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|Parents or school,which would be the one teach children in social skills
2 - Hei Zhang! :D Below are some corrections. Perhaps you can retype the essay to get more familiar with...
Writing Feedbackzjn212 - Aug 25, 2011 / amrosca - Aug 26, 2011
|Memo: title change of laborers in network maintenance section
Writing Feedbackmohamed nawaz - Aug 25, 2011 / amrosca - Aug 25, 2011
|Enhancing general public health cannot be achieved by unilateral measure (sports)
3 - I think it is better for your essay to take a clear possition in your first paraghraph. For example...
Writing Feedbackbigbanglov - Aug 25, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 25, 2011
|Books or personal experience? Education should not have come from books solely
2 - this is really good and i agree with your argument! few grammar fixes though "Therefore, drowning themselves in...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Aug 25, 2011 / trishhha - Aug 25, 2011
|Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or
2 - great essay! you made clear elaboration of your point and justify your point of view. however i notice sometimes...
Writing Feedbackpikadali - Aug 25, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Aug 25, 2011
|Review the Past to solve the problems of the present and the future.
NEW - In order to solve the problems of the present and the future, people should review the past. In...
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|Factors to broadcast good news and bad news-ielts task 2
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Aug 24, 2011 / amrosca - Aug 25, 2011
|Key issues to make city become better!
3 - Diversity in your vocabularies, learn more from your writing. But could you mind change some "citizens" to "residents"...
Writing Feedbackprettybear94 - Aug 18, 2011 / Icecreamquest - Aug 25, 2011
|Can increasing petrol's price deal with all the problem?---Cam 8 T3 WT2
NEW - Topic:Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do...
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|I prefer to work for a lager company - more chance for promotion
4 - Your writing is great! But if some words can be replaced by others , I mean diversity, such as...
Writing Feedbackshipima - Aug 14, 2011 / Icecreamquest - Aug 25, 2011
|Should the main purpose of schools be to teach to become useful workers / tax payers?
3 - thank you a lot! 'towards their needs' means purpose of educating children at school first is to benefit themselves...
Writing Feedbackthanhomenh_nq99 - Aug 24, 2011 / thanhomenh_nq99 - Aug 24, 2011
|How can we inculcate the love for one's country?
2 - Your essay is well structured; every paragraph you start with firstly, secondly and nutshell. Therefore, you have given me...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Aug 24, 2011 / divalish89 - Aug 24, 2011
|It is better to grow up with brothers or sisters than to be an only child.
Writing Feedbackiceage1235813 - Aug 24, 2011 / iceage1235813 - Aug 24, 2011
|"proportion to the importance of the work" - IELTS - Professions
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 6, 2011 / androidman - Aug 24, 2011
|CLEP essay "Teachers are responsible for motivating students".
3 - Thank you, your corrections will be very helpful. I find these types of essay questions difficult mostly because I...
Writing Feedbacklangers1 - Aug 23, 2011 / langers1 - Aug 24, 2011
|IELTS - "children and rules of behavior in different countries"
NEW - Essay on "In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to...
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|Sharing of wealthy nations and responsibility of poorer nations-ielts task 2
2 - The governments of poor nations have many difficulties in different fields such as economy developing economies,----only developing economies is...
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Aug 23, 2011 / Icecreamquest - Aug 24, 2011
|IELTS; Parents & school are both reasonable for teaching children to be good citizens
NEW - Topic:Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that...
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|"Gifted people and talents" - IELTS - Cam7 test1 task2
Writing Feedbackfish333 - Aug 21, 2011 / jamliu0229 - Aug 24, 2011
|"children should manage their own money at the young age" - TOEFL
Writing Feedbackyc9055 - Aug 23, 2011 / yc9055 - Aug 24, 2011
|Why do not enjoyable things: necessity, importance for the future, families and friends in our lives
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Aug 20, 2011 / vivianliu - Aug 23, 2011
|In order to success, you should be more or different from others?
3 - Thanks a lot!...
Writing Feedbackvivianliu - Aug 23, 2011 / vivianliu - Aug 23, 2011
|CLEP - Individual Opportunity: Myth or Reality?
4 - Thank you! As you mentioned improvements I was able to see right away what you meant. And I thank...
Writing Feedbacklangers1 - Aug 23, 2011 / langers1 - Aug 23, 2011
|Toefl: today men only focus attention on meeting their needs for farmlands, housing, or industry
2 - Nowadays, many animals are on the verge of extinction since their habitats are being destroyed by mankind. Many environmentalists...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 23, 2011 / soshianet - Aug 23, 2011
|"make my parents proud" - Unusual Circumstances Essay
Writing Feedbackeduardo8 - Jul 22, 2011 / langers1 - Aug 23, 2011
|Teachers are responsilbe for motivating students to learn. To what extent you agree?
2 - Firstly, what is the length needed for the essay? I think you have some valid points in your essay...
Writing Feedbackakashacharya30 - Aug 23, 2011 / waikin - Aug 23, 2011
|TOEFL physical exercise -on giving preference
4 - Your writing is not bad. I think you should pay more attention to your essay topic. In this essay...
Writing FeedbackNurika - Aug 22, 2011 / dumi - Aug 22, 2011
|Reducing the overall consumption of natural resources by creating awareness
NEW - The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are...
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|"teaching and researching working together lead to the success" -Ielts writing
Writing Feedbackchinge - Aug 20, 2011 / chinge - Aug 22, 2011
|Toefl: Big city and Countryside both have their positives and negatives
3 - i think the reason why you were suspended is that you only made this kind of comment :)) Let's...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 19, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 22, 2011
|IELTS - Change, angel or devil?
NEW - Topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think...
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|salaries of sports professionals and other fields' professionals
Writing FeedbackIda - Aug 21, 2011 / reidabook - Aug 21, 2011
|MCAT-The nature of democracy requires that its citizens be dependent upon one another
3 - THank you!...
Writing Feedbackpshla - Aug 14, 2011 / pshla - Aug 21, 2011
|TOEFL; "little Buffett" Children should learn to handle money to be responsible
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to become financially responsible adults, children should manage...
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|IELTS (Graph) - the main sources of energy in America in the 1980s and the 1990s
2 - "but it decreased to one in three." sorry I don't know what you want to express, do you mean"one...
Writing Feedbackatlantis - Aug 20, 2011 / mcshang - Aug 21, 2011
|Teachers obligations are much greater that can be summarized only in compliment and punishment
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Aug 19, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 20, 2011
|TOEFL; Is it a good thing to move to a new city or new country?
2 - great essay but there are some minor grammatical errors fixed relationships ... are to give them advices when...
Writing Feedbacksiebeniris - Aug 20, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Aug 20, 2011
|Ielts writing: Wealthy countries still have many poor members
NEW - Hi everyone, please read and correct this essay. Have a nice weekend :D Question: Although many countries are becoming...
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|IELTS Writing task 1_ the requirement of coal per person in 15 countries
3 - The industrialized nations consist of USA, Germany, UK, Russia and France. USA had the highest of consumption in coal,...
Writing Feedbackncm - Jul 31, 2011 / oonguyenminh - Aug 20, 2011
|'simplistic view'; Can petrol price increase impact on pollution?
Writing Feedbackfish333 - Aug 19, 2011 / fish333 - Aug 19, 2011
|TOEFL. WHEN DISCUSSING CONTROVERSIAL PROBLEMS, TELEPHONE OR TEXT MESSAGING.
Writing Feedbacksiebeniris - Aug 19, 2011 / siebeniris - Aug 19, 2011
|There are also people whose childhood was the unhappiest period of his or her life
3 - Personally, I suppose u have some misunderstanding about this topic... This topic says 'childhood is the happiest time of...
Writing Feedbackgresa gashi - Aug 19, 2011 / fish333 - Aug 19, 2011
|Freedom to show creativity in portraying skills in producing any form of art
NEW - Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film)...
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|Music development-writing task 2 in ielts test
2 - we do not write etc in Ilets essay rather than writing short, write in conlcusion what do u mean...
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Aug 19, 2011 / Alisha123 - Aug 19, 2011
|I had power, but I seek happiness (examination)
Writing FeedbackGladys1620 - Aug 7, 2011 / Gladys1620 - Aug 19, 2011
|"a competition background" - a color of life
Writing Feedbacksangnguyen - Aug 17, 2011 / sangnguyen - Aug 19, 2011
|"it is okay to lie as far as the lie does not hurt anybody" ?
Writing Feedbackerblina emini - Aug 18, 2011 / erblina emini - Aug 19, 2011
|The purpose of education should be to provide students with a value system
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Aug 11, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 19, 2011
|How can a busy person have a healthy lifestyle?
NEW - This is my 300 word essay about that question. How can a busy person have a healthy lifestyle?...
Writing FeedbackJack Ahn - Aug 19, 2011 / — -
|nature or nurture which one have influence on personality and development ?
2 - Whether temperament which we arewere born with or experience various situations has an effect on our character or growing...
Writing Feedbackgolish65 - Aug 18, 2011 / prettybear94 - Aug 18, 2011
|Climate change - Help on finding the subject and any sentence errors
3 - thanks for the spell check. when i said the subject, i meant was the 3 topic sentences that i...
Writing Feedbackemiliorijo - Aug 18, 2011 / emiliorijo - Aug 18, 2011
|Toefl topic: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways
NEW - Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 18, 2011 / — -
|the immediate problems of today OR anticipated problems of the future
NEW - ISSUE56 - "Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the...
Writing Feedbackrochun - Aug 18, 2011 / — -
|An IELTS Essay - Cam8 test2 task2 - technology and communication
Writing Feedbacksaint318 - Aug 18, 2011 / saint318 - Aug 18, 2011
|Could you live without TV? - Toefl iBT
Writing Feedbackjenny328 - Aug 18, 2011 / br93 - Aug 18, 2011
|working from home or from your company's office which is better.
Writing Feedbackoluwakemi - Aug 7, 2011 / jenny328 - Aug 18, 2011
|Roommates quality and their importance - Toefl IBT
2 - your essay is quite good but you dint give examples. To make your essay more interesting to read I...
Writing Feedbackjenny328 - Aug 18, 2011 / oluwakemi - Aug 18, 2011
|College should not require Freshmen to purchase meal plans
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 15, 2011 / vanessa000 - Aug 17, 2011
|The variable number of water for the agriculture, industrial and domestic use
2 - Some of these ways are illustrated in the graph above. Agriculture, industrial and domestic uses are being investigated...
Writing Feedbackarvin_infinity - Aug 15, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 17, 2011
|All round or specialized? Broad knowledge and specialized knowledge.
7 - We have graded and submitted your essay into our database. Please email us @ firstname.lastname@example.org to get your FREE...
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