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|Should fatherhood be valued equally as motherhood?
NEW - Hey, everybody, I want to say thanks once more here to each of you who ever leave some ideas...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|The wolf + Strong relationships - help to the correction of these paragraphs?
Writing Feedbackp177 - Jul 30, 2011 / p177 - Aug 2, 2011
|Should people have just one career or possess several jobs at the same time?
4 - Thank you Annika, I will be more aware of using formal words in my articles. Thanks for reminding...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 2, 2011
|As everything has own pros and cons in this world, also computers impact on our life is debatable
NEW - Topic: Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others fell that...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|IELTS; Wealthy vs Poor Nations; not only a moral deed, but also a worthwhile one
3 - you should add up the detail reasons in the first para., it will make your outline more clearer~...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 1, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS; Government should spend money on ARTs, not only on public services
7 - Thus, a great number of people firmly believe that we will keep up this upward trend, achieving higher goals...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 2, 2011
|TOEFL- Do you agree or disagree? Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
3 - Thanks for the feedback, I know that the second paragraph is the weak spot of my essay. In fact,...
Writing Feedbacklykaon - Aug 2, 2011 / lykaon - Aug 2, 2011
|It is better to save money for unpredictable future than to spend it on a travel
NEW - Topic: It is better to spend money on travelling and vacations than to save money for future. AGREE or...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|"attended a catholic school" - Experiences that define you as a person
4 - @sunglyeol i know some capitalization of my words are wrong like "i", and thank you !! whats correct?...
Writing Feedbacklelou - Jul 31, 2011 / lelou - Aug 2, 2011
|TOEFL - the government should support the scientific research with no practical use?
5 - I like your point about the government and the real life. Good essay!! Therefore, I firmly believe that government...
Writing Feedbackblindside - Jul 14, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011
|"Your grandmother left you in her will 4 things to choose from" - Clep
3 - Thank you, Susan and ghafarimahsa for your time of reading and correcting my essay. I really appreciate your insights....
Writing Feedbackvanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011 / vanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011
|A Research Essay on Louis Riel, Hero of the Metis
NEW - Hi there, I am in social studies 10 summerschool course, my teacher had assigned my class to write an...
Writing Feedbackjanbreeze - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|READING FOR STUDENTS
4 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 30, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|Television for children. bad and good influences
6 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 31, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|when need to discuss upsetting problems, which do you prefer ? email or telephone ?
NEW - When meet upsetting or controversial problems, different people have different ways to discuss them with others. Personally, I choose...
Writing Feedbackhola bi - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|More money for successful sports professionals than others - fair or not fair?
3 - Thanks a lot katie.I appreciate your response.I know that i need to study more to do well and i'll...
Writing FeedbackLeonuous - Aug 1, 2011 / Leonuous - Aug 1, 2011
|(IELTS) Could predict criminal acts from 3 years old child? Thanks~
NEW - Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old children to see whether they will grow...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|Describe two charts about a survey of adult education..from Cambridge IELTs 1
5 - I think you should balance the description in two charts. Just one sentence about the figure in the second...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 27, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 1, 2011
|"What do you think are the environmental challenges in Southeast Asia today, and why?
3 - thanx Wang.. maybe for an easier movement from a place to another place should be from places to...
Writing Feedbackmonno - Aug 1, 2011 / monno - Aug 1, 2011
|In order to solve the problems , people should review the past. 【TOEFL EASSY】
5 - dear Zhang Yipeng your assey is good. it expresses enough about history. but its good to give some examples...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 28, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|[TOEFL] What are the best ways of reducing stress? 'I prefer doing exercise'
4 - dear wu i think that the topic is about getting rid of stress not the benefits of excercise. your...
Writing Feedbackmhh2531 - Aug 1, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|Topic: A time you have the courage to do something or face something difficult
5 - To EF_Kevin, Thank you for giving me these advice. Do you think this essay can pass the CBEST...
Writing Feedbackboxu53 - Jul 29, 2011 / boxu53 - Jul 31, 2011
|Should people follow their ambitious dreams and goals even they are not realistic?
NEW - Everyone has dreams and goals in his or her mind. Different people choose different goals. Some of them prefer...
Writing Feedbackbiran - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|Detail the factors that affect editors to choose broadcasting news.
5 - Dear EF_Kevin, I really want to acknowledge you for reading my essays and give advices to me. The...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|Describe the changes and development of a village called Chorleywood...IELTs test
6 - Dear Amrosca, I don't know how to show you my gradtitude rose from my deep heart after reading...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|'Music lifts up our souls and releases them'; traditional vs international music
5 - EF_Kevin, You really made my day, and I appreciate that every viewpoint you have made about my essay....
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 27, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|(IELTS) protect animals, zoos should be banned?
2 - I'll make a lot of small changes... Please study these changes and type the sentences to practice the correct...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|IELTS - school or parents have equal nurturing on students
NEW - It has been controversial issue, which of these have more influence on behaviour of children; parents or school. However,...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|We can know about ourselves more from animals just by watching them
2 - As we get more knowledge about human beings, people start to be interested in... I realized humans and...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|economic development vs environment ---IELTS
8 - Great question!! 1、Thus, a great number of people firmly believe we will keep up this upward trend and...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|TOEFL:Businesses had better not employ the workers for the whole of their life
NEW - Hi everyone, please help me to check my essay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot! Businesses should hire employees for their...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|IELTS; Fonton and Meadowside Maps
Writing Feedbacknabila72 - Jul 29, 2011 / nabila72 - Jul 31, 2011
|Parents should not allow their children to watch television so they are good students
NEW - TOPIC : DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? Parents should not allow their children to watch...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|"No more fears and doubts" - Experience/s that define you as a person
Writing Feedbackgsvr27 - Jul 30, 2011 / gsvr27 - Jul 31, 2011
|a clear understanding of oneself can be a great driving force to one's ultimate goal
NEW - Does the perception of our potential determines whether we can accomplish our goals? Everyone has his or her...
Writing FeedbackLauratwilight - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|Japan: special interest/passion+ how you have developed knowledge in these area?
Writing Feedbackwn2870 - Jul 27, 2011 / wn2870 - Jul 30, 2011
|Toefl】teachers should take courses every five years to update their knowledge?
5 - Hi, Dumi has given the most appropriate corrections required in your essay. There are several grammatical and spelling mistakes...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 29, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 30, 2011
|Should the term FAILURE be used in educational system?
NEW - In the pursuit of becoming an educational hub, Singapore strives to maintain its competitiveness in this ever-modernizing society by...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|'Medicine, technology, and lifestyle changes' - The 21 century has begun
2 - Hei Aysel! :D Your essay structure is flawless and you definitely have thought of some strong points to...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Jul 29, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 30, 2011
|IELTS- SHOULD PRACTICAL SKILLS BE TAUGHT AT SCHOOL?
4 - Moreover, with timetables are already full... This sentence, it seems to me, has a little problem. "Moreover, since...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011 / Fiasdo - Jul 30, 2011
|(IELTS) Should all countries joint efforts to solve the environmental problems?
2 - The green house effect is changing the atmosphere of the Earth which and poses a grave threat to the...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011
|Watching movies in a theater is more fun than watching them at home.
5 - IMO, there are some advice i have ever taken toefl test training class in China, my teacher told...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 26, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 29, 2011
|Results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain
2 - This pie chart shows the results of a survey about the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|Free mobile phone and access to the Internet to find jobs sponsored by tax payers?
9 - I don't know how those are scored. I would be guessing. Somebody told me about the way they score...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|TOEFL: If no food at home we should have a restaurant in the neighborhood
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 26, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 29, 2011
|IELTS- CRIMINALS RE-OFFEND AFTER HAVE BEEN PUNISHED. WHAT ARE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS?
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011
|IELTS; Widespread use of the Internet and its problems/ solutions
NEW - The widespread use of internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 29, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL: 'school memories'; Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
5 - I think there is an error. First, in childhood, most people are happier than in adulthood. Your...
Writing Feedbackzuika94 - Jul 10, 2011 / sunglyeol - Jul 29, 2011
|Ielts Topic:Some people say that physical exercises should be a required part
2 - Different people possess their different reasons for their different choices. From my perspective, physical exercises need to be...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 29, 2011
|ILETS ESSAY ON SIGNIFICANCE OF LEARNING HISTORY.
3 - In the conclusion, learning about past culture, art and lifestyle can bring profound influences to the society. Knowledge about...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 28, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 28, 2011
|SPEND Vs SAVE; Most youngsters today are not hesitant to spend their money!
3 - Hey, Linh202, I see your efforts through good conjunctions at every begining of every paragraph. There is just...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 28, 2011
|"wheat export among three areas in 1985" - ielts exam
Writing Feedbacklllppp333 - Jul 27, 2011 / lllppp333 - Jul 28, 2011
|Tourism could be very important for the development of many countries
6 - It is believed that tourism is playing an important part in the economy of different countries and it also...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 22, 2011 / linh202 - Jul 28, 2011
|CAMBRIDGE ESSAY; Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students.
2 - The majority of people acquire a substantial amount of notions. ---This sentence is not incorrect, but it is a...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|IELTS --Use cultural heritage to develop international tourism, right or wrong?
4 - Hearing some environmental activists' concerns about the negatives brought by international tourism, much worry arose in my heart as...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|IELTS> 'strict policies' - urbanisation - benefits and drawbacks
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|if in Rome, do as the Romans do-disagree
2 - learning new things in there who live in there is one of the very international cities the food they...
Writing Feedbacknikkinia - Jul 25, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|IELTS (CHILDREN AND TV vs. SPENDING TIME OUTDOORS)
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 12, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|Optimistic about 21st century?positive change or not?--IELTS
8 - Roger Bishop Hi, Roger, I haven't been here for about 2 months and I just read your advisable comment...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - May 19, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|CBEST "As you get older, it is harder to have heroes, but it is sort of necessary."
NEW - Hi everyone, Please help! Please help! I need help with the grammar and the conclusion. Any suggestion are...
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