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Rain - Richard Rive. Essay on a short story we did in my English Studies class

6 - I'll look forward to reading it, Landi! :-) Sarah...

Writing Feedbacklandi - Mar 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 18, 2007
Essay about a young woman

2 - Greetings! What an excellent and compelling essay! I love the dramatic opening! I think you did an outstanding...

Writing Feedbackjhon_lam - Mar 15, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
history or mathematics?

3 - Greetings! You make some good points in your essay! It just needs a bit of tweaking. I've made...

Writing Feedbackmahdi - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
ANALGY; Composition class

2 - Greetings! I think perhaps you got off to a bad start with your essay's opening and it somewhat...

Writing Feedbackgoombaking209 - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
Community college student essay - asking for a little feedback

2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here, with lots of important information! Your opening sentence is good; it...

Writing FeedbackTinyjn - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
"Human Trafficking Today's Modern Day Slavery"

2 - Greetings! You have found a lot of information about a powerful subject. Here are some editing tips: ...

Writing Feedbackrh07391 - Mar 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 13, 2007
Orwell's prejudice against the colonized is inexcusableI; Multi-Source Essay

2 - Greetings! I think you do an excellent job of relating the three essays to the theme of prejudice!...

Writing Feedbackrusshen - Mar 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
Two different methods of losing weight

2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here! I just have a few suggestiosns: My father suggested me...

Writing FeedbackMaggie8802 - Mar 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
All Quiet on the Western Front - Comradeship

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to make a few editing suggestions to your excellent essay! The distinction of...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Mar 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Feedback: An incident report written specifically by a bus driver

2 - Greetings! You do a good job of capturing the proper tone for this sort of report. If your...

Writing FeedbackShergill - Mar 10, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Can you edit my essay? "Ethics"

2 - Greetings! I think you have done a very thoughtful analysis of the poem. Good job! I have just...

Writing Feedbackmkatts19 - Mar 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Emperor Jones' flight is a progress in self-understanding

2 - Greetings! The thing that stands out the most to me is that you use the thesis statement, "Emperor...

Writing Feedbackwolface - Mar 7, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 8, 2007
Tongan Immigration(2nd draft)

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting essay about a people that most of us know little about! I have...

Writing Feedbackjone1113 - Mar 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2007
Education-sat practice essay; other than school influences on education?

4 - Greetings! I'm afraid I'm not that familiar with the SAT essay requirements. If there is a word limit,...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Mar 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2007
The Courtroom - Essay

1 - I just wrote this essay for my english class. I can't quite grasp what is wrong with it. Most...

Writing FeedbackMatthewcurtis12 - Mar 5, 2007 / — -
"Reasons to smoke" I wrote this essay for tommorow's class

2 - Greetings! It can be a real challenge to write essays in a foreign language. You make some good...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 5, 2007
example essay about and amazing artists

4 - I'm not sure I understand your question. Can it be an example essay for what? Sarah...

Writing Feedbackokuna - Mar 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 3, 2007
Differences between Mongolian and American Foods

3 - thank you so much i really appreciate...

Writing FeedbackMaggie8802 - Mar 2, 2007 / Maggie8802 - Mar 2, 2007
The moral education aim in the Alive 0-8 and Alive 0-4

8 - Thanks for your help...handed in essay today!!!!One job out of the way...lol Thanks again!...

Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Feb 28, 2007 / superkaytee - Mar 1, 2007
CATS; Indoor/ Outdoor / Indoor-Outdoor

7 - Rest is not possible for a mother with a son turning 3 on Friday. :) It is also not...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Feb 25, 2007 / amosborne13 - Feb 28, 2007
"Living at the time of Copernicus" - Proper Thesis For a 4-page Paper

5 - It's a rewarding job, but knowing that makes it even more worthwhile! You made my week! (And I hope...

Writing Feedbackmanogamez - Feb 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
All Quiet On the Western Front - academic essay on Betrayal

2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I enjoyed reading it very much! I have only a few editing suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Feb 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2007
Behavioral Support, Social relationships & Peer support.

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay! Most of my observations have to do with punctuation. ...

Writing FeedbackCeressie - Feb 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 25, 2007
Memories are something everyone has! - SAT

3 - Greetings! It's good to get input from someone who has just been through it, so thanks, aznpoo! I...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 24, 2007
Short Essay on The Crucible

4 - And I appreciate your letting me know! Thank you! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Feb 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
'Do not stop questioning' - essay regarding my 3 core traits

3 - Wow! I am surprised that I only made a few mistakes. I agree that my conclusion needs work. I...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Feb 21, 2007 / Timcago - Feb 23, 2007
Money is one of the greatest tools in life

5 - Yes I do, but I coudn't think I'm not good at writing essay I've been here for 1 year...

Writing Feedbackaljur - Feb 22, 2007 / aljur - Feb 22, 2007
Your career must compliment yourself; Career Choice

4 - thank you both :)...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 21, 2007 / kendra - Feb 22, 2007
'My Friend Moni' - this is my first descriptive essay for grade

4 - Greetings! Sometimes when we have been working intensely on a piece of writing, it can be difficult to...

Writing FeedbackMagstar0202 - Feb 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
William Osler - Can someone edit my introduction

10 - Greetings! I know it is difficult when you have an instructor who sees things entirely differently from you...

Writing Feedbackaznpoo - Feb 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...

Writing Feedbackcsneed1677 - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you

3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other

3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...

Writing Feedbackyongen_92 - Feb 18, 2007 / yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
Essay about the disappointments you faced in life

3 - The first disappointment which I faced was when i first knew that my mother had cancer. Tears welled in...

Writing Feedbackaysha - Feb 7, 2007 / aznpoo - Feb 18, 2007
A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 15, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 16, 2007
8-paragraph compare & contrast essay

5 - Thanks so much for all the help. KingTiger...

Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Feb 10, 2007 / KingTiger - Feb 12, 2007
The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay

1 - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...

Writing Feedbackjhogan - Feb 10, 2007 / — -
College Journal - English Class / Society Living

1 - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...

Writing Feedbackryan - Feb 10, 2007 / — -
Looking for Feedback

6 - Thanks Sarah, that's very helpful and I'll keep that in mind for my future edits!...

Writing FeedbackSquish - Feb 3, 2007 / Squish - Feb 5, 2007
China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"

1 - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 4, 2007 / — -
Comparison of past thirty years of special education

5 - Fantastic!! I'm so glad!!! You are very, very welcome! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jan 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
Describe a potential classmate you believe you could learn from

5 - Actually, it would be better if you create a new topic - either way, we'll be able to assist...

Writing Feedbackrang555 - Jan 31, 2007 / EF_Team - Jan 31, 2007
Looking for alternatives. 6-paragraph cause & effect essay

2 - Looking for alternatives Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who...

Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Jan 30, 2007 / KingTiger - Jan 30, 2007
Genocide Essay

2 - Greetings! Well, you certainly make some valid points here! You don't say what the exact assignment was. I'm...

Writing Feedbackanf3rnee - Jan 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
Essay on out-of-town shopping centres

3 - thank you, I will change that....

Writing FeedbackTheGeek - Jan 28, 2007 / TheGeek - Jan 28, 2007
History Paper on Revolutions

3 - Thank you, Sarah! The points were very helpful!...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Jan 27, 2007 / rollagasper - Jan 28, 2007
Custom essay about my wallet

1 - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...

Writing Feedbackokuna - Jan 24, 2007 / — -
'the fraternity brothers' - essay

1 - Everyone has at least one or more defining moments in their life that can change the direction of their...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Jan 15, 2007 / — -
THE 12th CENTURY RENAISSANCE; history class essay

5 - Greetings! You are correct that the literal meaning of the word "renaissance" is "rebirth." It comes from a...

Writing Feedbackalika - Dec 19, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
Gang Violence. "There will be an escalation in violence on streets"

2 - Greetings! First I'll look at technical things like grammar, sentence structure and punctuation: The level of violence...

Writing FeedbackShergill - Jan 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
short essay for review for police test

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some input! You have several nouns which require an...

Writing FeedbackShergill - Dec 30, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 30, 2006
Repaying a kindness; My aunt was an epitomy of goodness.

2 - Greetings! This is a compelling story. It just needs a little tweaking. I lay flat on...

Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 28, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
Keeping cool - Essay revise

2 - Greetings! I like the way you begin with your own personal reaction to the heat. Your description in...

Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 28, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
Minority Report Shortstory Vs. Minority Report Movie

1 - Hello, I am currently in high school grade 10 level and we are supposed to write an essay about...

Writing FeedbackVolition - Dec 20, 2006 / — -
"Nobody gave me a chance!

2 - Greetings! I'll be glad to help with proofreading your essay. Let's take a look: "I had seen...

Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 19, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 19, 2006
PUBLIC UNIVERSITY OR A PRIVATE ONE?

3 - Hi, thanks a lot for your suggestions, I am going to give it to my professor on Friday, and...

Writing Feedbackalika - Dec 19, 2006 / alika - Dec 19, 2006
oral history project essay / gender theme

20 - You can only include the things you can find. :-) I hope this will go well for you....

Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Dec 16, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2006
Essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey

1 - I am supposed to write an essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey, in cause and effect order, here...

Writing Feedbackbernat - Dec 17, 2006 / — -
Essay: From ARPANET to the Internet

4 - You're welcome--I was glad to help! Isn't the thesaurus a great tool? I love mine! I use the...

Writing Feedbackbubbledesigns - Dec 13, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 15, 2006
Essay about the career opportunities

3 - Hi! Thanks for your answer, I feel more motivated now:)...

Writing Feedbackbernat - Dec 12, 2006 / bernat - Dec 13, 2006

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