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Essay about "The Story of an Hour"

3 - Thanks Sarah, I appreciate your help. :)...

Writing FeedbackHyperfast - Nov 9, 2007 / Hyperfast - Nov 10, 2007
Comparison and contrast of Leonardo da Vinci and Masaccio

1 - During the fourteenth century, Masaccio and Leonardo da Vinci were two of the most influential Florentine painters. Their view...

Writing Feedbackmandymoore - Nov 8, 2007 / — -
Article Essay; 'Ellen Goodman has been a journalist'

4 - You're welcome! Yes, usually in formal writing one sticks to third person; however, I have seen some instructors specifically...

Writing Feedbackprttykul - Oct 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 8, 2007
Post-WW II era / development of animosity between the US and the USSR

2 - Greetings! You have, as usual, written an excellent essay! It was not immediately clear to me, however, what...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Nov 7, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 8, 2007
Gamers - classification essay

5 - oh, ok. thanks!...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 30, 2007 / samuraitom - Nov 2, 2007
Essay on Responsibility for WW II

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to provide feedback on your excellent essay! they had strong arguments to advocate a...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Nov 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 1, 2007
Wanted to my process essay!

3 - Hi Sarah, Here i post my essay. Please give some suggestion about the essay including the titile (Is...

Writing Feedbacknewworld - Oct 31, 2007 / newworld - Nov 1, 2007
Analyze the short story "The Flowers" by Alice Walke

3 - thanks so much!...

Writing Feedbackkmanning68 - Oct 31, 2007 / kmanning68 - Oct 31, 2007
Death Penalty Should Not Be Banned - Essay

3 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips (some changes are in bold) : ...

Writing Feedbacknicz888 - Oct 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
Choosing the areas of academic interest - U Mich short answer II

2 - Greetings! Your essay is excellent! There is very little to change; just one typo that I found: ...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Oct 29, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
Poetry Essay (the poet's attitude toward war)

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give you some editing pointers on your very fine essay! [delete In] "How...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Oct 29, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
'eliminate discrimination'; Equal numbers of male and female students?

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some editing advice for your essay. Regarding =[delete "to"] the...

Writing Feedbacknguyenannhon - Oct 29, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
Consumers advertisements; analyze the ads' use of ethos, pathos, and logos

5 - Greetings! You've been working hard! Here are some editing suggestions for you: The IBM article appears to...

Writing Feedbackslmcc1 - Oct 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2007
need help for "presentation summary" essay

3 - Greetings! I think you're doing very well considering English is not your first language! Here are some editing...

Writing Feedbackssdd - Oct 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 29, 2007
Essay on achievements from my professional life

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give you some editing tips for your excellent essay! I was leading a...

Writing Feedbackbdoan - Oct 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 29, 2007
Essay on global citizenship

2 - Greetings! You've written a really great essay! I have just a couple of suggestions: Then, towards the...

Writing Feedbackliza6390 - Oct 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
Essay on Development of Nuclear activities in Iran

2 - Greetings! I'm glad to help with some editing tips. Due to the length of your essay, I can't...

Writing Feedbackwest_sher - Oct 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
Essay on Reactions to Western Imperialism in Asia

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give you some editing tips on your excellent essay! Those two characteristics are...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
"It shouldn't hurt to be a child" - child abuse essay

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job researching your topic! I can give you a few editing suggestions. ...

Writing Feedbackimdapitcher20 - Oct 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 27, 2007
New Deal Programs, How it Changed American Life - Essay Critique

6 - Good work! Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2007
"Cry the Beloved Country" - Essay due tomorrow

3 - Thanks! Chelsea...

Writing Feedbackdance24_7 - Oct 23, 2007 / dance24_7 - Oct 25, 2007
Consoles - comparing and contrasting essay

2 - Greetings! It's a good essay, it just needs a little polishing! One thing you need to watch is...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2007
"The people we admire most shape who we become" - analogy essay

2 - Greetings! I think you're selling yourself short--it's very good so far! The painting metaphor is a good one,...

Writing Feedbackkarmabelle - Oct 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 20, 2007
New Imperialism in Asia and Africa

2 - Greetings! As usual, another well-written and thought-provoking essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: Although we...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 18, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2007
Scientific Revolution & Christianity Essay

1 - Hello, Could you please read my essay and give me some feedback? The prompt is: In...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 12, 2007 / — -
Argumentative Essay - Welfare Programs

6 - You're quite welcome, and, once again, good job! Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbackss03 - Oct 7, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
Samuel P. Huntington - The Clash of Civilizations

1 - Hello, Could you please read my essay and give me some feedback? The prompt is: Samuel...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 9, 2007 / — -
Billy Budd Essay Final (AP English)

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a marvelous job with the essay, and have followed the prompt very well!...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Oct 8, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
How to use QTFairUse - process essay

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is easy to read and the directions sound simple to follow. I'd have...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 8, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
New freedom and Nationalism - expositive essay

3 - Thank you....

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 7, 2007 / samuraitom - Oct 8, 2007
Tokugawa & sakoku - essay

2 - Greetings! A well-written and interesting essay! I have just a few editing tips: The raison d'Ítre of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
The Otaku - Explaining with examples essay

5 - Greetings! I would guess that "cosplay" is short for "costume play"? If so, you could say: He regularly...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams

1 - Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams Sports: Fun to watch, exciting, and most of all competitive. These...

Writing FeedbackCNKPRODUCTIONS - Sep 30, 2007 / — -
I like to see super heroes as a mock to society; Superhero Essay

2 - Greetings! You've given your response to the question an interesting twist--very good! There is little I would...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
Defining Classic (Extended Definition Essay)

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a masterful job of fine-tuning your essay! And you're quite right about "it's"...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Sep 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
Reed Essay (interest in a liberal arts and science education)

3 - Greetings! I like what you've done with the ending! Very nice! If the word limit is 500,...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2007
Have you ever done something to make others happy? Peer Pressure Paper

5 - Hmmm. I due until Thursday, so tomorrow I'm gonna take some time before class and ask one of the...

Writing Feedbackusanchezfe - Sep 21, 2007 / usanchezfe - Sep 24, 2007
A scary house - descriptive essay

1 - Prompt was to describe a place. I think I did a good job with that. I tried not...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 23, 2007 / — -
How my favorite Hobby/Pastime refelcts my personality

2 - Greetings! I think you've done an excellent job of demonstrating the characteristics you listed! The only suggestions I...

Writing Feedbackbdoan - Sep 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
U.S. economy - expository essay

2 - Greetings! I think you did a great job in such a short time span! I have some editing...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
Nora becomes prepared to fullfil Pleny's request

6 - thank you...

Writing Feedbacktsj456 - Sep 16, 2007 / tsj456 - Sep 17, 2007
Stereotypes on the music side - Division And Classification

4 - Greetings! Your essay has some interesting information! I have some editing suggestions for you: these Metalheads are...

Writing FeedbackReinhardt - Sep 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
Is imagination more important than knowledge - SAT essay

1 - "Is imagination more important than knowledge for human developement?" Even though my siblings were much more creative than...

Writing Feedbackmodi - Sep 16, 2007 / — -
Memory is an attachment to our physical selves; Reincarnation / Process of memory

4 - Greetings, Rajiv! Thank you for the clarification! I do have a question regarding word choice, though. In this...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Sep 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 13, 2007
I want to be able to get as much help as possible in my English class.

1 - Writing Problem #1 Since I was a child, I have always loved the sound of music. When I...

Writing FeedbackTimparham - Sep 9, 2007 / — -
The organizational behavior in the Army - help with thesis statement

2 - Greetings! I think you've crafted a very good thesis statement! I have just a few small editing suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackmonifah - Sep 8, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
Teenage violence in schools

2 - Greetings! You give some good reasons for teen violence. Be careful, though, about making statements which are inaccurate...

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
"Computer or book"? Computer

2 - Greetings! I agree, I think this one is better than the other. You make some good points! One...

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
Reading response to "Talking Up Close"

3 - Greetings! I do, indeed, have "a few editing suggestions" for your interesting essay! :-)) Reading Response to...

Writing Feedbackcolla26 - Sep 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
In Response To "Why Don't We Complain?"

4 - Greetings! Yes, you definitely cleared up the confusion! Making the distinction clear not only makes it read better,...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Aug 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 1, 2007
Essay on how well reasoned was an argument - scale of 0-5

2 - Greetings! While some of the points you made are true, for example, that it would be helpful to...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 31, 2007
Employers should observe employees - Analysis essay

2 - Greetings! I think you make some excellent points in your essay! Your reasons why interviews are a good...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
My essay on analysis of Commercialism. Scale of 0-5.

2 - Greetings! My first response on reading this was that you had not really addressed the question asked; upon...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
Essay on September 11, 2001

4 - Greetings! It really depends on what the assignment instructions were, as to whether it is appropriate to include...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 29, 2007
Stress - cause and effect paper

3 - I would also recommend you to use "How to stop worrying and start living" book by Dale Carnegie. A...

Writing Feedbackcasey2264 - Jul 24, 2007 / Andreyknure - Aug 28, 2007
my writing rituals when I begin working on writing assignments

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback on your excellent essay! When I come home,...

Writing Feedbackcolla26 - Aug 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 27, 2007
"Same-sex Marriages in Canada and America"

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay. However, I do think you need to be a bit more careful...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 27, 2007
Smoking by-laws

1 - 12 marks for a summary that includes two conditions that led to the change in policy-where appropriate, agreements...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 26, 2007 / — -
When it comes to writing, my attitude is instinctual negative/Attitude toward writing

3 - Thanks a lot Sarah. I really appreciate your feedback, but also your time and effort. I am glad I...

Writing Feedbackcolla26 - Aug 25, 2007 / colla26 - Aug 26, 2007
In Response To "Too Much Pressure"

3 - Greetings! I think you have written a very well-reasoned argument! You make an interesting point with regard to...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Aug 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 24, 2007

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