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|'How I viewed Islamic missionaries' - personal essay
2 - Upon constant insistence.I set out on a religious journey of 10 days with a team of 12 members. Our...
Writing Feedbackyasirsarosh - Nov 28, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 30, 2011
|'SECOND SEMESTER RESUMES' - personal essay: Experiencing life
2 - I was constantly bullied by my peers: they mocked at my running style, made fun of my debating and...
Writing Feedbackyasirsarosh - Nov 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 30, 2011
|Essay about the health and fitness -'People are getting lazier than ever before'
NEW - topic:in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing....
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|How many of you have experienced the EARTHQUAKE?
NEW - I am writing this essay to tell all of you something. Please give me advices if there is any...
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|Toefl Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully
Writing Feedbacksami talib - Nov 25, 2011 / momid - Nov 29, 2011
|'save money to buy luxury items' - TOEFL Essay
5 - Hi deepa, thanks for your feedback.i checked your essay. custom made is a correct word. we use this word...
Writing Feedbackmomid - Nov 24, 2011 / momid - Nov 29, 2011
|About a Successful College Student
2 - You have a writing style that flows well. You have made many good points in your paper. I can...
Writing Feedbackdamon451 - Nov 28, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 29, 2011
|Essay on how sugar and alcohol have caused the degeneration of people
4 - Oh wait nevermind, I was confusing this for the other essay I'm working on right now. This one was...
Writing Feedbackyasi95 - Nov 21, 2011 / yasi95 - Nov 28, 2011
|'Daddy can't tugboat our ship much longer' - Ethical Dilemma
3 - Thanks! Could you guys look for grammatical errors that I can't see. I'll be more than happy to look...
Writing Feedbackwpiedr1480 - Nov 28, 2011 / wpiedr1480 - Nov 28, 2011
|Three part theme essay on my Tragic Flaw
2 - Man is destined to face challenges, for life is not a bed of roses. Obstacles and difficulties are...
Writing Feedbacklserilla - Nov 27, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 28, 2011
|Unintended Consequences of Nuclear Power Plants
NEW - Prompt: How have attempts to solve Problem X resulted in Problem Y, and what steps should we take to...
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|"Flowers for a 90-year-old Ophelia" --Princeton U prompt
4 - Thank you for your wonderful advice! I took your suggestions, and my essay looks much better than before! I'm...
Writing Feedbackbookbug_xd - Nov 27, 2011 / bookbug_xd - Nov 27, 2011
|Printed books is more affected than TV.
NEW - Pinted books affect more than TV on the society. Agree/ disagree? Although many people believe that printed books affect...
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|Paper about if public schools should require uniforms
3 - thank you :)...
Writing FeedbackHollister81 - Nov 22, 2011 / Hollister81 - Nov 27, 2011
|Functional electrical stimulation (FES) - An abstract for a paper
3 - Thanks....
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Nov 22, 2011 / abedkh - Nov 27, 2011
|IELTS- High salaries of sportspeople ? How do you justify this?
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|Study abroad Whats will be likes and dislikes
2 - Studying abroad has some pros and cons Just like a coins that has two different sides .However I am...
Writing Feedbackdeepa21 - Nov 27, 2011 / sumersinha - Nov 27, 2011
|Tommy Douglas was Saskatchewan's most notable politician and great Canadian
NEW - Tommy Douglas was Saskatchewan's most notable politician, and one of the Greatest Canadians in history. Douglas took large roles...
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|IELTS --- Should we follow fashion trends or not?
Writing Feedbackxinbada007 - Nov 26, 2011 / xinbada007 - Nov 26, 2011
|SAT Essay About Whether Small Decision Often Have Major Consequence
2 - It's good and interesting. However, in the third sentence of the second paragraph, "However, them can hardly elucidate reasonably...
Writing FeedbackBill Zhang - Nov 25, 2011 / baron_2007 - Nov 25, 2011
|'Giving importance urbanization' - Environment Essay
2 - People have always been in nature and environment. It is like a balance of nature. -i don't get it-...
Writing Feedbackozzge - Nov 25, 2011 / caoyuxi - Nov 25, 2011
|My Tragic Flaw - a three-part theme analogy composition
2 - Amazing essay. Just some little things what think is treasure is their trash - you missed a 'they' there...
Writing FeedbackMiguel11795 - Nov 25, 2011 / karan11295 - Nov 25, 2011
|Learn foreign language In own country or Country where is is spoken Opinion
2 - It would include the cost of airfare , food , accommodation and school and the cost would become really...
Writing Feedbackdeepa21 - Nov 24, 2011 / deepa21 - Nov 24, 2011
|My essay about Mass media have great influence in shaping people's ideas
3 - Thank you Renoir about your suggestion. And I am really keen on your idea about a link to the...
Writing Feedbackhah177 - Nov 23, 2011 / hah177 - Nov 24, 2011
|Students unable to get better jobs though they are getting good grades - GRE
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|'man is a social animal' - Toefl spend your time alone of with friends?
Writing Feedbacksami talib - Nov 23, 2011 / sami talib - Nov 24, 2011
|Thesis Paper on how visual media and it's influence on good and bad - Feedback?
Writing FeedbackCeceliailecec - Nov 20, 2011 / bxlnt - Nov 24, 2011
|The right to water and its global implications-- very rough draft-- lacks conclusion
2 - A few suggestions: Withholding water from any human is comparable to murder. This sounds odd, being the reader,...
Writing Feedbacknicole321 - Nov 18, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 23, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY: Invention of A New International Language. Advantages & Disadvantages.
Writing FeedbackGinwo - Oct 25, 2011 / mursel - Nov 23, 2011
|IELTS should be a law to control violence in tv?
Writing Feedbackhyperione - Nov 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 23, 2011
|international sport events play a significant role in decreasing tensions..
3 - International sport events play a significant role in decreasing tensions.. FOOTBALL IS THE MOST POPULAR GAME AND PLAYED SIGNIFICANT...
Writing Feedbacksoraya - Nov 1, 2011 / SHAHFAHAD - Nov 23, 2011
|Do women have to serve in the military?...
Writing Feedbacksmya - Nov 9, 2011 / smya - Nov 23, 2011
|'My parents and my teachers were proud' - Shortening Essay?
2 - I was depressed, and I knew thatI needed something to give me new perspective or direction into achieving my...
Writing FeedbackStephenhanrahan - Nov 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 22, 2011
|the Leptospirosis disease
NEW - I have to tell your guys in advance that my english is poor and my writing is quite bad.So,I...
Writing Feedbacktana - Nov 22, 2011 / — -
|Education is dominant factor for development of country
5 - Your diction is a problem, dont use phrases like it's true, etc. It is suppose to be your opinion,...
Writing Feedbackmursel - Nov 21, 2011 / Elitelee - Nov 22, 2011
|a severe weather experience first paragraph
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|Computers: another tech innovation that u think in important in international society
NEW - With no doubt computers are have changed the way the nations interact with each other in international society ....
Writing Feedbackdeepa21 - Nov 21, 2011 / — -
|Review: Pets should be treated like family member do u agree or disgree.
3 - Thanks :)...
Writing Feedbackdeepa21 - Nov 18, 2011 / deepa21 - Nov 21, 2011
|'Drawing is my passion' - my sat short essay
2 - Drawing is my passion. I am found of drawing because it helps me forget about all my tension and...
Writing Feedbackxamdate - Nov 19, 2011 / Ceceliailecec - Nov 20, 2011
|'A girl living with four younger siblings' - Who Am I
2 - A couple grammatical changes: I enjoy draw and mingle (drawing and mingling ) with new people. I do not...
Writing FeedbackDiamond2012 - Nov 20, 2011 / denofthieves - Nov 20, 2011
|'the Internet is an adequate source of academic information' - Ielts essay
NEW - University lecturers are now able to put their lectures on the internet for students to read and so the...
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|Groups or organizations are an important part of some people's lives?
NEW - Groups or organizations are an important part of some people's lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people?...
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|'My parents are Chinese' - English 101 - Lesson Essay
3 - Currently, I am taking expository writing and reading. I'm meeting with another faculty reader to help me with grammar...
Writing FeedbackkLPantera - Nov 17, 2011 / kLPantera - Nov 20, 2011
|'dominance of one sex over another on different faculties' Cambridge Task
Writing FeedbackAnuar KZ - Nov 11, 2011 / Anuar KZ - Nov 19, 2011
4 - The story tells about a mountain climber,who wanted to climb the highest mountain. He began his adventure after many...
Writing Feedbackfabaca - Nov 13, 2011 / s_saber - Nov 18, 2011
|Successfull person = money? 'comfortable with itself and with the others'
2 - In the modern society,the money has becomes increasingly important. Everyone wants to lead/have a wealthy life and everyone tries...
Writing Feedbackhyperione - Nov 18, 2011 / Nikki_Phenomena - Nov 18, 2011
|【IELTS】Childcare is an important task for nations.
3 - Nowadays, childcare plays a significant role in our families and evenespecially in our country. How to become knowledgeable mothers...
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Nov 18, 2011 / dumi - Nov 18, 2011
|The Power of Psychology - mandatory course at your college?
3 - As a fifteen year old boy,I experience feeling of despair, anxiety and fear. (Due to a congenital condition called...
Writing Feedbackcon0r - Nov 15, 2011 / iii_atsied - Nov 18, 2011
|(new recovery drink) one part of my essay: conclusion and remmendation
3 - Hi Zhang Jie Are you writing an essay or a marketing report? If it's an academic essay it has...
Writing Feedbackiamzj - Nov 6, 2011 / Roger Bishop - Nov 17, 2011
|Should GPA be a factor for school sports?
2 - You have a very straight forward introduction. I like how you spend no time at all providing filler, and...
Writing FeedbackSkarl - Nov 16, 2011 / Captainasian167 - Nov 17, 2011
|Daydreamer -- poetry-like
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Nov 12, 2011 / rajp98 - Nov 17, 2011
|TOEFL- People recognize a difference between children and adults.
NEW - The whole topic is : People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make...
Writing Feedbacksteakwulikire - Nov 17, 2011 / — -
|'crime is not an exception' - Essay - IELTS
NEW - Hi, I am preparing for the IELTS and practicing some essays, here is one of them. Topic: Some...
Writing Feedbackfelippe404 - Nov 17, 2011 / — -
|Should children taught to be co-operative rather than compete?
Writing Feedbackshandy133 - Nov 13, 2011 / stellastella - Nov 17, 2011
|IELTS writing test-equal gender in university
2 - ... And now, another question appeared, is it necessary to provide equal access to male and female to every...
Writing FeedbackCatherine Xu - Nov 16, 2011 / lavender_pham - Nov 16, 2011
|The collage years are best time in personal life - Agree/ disagree
Writing Feedbackdeepa21 - Nov 15, 2011 / ssc8701 - Nov 16, 2011
|if you could make one important change in a school (Toefl)
3 - There are a lot of things, which could be changed in our university: classrooms, libraries, labs, and so on....
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Nov 16, 2011 / ssc8701 - Nov 16, 2011
|'Nothing Without Great effort'
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|Measures to promote understanding towards volunteerism
2 - Nowadays, volunteerism can be found everywhere. Re- word this sentence Maybe: Volunteerism is a growing trend in many communities....
Writing Feedbacknoobeng - Nov 15, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 16, 2011
|more and more people start to pay attention to education
2 - A few things... With the rapid development of economy, more and more people start to pay attention to...
Writing Feedbackchealse - Nov 13, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 16, 2011
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