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|CBEST ESSAY! CONTRIBUTION OF TECHNOLOGY - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE ?
3 - Khushboo, what happened? You already scored a 3 with your previous exercise and now you are back to a...
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 11, 2018
|IELTS writing task 2: Celebrities must have wonderful lives.
3 - Peter, your opening paraphrase is not aligned with the original prompt even though the rest of your discussion is...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 11, 2018
|The amount of energy used and manufactured in the United States
Writing FeedbackAnn Ngo - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 11, 2018
|Foreigners should adapt the host country's customs and tradition when settling in
Writing Feedbackvietduccan - Jan 8, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 10, 2018
|Ieles Task-1 The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia.
Writing FeedbackJon Wang - Jan 10, 2018 / PeterBrown - Jan 10, 2018
|Happiness is now and here. To what extent do you agree with this statement
4 - @Holt thanks for your constructive criticism. I will conform to what you recommend to improve my writing skill...
Writing Feedbackbaothu - Jan 8, 2018 / baothu - Jan 10, 2018
|Punishment for learn distinction between right and wrong/ at least 250 words
2 - Gina, the lack of original prompt reference in this essay has made it extremely difficult for me to review...
Writing FeedbackGina Chu - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 10, 2018
|Vegetarians do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Is it a good way for others too?
3 - Can, this is an opinion essay. Therefore, in the thesis statement for your opening paraphrase, you should include your...
Writing Feedbackvietduccan - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 10, 2018
|IELTS writing task 2: Should women join the army? Just like men do.
3 - I think the way that you organized the essay was probably wrong because of some reasons.The topic requires you...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Jan 7, 2018 / vietduccan - Jan 10, 2018
|Accident at the waterfall. Memorable childhood incident - Exam essay
Writing FeedbackHardik vohra - Jan 9, 2018 / Holt - Jan 10, 2018
|Wanting something and not getting it can be very disappointing - your experiences
3 - Hi Thank you so much for your feedback. Could you help me with a few essay topics for Personal...
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 8, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 9, 2018
|Prohibit the fast food industry from advertisement? Opinion essay.
6 - You would have scored 6 bands for your essay, If you have included on more paragraph with examples of...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Dec 23, 2017 / Tanmayzz - Jan 9, 2018
|IELTS: you work at home and have a problem with the equipment that use for job, write letter to supp
5 - Your letter should follow the structure : 1) write the purpose why you are writing the letter 2) Explain...
Writing Feedbackkalnt87 - Jan 8, 2018 / Tanmayzz - Jan 9, 2018
|The adopted policy of early education of foreing languages
4 - Thanks a lot for your clear and detailed instruction for my writing! It is really helpful for me to...
Writing Feedbackyunrong49 - Jan 5, 2018 / yunrong49 - Jan 8, 2018
|The only space available for building new homes is generally in the countryside
4 - Hi Kardy, I would like to offer a closing conclusion for your reference. To conclude, regional places provide...
Writing Feedbackkardymoon - Jan 6, 2018 / Jimmy879873 - Jan 7, 2018
|My reaction to this article
Writing FeedbackMiKiDe - Jan 7, 2018 / MiKiDe - Jan 7, 2018
|A letter to the homestay host family. Ielts task 1.
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Jan 7, 2018 / Jimmy879873 - Jan 7, 2018
|Motivation Letter for European Master in Law & Economics Programme
2 - Adil, you must remove the dialogue at the start of the motivation letter. This is a formal letter requesting...
Writing Feedbacknemezidus - Jan 7, 2018 / Holt - Jan 7, 2018
|Why we are producing more and more rubbish? Most of the waste are the plastic bags.
6 - Hi Tanmay, the closing paragraph is for you to wrap up all of your supporting points that you have...
Writing FeedbackTanmayzz - Jan 6, 2018 / Jimmy879873 - Jan 7, 2018
|Artists, poets and musicians are not as important, as lawyers, doctors or engineers
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 4, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 6, 2018
|Talented people are better off working overseas IELTS writing task 2
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Dec 25, 2017 / MrsOng - Jan 6, 2018
|IELTS writing task2: Universities should not teach arts subjects, agree or disagree?
2 - Liang, the first thing you need to know about this essay is that it does not properly paraphrase the...
Writing Feedbackshan2 - Jan 5, 2018 / Holt - Jan 5, 2018
|The proportion of UK student able to speak other languages that their native
Writing Feedbacksyik0077 - Jan 5, 2018 / Holt - Jan 5, 2018
|Work topic: the expectation of job for all workers
Writing FeedbackQuazar - Jan 4, 2018 / Quazar - Jan 5, 2018
|Simultanously with making money, companies need to have public responsibilities. Do you agree or not
2 - Lê, this is not a comparison essay for discussion. This is a single opinion essay presentation. While your opening...
Writing FeedbackHa Le - Jan 3, 2018 / Holt - Jan 4, 2018
|ESSAY / THE IMPACT OF TOYS ON A CHILD'S DEVELOPMENT
2 - Lê, is this a direct response essay for the IELTS test? Please remember to indicate the type of test...
Writing Feedbacknhatnghilevuong - Jan 4, 2018 / Holt - Jan 4, 2018
|The differences between Islip town centre now and as it is planned to develop.
Writing FeedbackSunny babe - Dec 30, 2017 / shan2 - Jan 3, 2018
|A lot of advantages for children to gain the bilingual ability as early as possible
2 - Kristy, I don't think that you are familiar with the discussion requirements, per paragraph of the task 2 essay....
Writing Feedbacktrotseerelaine - Jan 3, 2018 / Holt - Jan 3, 2018
|IELTS10 - Line graph - CO2 emissions in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal
3 - Thank you for your feedback. I didn't upload my graph because I don't know how to upload. I apologise...
Writing Feedbackorph - Jan 3, 2018 / orph - Jan 3, 2018
|The countries with coffee harvesting and coffee consumption
4 - ThaoNhi, your essay needs to produce a 4 paragraph essay in order to be considered fro a qualifying score....
Writing FeedbackThaoNhi - Jan 3, 2018 / Holt - Jan 3, 2018
|Money has become an essential part of everyday life; job satisfaction vs salary?
4 - Hellooo Natalia..., I have read your response and please allow me to give you valuable feedback for the essay...
Writing FeedbackNatalia Pham - Jan 2, 2018 / eddies - Jan 2, 2018
|IELTS writing task2: the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?
2 - solar system starts to has started to ... worry about one day the energy resource will be run...
Writing Feedbackshan2 - Jan 2, 2018 / oshoapollo - Jan 2, 2018
|Too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on practical skills
4 - The second paragraph, supposedly to demonstrate that many engineers are not trained enough for professional jobs, did not provide...
Writing Feedbackrinirini - Dec 30, 2017 / mimimichelle - Jan 1, 2018
|A letter from a friend IELTS writing task 1 General - where to go for holidays?
3 - Peter, I believe that you won't learn how to write this type of letter properly unless you are shown...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Dec 31, 2017 / Holt - Dec 31, 2017
|I partly agree that children should always follow their parents' counsels
5 - ... always follow their parents'counsels.. Space should be present between these two words. ... more mature and have...
Writing Feedbacktatthang98 - Dec 27, 2017 / PeterBrown - Dec 31, 2017
|The downsides of using computers for students
Writing FeedbackTuan Anh 10c - Dec 31, 2017 / Tuan Anh 10c - Dec 31, 2017
|IELTS essay; escalating crime rate in many places, especially in metropolitan areas
2 - Le, your opening paragraph is good but is hindered by your lack of proper sentence development. You have two...
Writing Feedbackmatthewle1095 - Dec 28, 2017 / Holt - Dec 28, 2017
|Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better?
Writing Feedbacklayeghi - Dec 26, 2017 / Holt - Dec 26, 2017
|IELTS 2- Some people think that Twitter, Facebook and similar sites have a big negative impact
Writing Feedbacknatashaebab - Dec 25, 2017 / natashaebab - Dec 26, 2017
|What aspects of the computers make it become the indispensable invention in modern life?
Writing Feedbacklmp1999 - Dec 25, 2017 / PeterBrown - Dec 25, 2017
|TOEFL Independent Essay Sample ( The influence of information's availability in today's world )
3 - Hi i think you did not studied the strategies for TOEFL independent essay. overall for toefl questions you can...
Writing FeedbackSFTBNWH11 - Dec 23, 2017 / naseernasrati - Dec 24, 2017
|[IELTS ESSAY TASK2] THE GROWING NUMBER OF OVERWEIGHT PEOPLE PUTTING A STRAIN ON THE HEALTH CARE...
2 - tuvi, your essay will receive a failing score in an actual test based on the prompt deviation that you...
Writing Feedbackttv123 - Dec 24, 2017 / Holt - Dec 24, 2017
|IELTS Essay: Influence of parents to boys and girls
4 - @Holt Your comment is always helpful, and I will write it again based on your contribution. Many thanks, Mr....
Writing FeedbackAnn Ngo - Dec 23, 2017 / Ann Ngo - Dec 24, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Governments spending on promoting public health
3 - Matthew, the score for this essay is a 3. The main reason why this essay failed overall is because...
Writing Feedbackanhtuan1027 - Dec 23, 2017 / Holt - Dec 24, 2017
|Can you help evaluate this essay" What is the future of higher education?"
Writing Feedbackkdennison - Dec 21, 2017 / kdennison - Dec 23, 2017
|Men or women for higher-level positions? IELTS writing task 2
2 - Peter, your opening paraphrase is not sufficient enough. You are still using too much of the original wording in...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Dec 23, 2017 / Holt - Dec 23, 2017
|[toefl] Automobile have made a greater impact on society than airplanes.
3 - WJK, I am not sure what you are trying to discuss here and what the talking points are because...
Writing Feedbackfs1111 - Dec 23, 2017 / Holt - Dec 23, 2017
|In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV
6 - There is a little likelihood that ... Also remember that there should be a space between coma and a...
Writing FeedbackErica Tin - Nov 29, 2017 / PeterBrown - Dec 23, 2017
|IELTS writing task 2: Should we attend schools until we are at least 18?
3 - Wang, while you will not get a passing score in terms of the Task Accuracy requirements, your overall discussion...
Writing FeedbackOONA - Dec 22, 2017 / Holt - Dec 22, 2017
|Can you evaluate this essay about 'What Causes Video Game Addiction'?
2 - James, this essay is based upon unfounded assumptions. As an informative essay, it does provide information that relates to...
Writing FeedbackJmaes - Dec 21, 2017 / Holt - Dec 22, 2017
|IELTS writing task 2 - Discussion - Banning tourism to protect local culture
2 - Tam, it is unfortunate that, although your discussion of the topic is strong, you did not accurately represent the...
Writing FeedbackTambee - Dec 21, 2017 / Holt - Dec 21, 2017
|What Is the Depth of Martial Arts..?
3 - I sincerely appreciate your help, Holt. There were Text1 and Text2, and there were two separate questions, one...
Writing Feedbackbananakick - Dec 21, 2017 / bananakick - Dec 21, 2017
|Ielts writing task 2 essay: Discuss and opinion about information sharing.
2 - Le, your overall presentation for this essay is inaccurate and not within the proper prompt requirements. The first problem...
Writing FeedbackGraceN - Dec 20, 2017 / Holt - Dec 20, 2017
|IELTS Task 1 (Process) : The production of a lead pencil
3 - Apinan, while you wrote a little over the minimum word count, you need to provide at least 4 paragraphs...
Writing FeedbackIceapinan - Dec 19, 2017 / Holt - Dec 20, 2017
|Effective Public Speaking - speech anxiety is a common thing
3 - Thanks, I've made changes in the body paragraphs where I made a lot of tense errors that I didn't...
Writing Feedbackjkasper - Dec 18, 2017 / jkasper - Dec 19, 2017
|Should recycling be a legal requirement? IELTS ESSAY
5 - @ppbbjakarta Thank you so much for your help. I'm grateful for the time you spent reviewing my essay....
Writing Feedbackeli00 - Dec 16, 2017 / eli00 - Dec 18, 2017
|The development of video - What Makes a Video Go Viral?
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I need to spend more times revising the content of my essay. Thank you...
Writing Feedbackvupu65130 - Dec 18, 2017 / vupu65130 - Dec 18, 2017
|The changes in annual spending in particular UK School : WRITING TASK 1 IELTS
2 - @ppbbjakarta An analysis essay does not place important information within parenthesis. Information such as the years for analysis and...
Writing Feedbackppbbjakarta - Dec 17, 2017 / Holt - Dec 18, 2017
|The Review of movie <Whiplash> "Good job"
2 - HuJun, a movie review must be made with an academic consideration. Your essay reeks of lack of professionalism, your...
Writing FeedbackBoshishengWork - Dec 17, 2017 / Holt - Dec 18, 2017
|The general picture and percentage about weight of residents who live in Charlestown in 1955 & 2015
3 - @carol326 According to band descriptor, in term of Task Achievement, to gain 5.0 more you have to depict an...
Writing Feedbackcarol326 - Dec 12, 2017 / ppbbjakarta - Dec 17, 2017
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