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|TOEFL: Modern cooking methods have improved our life-style significantly
4 - It is really not a big difference. Susan made a change because it sounds awkward to say, "With technology...
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 24, 2011
|TOEFL essay: "quick decisions are unsafe decisions"
15 - Hi start208, I mean "but are (not always wrong) and (very in need)". But I think i'd better delete...
Writing Feedbackleeward - Jul 12, 2011 / leeward - Jul 24, 2011
|'People are envy'; advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need
3 - Let's pay attention to the structure. i think your aim is to write an academic writing for toefl or...
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 23, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 24, 2011
|GLOBALIZATION: Differences between nations are becoming less and less evident.
29 - "CONSCIENCE" -THIS is the best religion in the world... no culture ,tradition,ritual, or religion is above one's conscience..when ur...
Writing Feedbackbirdman - Jul 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL - Tv has NO negative effects on children.
Writing Feedbackwlsguszizi - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Essay about a personal quality(ies) that I have and am proud of
4 - The measure of the impossibility of an idea is directly correlated ---no, the measure is not corelated. The level...
Writing FeedbackRChodavadia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 23, 2011
|Students' motivation should come from teachers and family
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Toefl essay: Eating out or Eating at home? Home food is the best!
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 21, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 23, 2011
|"beauty is in fact in the eyes of the beholder" - O level essay BEAUTY
3 - Either it be centuries before BC, or today in this every-modernizing society, h You already made this point. I...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Fatherhood, motherhood, and bringing children up
3 - It is true that mothers are definitely responsible for number of babies they would like to have, when to...
Writing Feedbackgwapo - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|The american dream/economic mobility essay
3 - Living the American dream today is almost like trying to keep up with the times. (Now add a sentence...
Writing Feedbackwritinwy2much - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Important truths are outrageous when they begin; GRE ISSUE TOPIC
4 - Thanks much Kevin for valuable feedback and taking time to dig into each details of my essay. I really...
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Jul 20, 2011 / bimala73 - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL essay "Our need for friendship may be greater than ever"
4 - Thank you bhaweshwebmaste and EF_Kevin for your help!! I really appreciate it! I am very pleased to hear so...
Writing FeedbackU_Are_Awesome - Jul 19, 2011 / U_Are_Awesome - Jul 23, 2011
|Of all the mentioned five countries, Turkey had the highest spending in food, drinks and tobacco
Writing FeedbackDaisy Sircar - Jul 22, 2011 / roygao2008 - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS> Are environmental problems too big to be managed by individuals
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|"borrowing money from a friend and friendship" - TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbackmhr - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|(IELTS) What's the greatest invention in the modern world?
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|(IELTS) Internet teaching or traditional school? THX~
4 - ...brand new way for all citizens, particularly in rural area. Thus some parents suggest that traditional school education...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS writing: Is education priviledged for youth, or lifelong task?
4 - If you are talking about one educator's point of view, the apostrophe goes before the s. If you are...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS - 'infrastructure' - How to solve growing traffic and pollution problems
Writing FeedbackIsabella_ - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|Standards of zoos should be leveled up; 'KEEPING ANIMALS IN ZOOS, RIGHT OR WRONG?'
7 - hi the leaf ninja, I think your essay is very clear and decent. You defence both situation on...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 19, 2011 / muge - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS task 2: Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part
5 - Thanks to all of you!!! these are the precious reviews! thanks again!!! In my country, we have...
Writing Feedbackthanhnam46 - Jul 20, 2011 / thanhnam46 - Jul 21, 2011
|'positive reinforncement to teach is to praise positive actions, ignore negative ones
3 - The underlying assumption that is therefore needed for the putting forward of my following reasons is that to measure...
Writing Feedbackcchcal - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|Topic on Nuclear Technology - To what extend is it dangerous to life on Earth?
2 - Thanks Ajit, great stuff here! Ramandeep, can you rewrite the essay based on the corrections Ajit gave? ...
Writing FeedbackDhillon - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|IELTS - "having heaven gift is offering a better a chance"
4 - seong~ Here is some advices from my perspective. 1.In the first para., you mention that "In my point...
Writing Feedbackletsroll - Jul 19, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 21, 2011
|An essay about effects of Living in a Foreign Conuntry!
4 - Living abroad is a tempting opportunity for people, because it could lead to gaining a lot of useful experiences...
Writing FeedbackFares - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|TOEFL: Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place
2 - I really like the way you support your sentences, I would like to know if you write this essay...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 21, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011
|TOEFL: Some people like to communicate by email and voice mail. Other face-to-face.
3 - Ajit, I really like your attitude and your suggestion. I am practising in writting but due to time limitation...
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 12, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011
|ILETS essay. Becoming difficult to escape from media.
4 - Alisha, no one else other than a professional IELTS examiner would be able to exactly grade your essay...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 10, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 20, 2011
|Ielts topic: why do some students study abroad
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|Less than half of high school graduates with a diploma. - an essay
6 - Sounds like the best kind. Probably because that is what actually interests you. In my senior...
Writing Feedbackamrosca - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|Unfinished Argumentative essay. Students work while study. revising/thoughts
2 - For instance, a job added to an individuals busy schedule could help aid them to become more productive. ...
Writing Feedbacksafiyeve - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 20, 2011
|IELT writing: who should teach children to be good member of society?
5 - I personally believe that is not the sole responsibility of parents to teach children to be good members of...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 12, 2011 / keemae1 - Jul 20, 2011
|what would we do to live longer?
3 - In order to help the essayist, we need to type the sentence the correct way. Hivarasti, practice typing...
Writing Feedbackhivarasti - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|My way of life and my parents way of life
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|Ielts writing: taking a gap year or entering university as soon as possible ?
5 - ...the choice about which major to study.---I added ABOUT Don't make little errors, like not capitalizing "I"...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|(IELTS) The purpose of university education
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 6, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 20, 2011
|(IELTS) Will business and cultural contact cause countires lose identities?
4 - Kevin~~ quite appreciate your help~~ I completely agree with your suggestion. Thanks a lot~~ Naruto~~ your suggestions are...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 6, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 20, 2011
|some important aspects of incorporating technology in education.
NEW - Please read and correct to me. Technology is an outcome of education and now education benefits lot from...
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|Children should not sit quietly in their seats and learn in a rote manner.
4 - Well, it seems like you are saying adults should be strict in order to demonstrate to other adults that...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|IELT writing: what is your view of success?
4 - I appreciate the chance of letting me to overcome it. Do not capitalize all those words: I Will...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|Laws should be flexible (take account of various circumstances, times, and places)
4 - Thanks, it's great to have you here! it seems like you are already proficient at writing, and now it...
Writing Feedbackcchcal - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|ielts essay - ways of reducing traffic conditions
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 16, 2011 / Geenesh - Jul 19, 2011
|Classroom management and discipline, practical every day.
5 - I really enjoyed your essay. Though, before you submit essay's proof read and make sure your grammar is correct....
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 14, 2011 / Shirley Tey - Jul 18, 2011
|what can society do to assist homeless people?
Writing FeedbackFly109238 - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|IELTS> THE PROS AND CONS OF ANIMAL TESTING
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|21st century is going to be new era and step forward to ambitious that we are calling imagination
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|Existence of the supernatural? Essay wrote on watching "The exorcism of Emily Rose"
12 - My sweetest frnd, I rarely get offensive/aggressive ever--i wasn't getting aggressive, but i just found Idiocy a cute...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 18, 2011
|How to succeed in learning a foreign languge.
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 15, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011
|Ielts topic: choosing studying at home or at school
4 - Okay, let's fix this complicated sentence: Studying with many classmates in an educational environment not only brings me...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|Ambitious dreams encourage people to endlessly try for their success
3 - ... because it seems to be more advantageous to achieve the goals under general circumstances. After thorough consideration,...
Writing Feedbacksei - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|My pet tiger, bitten by a snake and died.
Writing FeedbackScott30 - Jul 15, 2011 / EricJ - Jul 17, 2011
|In the pursuit of peace, is it okay to sacrifice the lives and freedoms of some?
2 - As a result, many people were stripped of their personal belongings, status, and wealth, and the people of the...
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|Better place to live is a big city; more opportunities
4 - Great question! Yes, in the 6th edition of the APA style guide they changed it to recommend typing...
Writing FeedbackBecool - Jul 6, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|"my father whom i respect forever" - The person i would like to be
Writing Feedbackiloveyou - Jul 14, 2011 / iloveyou - Jul 17, 2011
|TOEFL:'history and geography'; working teenagers while they are still students.
4 - Most people hypothesize that the students have a responsibility to study well at school.----Practice typing the sentence this way....
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|"studying in overseas" - IS IT GOOD TO STUDY ABROAD ?
3 - Now trim away the extra words: Many would be definitely be glad at the thought of being able to...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|"The Crusifix of Pope John Paul the II" - Describe an insignificant object
Writing Feedbackrlatin2002 - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|IELTS - School Graduate with negative attitudes - Cause and Solution
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 13, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
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