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|topic - condom machines in school
Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 27, 2008 / — -
|The theme of the contest is WOW - my short story
2 - Good afternoon. Since you didn't really provide specifics about the prompt (I don't know what "WOW" is), I...
Writing Feedback4ever2bleed - Oct 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
|how my writing has changed - my self-evaluation essay
2 - You have a good self-evaluation here. You examine your strengths and weaknesses, and are very honest about both. You...
Writing Feedbackfabiola017 - Oct 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
|Classical Essay - Abortion The Right to Choose
Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 24, 2008 / taiyaki - Oct 27, 2008
|Society of Notes...revision and comments
1 - Last essay, I swear! I'm glad I found this site though, as it's been an invaluable resource. I'm thinking...
Writing Feedbackjangoc44 - Oct 26, 2008 / — -
|Successful organization / Something what seems to be is not always the same as it actually is?
2 - Good evening. "...jobs and get promoted ." "...employees in this company begi n to ..." "...individualism...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 25, 2008
|Definition of Education-Need filter words & eliminate repetition paragrap.
14 - hey babydoll, well i was researching for the same paper that you have discussed here. Do you still have...
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Mar 26, 2008 / jolly - Oct 25, 2008
|Diversity to me is an intrinsic part of life; a lifelong learning essay
3 - Good afternoon. It seems a bit disorganized. Are you trying to explain these events in the order in...
Writing Feedbacklilveni - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|'Young people are no longer interested in religion.' What is your view?
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|Without academic excellence, most students nowadays are squeezed out of the competition
3 - I think your paragraphs are appropriate lengths; if you divide the essay further you risk making the flow too...
Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|"realistic or optimistic" + "hardship and misfortune" -- essays edit help
1 - Assignment: Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune? As an old saying in my hometown goes,"Adversities are...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 23, 2008 / — -
|Essay: What dish holds a strong associative power for you?
Writing Feedbacknikokoskinas - Oct 22, 2008 / nikokoskinas - Oct 23, 2008
|It is better to have one long school vacation than to have a few short one?
6 - I think your organization is fine. You start off with a good introduction followed by a body that explains...
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|Responsibility- through example or behavior of others?
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 23, 2008
|Essay: What will you bring along to Sahara + unforgettable experience
Writing Feedbacksweetbitterrose - Oct 21, 2008 / sweetbitterrose - Oct 22, 2008
|Check for my essay about my holiday trip to Singapore
2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's see: It is the smallest nation in SoutheastAs this is neither a proper...
Writing Feedbackwindcloud232 - Oct 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|Twin Pregnancies-Impact on the family
2 - Please help me shorten this paragraph, is it possible? My biggest problem is staying within the page limits, is...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 21, 2008 / hunnybun39 - Oct 21, 2008
|The Quality of the Decision: The Power of Thinking Without Thinking
2 - My own experience shows the reason why I want to make decisions slowly and cautiously. Decisions, when devoted enough...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 21, 2008
|This is my 9/11 essay intro - is it OK?
1 - Hey there!! I would really appreciate it if someone can please take a look at the inroduction of...
Writing FeedbackNeelam - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|Describe a person... A rough draft thrown together i need some insight
Writing FeedbackJoel - Oct 20, 2008 / Joel - Oct 20, 2008
|What must we do to truly understand ourselves? Difficult for people to judge themselves evenhandedly
6 - In regards to usage, I suggest one of the books from the "Prentice Hall Guide for College Writers" series...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|[Analysis of Issue] Schools should be only responsible for academic skills
2 - "How to become a useful person for society?" There shouldn't be a comma after this, and "people" should be...
Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|"Wild animals never kill for sport"; killing animals (argument synthesis)
1 - British historian James A. Froude once wrote, "Wild animals never kill for sport. Man is the only one to...
Writing Feedbackldixon - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|the effort involved in pursuing any goal -advise, corrections are welcomed!
1 - Assignment: Is the effort involved in pursuing any goal valuable, even if the goal is not reached? Although...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|Essay on labor and Delivery Pain
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 19, 2008 / hunnybun39 - Oct 19, 2008
|First Nations Ambitions Triumph
1 - Running Brave is an intriguing and inspirational movie which is based on a true story about a American...
Writing Feedbackalyssa_amy - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|the juxtaposition of christian and Pagan elements in Beowulf
1 - The Juxtaposition of Christian and Pagan elements in Beowulf mirror the mix of religious practices occurring in Anglo-Saxon society.,...
Writing Feedbackbrit12 - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|[Analysis of Issue] Humans are becoming subservient to machines
4 - No, I don't think you lack examples; in fact, I think quite the opposite. My concern is that your...
Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|Essay about my weekend activities
3 - Hello Gloria, I really don't have words how much appreciated your comments and feedback. I wish I knew about...
Writing Feedbacksol - Oct 17, 2008 / sol - Oct 18, 2008
|'Love is the answer to world's questions' - Essay on why love is important in life?
8 - You're very welcome. Feel free to post here not only for feedback on essays, but any general language...
Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|Summary On Pain Meds - paper
4 - Good morning. OK, let's see: "...interventions regarding any adverse reactions." "...should be well rehearsed...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE
Writing Feedbackcowman809 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.
2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...
Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?
1 - Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?? Around the world people are concerned...
Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 17, 2008 / — -
|How to safe the Earth + Personal reflection of my presentation - Essays
4 - Good afternoon. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...
Writing Feedbackssdd - Nov 28, 2007 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers
1 - Take advantage of every moment is what my older sister would always tell me. When I was 14 years...
Writing Feedbackcynthia180 - Oct 17, 2008 / — -
|What experiences have led you to select your professional field?
2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...
Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|An unexpected act of kindness
4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?
1 - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...
Writing Feedbacknezzaru - Oct 16, 2008 / — -
|Essay: "There's no place like home."
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
|Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
|The Act of Revenge, The Cask of Amontillado Essay
4 - Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing FeedbackBradlays - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008 / toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
|Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help
1 - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....
Writing Feedbackkichikov22 - Oct 14, 2008 / — -
|Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford
2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit
2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...
Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|A WONDERFUL CAREER - 'I am ready for my interview'
4 - Good evening. There are some main things I am concerned about in this essay. For instance, with the...
Writing Feedbackbadgrammer - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|Observation paper for HRT 101 Benson
4 - Good afternoon. As I have previously commented, check for capitalization. Things that are not proper nouns (specific ...
Writing Feedbackbensonm - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|Lost And Found - Narrative Essay
3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....
Writing Feedbackeeyore_lover29 - Oct 13, 2008 / eeyore_lover29 - Oct 14, 2008
|"Zoo Rejection" - my essay
Writing FeedbackTabor - Oct 12, 2008 / Tabor - Oct 13, 2008
|"Teen Gangs: The World of Canadian Street Gangs" --- Does it flow?
4 - Good afternoon. This is a great essay. The content is good and well cited, the paragraphs are very...
Writing Feedbackjordanlee - Oct 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
|We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.
Writing Feedbacksonali - Oct 13, 2008 / — -
|'The ability to learn makes us human' - Rubiks Cube Essay
2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...
Writing Feedbackweezer878 - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|'This woman is my mother' - discuss a person and his or her influence on you
Writing Feedbackzhangyi - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|"The Voting Age" essay
Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|Eng101 starting essay (personal narrative)
8 - That's a good start. What kind of examples can you think of that illustrate these three items? Regards,...
Writing FeedbackReinhardt - Sep 4, 2007 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay
2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...
Writing FeedbackgodsendE - Oct 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals
1 - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 9, 2008 / — -
|which airplane flies the farthest- science report
1 - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....
Writing Feedbackrnc3333 - Oct 9, 2008 / — -
|Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work
4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
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