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"Same-sex Marriages in Canada and America"

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay. However, I do think you need to be a bit more careful...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 27, 2007
Smoking by-laws

1 - 12 marks for a summary that includes two conditions that led to the change in policy-where appropriate, agreements are...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 26, 2007 / — -
When it comes to writing, my attitude is instinctual negative/Attitude toward writing

3 - Thanks a lot Sarah. I really appreciate your feedback, but also your time and effort. I am glad I...

Writing Feedbackcolla26 - Aug 25, 2007 / colla26 - Aug 26, 2007
In Response To "Too Much Pressure"

3 - Greetings! I think you have written a very well-reasoned argument! You make an interesting point with regard to...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Aug 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 24, 2007
200 students from Waymarsh State College - rate my essay

1 - Kindly rate my essay(0-5) and provide feedback The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper....

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 24, 2007 / — -
ENC1101 success

3 - thanks for the suggestions......

Writing Feedbacknickerz - Aug 20, 2007 / nickerz - Aug 21, 2007
I Stand Here Ironing (literature using historical Context)

1 - Family The Great Depression is an era that will always be remembered as a triumph. Many people were...

Writing Feedbackpiimm_18 - Aug 20, 2007 / — -
Neolithic Agricultural Revolution

2 - Greetings! I'd be glad to give you some editing suggestions for your excellent essay! hat period of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Aug 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Aug 13, 2007
having a birthmother is a good opportunity (is it a good essay?)

1 - please help me! topic: having a birthmother is a good opportunity for the ones who can not have...

Writing Feedbacknelit - Aug 1, 2007 / — -
Pre-agricultural and modern diets

2 - Greetings! Great job, as usual! Here are some editing tips for you: "Mummy, what do we eat?"...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 27, 2007
Haemoglobin & natural selection in areas plagued by malaria

2 - Greetings! You manage to make this subject comprehensible even to those of us who know nothing about the...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 26, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 27, 2007
Inaccurate depiction of Neanderthals in the popular media

2 - Greetings! I'd be glad to help with some editing: The Neanderthals' anatomy and culture highlight their kind...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 26, 2007
Hominid species during the Pleistocene

2 - Greetings! Another fine essay! Here are some editing tips for you: So astonishing a conclusion leads us...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 26, 2007
Sociobiology - theory and practical application

2 - Greetings! Merci beaucoup! Bien que je ne puisse pas personnellement recevoir votre aide, I am sure that if...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 25, 2007
Time of origin of modern human language

2 - Greetings! You're welcome, Frederic, we're glad to help! Here are some editing suggestions: As a French student...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 25, 2007
Archaeology, material artefacts, and cultural systems

2 - Greetings! Great essay! Here are a few editing tips: They dig to find antique items then expose...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 24, 2007
Importance of hunting vs. gathering in foraging societies

2 - Greetings! An excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: in the first place, the comparison...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 24, 2007
The human species' impact on the earth

2 - Greetings! Another excellent essay! I have just a few grammatical suggestions for you: when the extinction of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 23, 2007
the effect of Global warming- thesis statement and topic sentence

2 - Greetings! I think you have a good start with your paragraph! It appears that the first sentence is...

Writing Feedbackfuieik - Jul 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 23, 2007
"The Jilting of Granny Weatherall" essay

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay, but a few of your sentence constructions are a little awkward. Here...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 23, 2007
Essay proofread on Jealousy

3 - Greetings! I think the words in bold are fine. I would rewrite this sentence like this: Ed...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 22, 2007
Essay on Deception, The Sparkling Bitch

3 - Greetings! It can be tempting, sometimes, to overexplain things in an essay, especially if you are having trouble...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 18, 2007
Culture change vs. biological evolution essay

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to help with some editing: On the one hand, the factors of biological...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 16, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 17, 2007
America today is a nation of people with different ethnicities; Cultures Conflict

4 - Greetings! I think your essay is greatly improved! Here are just a few more suggestions: She feels...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 15, 2007
Earliest stone tools - short anthropology essay

2 - Greetings! I'm learning a lot about archaelology from your essays! Very interesting! Here are a few editing pointers:...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 14, 2007
Russia and the Far Abroad

4 - Greetings! I'm glad we could be helpful! As far as expanding the essay goes, there are some factors...

Writing Feedbackyrutrpn - Jul 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 13, 2007
Concept of "human races" - short Physical Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings! I always enjoy reading your excellent essays! Here are a few editing suggestions: It can be...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 12, 2007
The Worst Job I Have Ever Experienced! - Essay

4 - Greetings! Great job! The only suggestion I have is to change the punctuation in this sentence, like this:...

Writing Feedbackldixon - Jul 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
On the origins of domesticated felines - Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings! A very interesting and enjoyable essay! I have a few editing suggestions: I both drew and...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 10, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
Summary/Analysis of Lucy from The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

8 - Greetings! I should have been more specific with my suggetion regarding "immensely." It should read like this: "several...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jul 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
Thesis help: Education better or worse?

9 - Thank you for your response, I'll try writing it better. Is there anyway I can delete the other essays...

Writing Feedbacksammie1981 - Jun 30, 2007 / sammie1981 - Jul 10, 2007
Vis--vis the early anatomically modern Homo sapiens

2 - Greetings! A remarkable and interesting paper! You've done a marvelous job; I have just a few editing suggestions...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 10, 2007
Comparison Essay--Rushdie and Doctorow

7 - Greetings! I'm afraid that "makes religion the only problem for prohibiting birth control" doesn't really make sense. It's...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 9, 2007
"Sicko" - movie review to correct

3 - Greetings! Your essay is well-written and very informative! I'm not sure how deep your instructor wanted you to...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 5, 2007
Choose a day in your life which did not start off well

2 - Greetings! What an interesting story! I have made some corrections for you: The day in my life...

Writing FeedbackFaheekah - Jul 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 4, 2007
"Life has been tough for me because I have to face many disappointments in it" - Narrative essay

1 - Any one here please help me with the grammar in this essay. Thanks in advance. Topic: Write a...

Writing Feedbackdejavu - Jul 2, 2007 / — -
proofread 1st part of another comparison essay--meaning of nothing

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job! I know that transitions can be difficult. Sometimes they are...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jun 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 2, 2007
Performance enhancing drugs in athletes.

5 - Greetings! If you would like to post your research paper here, we'll be happy to help you with...

Writing FeedbackJess242 - May 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 29, 2007
Comparison essay - the consequences of Hulga's disillusionment

6 - Greetings! I think you've done an excellent job of clarifying what you meant! The only other thing I...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jun 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 25, 2007
Untitled Explanatory/Informative Essay (Due 6/25) what do you think??

2 - Greetings! You've written a great essay, full of useful information! I'll just give you some editing tips: ...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 24, 2007
To rack their brains to find our answers; Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings, Frederic! Another excellent essay! I have just a few editing pointers: Nevertheless, since statistically speaking, that...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jun 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 22, 2007
Search to procreate overweighs the pressure over food sources; Physical Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings, Frederic! As is your habit, you have written an informative and educational essay! I always learn not...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jun 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 22, 2007
My most recent discovery is Japanese music, J-ROCK

11 - I like the metaphor a lot, so I think I'll be using something like that! Thank you very,...

Writing FeedbackMissHiwatari - Feb 3, 2007 / MissHiwatari - Jun 18, 2007
A presence in oneself -- an essay

19 - So have I! Take care! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jun 7, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 14, 2007
Buy Buy Buy! (essay on american compulsive shopping)

3 - thanks so much for your review Sarah....

Writing Feedbacksecondhandgod - Jun 6, 2007 / secondhandgod - Jun 14, 2007
How we may cause natural events to happen - an essay

18 - Lead away! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 10, 2007
The human cause of global warming? Research essay.

3 - Thank you! Your feedback helped me alot, thanks! Kris...

Writing Feedbackkriegle - Jun 5, 2007 / kriegle - Jun 9, 2007
College freshman after 15 year break - first essay for this class

4 - You're welcome! I'll look forward to reading the next one! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 9, 2007
Feedback wanted for the first essay I've written in 16 years!! GULP

2 - Greetings! We always try to be gentle here! And, the truth is, you've written a really delightful essay!...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Brave New World- Huxley's message?

3 - Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it. =]...

Writing Feedbackpoohbear0805 - Jun 5, 2007 / poohbear0805 - Jun 6, 2007
Response to "brave new world" by Danial

5 - I hope this was helpful to you! Thanks, Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing FeedbackDanialls - Jun 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
Eastern thought - an introduction in three parts

24 - Thanks! She lived a good life; seven years, as is average for a ferret. I still miss her, after...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Childhood memory by anthony qcity

2 - Greetings! What a great story! Your writing is very colorful and engaging. I particularly like the metaphor about...

Writing Feedbackqcityslugger - Jun 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Running Backs: Training and Knowledge to become Successful.

4 - Greetings! I agree, you've written a good essay! I have just a few suggestions: These players did...

Writing Feedbackathiththan - Jun 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Summary of a childhood experience

2 - Greetings! The details really make the story! It's a great essay; I have just a few editing tips:...

Writing FeedbackDIPSET - Jun 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 3, 2007
Vocabulary Composition on Soccer

2 - Greetings! What a delightful essay! I love your analysis of soccer and its relationship to politics. Your vocabulary...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Jun 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Expository Essay: Important holidays for me

3 - Greetings! Congratulations on working towards your G.E.D.! I think you've done a fine job with your essay--particularly impressive...

Writing FeedbackVerde - May 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Replacing a Kitchen Faucet - Process Essay

4 - We'll be happy to provide it! Never underestimate how well "years of experience" can make up for "years since...

Writing Feedbackscash - May 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 1, 2007
Response to Brave New World

5 - Greetings! I think your style and structure are just fine. The only suggestion I might make is that,...

Writing FeedbackANNUR - May 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 31, 2007
Expository Essay: War, good or bad?

4 - Greetings! I think your essay is coming along quite well. I have just a few suggestions for you....

Writing FeedbackmSaKooL - May 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 28, 2007

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