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|CLEP - "I don't care how poor a person is; if he has family, he's rich."
4 - Person = singular they = plural so... let's change this sentence: For this reason, any person, regardless of...
Writing FeedbackMiiSTiiCZ - May 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 11, 2011
|I think it is quite normal that the ratio of men to women varies from subject to subject in schools
7 - I see the errors.Thanks agian.Kevin,you are really a good teacher.:-) And it's a great activity to become a...
Writing FeedbackCharlie Chen - May 5, 2011 / Charlie Chen - May 11, 2011
|TOEFL 'first instinct'; Are the decisions that people make quickly always wrong?
6 - Well, every person has a different idea about what is unhealthy. I did mean to refer to things...
Writing FeedbackFrank zhao - May 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 10, 2011
|Technology keeps traditional skills and ways of life alive or not?--IELTS Practice
5 - EF_Kevin Hi!kevin. Lucky to meet you here.Thank you so much that you hepled comment on two of my writings....
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - May 8, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - May 10, 2011
|Follow local traditions or welcome cultural differences?
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - May 6, 2011 / extrafresh - May 10, 2011
|Should school reduce the time of teaching the arts and humanities?
3 - Good idea! Can you think of examples from recent/current events? should not reduce the time on ...
Writing Feedbackstudent7 - May 8, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 9, 2011
|Stratergic PR - Vietnam - The Genki Festival
Writing FeedbackAnh_Thu1905 - May 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 9, 2011
|SAT Writing Practice: Do we benefit from learning about the flaws of people we admire
Writing FeedbackRaInBoWn92 - May 3, 2011 / RaInBoWn92 - May 9, 2011
|'less personal privacy'; The extended family is less important today
Writing Feedbacksola_nana - May 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 9, 2011
|Air travel only benefits the richest people; airplane development - IELTS
4 - That's because people ask for help more than they give help. I wish all the essayists would go...
Writing Feedbackimnotjolin - May 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 9, 2011
|IELTS wrting: wealthy nation's responsibility
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - May 8, 2011 / sobin - May 9, 2011
|"You have done it son", i was proud of myself!
Writing Feedbackdumbdumb - May 7, 2011 / dumbdumb - May 9, 2011
|[IELTS Practice] My attempt on Creative Artists
4 - Thank you, Kevin. I like your suggestion very much. It seems a bible-like guide book, I have bought it...
Writing Feedbackbiangbiang - May 4, 2011 / biangbiang - May 9, 2011
|"Is international sport cup is really important to our life?" - IELTS
Writing Feedbacking595 - May 4, 2011 / extrafresh - May 8, 2011
|Clean up factories or public transportation
Writing Feedbacksoroush - May 6, 2011 / soroush - May 7, 2011
|All my life i had been wrong and now i had to pay!
Writing Feedbackdumbdumb - Apr 12, 2011 / axa - May 7, 2011
|Bribery in Morocco - citizens should stand against their leaders.
6 - Many factors cause Morocco to lag behind a number of developping countries in different domains including education. Morocco...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Apr 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 7, 2011
|Avia Airlines Argument: Finding the logical fallacy of the memo.
3 - Thank you so much for correcting the argument^^ I should be more careful about those mistakes~...
Writing Feedbackstudent7 - May 5, 2011 / student7 - May 7, 2011
|Nowadays students are using the Internet as a prompt to receive good marks rather
Writing FeedbackReal Fog - May 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 7, 2011
|Grammar and sentence structure help for a report 'Strategic Directions for tourism'
4 - Thanks a lot, EF_Kevin, and zessays!!! I'm pleased with your reply,EF_Kevin, and I will practice more and more...
Writing Feedbacksah1217 - May 5, 2011 / sah1217 - May 6, 2011
|Ielts - Media and Students paying tuition fee - Introductions and conclusions.
3 - I agree with Alex. Such as is okay... and the examiners should know UK English if they are qualified!...
Writing Feedbackshaned - May 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2011
|People with different interests and personalities cannot be friends.
NEW - It seems much easier if people find their friends or partner with the same interests and characteristic in the...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - May 6, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL iBT- More important to study mathematics or literature?
4 - Hi; So, they should study in history and literature too.... try not using so at the begining the sentence....
Writing Feedbackmahrou - May 4, 2011 / bahareh - May 6, 2011
|TOEFL: Whether to have uniform as the compulsory clothes in the highschool
2 - Thanks, Mahrou, I'll pink up where you left off: Some may say that requiring everyone to wear the...
Writing FeedbackFrank zhao - May 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2011
|[IELTS Writing] about children and television
4 - I'll give a few ideas below: Television has become standard piece of equipment in modern families, especially as a...
Writing Feedbackilavm - May 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2011
|Which environment is better for children to grow up? Countryside or City?
8 - Thankyou Nathanloa for your suggestion. I totally agree with you and I need to practice to get more accuracy...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - May 2, 2011 / bahareh - May 6, 2011
|About my 1st story book: percy jackson and lighting thief
3 - Nice!! Thanks so much Annika! Okay, Edward, here is your homework: Type the essay again in the post below...
Writing Feedbackiloveyou - May 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 5, 2011
|About my strategy to overcome an obstacle in college or life
3 - Thanks, Subhash Ghosh, great edit. Thanks for looking at an "Unanswered" essay. Tay, even if you are not...
Writing Feedbacktay01 - May 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 5, 2011
|The TOEFL ibt: People who have different interests and personalities cannot be friend
5 - Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I will think twice and make efforts to do well. :D...
Writing Feedbackminminmay - Apr 29, 2011 / minminmay - May 5, 2011
|The Government Should Provide Healthcare to the Less Fortunate - argumentive essay
2 - Oops... fix this clunky sentence: The lack of healthcare is one of the greatest social inequities of our social...
Writing Feedbackkcurtiss87 - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|Essay about a day in the life of a breakdancer or bboy - feedback
Writing Feedbackthomascb - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|"How Kirsys felt in love in La playa De Los Gringos?" - Narrative story
Writing FeedbackToxiichoney - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|"Olympic Foods" - GMAT essay - Analysis of an Argument
Writing Feedbacksubhash_ghosh - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|"Censorship of TV/Radio" - GMAT essay - Analysis of an Issue
3 - ... the conclusion that government or an appropriate censor body should be able to censor television or radio programs....
Writing Feedbacksubhash_ghosh - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|IELTS: (people worked in 4 sectors in UK) DESCRIBE A TABLE
Writing Feedbackhoanghai549 - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|External appearance provides important clues for a person
Writing Feedbackjamesyl - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|IELTS: Research findings on characteristics with what we are born
3 - Oh, I like the way Dumi fixed that first sentence! I was thinking about this... Every person is born...
Writing Feedbackmithsal - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|Guide to being Good and Religious Followers of God - Satirical Essay about Religion
Writing Feedbackalejandra3396 - May 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY : CHILDREN ARE INFLUENCED BY THEIR FRIEND'S OPINION .
Writing Feedbackhoanghai549 - Apr 28, 2011 / hoanghai549 - May 4, 2011
|IELTS essay about the result of a survey of adult education
Writing Feedbackmroho - Apr 28, 2011 / mroho - May 4, 2011
|Ielts essay: how does technology impact on the way we interact?
2 - I think we are using ALOUD the wrong way here. Today, many people aloud enjoy the convenience and...
Writing Feedbacksissi1987220 - May 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|IELTS:how tourism influence both country and person?(argument)
3 - However,travelling always helps us to know new things.It creates a relation among people and countries.In a nutshell,travelloing to new...
Writing Feedbacksobin - Apr 30, 2011 / biangbiang - May 3, 2011
|People who move out would be more succesful & happier than people living in villages
Writing Feedbackoops - Apr 29, 2011 / oops - May 3, 2011
|IELTS: ways to measure success
Writing FeedbackDika - Apr 29, 2011 / Dika - May 3, 2011
|Teenagers should concentrate equally on all school subjects or only specific ones?
2 - Teenagers learn various subjects when they are in their schools , and it is supposed that they should study...
Writing Feedbacklovelysmile - May 2, 2011 / EF_Susan - May 2, 2011
|The 50/50 balance in gender? Equal numbers of male and female students.
3 - Hi; Furthermore, limiting the 50/50 balance may refuse some more talent students to be outside, in contrast, some students...
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Apr 29, 2011 / bahareh - May 2, 2011
|Television has had a mostly negative effect on society.
5 - Well, you lose credibility if you fail to acknowledge some of the positive effects. For example, television can help...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Apr 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 2, 2011
|Language Breakdown in Philippines (we have more or less 130 languages)
Writing Feedbackbutterbescotch - Apr 29, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 2, 2011
|Governments should prioratize human beings rather than investing on technology
2 - For many generations, g overnments around the world have wasted billions of dollars on irrelevant things. Some economists...
Writing Feedbackarsenal26 - Apr 30, 2011 / EF_Susan - May 1, 2011
|"The creative arts are as necessary" - arts at school essay
Writing Feedbackhyehwangkim - Apr 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 1, 2011
|TOEFL; Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life - it depends...
NEW - Hello everybody. I'm a tenderfoot here and would be extremely grateful for your feedback: how would you rate this...
Writing Feedbackkasib - May 1, 2011 / — -
|'cannot apply to all occupations' - IELTS: Not forced to retire at a particular age?
Writing Feedbackmoczy - Apr 28, 2011 / moczy - Apr 30, 2011
|Fear is not going to help us in this stage; Nuclear energy for the future
3 - I think cars were invented in 1925. Is that right? Or am I thinking of the television? Anyway, I...
Writing FeedbackJeecee - Apr 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 30, 2011
|Ielts: (the adverse effect on our local culture) Globalization's effect and solution
3 - Hey, the first thing I thought of was that human nature has certain characteristics that are reflected in every...
Writing Feedbacksissi1987220 - Apr 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 30, 2011
|I always be interested to meet by Jenifer Aniston, one of the best American actresses
NEW - If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? Use specific reasons and...
Writing Feedbackmahrou - Apr 30, 2011 / — -
|Parental Guidance on Child Development Towards Society
NEW - Parental Guidance on Child Development Towards Society Children nowdays are expose with some kind of lifestyle that can...
Writing FeedbackRio Andhara - Apr 29, 2011 / — -
|there will always be a curse out of it; Computer Literacy is a Curse
Writing Feedbackbutterbescotch - Apr 27, 2011 / butterbescotch - Apr 29, 2011
|My lovely Indonesia (the reallity of my country)
Writing FeedbackRara - Apr 26, 2011 / tosucceed999 - Apr 28, 2011
|Essay on Mark Twain and his writing style
3 - Hi Tom, sorry you did not get help in time. It's true... you have grammar errors! Spend some time...
Writing Feedbacktompolly - Apr 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2011
|GRE Argue. a budget planner for the City of Grandview
2 - Use ATTENDANTS instead of attendence: However, even though the number of attendants at... I see that sometimes...
Writing FeedbackGinaKim - Apr 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2011
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