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|Should people never be satisfied with what they have? Jane Austine's pride
Writing Feedbackrenyu199014 - Oct 27, 2010 / renyu199014 - Oct 28, 2010
|Dou agree with keeping traditional skills alive?
Writing Feedbackriny - Oct 22, 2010 / riny - Oct 27, 2010
|Innovation and technology" report on advertisement essay
2 - number agree =ment: Innovation and technology; these are the cornerstones of our modern... ...with the associated attributes of...
Writing Feedbackhannahkim91 - Oct 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 27, 2010
|Is the Internet itself bad for students?
2 - First of all, I believe all of you here are quite familiar with the internet.that sounds really awkward what...
Writing Feedbacknhilun - Oct 27, 2010 / midnight - Oct 27, 2010
|Chinese Music, Language and Literature
Writing Feedbackyin - Oct 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 27, 2010
|TOEFL; Judging a person is not an easy task because the human nature is so complicated
4 - This needs a comma: To begin with, the external appearance does not reveal one's exact character and personality, although...
Writing Feedbacklabroy - Oct 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 27, 2010
|"Honoring your parents" - my unexamined belief essay?
9 - You can do it easily, William. I'll tell you the secret: Instead of trying to think of something...
Writing Feedbackkawsneffect - Oct 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 27, 2010
|"heart-ache and identity transformation" - Cbest, negative experience essay
Writing Feedbackbobo4398 - Oct 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 27, 2010
|"a room in the Woodbridge Mental Institute" - The most enjoyable moment
Writing Feedbackmin - Oct 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 26, 2010
|International effort in solving Enviromental problems - My final try before IELTS
2 - Let's put that first sentence together with the paragraph that follows it so that it all becomes one paragraph....
Writing Feedbackzchen1987 - Oct 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 26, 2010
|"Problems with AIDS in poorer countries" - TOEFL Integrated Essay
Writing FeedbackIrrational - Oct 20, 2010 / Irrational - Oct 26, 2010
|Fixed Punishment Vs Discretionary Punishment - Discuss
NEW - Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the...
Writing Feedbacksimi - Oct 26, 2010 / — -
|TOEFL; Clothing may influence the way people behave
12 - I meant the quotation-marks in this quote: Priscilla really got quite 'above herself, dressing and behaving 'grandly', and...
Writing FeedbackKapayapaanify1 - Oct 17, 2010 / Taniad - Oct 26, 2010
|IELTS Compare the pros and cons of following as media for communicating information
NEW - Q: Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you...
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|"It's more than a cup of coffee" - ENG grammar
5 - since I have first experienced the tasty of coffee. it should be ''since i first hd my taste of...
Writing FeedbackTapple20 - Oct 20, 2010 / doyin1 - Oct 26, 2010
|Nature and nurture - are people born for certain talents?
NEW - It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and...
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|Extinct Animals - Essay
Writing FeedbackNesreen - Oct 17, 2010 / Nesreen - Oct 25, 2010
|Movies industry has greatly soared up for the recent decades
6 - Think you should change "firstly, secondly..." to "first, second". Secondly, movies can entirely satisfy human being 's desires. ("Human...
Writing Feedbackbemytthm - Oct 18, 2010 / ayida365 - Oct 24, 2010
|TOEFL Essay "What single item would you take on a one year trip?"
Writing FeedbackIrrational - Oct 23, 2010 / ayida365 - Oct 24, 2010
|Creative Essay of Death Row -- Mice Don't Talk
Writing Feedbackjghobrial - Oct 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 24, 2010
|This is my part of my essay about patriotism and fighting for what you believe in.
Writing Feedbackbarkabarx - Oct 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 24, 2010
|My Struggle to Achieve Greatness: Law School Personal Essay-Looking for feedback
Writing Feedbackcubina - Oct 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 24, 2010
|MY ROOM ESSAY (to carry out various leisure activities)
3 - Keep all the verbs in the same "form" in that list of activities: studying, watching, listening, talking, surfing ...
Writing Feedbackmichy81508 - Oct 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 23, 2010
|Is there anything we can do to stop crime?
3 - Education is an essential element in reducing the crime rate in the long run. According to the recent...
Writing Feedbackzchen1987 - Oct 22, 2010 / bakamanju - Oct 23, 2010
|Why You Shouldn't Get Excited on the Golf Course
5 - you should try to catch the readers attention without asking a question in the beginning. maybe at the end...
Writing Feedbackmegasoccer4 - Oct 14, 2010 / hannahkim91 - Oct 23, 2010
|IELTS - Sporting events easing international tensions, releasing patriotic feelings
Writing Feedbackpierre11 - Oct 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 23, 2010
|IELTS writing: should Art be ignored by the government?
4 - I think your essay structure is good enough, you discussed good point of art. 'I would like to...
Writing Feedbackeaglet008 - Oct 21, 2010 / riny - Oct 22, 2010
|TOEFL Essay "Should students be required to attend classes?"
Writing FeedbackIrrational - Oct 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 21, 2010
|Be very careful if you are driving in the winter...
Writing Feedbackpompom098 - Oct 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 21, 2010
|ielts essay: what is happiness? I still do not find the answer
2 - I think this essay answers the question, but it seems to lack depth. You address the issue that happiness...
Writing Feedbackiishine - Oct 20, 2010 / akshays1993 - Oct 21, 2010
|"Christians should be more active" - Does this essay fit the toulmin model?
Writing Feedbackgamhazell - Oct 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 20, 2010
|Essay on Margaret Mead - looking at other cultures to better understand the complexities of human
2 - Paper on Margeret Mead, need sources information Hi, Sarah I am doing my paper on Margeret Mead as...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Sep 3, 2007 / sadaf - Oct 20, 2010
|Job with more vacation time but less salary?
4 - Here is some more help: Although the first reason I mentioned above is probably the most important reason,...
Writing FeedbackNUMJMM - Oct 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 19, 2010
|IELTS: giving financial aids to the poor countries is not the way to go
6 - Thanks linying and Irrational for correcting my grammar! Kevin, Thank you for your suggestions! One issue that has...
Writing Feedbackadriennelin - Oct 14, 2010 / adriennelin - Oct 19, 2010
|IELTS - Globalisation and its effect on world's economy
Writing Feedbackpierre11 - Oct 18, 2010 / pierre11 - Oct 19, 2010
|Topic: watching tv is bad for kids
Writing Feedbackjwoo1111 - Oct 16, 2010 / YPan - Oct 18, 2010
|'from the top of a skyscraper' - Small town or big city - TOEFL
4 - Hi I think you right about the plural experiences . I misread your sentence and I thought you talking...
Writing FeedbackIrrational - Oct 16, 2010 / RyanVi16 - Oct 18, 2010
|PAPER ABOUT HALLOWEEN (A RITUAL in a SOCIAL-CULTURAL KEY)
Writing Feedbackalicepozzi - Oct 14, 2010 / alicepozzi - Oct 18, 2010
|TOELF Essay "Is it better for children to participate in team sports?"
Writing FeedbackIrrational - Oct 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 18, 2010
|What's important: get up early and programm your works and you will never let yourself to be lazy
Writing Feedbacksolmaz - Oct 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 18, 2010
|TOEFL-Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are?
5 - Hi, What's more, the most influential advertisements are dependeddependent on famous people (you can even use the word...
Writing Feedbacklinying - Oct 14, 2010 / dumi - Oct 18, 2010
|Important as classes and libraries are for students, health and social skills are also the keys
5 - You've write 335 words. According to the experience of my friends and I, a passage of 400+ words may...
Writing Feedbacklinying - Oct 14, 2010 / jinyangxue - Oct 18, 2010
|Internet provides massive amount of uncensored information which may includes antisocial materials
3 - Usually "among" is followed by a noun that is plural: great concern among the people of society.--- This way,...
Writing Feedbackkiennguyen123 - Oct 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 17, 2010
|TOEFL- money for children - they don't have the ability to keep their money safe
Writing Feedbacklinying - Oct 16, 2010 / RyanVi16 - Oct 16, 2010
|Narrative Essay On A fictional Hero - Feedback on Mechanics.
3 - who posed possessed many abilities unknown to human kind. ...with her aunt and was destined to never...
Writing FeedbackJessyyy - Oct 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 16, 2010
|IELTS Writing - Should the reports of detailed crime be banned?
3 - That first paragraph needs at least 1 more sentence to help explain your argument. Add a sentence that tells...
Writing Feedbackzchen1987 - Oct 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 16, 2010
|'Lose your concentration, lose the game': Extracurricular Activity
Writing FeedbackBenjamin89 - Oct 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 16, 2010
|The unsuspecting wayfarer
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 16, 2010
|Thesis Statement for essay 'internet has destroyed the ability to communicate'
4 - Thank you so much for your feedback, I'm taking a Toefl course now, I hope, I'll write much better...
Writing Feedbacktoefl - Oct 15, 2010 / toefl - Oct 16, 2010
|Perspective on Team Work - A group working or individual work?
Writing Feedbackradwa - Oct 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 15, 2010
|The mayor views on new automobile manufacturing plant: GRE argument essay
2 - Here is a good place to use a colon: ...and only focused on its most conspicuous negative quality: the...
Writing Feedbackradwa - Oct 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 15, 2010
|IELTS; "No boundary for art";Why creative artists be given freedom to express ideas!
Writing Feedbackpendar - Oct 11, 2010 / pendar - Oct 15, 2010
|The process of researching and writing an essay
3 - I don't like the first sentence, because examinations are PART of life. Can you try a different intro sentence?...
Writing Feedbackanna_ lewin - Oct 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 14, 2010
|Responce towards Iron Dice by John G. Stoessinger (Essay about cause of WW1)
2 - Okay, then I expect to see those factors explained as such in the essay... I'll keep reading... ...
Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - Oct 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 14, 2010
|There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person
6 - Even though many people might think that we learn only from educated people, from my point of view we...
Writing Feedbackmehdi1995 - Oct 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 14, 2010
|Narrative essay about how was my feeling about getting money.
3 - Namrata, thanks for the time you invested here... great advice. I agree that Sim's attempt is not bad. It's...
Writing Feedbackhowtowrite - Oct 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 14, 2010
|"Honor towards One's Mother and Father" - I need help summing up my essay on honor.
Writing FeedbackSupernewtJR - Oct 13, 2010 / SupernewtJR - Oct 14, 2010
|Students should go to the army course with 12 months after their graduation?
3 - Politics is always a number one matter in a country. To prepare for war posibility in advance, going to...
Writing Feedbackthaitam - Oct 11, 2010 / thaitam - Oct 14, 2010
|Exploiting tourism is more lucrative than ever to nations galore; some concerns
Writing Feedbackbemytthm - Oct 9, 2010 / bemytthm - Oct 13, 2010
|Pers.Essay: A Time When I Encountered Something Greater Than Myself--Poverty in India
5 - Thank you so VERY much for all the feedback. I wasn't expecting any at all; your comments were more...
Writing Feedbacktmiplease - Oct 8, 2010 / tmiplease - Oct 13, 2010
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