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The Crowd Stadium - essay

1 - The feeling was exhilarating. My hold body was experiencing crucial anxiety. It was like a dream come true. To...

Writing Feedbacknishat_bhuiyan - Apr 11, 2008 / — -
What it means to be a High School Writer

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! Here are some editing suggestions for you: Street, in his...

Writing Feedbacks2121 - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 10, 2008
Testing, a Perfect Tool? A Toulmin Model Essay

2 - Greetings! I think you have a good start; however, there are a few things that you might want...

Writing Feedbackice tea - Apr 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment-Is mankind inherently good or evil?

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! There is very little that I'd suggest changing. I should point out...

Writing FeedbackBake0345 - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
Speech critique 2 - X's informative speech

2 - Greetings! Another great paper! Here are some editing tips: X's speech was an average one, it had...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
Speech critique 1 - a subject that can be supported by empirical data

2 - Greetings! You've written a good paper! Here are some editing suggestions: The following is an informative speech...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
A reflection paper about my practicum site

4 - That sounds great! Feel free to post it here for editing tips if you like! Thanks, Sarah,...

Writing FeedbackKathy - Apr 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 8, 2008
Ron Paul Media Expose. check it for errors.

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good paper! If you are following MLA format, when you mention the author's...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Apr 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 7, 2008
Economy vs Ecology - essay

4 - You're very welcome! I learned a little Turkish ("a little" being a dozen words or so) from online friends....

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 4, 2008
Spirit brings rights - essay

2 - Greetings! You make some very good points in your essay! Because of its length, I can't edit all...

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
Social Environment versus Instincts to shape human bahavior

5 - Greetings! Merhaba! You are absolutely not "bad at writing"! (And absolutely right that I was lacking in my...

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
Art Administration MA essay

1 - This essay was originally written for a specific school/program. But the program I want to submit it to requests...

Writing Feedbackzerbetron - Apr 2, 2008 / — -
Descriptive essay a place you spend a lot of time

5 - Greetings! You're welcome, I'm happy to help! I think you've added some nice touches. I have a few...

Writing Feedbackbonechills - Mar 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
The Early Admission Scheme - article

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips: It is not because they are...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
what do you do for good health? pls check grammar and give some detail more

3 - Thank you Sarah...

Writing FeedbackSophie - Mar 21, 2008 / Sophie - Apr 2, 2008
Narrative Essay about ghosts - trouble placing my thesis

2 - Greetings! A thesis helps orient the reader to know what your essay is about. That's why you should...

Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
Beowulf Essay help

2 - Greetings! You've written a great essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: For a person to...

Writing FeedbackJaminbakk - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
Should marketers be allowed to target children in their ad campaigns?

3 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: [ delete: This...

Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 29, 2008
Hong Kong for mainland tourists - article

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job! Here are some editing tips: Under Individual Visit Scheme, people from...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Mar 27, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 28, 2008
Observation Activity In Jane Eyre

2 - Greetings! You've written some marvelous descriptive prose! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Swaying gently in...

Writing FeedbackWonderfulloser - Mar 25, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 26, 2008
Re: Worldview essay feedback

1 - hi everyone, I was wondering if you could edit or check over my essay for me. I need...

Writing Feedbacklilmandy - Mar 26, 2008 / — -
About Me essay (Karina raised in Kazahstan)

6 - Thank you, Sarah!...

Writing FeedbackKarina - Mar 19, 2008 / Karina - Mar 25, 2008
Is spanking a form of family violence? : "In Rod We Trust"

1 - Hello, Could you please read my essay and give me some feedback? The prompt is: Is...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Mar 25, 2008 / — -
Media file - Sociology of the Family essay

3 - Hello, Your are right as far as news stories are concerned. I am going to use the present...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Mar 17, 2008 / FredParisFrance - Mar 25, 2008
Work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money?

3 - Thanks Sarah, I really appreciate it....

Writing FeedbackManisa - Mar 19, 2008 / Manisa - Mar 24, 2008
End of the World Essay...

2 - Greetings! I think your writing contains many good ideas. The area where you need the most work is...

Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Mar 22, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 24, 2008
is this brief remark correct?

2 - Greetings! It would be easier for me to know whether your remark is "correct" if I knew what...

Writing Feedbackccppg - Mar 23, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 24, 2008
Expository essay NUCLEAR POWER - I did a lot of language mistakes

2 - Greetings! Yes, a language mistake would probably be a problem with the grammar. I have made some corrections...

Writing Feedbackinvisible7959 - Mar 21, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 22, 2008
Problems with bad student behavior - Solutions

3 - Hello Sarah, Thank you very much for your help. You did review and correct a lot of my...

Writing Feedbacknguyenannhon - Mar 19, 2008 / nguyenannhon - Mar 20, 2008
Essay about awesome Soccer - edit it today

3 - Thank you very much, Sarah! for your help and kindness. I think this website is very useful....

Writing FeedbackJohn doan - Mar 19, 2008 / John doan - Mar 20, 2008
Is learning history important? - essay

3 - thank you again! your editing really helps! Have a wonderful day :-)...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 19, 2008 / je2ks2 - Mar 20, 2008
What did I learn at Oriental Institute? - essay

4 - Greetings! That's very good! Just remember that, most of the time, nouns in English will require an article...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 20, 2008
Explantory Essay: About Revenge

4 - Greetings! Normally, when I think of an explanatory essay, I think of a "how-to" type of essay: how...

Writing Feedbackdark_danny - Mar 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 19, 2008
Jean Piaget - how is my grammar-Psych paper?

7 - thanks so much for your help once again and easing my worries about plagerism!...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Mar 4, 2008 / hunnybun39 - Mar 18, 2008
"Everything's An Argument" - Evaluative Essay

5 - Hello Sarah, Thank you very much, that was exactly what I was looking for. Again, Thank you. ...

Writing Feedbackspanky2300 - Mar 14, 2008 / spanky2300 - Mar 17, 2008
Essay on requiring employees to dress formally..

4 - Greetings! That's a very good question! The "a" belongs to "company"; it is singular, just one company, but...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 12, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 14, 2008
Statement of Purpose for Savannah College of Art & Design; R.E.A.C.H. Art.

3 - Thanks Sarah. I really appreciate it....

Writing Feedbackjladdison3 - Mar 13, 2008 / jladdison3 - Mar 14, 2008
voluntary work - helping poor elderly people or newly arrived pupil

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips: But when it comes to choosing...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Mar 13, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 14, 2008
"Pattern's of Medieval Life" - about the presentation in class

2 - Greetings! It sounds like you learned a lot from the presentation! Here are a few tips for you:...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 10, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2008
"Road to Perdition" movie review essay (grammar help)

3 - alright thanks alot for the help. Then about the semicolons. I just remember her going on a rant about...

Writing FeedbackLeighS - Mar 9, 2008 / LeighS - Mar 10, 2008
Feature article, Casino in Singapore - response to a government's decision

5 - Oh, I get it. Thank you!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Mar 9, 2008 / learningtowrite - Mar 10, 2008
'Degree of happiness' with a job is more important than having a high salary

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: the most contributing factor differs from...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2008
Integrated writing task: the growth of tourism

3 - thank you very much,have a nice weekend. This is a great website for everyone to improve writing skill. Thank...

Writing FeedbackSophie - Mar 7, 2008 / Sophie - Mar 8, 2008
Narrative Essay>.> Random moments

2 - Greetings! I will try to lay it out for you so you can see where the paragraphs should...

Writing FeedbackDsx2012 - Mar 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2008
Essay on saving land for endangerous animals

4 - Greetings! Yes, the singular/plural conundrum is confusing in English. Most people these days say "they" when referring to...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2008
theoretical analysis of two different media sources ( book and a play)

2 - Greetings! I think you're off to a good start! As you say, it is just a rough draft,...

Writing Feedbackdeshara - Mar 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2008
School lunches today - Illustration essay

3 - Greetings! There are some distinct differences between formal and informal essays. First of all, the viewpoint the author...

Writing FeedbackDDOWNS4 - Feb 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 4, 2008
Essay on The most remembering moment in my life

3 - Thank you very much!...

Writing FeedbackDedyhka - Feb 29, 2008 / Dedyhka - Mar 3, 2008
descriptive writing: creating an exterior scene

3 - Thank you!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Mar 2, 2008 / learningtowrite - Mar 3, 2008
Education is only single factor in country's wealth?

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing pointers for you: This essay will discuss...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 2, 2008
Essay on Customer Focus

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! I've done some editing for you: At Park Place Lexus, the...

Writing Feedbackasianbma - Feb 28, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 1, 2008
Essay: Religion based discrimination

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help with some editing tips! Recently, I viewed a video clip on Yahoo!...

Writing FeedbackYeereina - Feb 26, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2008
My laptop is from Dell; An essay about my laptop

2 - Greetings! You've written an informative essay! Here are some editing suggestions for you: According to the policy...

Writing Feedbacknoni - Feb 25, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2008
A late arrival leading to serious consequences

7 - Thank you! Your advice is really helpful for me:D...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 20, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 23, 2008
Literary Analysis on The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost

2 - In a person's life, many decisions have to be made, such as choosing to spend time hanging out with...

Writing Feedbackxdarkr0se - Feb 22, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2008
Analysis of Squealer from "Animal Farm" by George Orwell

2 - Greetings! Well, I have to say that I think your instructor must have been grading on handwriting, because...

Writing Feedbacklorentzium - Feb 21, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2008
Help with my essay on U.S. and covert policies

2 - Greetings! One thing I think your essay is lacking is focus. It's difficult to tell what your thesis...

Writing Feedbackcynthia24 - Feb 20, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2008
Examining the poem "To An Athlete Dying Young" By A.E Housman

36 - Greetings! You could just do something straightforward like saying "Literary analysis of 'To An Athlete Dying Young' reveals...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2008
One day you made a bad mistake which upset other people - essay help

3 - I spent very little time on this, and honestly, not much feelings or anything so it doesnt turn out...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 18, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 19, 2008
World War I, also referred to as the Great War - Essay Suggestions

3 - thank u soooo mcuh to tell u the truth, i never expected an answer from a free online site....

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