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|GRE: The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Aug 1, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 8, 2011
|【TOEFL】Should governments spend as much money as possible on space exploration?
8 - In general, it is good! I think you should place another reason to support your opinion or place the...
Writing Feedbackashley_shan - Aug 3, 2011 / Helen L - Aug 8, 2011
|TOEFL - Humans have feelings, and because of this, they are easily manipulated by grades
Writing Feedbackargentum - Aug 6, 2011 / Helen L - Aug 7, 2011
|IELTS Government-sponsored space travel wasted money and effort of our generation
2 - Spaced travel, likeenormousthe dream of scientists, has made a great achievementwas achieved when the spaceman had the first...
Writing Feedbackinskychen - Aug 7, 2011 / dumi - Aug 7, 2011
|FTMS Student Services Department event essay
NEW - With the blissful lights and the orderable decoration with theme of FTMS Staff Get Together & Breaking fast took...
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|Improving public transportation could reduce air pollution in a city
NEW - Some people believe that governments should spend more money on developing public transportation, such as buses, trains, and subways....
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|"I'm on plane to Africa, WHAT!!" - FIRST UNDERGRAD ESSAY
6 - morganday123 Some questions: Is there a maximum amount of pgs your essay can be??? So what you mean is...
Writing Feedbackjisthesmartess - Aug 6, 2011 / jisthesmartess - Aug 7, 2011
|IELTS - solving crime through attacking the causes of crime
2 - Hi Sangeetha, see I told u that you will get plenty of opinions here. EF_Susan has already made the...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Aug 6, 2011 / ajit88rai - Aug 6, 2011
|Faridabad, Tracing a town's culture
6 - That's called organized religion! :-) Ha, so you are in Faridabad... so interesting to be talking to...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|Advertising has a strong negative effective on the unhealthy eating habits
2 - You presented many good statements. however, after completing your essay my brain still repeats several words. I mean you...
Writing FeedbackHelen L - Aug 6, 2011 / androidman - Aug 6, 2011
|Which would you prefer? to spend time with a few close friends or a large number or?
2 - Hello! Aysel, it's great to meet you. I'll make some suggestions... Better for less is qualified in...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|The best way to educate primary school children?
Writing Feedbackhamzarayes - Aug 5, 2011 / hamzarayes - Aug 6, 2011
|Children should only play sports for fun, or should play in competitions [Toefl]
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Aug 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|"A poorly planned retirement can result in financial tragedy." -Persuasive essay
NEW - 3. Assignment: Persuasive Essay Final Paper Thesis: A poorly planned retirement can result in financial tragedy. Americans...
Writing Feedbackjobseeker78 - Aug 6, 2011 / — -
|"job transferring" - IELTS - Career
NEW - Topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 6, 2011 / — -
|Concealed Carry- do you agree or disagree.
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 2, 2011 / Maninderrubal - Aug 6, 2011
|TOEFL:Admittedly,advertising has exerted a negative influence on peoples' food choice
Writing Feedbackfenghaomingmike - Jul 29, 2011 / jostar - Aug 6, 2011
|Should government support scientific researches even the researches have no practical
Writing Feedbackbiran - Aug 5, 2011 / hola bi - Aug 5, 2011
|follow fashion trends or dress in personal style?----IELTS practice
5 - I learn a lot from this essay, too. Well done:) kevin, I feel a little confused about "enable"....
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Aug 5, 2011
|TOEFL - Ambitious dreams are better than realistic goals.
7 - A substantial number of people think that having ambitious dreams is the best answer, for the people, because they...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 29, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 5, 2011
|If child wants to do well in school, parents should limit the hours wasted on TV?
Writing Feedbackhola bi - Aug 5, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|Ielts - students that travel and work after high school vs. those who don't
4 - thanks...
Writing Feedbackbhuralal - Aug 4, 2011 / bhuralal - Aug 5, 2011
|I would concede that knowledge from books is widely accepted - Ielts topic
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|IELTS-- important to prevent language extinction
4 - I am confused at one point of Sun's comment, and just checked. "agree sth." is more British, and...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 4, 2011 / jostar - Aug 5, 2011
|'creativity should be devised'; A gift can contribute to a child's development.
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Aug 5, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 5, 2011
|"want to learn any language" - ielts
Writing FeedbackArman177 - Aug 5, 2011 / Arman177 - Aug 5, 2011
|Do you think parents are the best teachers. Toefl IBt wrting excercise
Writing FeedbackXiaowang - Aug 1, 2011 / Xiaowang - Aug 5, 2011
|Modern technology can replace museums and art galleries agree or disagree?
2 - "replace many area" --> replace many areas "also can instead of museums " instead is not a verb...
Writing FeedbackFly109238 - Aug 5, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|Should a working mother be blamed for children's deviant behavior?
NEW - Hey, there, Thanks for every body who is willing to give me some advice about my essay. Wish...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 5, 2011 / — -
|IELTS---Advertising discourages us from being different individuals?
2 - Dear katie, I am confused with your introduction at the beginning. Since there are "different" kinds of products...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 4, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 5, 2011
|IELTS--Solve traffic and housing problems by moving companies to the rural areas?
3 - your grammar and vocabulary are so impressive. There are many phrases and new words useful to me. However,...
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 4, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|Ielts taks2: Father should share, parenting work more equally with woman. agree or no
Writing Feedbackoriole_baby9189 - Aug 3, 2011 / oriole_baby9189 - Aug 4, 2011
|Having less number of friends or more friends? Which is better?
5 - Let the topic be "some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Other choose to...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 4, 2011
|"Stone and Dylan": Who has made an impact on your life; how, why is he/she important
2 - ButSo were my two brothers, Stone and Dylan, who were positioned beside me with the same weary fate of...
Writing Feedbackmallorypreston - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 4, 2011
|essay about importance of truth in any relationship .
NEW - i believe that the truth is most important thing in our life because if we imagine that we live...
Writing Feedbackosos zizo - Aug 4, 2011 / — -
|[TOEFL] better to have rules about clothing that people wear at school or workplace
NEW - Topic: It's better to have rules about the type of clothing that people wear at schools or in their...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 4, 2011 / — -
|a single international language or not?------IELTS Practice
4 - any contributor could help me with this question? Thank you:) a friend of mine thought my argument in the...
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011 / Fiona_82075 - Aug 4, 2011
|"Music is a well-received art form" - IELTS - Music
3 - in the introductory paragraph, you do not mention that you will also discuss about "Is the traditional music of...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 2, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|This is a duty of parents to teach their children how to face the big society.
2 - Hi Saram: Few observation on your writing. Introduction should not start with the word "No Doubt". Also I...
Writing Feedbacksaram - Aug 3, 2011 / bimala73 - Aug 4, 2011
|IELTS--Air travel only brings advantages to the rich people?
2 - Hi Katie, Work on your grammar part,and also the spellings too. The arguments as I personally feel aren't very...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 2, 2011 / ajit88rai - Aug 3, 2011
|Toefl: "health improvement and time-saving" food has become easier to prepare...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 3, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 3, 2011
|'valuable and irrecoverable'; Should a city preserve its old buildings?
6 - First, maintaining the old, historic buildings is a money-consuming task. First, maintaining the old, historic buildings needs money-consuming task....
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 27, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|Structure and creators of the Stonehenge - TOEFL writing/
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 2, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|[TOEFL] In the past, people were friendlier than we are now. Agree or Disagree.
NEW - When dating back to the old times, people argue that we, as human kind, were friendlier than we are...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 3, 2011 / — -
|Should we read books that are based on real events, real people? NO
4 - Jostar thank you for you feedback. i found problem in the third part: "lots of people" not "lot of...
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Aug 3, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 3, 2011
|Possible effects of longer living for individuals and society[Report IELTs]
NEW - Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging...
Writing Feedbackspoontzc - Aug 3, 2011 / — -
|Economic development VS Loss of social values [IELTs]
Writing Feedbackspoontzc - Jul 28, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 3, 2011
|GRE:As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, humans thinking
Writing Feedbackego - Aug 2, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 3, 2011
|Do you think distance learning is more beneficial for students?
2 - With technology advanced----with advances in technology they promotespromote maybe the beginning of the last paragraph should add something...
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 2, 2011 / Fiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS- Education- should graduates pay the full cost of their education?
3 - Hi Wolverine, Since you were asked to what extent you agree or disagree with the statement, you should...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS - the arguments for and against keeping pets
4 - For many years it has been recognized that animals are not justonly helpers for our work, but also they...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / TTJudy - Aug 2, 2011
|Bowdoin: Comment on intellectual engagement, connection to place, or the common good
Writing Feedbacknicolew - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS "adult life at work" - What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
6 - Androidman and Vanessa000, thank you very much. it still has many functions to improve people to satisfy their...
Writing Feedbackinskychen - Aug 2, 2011 / inskychen - Aug 2, 2011
|'People are too busy' - Some prefer to spend their free time outdoors
4 - Thank you!!!...
Writing Feedbackkevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 2, 2011
|Should fatherhood be valued equally as motherhood?
NEW - Hey, everybody, I want to say thanks once more here to each of you who ever leave some ideas...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|The wolf + Strong relationships - help to the correction of these paragraphs?
Writing Feedbackp177 - Jul 30, 2011 / p177 - Aug 2, 2011
|Should people have just one career or possess several jobs at the same time?
4 - Thank you Annika, I will be more aware of using formal words in my articles. Thanks for reminding...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 2, 2011
|As everything has own pros and cons in this world, also computers impact on our life is debatable
NEW - Topic: Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others fell that...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|IELTS; Wealthy vs Poor Nations; not only a moral deed, but also a worthwhile one
3 - you should add up the detail reasons in the first para., it will make your outline more clearer~...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 1, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS; Government should spend money on ARTs, not only on public services
7 - Thus, a great number of people firmly believe that we will keep up this upward trend, achieving higher goals...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 2, 2011
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