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|Existence of the supernatural? Essay wrote on watching "The exorcism of Emily Rose"
12 - My sweetest frnd, I rarely get offensive/aggressive ever--i wasn't getting aggressive, but i just found Idiocy a cute...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 18, 2011
|How to succeed in learning a foreign languge.
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 15, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011
|Ielts topic: choosing studying at home or at school
4 - Okay, let's fix this complicated sentence: Studying with many classmates in an educational environment not only brings me...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|Ambitious dreams encourage people to endlessly try for their success
3 - ... because it seems to be more advantageous to achieve the goals under general circumstances. After thorough consideration,...
Writing Feedbacksei - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|My pet tiger, bitten by a snake and died.
Writing FeedbackScott30 - Jul 15, 2011 / EricJ - Jul 17, 2011
|In the pursuit of peace, is it okay to sacrifice the lives and freedoms of some?
2 - As a result, many people were stripped of their personal belongings, status, and wealth, and the people of the...
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|Better place to live is a big city; more opportunities
4 - Great question! Yes, in the 6th edition of the APA style guide they changed it to recommend typing...
Writing FeedbackBecool - Jul 6, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|"my father whom i respect forever" - The person i would like to be
Writing Feedbackiloveyou - Jul 14, 2011 / iloveyou - Jul 17, 2011
|TOEFL:'history and geography'; working teenagers while they are still students.
4 - Most people hypothesize that the students have a responsibility to study well at school.----Practice typing the sentence this way....
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|"studying in overseas" - IS IT GOOD TO STUDY ABROAD ?
3 - Now trim away the extra words: Many would be definitely be glad at the thought of being able to...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|"The Crusifix of Pope John Paul the II" - Describe an insignificant object
Writing Feedbackrlatin2002 - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|IELTS - School Graduate with negative attitudes - Cause and Solution
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 13, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY - FREEDOM TO EXPRESS IDEAS; '3 Idiots'
6 - yup you are right,this days i am getting really reckless,write goverment instead of government or resturant instead of...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 15, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|lot of people migrate to mega cities,reasons and the way to prevent the trend.
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 10, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|'money can't buy happiness' - Is it more important to do work that pays well
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 12, 2011 / Roxal - Jul 15, 2011
|TOEFL writing - Are parents best teachers? Yes, they are.
Writing Feedbacknguyendinhtuong - Jul 13, 2011 / nguyendinhtuong - Jul 15, 2011
|Academic writing Ielts: Effects of globalization
5 - Endless controversy has erupted over globalization. The purpose of my writing is to critically analyse the typical impacts...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|'born in Dehiwala; life of opportunities' - Essay about "MySelf"
Writing Feedbackavanthihfc - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|About MY, Rahul, brother from PUNE
Writing Feedbackvijay kumar - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|The reasons for learning languages of 1000 native and non-native speakers
3 - I have a suggestion for making the beginning clearer: The bar chart presents results of a questionnaire distributed to...
Writing Feedbackoonguyenminh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|SAT - Are people more productive and successful if they ignore opinions of others?
2 - Welcome, Geetanjali! Hey, Mirela, you are doing a lot of great work lately! Thanks, I hope you don't steal...
Writing Feedbackgeetanjali - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|TOEFL: do you agree that technology helps students learn more and faster?
4 - Hi. Now a days nowadays it is possible for teachers to provide student with sutable materials in different formats...
Writing Feedbackshanbalook - Jul 14, 2011 / shhzbch - Jul 15, 2011
|TOELF-should children play computer games
5 - Does this first sentence NOT reveal what she will write about and what her feelings on this matter...
Writing Feedbackshhzbch - Jul 13, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 14, 2011
|Multicultural society is much more beneficial?
2 - To begin with, like the magnificent rainbow with seven colors, the variety itself is a priceless gift, and when...
Writing Feedbackmegiacodon - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 14, 2011
|Barcelona (where would you like to travel and why)
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 14, 2011
|Do advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives?
NEW - I wrote a Writing Task 2 example and the task description is "Some people say that advertising encourages us...
Writing Feedbackkimrivera11 - Jul 14, 2011 / — -
|Myself as a teacher: "Never loose your strength and confidence."
Writing Feedbackn8dewangan - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|Ships Ahoy -- floundering marriages
Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|It is More Important to Work at a Job that You Enjoy than it's to Earn a Lot of Money
4 - Hey, I don't think there is anything to worry about. I read the essay, and the mistakes are very...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Jul 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|TOEFL:Do you agree or disagree with the statement that a zoo has no useful purpose.
4 - Some people may believe that a zoo is futile in the era of globalization, which people can develop their...
Writing FeedbackAMM - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program
4 - I think you should type the essay again, and use amrosca's suggestions. That is the only way to improve....
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree with this. ( TOEFL writing)
3 - Here is another idea: First and foremost, personal enjoyment is where I put my priority. ----This is a simple...
Writing Feedbacktunpip_1994 - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|TOEFL - Learning to be independent is essential for young adults
3 - Good support and analysis of your point. I think you could make it stronger by not stating that it's...
Writing Feedbacksandy1210428 - Jul 11, 2011 / s1394 - Jul 12, 2011
|"fulfilled the dreams and aspirations of him and his father" - my personal essay
Writing FeedbackRChodavadia - Jul 12, 2011 / RChodavadia - Jul 12, 2011
|Schoolyard: A good place for socialization.
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 11, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011
|What are factors which are related to academic success in high-school students?
NEW - As a high-school student, getting your distinctions is the pinnacle of our tedious academic endeavors. Thus drowning ourselves in...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011 / — -
|If we choose an animal to like, we should do our best to protect them
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 12, 2011
|TOEFL:Government should regard investing in building roads as the most important
5 - Yes, that is a good idea. However, sometimes you can get the wrong idea easily if you rely on...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 8, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 12, 2011
|Discuss the causes of this phenomenon: In general, people are living longer now.
2 - hello, I like the elaboration of your essay. its a great essay, but i just note some words that...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 11, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011
|one word essay on time & quality of our life.
4 - thankyou so much for the feedbaackkss :)) im so happy with the comments, thanks for helping me improvise. well,...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 2, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011
|A beautiful girl at night time
Writing FeedbackJunie Rana - Jun 15, 2011 / Junie Rana - Jul 12, 2011
|Sex education should be a compulsory part of the secondary curriculum
5 - EF_Kevin: you have a great English skill and i am grateful for your feedback!Thanks...I will strive for the best...
Writing Feedbacksamuel11023 - Jul 9, 2011 / samuel11023 - Jul 11, 2011
|IELTS ADVERTISING- POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE PART OF OUR LIVES
7 - Many believe that advertising has brought great benefits to lives. Therefore, it should be considered a positive activity while...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 11, 2011
|Ielts - use of nuclear technology should be discouraged even for civil purposes
4 - Welcome to EF!! I'm glad you are enjoying the sight. Thanks for posting! Be careful of little...
Writing Feedbackw_even - Jul 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 11, 2011
|TOEFL-people should have hobbies and do physical activities
Writing Feedbacklisette - Jul 7, 2011 / lisette - Jul 10, 2011
|Working moms cause problems in the society - ILETS
7 - Women play a significant role towards the success of any nation. Infact, women are considered to be the backone...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 4, 2011 / w_even - Jul 10, 2011
|TOEFL - the main point is to be sure if we can pay a loan or not
7 - It seems like money can do anything, even can harm friendship!---I corrected the grammar. It's not money...
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Jul 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 9, 2011
|Toefl: Children should learn to handle money - benefits for the whole society.
12 - In conclusion, letting children manage their own money will not only benefit children's lives but also benefit the whole...
Writing Feedbackcongcguoke - Jun 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 9, 2011
|IELTS: Space Exploration, money should be spent on? 'few compulsory drawbacks'
2 - As the competition between developed countries has become frequent, they try to build a reputation by means of exploration...
Writing Feedbackwinniesun - Jul 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 9, 2011
|IELTS> "Employees working at home" contribute benefits to employers?
3 - Plural: ...by their beloved family members may... encourage the employees to produce get more work done. ......
Writing Feedbackwinniesun - Jul 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 9, 2011
|Topic: "Why go to university?" - making dreams come true?
2 - GreatdealsLarge number of student go to universities per year in order to have a healthy and active environment,obtainacquire...
Writing Feedbacknguyendinhtuong - Jul 9, 2011 / dumi - Jul 9, 2011
|TOEFL: The best way of learning life (listening to advice or personal experience?)
NEW - TOPIC: Some people believe that the best way of learning life is by listening to the advice of family...
Writing Feedbackleeward - Jul 9, 2011 / — -
|My Grandma, youthful in spirit. Creative writing piece.
NEW - Hi, this is a piece of writing about my grandma, I am strugling with the structure and flow so...
Writing FeedbackGeeRaCeR - Jul 8, 2011 / — -
|Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office?
7 - Are you talking about the topic sentence of the 3rd paragraph? Another equally important factor that that makes...
Writing Feedbackzhonghua2412 - Jul 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 8, 2011
|"Brand is Me"--About myself as if I'm a brand
2 - Yes, if the first part would be a complete sentence on it's own, then you separate the 2 halves...
Writing Feedbackleia624 - Jul 6, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 8, 2011
|[ IELTS ] Children should be encouraged to co-operate or to be competitve?
Writing Feedbackmikneiht - Jun 10, 2011 / mikneiht - Jul 8, 2011
|ILETS Essay. Mass communication and transport continue to grow.
NEW - As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 8, 2011 / — -
|Dropping out; Encouraging the student to get involved in extracurriculars.
4 - It is clear and easy to understand. The mistakes are small mistakes. I think you will pass, but I...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 7, 2011
|Technology or social needs ? Which should get priority over the other?
2 - Every governmental expenditure should be well thought out before being made. This facilitates much of the bureaucratic activity....
Writing Feedbackangellin25 - Jul 7, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 7, 2011
|"Weekend will pass as usual" - essay about how i spend my week off.
4 - Look, you capitalized a word after a comma: I always wake up quite late in the morning, After finishing...
Writing Feedbacksooriyan - Jul 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 7, 2011
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