sentence is not incorrect, but it is a...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|IELTS --Use cultural heritage to develop international tourism, right or wrong?
4 - Hearing some environmental activists' concerns about the negatives brought by international tourism, much worry arose in my heart as...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|IELTS> 'strict policies' - urbanisation - benefits and drawbacks
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|if in Rome, do as the Romans do-disagree
3 - Don't use THAT. Avoid it when you can: There's an old saying: "When in Rome, do as the Romans...
Writing Feedbacknikkinia - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|IELTS (CHILDREN AND TV vs. SPENDING TIME OUTDOORS)
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 12, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|Optimistic about 21st century?positive change or not?--IELTS
9 - Roger Bishop Hi, Roger, I haven't been here for about 2 months and I just read your advisable comment...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - May 19, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|CBEST "As you get older, it is harder to have heroes, but it is sort of necessary."
NEW - Hi everyone, Please help! Please help! I need help with the grammar and the conclusion. Any suggestion are...
Writing Feedbackatjobsearch - Jul 26, 2011 / — -
|TV is the most effective media to spread information and communicating culture
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Jul 26, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 26, 2011
|CAMBRIDGE TOPIC; The widespread use of the Internet
7 - Thank you very much ef_kevin i have a ibt 5th august therefore i am trying to do something:) i...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 22, 2011 / muge - Jul 25, 2011
|Ielts: Your friend has enough money either to go on a holiday or to buy a new
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 24, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 25, 2011
|TELTS-- traditional ideas help teenagers for promising future?
2 - "Thinking twice before action as well as paying more attention to words are some treasures in traditional thinking and...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 25, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 25, 2011
|'People are envy'; advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need
6 - Experts believes believe that the amount time of advertisement should be controlled in some ways, because otherwise the...
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|"girls tend to learn arts while boys science" uni. accept equal numbers of students?
3 - I'll make some grammar corrections. Please practice typing these sentences: Confronted by a situation in which girls are...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|[more alternative explanations]- Argument-15-by shiyi
2 - However, if we examine the facts carefully, we can find one or more alternative explanations that could rival the...
Writing Feedbackshiyi - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|'different styles and constructions'; Preserving old historical buildings? TOEFL
4 - I don't like the first sentence, because it is a statement of the obvious. 2 words: Every day...
Writing Feedbackessaylearner - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|Ielts: (career / life experience) - Why do people go to university or college?
5 - I like the way you summed up your argument in that first paragraph. Very good stuff here. In a...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS : The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA
2 - One graph depicts... Two graphs depict... English has weird rules for singular and plural. The two graphs depict...
Writing Feedbackroygao2008 - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS- Writing task 1: Pie Charts: Valentine's Day Gifts
2 - Those of the "fair sex" prefer to offer candy to their lovers, 21% of women compared with 14% of...
Writing Feedbacknguyenminh - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|students' scores and subject assessments - A TOEFL retouches and assignments
4 - As I read the introduction, I notice that you have a high level of proficiency in English. The only...
Writing FeedbackelwinOUTOFMIND - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|"Child's learning process" - Teaching Context
3 - TQ Kevin...
Writing Feedbackisai - Jul 21, 2011 / isai - Jul 24, 2011
|TOEFL: Modern cooking methods have improved our life-style significantly
4 - It is really not a big difference. Susan made a change because it sounds awkward to say, "With technology...
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 24, 2011
|TOEFL essay: "quick decisions are unsafe decisions"
15 - Hi start208, I mean "but are (not always wrong) and (very in need)". But I think i'd better delete...
Writing Feedbackleeward - Jul 12, 2011 / leeward - Jul 24, 2011
|Fatherhood, motherhood, and bringing children up
5 - Hi rommel cute, these are my comments/corrections on your writing: ... inside here womb. ...who bears the...
Writing Feedbackgwapo - Jul 21, 2011 / the leaf ninja - Jul 24, 2011
|GLOBALIZATION: Differences between nations are becoming less and less evident.
29 - "CONSCIENCE" -THIS is the best religion in the world... no culture ,tradition,ritual, or religion is above one's conscience..when ur...
Writing Feedbackbirdman - Jul 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL - Tv has NO negative effects on children.
Writing Feedbackwlsguszizi - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Essay about a personal quality(ies) that I have and am proud of
4 - The measure of the impossibility of an idea is directly correlated ---no, the measure is not corelated. The level...
Writing FeedbackRChodavadia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 23, 2011
|Students' motivation should come from teachers and family
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Toefl essay: Eating out or Eating at home? Home food is the best!
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 21, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 23, 2011
|"beauty is in fact in the eyes of the beholder" - O level essay BEAUTY
3 - Either it be centuries before BC, or today in this every-modernizing society, h You already made this point. I...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|The american dream/economic mobility essay
3 - Living the American dream today is almost like trying to keep up with the times. (Now add a sentence...
Writing Feedbackwritinwy2much - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Important truths are outrageous when they begin; GRE ISSUE TOPIC
4 - Thanks much Kevin for valuable feedback and taking time to dig into each details of my essay. I really...
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Jul 20, 2011 / bimala73 - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL essay "Our need for friendship may be greater than ever"
4 - Thank you bhaweshwebmaste and EF_Kevin for your help!! I really appreciate it! I am very pleased to hear so...
Writing FeedbackU_Are_Awesome - Jul 19, 2011 / U_Are_Awesome - Jul 23, 2011
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