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Gas is on the Rise - opinion essay

2 - Greetings! You make some good points in your essay, but I think it lacks a bit of focus....

Writing FeedbackSomeonejen - Jan 26, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 26, 2008
Practice essay on Innovation; Start up Companies flourish on change in the business

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! You do a good job of answering the question....

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Jan 26, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 26, 2008
In Love within the Law

2 - Greetings! Another excellent essay! This is an aspect of ADR I had not previously considered--very interesting! Some...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 25, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 26, 2008
Slides 26 -> 30 - Timeline violence and intimate/family relationships

2 - Greetings! Toward the end, you switched back again to past tense. Some other tips: 26) ... Religious...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 24, 2008
Timeline violence and intimate/family relationships - slides 1 -> 25

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to offer some editing tips for your excellent essay! One thing to note: at #11,...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 24, 2008
Essay on Recording Industry's decline

3 - Thank you very much Sarah! I shall make adjustments before I send it off. :D...

Writing FeedbackTalem - Jan 20, 2008 / Talem - Jan 21, 2008
A tale - part 1 (group of young people)

4 - You're very welcome, and I appreciate that very much! Thanks, Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jan 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 21, 2008
My First Essay- The Chrysalids (Re-Birth in US Version)

2 - Greetings! We strive to answer all posts within 24 hours, but unfortunately you needed it sooner than that....

Writing Feedbackhagi - Jan 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2008
Hiking safety - writing practice - article

1 - Hello, This is my fifth practice. Please give me feedback. Thanks in advance for your help, Sarah....

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An evolutionary perspective on domestic violence - essay

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give some editing suggestions for your excellent essay! more likely to retain their...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 15, 2008
New Media History Essay - Great Need Of Help

2 - Greetings! I think your essay starts very well and has some good information! However, I did find the...

Writing FeedbackFreijo - Jan 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 15, 2008
'Environment pollution' - Name a global issue that concerns you and explain why

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a good essay! One thing you might want to be aware of that...

Writing Feedbackcollegebound118 - Jan 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 12, 2008
Cycle theory of violence & legal responsibility

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help with some editing suggestions for your excellent essay! A second phase of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 10, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 11, 2008
Essay about an unfair situation

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a very good job of answering what the question is asking! The one...

Writing Feedbackrosy - Jan 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 10, 2008
Free Will Does Not Exist - Help With My Essay Draft

4 - I'll look forward to reading it! Thanks, Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbackmudrogue - Jan 7, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 10, 2008
Is TV bad for Children? - it's my first essay (3 paragraphs)

8 - Great story, thanks! :-)) Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbacknavinnang - Dec 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 8, 2008
Interpersonal communication & proxemics

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give you some editing tips on your excellent essay! one person catches a...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
essay contest on personal experience. how do i make it more powerful?

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is very powerful! I particularly like the ending. I have only a few...

Writing Feedbackposhbabydoll - Jan 4, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 5, 2008
Satire Essay -Rights of Handicapped Children (lack of)

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job so far with what is undoubtedly a challenging assignment! One thing that...

Writing Feedbackwarrior108 - Jan 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 3, 2008
"Prejudice and Stereotyping in the Media" - international student essay

3 - Greetings! I think you have improved your essay, yes! The fourth paragraph, though, about Russia, I found a...

Writing Feedbacksatans_angel - Dec 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
Mandatory arrest laws - domestic violence

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help with some editing for your excellent essay! in addition to homogenizing the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
Review of 4 journal articles on domestic violence

2 - Greetings! As usual, your writing is excellent and in-depth. I did wonder, however, about the format you used...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Dec 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Essay: Intelligent Design not Science!

2 - Greetings! I think your essay makes some excellent points! One thing to look out for, though, is restating...

Writing Feedbackrsgino7 - Dec 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Should Tuck Shop Stop Selling 'Junk Food"? - practice essay (article)

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! I agree that the tense can be a little tricky in...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Dec 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
History, patterns, and dynamics of violence between intimate partners

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some editing advice on your excellent essay! scholars integrated the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Dec 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
The start of a witness report/assignment for law (high school level)

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! I have a few editing tips for you: A witness can...

Writing FeedbackEmiiily - Dec 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
Immigration - argument research paper

6 - Greetings! I think your essay turned out very well! Sorry I could not get back to you sooner,...

Writing Feedbacknewworld - Nov 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2007
The alchemy of Race and Rights compared to Durkheim, Weber and Marx

2 - The authors ability to link numerous issues together As the work of Patricia Williams's proceeds, it allows the...

Writing Feedbackshenz711 - Dec 16, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 16, 2007
To Kill a Mockingbird Essay, Does the age of the narrator matter?

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing suggestions for you: I felt rather as...

Writing FeedbackOblivionMage - Dec 16, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 16, 2007
intellectually stimulating conversation or topic

4 - Greetings! Instead of saying, "Why is it that all tasty items are unhealthy?" which is a bit of...

Writing Feedbackrohit080392 - Dec 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 14, 2007
COLONIALISM in Jane Eyre and A Fine Balance - essay

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help! both books focus on religions and conflicts between religions, social classes and...

Writing FeedbackAsma - Dec 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2007
Socioeconomic status & intergenerational violence

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to provide some feedback on your excellent essay! particularly when it comes to establishing...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Dec 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2007
Religion in Arthurian Legend essay - completed minus conclusion

2 - Greetings! I think this is shaping up to be an excellent essay! Here are a few editing suggestions...

Writing Feedbackyrutrpn - Dec 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2007
Teaching methods, learning styles essay - due today...

2 - Greetings! I'm sorry, but we can't guarantee help within five hours; we try to answer all posts within...

Writing Feedbackxxsamaraxx7 - Dec 10, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 11, 2007
Courtship Violence in the 2007 ; My thoughts on that issue

2 - Greetings! Another interesting essay! Here are some editing tips: Consequently, the study of violence between intimate partners...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Dec 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 7, 2007
domestic terrorism essay

4 - OK, great idea! Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Dec 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 6, 2007
Rules governing interpersonal relationships / mini-essay

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help! Here are some suggestions: The textbook's authors On the one hand,...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Dec 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 5, 2007
Children with good knowledge in art, music & drama are more flexible and confident!

2 - Greetings! You make some excellent points in your essay! Here are some editing suggestions for you: Nowadays,...

Writing Feedbackpaul - Dec 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 5, 2007
a comparative essay on the rhetorical devices and messages between ..

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips for you: Thoreau and King Jr.,...

Writing Feedbacktimrhee - Dec 2, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
"interaction of porcelain" - my art essay

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to provide some editing for your very informative essay! The speaker was Linda Rosenfeld...

Writing Feedbackwx079076 - Dec 2, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
Descriptive essay about a very mundane object [THE BARRETTE]

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is very good! I do think the way you explained it to me...

Writing Feedbacksweets - Nov 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 2, 2007
"Global Warming - Global Causes, Effects, and Methods to Prevent" - review and do editing!

3 - thank you very much Sarah thanks for ur help!! =D...

Writing Feedbackwx079076 - Nov 30, 2007 / wx079076 - Dec 1, 2007
Descriptive analysis of a business book

6 - Greetings! It's difficult to tell without seeing all of it, but it doesn't sound to me like it...

Writing Feedbacklondres128 - Nov 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
The monarchs had to rule with greater wisdom than themselves had intended

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to provide some editing advice! Wars, violence, and constant steals from the cities in...

Writing Feedbackssdd - Nov 29, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 30, 2007
Editing for a service activity essay

3 - thanks so much!! :)...

Writing Feedbackxxalixx - Nov 28, 2007 / xxalixx - Nov 29, 2007
Neo-Classical Art, White House - Essay

1 - "By the last quarter of the 18th century a new style "Neo- Classical Art" emerged, one that artists embraced...

Writing Feedbackmandymoore - Nov 29, 2007 / — -
Discussion about what I learned this semester

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips for you: Time goes by so...

Writing Feedbackmandymoore - Nov 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 28, 2007
Which is better - SPEND money or SAVE money?

3 - Thank you so much indeed! I am very happy to come across with this website. Thanks!...

Writing Feedbackpaul - Nov 27, 2007 / paul - Nov 28, 2007
episodic content revisited - argumentative essay

2 - Greetings! This is a good and interesting essay! One thing I do want to point out is that...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Nov 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 28, 2007
Eastern countries; Should artists always be given the freedom to express ideas?

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some suggestions for you: In my opinion, governments should...

Writing Feedbacknguyenannhon - Nov 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 26, 2007
Evaluating my program basing on its success and the improvements that can be made

1 - Hey, i was wondering if i could get some help, I feel confident in the rest of my essay,...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Nov 24, 2007 / — -
Universal Declarations of Human Rights & problematic human rights issues

2 - Greetings! I'd be glad to give some editing tips on your excellent essay! is one of the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Nov 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 24, 2007
Essay on Pornography (something you secretly like, but pretend not to)

2 - Greetings! This is the sort of topic where reasonable minds may differ. Some might consider that a bold...

Writing Feedbackdrunk_ewok - Nov 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 24, 2007
How does international trade and commerce promote peace? - essay

2 - Greetings! You've done a great job. I have only a few suggestions: Indeed, in case of war,...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Nov 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 23, 2007
International Court of Justice & International Criminal Court essay

2 - Greetings! Here are some editing tips for your excellent essay: when one of the many organizations belonging...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Nov 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 23, 2007
William Shakespeare, achievement in English Literature

1 - William Shakespeare The supreme achievement in English Literature of the time and perhaps of all time may be...

Writing Feedbackmandymoore - Nov 22, 2007 / — -
Co-operation and competition, which is better for children?

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to! Here it is, with some corrections: Although education has changed a lot...

Writing Feedbacknguyenannhon - Nov 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 22, 2007
'transportation, hard work, and discipline' the world you come from - UC College

5 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job of improving your essay! I have just a few suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Oct 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 21, 2007
What is most important factor affect the characteristics of a person?

3 - Thank you very much for your quick respond. Thanks again, Nhon...

Writing Feedbacknguyenannhon - Nov 20, 2007 / nguyenannhon - Nov 20, 2007
MY BAD ACCIDENT; Descriptive Paragraph

2 - Greetings! That sounds like a truly scary experience! I'm glad it turned out all right! Here are some...

Writing Feedbacklcarter5 - Nov 18, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Nov 19, 2007

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