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|How far mankind has come from its previous, simpler way of living
Writing FeedbackcitingKylah - Oct 4, 2011 / Rajiv - Oct 10, 2011
|IELTS: Museums VS Computers
4 - thank you...
Writing FeedbackRachellsea - Oct 7, 2011 / Rachellsea - Oct 9, 2011
|First essay for TOEFL - What recent news story has affected you the most?
6 - a normal person ---> an ordinary person all important persons ---> all important people said beautiful words about Jobs...
Writing Feedbackpeterwhite - Oct 9, 2011 / argentum - Oct 9, 2011
|About my first day in america and my longest and happiest day of life
4 - You need to check spelling. You should also check your grammar usage. Definietly go over this sentence- agarry in...
Writing Feedbackhadia - Oct 6, 2011 / buddybuddy1 - Oct 9, 2011
|working experience;Every student should travel or work being going to university
3 - they haven't received it before ---> they have not received it before (never abbreviate in formal writings, except it...
Writing FeedbackVa_lencia - Oct 7, 2011 / argentum - Oct 9, 2011
|An argumentative essay on technology world.
2 - "I it is also easy for teachers to average grades and keeps track of them" "Facebook and its advantaged"...
Writing Feedbackotiliagmercado - Oct 8, 2011 / mrfrank - Oct 9, 2011
|TOEFL-Whether or not borrowing money from friends is good.
2 - a couple of reasons Not only does borrowing money from friends test the true friendship, it also offers...
Writing FeedbackDande - Oct 9, 2011 / CarmenCM - Oct 9, 2011
|'a time when a friend defended you in difficult circumstances' - narrative essay
Writing Feedbackmrfrank - Oct 8, 2011 / mrfrank - Oct 9, 2011
|My memory of my room-Second Home, Here
Writing Feedbacklively - Oct 9, 2011 / deathgoest - Oct 9, 2011
|The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read its newspapers and magazines
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|'No concern for talents' - to succeed, be more like others rather than be different
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Oct 6, 2011 / bahareh - Oct 8, 2011
|'social perception development' children learn how to be good members of society
Writing Feedbackletho7990 - Oct 4, 2011 / letho7990 - Oct 8, 2011
|"City park for the city !" Essay Topic
4 - Thank you Soshianet !!! Because there are many people so I want to repair and make it bigger :D...
Writing Feedbackminhtung9x - Oct 1, 2011 / minhtung9x - Oct 7, 2011
|My family - relationships with dad, grandma, aunt.
6 - Description of my best friend Nasnet I met nasnet in Amierca when I was 13 year old. Our birthdays...
Writing Feedbackselam19 - Apr 15, 2011 / selam19 - Oct 7, 2011
|IELTS- letter of complaint: my dissatisfaction about the mobile phone
2 - For this letter, a list of the defectiveness of the mobile phone would be needed. This way, a point...
Writing FeedbackiCan - Oct 5, 2011 / Alexxiscensored - Oct 7, 2011
|'What you've got to know about RTHK' - Is my essay clear enough?
2 - RTHK is perhaps a monopoly of broadcasting channel with a focus on radio broadcasting in Hong Kong. however...
Writing Feedbackscarlettrose - Oct 6, 2011 / Va_lencia - Oct 7, 2011
|IELTS2 WHAT DO ART TELL ABOUT LIFE THAT SCIENCE DO NOT?
NEW - The advancement of science and technology has positive impact, but arts like music and painting are also important. What...
Writing FeedbackBINUDANIEL - Oct 6, 2011 / — -
|Nation's well being with a Gross National Happiness Index
4 - Research has shown that purchasing new items has no correlation to achieving happiness as the joy from buying something...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Sep 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Oct 6, 2011
|Descripitive Paragraph: Christmas Time / Holiday Cheer
2 - Holiday cheer is infectious and warm, with the smell of cookies, gingerbread men, and hot cocoadance aroundfilling the house,...
Writing FeedbackGranger17 - Oct 5, 2011 / EF_Susan - Oct 6, 2011
|'An adventure to me' the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country?
3 - Hi Ve_lencia; Your essay has a briefly introduction which contains two question,and I think it would be better if...
Writing FeedbackVa_lencia - Oct 6, 2011 / bahareh - Oct 6, 2011
|a serious and strict teacher is more effective than a teacher with humor?
Writing Feedbackrichard35568 - Oct 4, 2011 / richard35568 - Oct 6, 2011
|'My grandma's house' - your favorite places or scenes - descriptive essay
NEW - we had to write a descriptive essay for english class, i struggled with this essay. If anyone has any...
Writing Feedbacklmarie - Oct 5, 2011 / — -
|"Pyramid of Honesty" - Feedback on tone
3 - The passage did in fact entertain me; however, do you think you are risking sounding snobby through this passage?...
Writing Feedbackessayhelpplease - Sep 29, 2011 / duke9418 - Oct 5, 2011
|I would like to thank an Anonymous Hero (Ms. B. Phares)
2 - Wow, this is really heartfelt. I can tell you mean every word you're saying, and that's especially important in...
Writing Feedbackjasonwrightman - Oct 3, 2011 / Leah_Writer - Oct 5, 2011
|"The Ultimate Coach" - Descriptive essay about my soccer coach
NEW - Can you please help me check for grammar, spelling etc. ? The Ultimate Coach It was my second...
Writing Feedbackbmarie - Oct 5, 2011 / — -
|Toefl: A person look and dress is more important for success than having good idea.
Writing FeedbackNamnam - Oct 4, 2011 / Enlightenus - Oct 5, 2011
|IELTS - Investment For a Nation's Future
Writing Feedbackplantton - Oct 3, 2011 / plantton - Oct 5, 2011
|a teacher should be strict or easygoing?
Writing FeedbackHEBELONG - Oct 3, 2011 / HEBELONG - Oct 5, 2011
|"things we obtain too easily, we esteem to lightly"
2 - When I was aroundabout six months old, My grandmother took something away from my mom and dad because its...
Writing Feedbackmorganlindsey99 - Oct 1, 2011 / iCan - Oct 4, 2011
|ielts - should people be forced to stop working?
5 - yes Sangeetha, i was thinking that they are idealistic to be used in the speaking side of the ielts...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Sep 29, 2011 / supernoob101 - Oct 4, 2011
|Can't decipher this essay format and instructions, anyone want to give it a shot?
Writing Feedbacklinnie - Sep 30, 2011 / nikolnikonchuk - Oct 4, 2011
|ielts : How does position of women influence society?
2 - Indeed,the human rights have changed the roles and responsibilities of women in th ... awareness about human rights...
Writing Feedbacksobin - Oct 4, 2011 / isqun1 - Oct 4, 2011
|Toefl Grades based solely on exams or participation during classes.
Writing Feedbackziya - Oct 4, 2011 / ziya - Oct 4, 2011
|Brake before university education, are advantages more than disadvantades?
2 - dont start with "nowadays" start with something like, "in present day" "competeition" in the first line should be changed...
Writing Feedbackkulsoomprincess - Sep 30, 2011 / abbymyles22 - Oct 4, 2011
|GRE essay-preserving the wilderness
3 - Hey, I found a grammar error: The consequences of this trend is heinous therefore appropriate steps must be taken...
Writing Feedbackrahulvasist - Sep 12, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Oct 4, 2011
|Toefl: Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary
Writing FeedbackNamnam - Oct 3, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 4, 2011
|"The computer is a boon to our society." To what extent would you agree?
Writing FeedbackDanLibriPark - Sep 30, 2011 / DanLibriPark - Oct 4, 2011
|TOE- 'Revolution' - a historical event in your country that had a crucial effect?
3 - Yes~ I want to ask same question as basawang`s. Even if you write well, because you didn`t mention what...
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Oct 4, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 4, 2011
|'had no regrets coming to Six Flags' - opinion essay
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|IELTS TASK 2. GOVERNMENT SHOULD BUILT NEW BUILDINGS IN TRADITIONAL STYLE.
Writing FeedbackBINUDANIEL - Oct 2, 2011 / BINUDANIEL - Oct 3, 2011
|TOEFL Writing : Why do you think people visit museums?
Writing FeedbackEnlightenus - Oct 1, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 3, 2011
|Toefl : Books have more influence on society than the television
Writing FeedbackNamnam - Oct 2, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 2, 2011
|TOEFL - It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city?
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Oct 2, 2011 / basawang - Oct 2, 2011
|ielts- the importance of zoos and confinement of animal
NEW - Zoos nowadays have always generated a mixed feelings when it comes to education and equity among all creatures. While...
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|Practice AP Prompt- Identify Tragic Hero, their effects on others, and Tragic Vision
NEW - "Select a novel or play in which a tragic figure functions as an instrument of the suffering of others....
Writing Feedbackjonnnnnnn - Oct 1, 2011 / — -
|'Adam Realty or Fitch Realty sold a house at the same time' - Gre argument
2 - Hi, I think you point out several crucial points in this argument. Very good! However, I have...
Writing Feedbackforever298 - Oct 1, 2011 / basawang - Oct 1, 2011
|IELTS TASK1: US Electricity out put during 1970 & 1984
4 - Hi, the 1st one isn't connected with IELTS, it's just my experience of daily reading of analitical staff....
Writing Feedbackkoei1982 - Sep 29, 2011 / Mizu - Oct 1, 2011
|GRE: Real Estate firms in a town
NEW - Town Real Estate Agencies Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered...
Writing FeedbackVincenzo - Oct 1, 2011 / — -
|'The Arctic deer populations are declining' - GRE analytical argument
2 - "The decrease in the vegetation may be due to any disease spreading the plants or may be due to...
Writing Feedbacktdivyendu - Sep 27, 2011 / Vincenzo - Oct 1, 2011
|the water cycle - ielts task 1
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Sep 23, 2011 / MisterWandering - Oct 1, 2011
|Chorleywood village near London - ielts writing task 1
5 - Thanks for your comments! Hello, Doysn.. In my essay, I used "North-South routeway" to describe the way that...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Sep 26, 2011 / MisterWandering - Oct 1, 2011
|IELTS TASK 1: The American food budget (Pie Chart)
3 - Dear, are you sure your're helping me? So many grammatical errors and indistinct meanings. non vegetarian????...
Writing Feedbackkoei1982 - Sep 30, 2011 / koei1982 - Oct 1, 2011
|IELTS WRITING: The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels
3 - The development of economy requires a largerlarge amount of energy (especially fossil fuels) to operate factories, machines, and vehicles....
Writing Feedbacklylong - Sep 30, 2011 / basawang - Sep 30, 2011
|IELTS WRITING: indigenous tribes may have disappeared forever
6 - Although the technique (technology) and science change people's life more comfortable and convenient (to be more comfortable and convenient),...
Writing Feedbacknguyenminh - Sep 23, 2011 / lylong - Sep 30, 2011
|IELTS WRITING: The generation gap between older and younger people
2 - On the other hand, in most countries in the world, throughout their history, always has a connected line between...
Writing Feedbackoonguyenminh - Sep 14, 2011 / nguyenminh - Sep 30, 2011
|"Plans should strategically integrate generations of governments" Writing
NEW - 19. Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated...
Writing FeedbackChopinstear - Sep 30, 2011 / — -
|'a hero that we have looked up to' - SAT
NEW - The discovery that someone we admire has done something wrong is always disappointing and disillusioning. Yet even when people...
Writing Feedbackibsurd2012 - Sep 30, 2011 / — -
|'The Ibom shopping street' - A sence at a shopping street
Writing FeedbackANIEKAN FRIDAY - Sep 28, 2011 / ANIEKAN FRIDAY - Sep 29, 2011
|Explore some of the aspects or even a single aspect of "identity".
5 - Thanks so much Kevin! Wish you could have edited the whole thing, instead of just the last post I...
Writing FeedbackEditor1010 - Sep 26, 2011 / Editor1010 - Sep 29, 2011
|college education is necessary in the U.S society
2 - Thanks a lot Yao and Kory. I'm appreciated your ideas. I agree with you, Yao. This essay is too...
Writing FeedbackKathyLala - Sep 26, 2011 / KathyLala - Sep 29, 2011
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