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Analysis of Squealer from "Animal Farm" by George Orwell

2 - Greetings! Well, I have to say that I think your instructor must have been grading on handwriting, because...

Writing Feedbacklorentzium - Feb 21, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2008
Help with my essay on U.S. and covert policies

2 - Greetings! One thing I think your essay is lacking is focus. It's difficult to tell what your thesis...

Writing Feedbackcynthia24 - Feb 20, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2008
Examining the poem "To An Athlete Dying Young" By A.E Housman

36 - Greetings! You could just do something straightforward like saying "Literary analysis of 'To An Athlete Dying Young' reveals...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2008
One day you made a bad mistake which upset other people - essay help

3 - I spent very little time on this, and honestly, not much feelings or anything so it doesnt turn out...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 18, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 19, 2008
World War I, also referred to as the Great War - Essay Suggestions

3 - thank u soooo mcuh to tell u the truth, i never expected an answer from a free online site....

Writing Feedbackakwade - Feb 17, 2008 / akwade - Feb 18, 2008
Art Nouveau - Glasgow Style (essay)

2 - Greetings! You've written an interesting essay! Here are some editing tips for you: It took various styles...

Writing Feedbacksamuraihuynh - Feb 18, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 18, 2008
The Vacuum - Analytical Essay; could someone check my analytical essay for errors

4 - Greetings! I think that's an excellent way to write it! You've done a good job of looking behind...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Feb 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 18, 2008
Essay on a case of mistaken identity

8 - :-)) Well, hang on to it, because it's too good to toss out! ;-) Sarah...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 18, 2008
Essay on "Why do people go to college?"

2 - Greetings! Welcome! I'm happy to help with some editing suggestions! Several decades ago, only a few selected...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Feb 15, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 15, 2008
Under English Law, minors have limited capacity to make contracts.

3 - Thank u very much...Sarah...

Writing Feedbackericchk - Feb 14, 2008 / ericchk - Feb 15, 2008
What did you learn when you read "The Allegory of the cave"?

2 - Greetings! I think you have given some thought to this. :-) You just need to watch your grammar...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Feb 13, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
'Americans and the space program' - English Composition Clep Exam essay

4 - Greetings! You've written a good essay; I have some editing suggestions for you: There have been some...

Writing Feedbackbonechills - Feb 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
Evaluation of my father and mother's parenting style - essay

4 - Greetings, Frederic! Your only problem may be that your English is TOO good for American newspapers and magazines!...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Feb 7, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
My biography (I'm Vietnamese)

2 - Greetings! I think it's very good! Be sure to remember to use articles before nouns in English. For...

Writing Feedbacksaikarvn - Feb 12, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
How does the law deal with minors who enter into a contract?

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Writing FeedbackChristopher - Feb 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
Partner introduction speech - critique essay

2 - Greetings! You have written a concise and ruthlessly honest critique--it's very good! Here are some editing tips: ...

Writing Feedbacksamuraihuynh - Feb 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 11, 2008
Essay on work offshoring - feedback welcome

2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with some excellent information. Here are some editing tips for you:...

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Feb 10, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 10, 2008
Difficulty to gain acceptance of innovations in companies- innovation essay

3 - Thanks a lot, Sarah!...

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Feb 9, 2008 / meliaxiao - Feb 10, 2008
Entrepreneurial to a professionally managed organisation - problems

3 - Thanks a lot, Sarah!...

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Feb 9, 2008 / meliaxiao - Feb 10, 2008
The Great Gatsby - help with my grammar and essay organization

21 - Greetings! Your hard work is almost finished, then, great! 1) New York city is also two-dimensional. It...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 10, 2008
Tale - Part 2 (jobeless in a foreign land)

13 - Greetings! And, voila! another example of Eastern thought being in divergence with Western thought. I could be wrong,...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 9, 2008
Chinese New Year - Essay

3 - Thank you very much! I think I was really careless about all those tense-related errors:D I suppose there...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 7, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 8, 2008
Experience in life creating a strong memory

2 - Greetings! You express yourself so well, I would never have guessed that you'd had any sort of problem...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Feb 7, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 8, 2008
It's better to try to be original than to merely imitate others - SAT essay

4 - Greetings! I can't give you a number, because I am not privy to the scoring parameters used by...

Writing Feedbackiggies - Feb 4, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 6, 2008
"First date" - narrative essay essay (need advice)

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay. I have just a few editing tips: I jumped up and...

Writing Feedbackjustinlove - Feb 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 6, 2008
Memoir review - essay for enc 1101

2 - Greetings! You've written a very entertaining story! I have just a few editing sugggestions for you: He...

Writing Feedbackrunky - Feb 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 5, 2008
Statistics Project to proofread

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to! You've got a very well-written summary here! Just a couple of things jumped...

Writing Feedbackcath08 - Feb 3, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2008
Entrance essay: describe a person who has had an influence in you.

2 - Greetings! I disagree--I think you're a very good writer! Sure, there are a few grammatical errors, which I'll...

Writing Feedbackchiazhicao - Feb 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 3, 2008
Essay: Why going to school

3 - Thanks a lot for your advice. I'll practise more and i promise to let you check my next essay....

Writing FeedbackCharatChukiat - Jan 19, 2008 / CharatChukiat - Feb 1, 2008
SHORT ESSAY DESCRIBE A "PLACE" OBJECTIVELY AND SUBJECTIVELY

2 - Greetings! Another good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: this is a place whose mission is to...

Writing FeedbackSn3Ak3R_Fi3nD - Jan 31, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 1, 2008
This essay is about my hometown, Hanoi.

4 - You're very welcome! Just keep working at it and you will definitely improve! Practice both reading and writing in...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 1, 2008
School Locker Check Persuasive Essay

2 - Greetings! For a high school freshman, you are a very good writer! I have just a few editing...

Writing FeedbackDeathnot - Jan 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 30, 2008
A report on an organism

2 - Greetings! I think your essay contains a lot of good information! I'm a little unclear as to what...

Writing Feedbackxxalixx - Jan 27, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 29, 2008
Gas is on the Rise - opinion essay

2 - Greetings! You make some good points in your essay, but I think it lacks a bit of focus....

Writing FeedbackSomeonejen - Jan 26, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 26, 2008
Practice essay on Innovation; Start up Companies flourish on change in the business

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! You do a good job of answering the question....

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Jan 26, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 26, 2008
In Love within the Law

2 - Greetings! Another excellent essay! This is an aspect of ADR I had not previously considered--very interesting! Some...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 25, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 26, 2008
Slides 26 -> 30 - Timeline violence and intimate/family relationships

2 - Greetings! Toward the end, you switched back again to past tense. Some other tips: 26) ... Religious...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 24, 2008
Timeline violence and intimate/family relationships - slides 1 -> 25

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to offer some editing tips for your excellent essay! One thing to note: at #11,...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 24, 2008
Essay on Recording Industry's decline

3 - Thank you very much Sarah! I shall make adjustments before I send it off. :D...

Writing FeedbackTalem - Jan 20, 2008 / Talem - Jan 21, 2008
A tale - part 1 (group of young people)

4 - You're very welcome, and I appreciate that very much! Thanks, Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jan 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 21, 2008
My First Essay- The Chrysalids (Re-Birth in US Version)

2 - Greetings! We strive to answer all posts within 24 hours, but unfortunately you needed it sooner than that....

Writing Feedbackhagi - Jan 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 17, 2008
Hiking safety - writing practice - article

1 - Hello, This is my fifth practice. Please give me feedback. Thanks in advance for your help, Sarah....

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Jan 16, 2008 / — -
An evolutionary perspective on domestic violence - essay

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give some editing suggestions for your excellent essay! more likely to retain their...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 15, 2008
New Media History Essay - Great Need Of Help

2 - Greetings! I think your essay starts very well and has some good information! However, I did find the...

Writing FeedbackFreijo - Jan 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 15, 2008
'Environment pollution' - Name a global issue that concerns you and explain why

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a good essay! One thing you might want to be aware of that...

Writing Feedbackcollegebound118 - Jan 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 12, 2008
Cycle theory of violence & legal responsibility

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help with some editing suggestions for your excellent essay! A second phase of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 10, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 11, 2008
Essay about an unfair situation

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a very good job of answering what the question is asking! The one...

Writing Feedbackrosy - Jan 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 10, 2008
Free Will Does Not Exist - Help With My Essay Draft

4 - I'll look forward to reading it! Thanks, Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbackmudrogue - Jan 7, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 10, 2008
Is TV bad for Children? - it's my first essay (3 paragraphs)

8 - Great story, thanks! :-)) Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbacknavinnang - Dec 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 8, 2008
Interpersonal communication & proxemics

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to give you some editing tips on your excellent essay! one person catches a...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 6, 2008
essay contest on personal experience. how do i make it more powerful?

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is very powerful! I particularly like the ending. I have only a few...

Writing Feedbackposhbabydoll - Jan 4, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 5, 2008
Satire Essay -Rights of Handicapped Children (lack of)

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job so far with what is undoubtedly a challenging assignment! One thing that...

Writing Feedbackwarrior108 - Jan 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 3, 2008
"Prejudice and Stereotyping in the Media" - international student essay

3 - Greetings! I think you have improved your essay, yes! The fourth paragraph, though, about Russia, I found a...

Writing Feedbacksatans_angel - Dec 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
Mandatory arrest laws - domestic violence

2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help with some editing for your excellent essay! in addition to homogenizing the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jan 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 2, 2008
Review of 4 journal articles on domestic violence

2 - Greetings! As usual, your writing is excellent and in-depth. I did wonder, however, about the format you used...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Dec 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Essay: Intelligent Design not Science!

2 - Greetings! I think your essay makes some excellent points! One thing to look out for, though, is restating...

Writing Feedbackrsgino7 - Dec 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
Should Tuck Shop Stop Selling 'Junk Food"? - practice essay (article)

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! I agree that the tense can be a little tricky in...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Dec 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2007
History, patterns, and dynamics of violence between intimate partners

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some editing advice on your excellent essay! scholars integrated the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Dec 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
The start of a witness report/assignment for law (high school level)

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! I have a few editing tips for you: A witness can...

Writing FeedbackEmiiily - Dec 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 22, 2007
Immigration - argument research paper

6 - Greetings! I think your essay turned out very well! Sorry I could not get back to you sooner,...

Writing Feedbacknewworld - Nov 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2007

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