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Natural fiber-reinforced composites paragraph (improve grammar question)

4 - I'm glad I can be of help! In regards to your comma question, yes, there are commas after "This"...

Writing FeedbackLovely Girl - May 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 21, 2008
Selfishness and politics research paper and outline

13 - Good evening! You are welcome. For examples of MLA in text and work cited pages, do an internet...

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - May 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 20, 2008
Death penalty in the code of King Hammurabi of Babylon

1 - i have written the directions for my assignment. is my research paper ok? Direction: in a 10-12 page...

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Thesis essay on "Adoption issues"

11 - Good afternoon! A thesis statement usually lets the reader know right away what your stance on an issue...

Writing Feedbackbabydoll - May 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 20, 2008
Mr. Nowack - need help with grammar for a narrative essay

1 - This scruffy looking guy won't quit staring at me. I look away from him and then back again and...

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Essay on describing traffic jam

10 - Good evening. If you are looking for solutions for traffic congestion in a specific area, I suggest doing...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 17, 2008
many traditional values and customs have been lost. Pls check my essay.

5 - Good morning Sophie! Unfortunately Sarah left us for other pursuits a few weeks ago; I am sure she...

Writing FeedbackSophie - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 14, 2008
Reflective Writing - A Reflection Essay On My Writing

2 - Good evening Randy! I'd like to give you my impressions before the mechanics. I don't believe I've ever...

Writing Feedbackbonechills - May 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 12, 2008
Abortion and same-sex marriage

2 - Good evening! What kind of assistance are you in need of? Please let me know so that I...

Writing Feedbackdavidplague - May 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 10, 2008
Proving Dracula is a monster...

2 - Good evening! I think this is a good essay; you are exploring the different aspects that make Dracula...

Writing FeedbackHyperfast - May 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 10, 2008
Critical Essay on Developmental Psych. in Infants

2 - Good morning! When we write critical essays, we are judging or evaluating a specific work or idea. Your...

Writing Feedbackblossom12 - May 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 10, 2008
Essay on the result of poverty

2 - "At the end of the 20th centery (century), the Mongolian political and economic system completely changed to the democratical...

Writing Feedbackkhzul - May 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 9, 2008
How to say sorry Essay for English?

5 - I think that you do provide readers with some good insight into respect with regards to each other, and...

Writing Feedbacklowryder49 - May 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 7, 2008
help- topic: problems encounter with not speaking english in america

6 - Good evening! This is a very well organized, wonderfully articulated essay. Nice work. I have very few suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackpinks1026 - Apr 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 5, 2008
the death boat speaks

4 - I see. I'm afraid I won't be able to help you on non-academic projects. If you have something academic...

Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 5, 2008
Dangerous Minds Assignment Paragraph Writing; vivid deep movie as a grade 11 poetry unit startup.

3 - Dangerous Minds Movie character comparison Film Focus #2: Character Connections: Write a 50-75 wd paragraph on the main...

Writing FeedbackGeist - Apr 29, 2008 / Geist - May 4, 2008
The defametory Cartoons; Beyond Freedom of Speech - insightful suggestions

2 - Good morning! This essay does make some interesting points; however, it is difficult to follow because it is...

Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 4, 2008
Feed Your Soul; first trip by plane - give me your impression on the essay

2 - Good afternoon! You have a very detailed and descriptive essay! I only have a few suggestions: "Alias...

Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 3, 2008
having native English teachers in all English classes?

4 - That is a great idea! Thank you for sharing your knowledge and experience about this! Regards, Gloria Moderator,...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Apr 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 1, 2008
Research Essay about volcano experiment

1 - can you take a look at my essay and see if there are any grammatical errors and also I'm...

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Revise essay about swimming

1 - hey Can you please revise this essay on swimming activity for me ... thanks lots!!:) Recordings of...

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A True Soccer Mom. There are many ways to learn, improve and fail at something.

6 - Your essay is coming along very nicely. It is much more clear and concise now. There are still a...

Writing Feedbackjrobertson49 - Apr 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Apr 27, 2008
How to Cheat on The Exam - Process Analysis essay

6 - Yes, I am in the professional academic field....

Writing Feedbackmacho - Apr 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Apr 24, 2008
Hitler and Stalin - Essay about the Most Ferocious Dictators

3 - Allies defeated the Hitler's army. - Allies defeated Hitler's army. [This time, the apostrophe is correct!] the holocaust....

Writing Feedbackhannah1821 - Apr 22, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 22, 2008
Topic: Every rule has its exceptions; SAT essay

5 - Thank you, Paul/Purcell. :-) And you're welcome, as well. Take care! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackPurcell - Apr 19, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 22, 2008
Argumentative Essay on Nuclear Power - danger of switching to nuclear energy

4 - Quite right, Amalie. It is often the details that make an argument convincing, especially since they indicate good research....

Writing Feedbackinvisible7959 - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 22, 2008
An Unexamined life is not worth living - essay

2 - Greetings! I think your idea is good! I love that old Socrates. ;-) You've chosen some good quotations...

Writing Feedbackdejavu - Apr 21, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 21, 2008
"All Quiet on the Western Front"

3 - Thanks so much!...

Writing Feedbackkaylilah - Apr 16, 2008 / kaylilah - Apr 19, 2008
Inflation, a small change causes huge impacts - Causes and Effects essay.

4 - You're certainly welcome. :-) Your English is very good, so please don't be discouraged! English is a difficult language,...

Writing Feedbackmacho - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
"You do not understand me at all!"; Trapped Essay

4 - Greetings! I was always puzzled about the "I" vs. "me" thing until a very wise teacher taught me...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
Narrative Essay (It all started when someone said PIZZA)

2 - Greetings! It sounds like you have a family full of good cooks! Let me answer your three opening...

Writing Feedbackbonechills - Apr 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
Running away - essay

2 - Greetings! I love this story! I'm especially fond of the twist at the end. You have a real...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Apr 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
'The eggs' - My Narrative Essay

4 - Greetings! I like your ending! It gives good insight into her character. For better comprehension, you might want...

Writing FeedbackRuby3561 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 16, 2008
How Industrial Design is important to society

3 - Greetings! We try to answer posts within 24 hours, but can't always do so immediately. I hope this...

Writing Feedbackmasamuneshirow2 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
negative correlation between TOEIC and proficiency.

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good, concise essay! Here are some editing tips: Judging one's language proficiency...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
Comparison Essay- Italian food and restaurants

4 - Greetings! I suppose the lack of introduction is because you do not make it clear from the first...

Writing FeedbackDDOWNS4 - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
ESSAY on entrepreneurship for acceptance into special program-feedback pls?

2 - Greetings! Your English is excellent! I don't think I'd have known it's not your first language if you...

Writing Feedbackandrefreydell - Apr 12, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 13, 2008
Detroit news - Mayor Kwame Kilpatrick. Term paper

4 - You're welcome! And feel free to ask questions! :-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing FeedbackLeighS - Apr 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
College Writing assignment: Remembering a person essay

2 - Greetings! Well, after reading your essay, it's no mystery why you, a high school student, are taking a...

Writing Feedbackdg_201 - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
The importance of human's creativity can be easily considered in business field

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: We are living in a modern...

Writing FeedbackPurcell - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
Essay about my life and changes - can you help me?

5 - Greetings! We try to answer all posts within 24 hours, but cannot guarantee to have them by a...

Writing FeedbackJarman - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
The Crowd Stadium - essay

1 - The feeling was exhilarating. My hold body was experiencing crucial anxiety. It was like a dream come true. To...

Writing Feedbacknishat_bhuiyan - Apr 11, 2008 / — -
What it means to be a High School Writer

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! Here are some editing suggestions for you: Street, in his...

Writing Feedbacks2121 - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 10, 2008
Testing, a Perfect Tool? A Toulmin Model Essay

2 - Greetings! I think you have a good start; however, there are a few things that you might want...

Writing Feedbackice tea - Apr 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment-Is mankind inherently good or evil?

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! There is very little that I'd suggest changing. I should point out...

Writing FeedbackBake0345 - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
Speech critique 2 - X's informative speech

2 - Greetings! Another great paper! Here are some editing tips: X's speech was an average one, it had...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
Speech critique 1 - a subject that can be supported by empirical data

2 - Greetings! You've written a good paper! Here are some editing suggestions: The following is an informative speech...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
A reflection paper about my practicum site

4 - That sounds great! Feel free to post it here for editing tips if you like! Thanks, Sarah,...

Writing FeedbackKathy - Apr 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 8, 2008
Ron Paul Media Expose. check it for errors.

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good paper! If you are following MLA format, when you mention the author's...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Apr 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 7, 2008
Economy vs Ecology - essay

4 - You're very welcome! I learned a little Turkish ("a little" being a dozen words or so) from online friends....

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 4, 2008
Spirit brings rights - essay

2 - Greetings! You make some very good points in your essay! Because of its length, I can't edit all...

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
Social Environment versus Instincts to shape human bahavior

5 - Greetings! Merhaba! You are absolutely not "bad at writing"! (And absolutely right that I was lacking in my...

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
Art Administration MA essay

1 - This essay was originally written for a specific school/program. But the program I want to submit it to requests...

Writing Feedbackzerbetron - Apr 2, 2008 / — -
Descriptive essay a place you spend a lot of time

5 - Greetings! You're welcome, I'm happy to help! I think you've added some nice touches. I have a few...

Writing Feedbackbonechills - Mar 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
The Early Admission Scheme - article

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips: It is not because they are...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
what do you do for good health? pls check grammar and give some detail more

3 - Thank you Sarah...

Writing FeedbackSophie - Mar 21, 2008 / Sophie - Apr 2, 2008
Narrative Essay about ghosts - trouble placing my thesis

2 - Greetings! A thesis helps orient the reader to know what your essay is about. That's why you should...

Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
Beowulf Essay help

2 - Greetings! You've written a great essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: For a person to...

Writing FeedbackJaminbakk - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
Should marketers be allowed to target children in their ad campaigns?

3 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: [ delete: This...

Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 29, 2008
Hong Kong for mainland tourists - article

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job! Here are some editing tips: Under Individual Visit Scheme, people from...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Mar 27, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 28, 2008

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