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|Natural fiber-reinforced composites paragraph (improve grammar question)
4 - I'm glad I can be of help! In regards to your comma question, yes, there are commas after "This"...
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|Selfishness and politics research paper and outline
13 - Good evening! You are welcome. For examples of MLA in text and work cited pages, do an internet...
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|Death penalty in the code of King Hammurabi of Babylon
1 - i have written the directions for my assignment. is my research paper ok? Direction: in a 10-12 page...
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|Thesis essay on "Adoption issues"
11 - Good afternoon! A thesis statement usually lets the reader know right away what your stance on an issue...
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - May 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 20, 2008
|Mr. Nowack - need help with grammar for a narrative essay
1 - This scruffy looking guy won't quit staring at me. I look away from him and then back again and...
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|Essay on describing traffic jam
10 - Good evening. If you are looking for solutions for traffic congestion in a specific area, I suggest doing...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 17, 2008
|many traditional values and customs have been lost. Pls check my essay.
5 - Good morning Sophie! Unfortunately Sarah left us for other pursuits a few weeks ago; I am sure she...
Writing FeedbackSophie - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 14, 2008
|Reflective Writing - A Reflection Essay On My Writing
2 - Good evening Randy! I'd like to give you my impressions before the mechanics. I don't believe I've ever...
Writing Feedbackbonechills - May 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 12, 2008
|Abortion and same-sex marriage
2 - Good evening! What kind of assistance are you in need of? Please let me know so that I...
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|Proving Dracula is a monster...
2 - Good evening! I think this is a good essay; you are exploring the different aspects that make Dracula...
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|Critical Essay on Developmental Psych. in Infants
2 - Good morning! When we write critical essays, we are judging or evaluating a specific work or idea. Your...
Writing Feedbackblossom12 - May 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 10, 2008
|Essay on the result of poverty
2 - "At the end of the 20th centery (century), the Mongolian political and economic system completely changed to the democratical...
Writing Feedbackkhzul - May 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 9, 2008
|How to say sorry Essay for English?
5 - I think that you do provide readers with some good insight into respect with regards to each other, and...
Writing Feedbacklowryder49 - May 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 7, 2008
|help- topic: problems encounter with not speaking english in america
6 - Good evening! This is a very well organized, wonderfully articulated essay. Nice work. I have very few suggestions:...
Writing Feedbackpinks1026 - Apr 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 5, 2008
|the death boat speaks
4 - I see. I'm afraid I won't be able to help you on non-academic projects. If you have something academic...
Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 5, 2008
|Dangerous Minds Assignment Paragraph Writing; vivid deep movie as a grade 11 poetry unit startup.
3 - Dangerous Minds Movie character comparison Film Focus #2: Character Connections: Write a 50-75 wd paragraph on the main...
Writing FeedbackGeist - Apr 29, 2008 / Geist - May 4, 2008
|The defametory Cartoons; Beyond Freedom of Speech - insightful suggestions
2 - Good morning! This essay does make some interesting points; however, it is difficult to follow because it is...
Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 4, 2008
|Feed Your Soul; first trip by plane - give me your impression on the essay
2 - Good afternoon! You have a very detailed and descriptive essay! I only have a few suggestions: "Alias...
Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 3, 2008
|having native English teachers in all English classes?
4 - That is a great idea! Thank you for sharing your knowledge and experience about this! Regards, Gloria Moderator,...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Apr 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 1, 2008
|Research Essay about volcano experiment
1 - can you take a look at my essay and see if there are any grammatical errors and also I'm...
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|Revise essay about swimming
1 - hey Can you please revise this essay on swimming activity for me ... thanks lots!!:) Recordings of...
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|A True Soccer Mom. There are many ways to learn, improve and fail at something.
6 - Your essay is coming along very nicely. It is much more clear and concise now. There are still a...
Writing Feedbackjrobertson49 - Apr 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Apr 27, 2008
|How to Cheat on The Exam - Process Analysis essay
6 - Yes, I am in the professional academic field....
Writing Feedbackmacho - Apr 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Apr 24, 2008
|Hitler and Stalin - Essay about the Most Ferocious Dictators
3 - Allies defeated the Hitler's army. - Allies defeated Hitler's army. [This time, the apostrophe is correct!] the holocaust....
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|Topic: Every rule has its exceptions; SAT essay
5 - Thank you, Paul/Purcell. :-) And you're welcome, as well. Take care! Sarah...
Writing FeedbackPurcell - Apr 19, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 22, 2008
|Argumentative Essay on Nuclear Power - danger of switching to nuclear energy
4 - Quite right, Amalie. It is often the details that make an argument convincing, especially since they indicate good research....
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|An Unexamined life is not worth living - essay
2 - Greetings! I think your idea is good! I love that old Socrates. ;-) You've chosen some good quotations...
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|"All Quiet on the Western Front"
3 - Thanks so much!...
Writing Feedbackkaylilah - Apr 16, 2008 / kaylilah - Apr 19, 2008
|Inflation, a small change causes huge impacts - Causes and Effects essay.
4 - You're certainly welcome. :-) Your English is very good, so please don't be discouraged! English is a difficult language,...
Writing Feedbackmacho - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|"You do not understand me at all!"; Trapped Essay
4 - Greetings! I was always puzzled about the "I" vs. "me" thing until a very wise teacher taught me...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|Narrative Essay (It all started when someone said PIZZA)
2 - Greetings! It sounds like you have a family full of good cooks! Let me answer your three opening...
Writing Feedbackbonechills - Apr 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|Running away - essay
2 - Greetings! I love this story! I'm especially fond of the twist at the end. You have a real...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Apr 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|'The eggs' - My Narrative Essay
4 - Greetings! I like your ending! It gives good insight into her character. For better comprehension, you might want...
Writing FeedbackRuby3561 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 16, 2008
|How Industrial Design is important to society
3 - Greetings! We try to answer posts within 24 hours, but can't always do so immediately. I hope this...
Writing Feedbackmasamuneshirow2 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
|negative correlation between TOEIC and proficiency.
2 - Greetings! You've written a very good, concise essay! Here are some editing tips: Judging one's language proficiency...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
|Comparison Essay- Italian food and restaurants
4 - Greetings! I suppose the lack of introduction is because you do not make it clear from the first...
Writing FeedbackDDOWNS4 - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
|ESSAY on entrepreneurship for acceptance into special program-feedback pls?
2 - Greetings! Your English is excellent! I don't think I'd have known it's not your first language if you...
Writing Feedbackandrefreydell - Apr 12, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 13, 2008
|Detroit news - Mayor Kwame Kilpatrick. Term paper
4 - You're welcome! And feel free to ask questions! :-) Sarah, EssayForum.com...
Writing FeedbackLeighS - Apr 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
|College Writing assignment: Remembering a person essay
2 - Greetings! Well, after reading your essay, it's no mystery why you, a high school student, are taking a...
Writing Feedbackdg_201 - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
|The importance of human's creativity can be easily considered in business field
2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: We are living in a modern...
Writing FeedbackPurcell - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
|Essay about my life and changes - can you help me?
5 - Greetings! We try to answer all posts within 24 hours, but cannot guarantee to have them by a...
Writing FeedbackJarman - Apr 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2008
|The Crowd Stadium - essay
1 - The feeling was exhilarating. My hold body was experiencing crucial anxiety. It was like a dream come true. To...
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|What it means to be a High School Writer
2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! Here are some editing suggestions for you: Street, in his...
Writing Feedbacks2121 - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 10, 2008
|Testing, a Perfect Tool? A Toulmin Model Essay
2 - Greetings! I think you have a good start; however, there are a few things that you might want...
Writing Feedbackice tea - Apr 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
|Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment-Is mankind inherently good or evil?
2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! There is very little that I'd suggest changing. I should point out...
Writing FeedbackBake0345 - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
|Speech critique 2 - X's informative speech
2 - Greetings! Another great paper! Here are some editing tips: X's speech was an average one, it had...
Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
|Speech critique 1 - a subject that can be supported by empirical data
2 - Greetings! You've written a good paper! Here are some editing suggestions: The following is an informative speech...
Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
|A reflection paper about my practicum site
4 - That sounds great! Feel free to post it here for editing tips if you like! Thanks, Sarah,...
Writing FeedbackKathy - Apr 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 8, 2008
|Ron Paul Media Expose. check it for errors.
2 - Greetings! You've written a very good paper! If you are following MLA format, when you mention the author's...
Writing FeedbackTimcago - Apr 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 7, 2008
|Economy vs Ecology - essay
4 - You're very welcome! I learned a little Turkish ("a little" being a dozen words or so) from online friends....
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 4, 2008
|Spirit brings rights - essay
2 - Greetings! You make some very good points in your essay! Because of its length, I can't edit all...
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
|Social Environment versus Instincts to shape human bahavior
5 - Greetings! Merhaba! You are absolutely not "bad at writing"! (And absolutely right that I was lacking in my...
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
|Art Administration MA essay
1 - This essay was originally written for a specific school/program. But the program I want to submit it to requests...
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|Descriptive essay a place you spend a lot of time
5 - Greetings! You're welcome, I'm happy to help! I think you've added some nice touches. I have a few...
Writing Feedbackbonechills - Mar 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
|The Early Admission Scheme - article
2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips: It is not because they are...
Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
|what do you do for good health? pls check grammar and give some detail more
3 - Thank you Sarah...
Writing FeedbackSophie - Mar 21, 2008 / Sophie - Apr 2, 2008
|Narrative Essay about ghosts - trouble placing my thesis
2 - Greetings! A thesis helps orient the reader to know what your essay is about. That's why you should...
Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
|Beowulf Essay help
2 - Greetings! You've written a great essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: For a person to...
Writing FeedbackJaminbakk - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
|Should marketers be allowed to target children in their ad campaigns?
3 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: [ delete: This...
Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 29, 2008
|Hong Kong for mainland tourists - article
2 - Greetings! You've done a good job! Here are some editing tips: Under Individual Visit Scheme, people from...
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