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|People care too much about their appearance than before. Do you agree?
6 - To add to the other suggestions, how about societal pressures? The fact that we as a society often judge...
Writing FeedbackChim Can Cook - Jan 17, 2011 / ameddy - Jan 18, 2011
|Essay about work hours Long or short work hours - feedback
2 - rephrase this sentence....it is not having a good structure i feel "Long-standing and till nowadays; we have been living...
Writing Feedbacksalam237 - Jan 18, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 18, 2011
|"My sociable mother" - describe a person you admire
NEW - Hi Please tell me about this essay I wrote about a person I admire, and I choose 2 characteristics...
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|How money was spent in different entertainment- IELTS task
4 - cool....I think this time it was quite precise and related to the shown graph. cheers and good luck.please do...
Writing FeedbackARIA - Jan 17, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 18, 2011
|'Aladdin's lamp antique aroma' - Do memories hinder or help people?
5 - Thank you. I consider that I should state clearly at the beginning in my conclusion and leave a space...
Writing Feedbackcharpay_k - Jan 16, 2011 / charpay_k - Jan 17, 2011
|Personal thoughts about meaning of living
2 - Well I have been thinking about how life it occasionally is for nearly two years, duringirrevelant different times; while...
Writing Feedbackfekfek - Jan 17, 2011 / kungpo91 - Jan 17, 2011
|(IELTS topic) shopping has become a favorite past time among young people..
Writing Feedbackkode336 - Jan 16, 2011 / lokesh - Jan 17, 2011
|Expressing my inner world through Photoshop
5 - --> this sentence makes me think that you are often unconfident about your works. what about just...
Writing Feedbackltpvan - Jan 13, 2011 / mimiQ - Jan 17, 2011
|TOEFL: TRANSPORTION (subway is the most efficient and environmently friendly?)
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Jan 16, 2011 / pashnetala - Jan 17, 2011
|the 20th page of Time magazine.
Writing Feedbacklucky_mimi8592 - Jan 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 17, 2011
|IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING ABOUT GOVERNMENT FUNDING ART.
3 - I think you should say standards of living instead of life standards. I also think you should add another...
Writing Feedbackmyosotis214 - Jan 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 17, 2011
|Job satisfaction: factors, element of well-being
5 - thanks a tonne lokesh...well its really nice to get guidance and opinions ...please do give me your reviews about...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 16, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 17, 2011
|5 senses essay - "Why are you at Columbia Basin College?"
Writing Feedbacksupremeacy - Jan 12, 2011 / supremeacy - Jan 17, 2011
|TOEFL -AMBITION (to teach Chinese as a froeign language)
2 - your answer is good but not great use adverbs as much as you can and use besides, furthermore, however,......
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Jan 15, 2011 / pashnetala - Jan 16, 2011
|Younger people are not suitable for important positions in government of countries?
Writing Feedbackcharpay_k - Jan 14, 2011 / charpay_k - Jan 15, 2011
|Everyone should have a person who you interested (my nephew)
Writing Feedbacklwshing - Jan 9, 2011 / peevzeeweez - Jan 15, 2011
|"Blame the government" - SAT PRACTICE ESSAY: (practicing for the sats)
4 - Well, first, I consider that you'd better add some examples into your essay, since it is important to write...
Writing Feedbackivantav - Jan 12, 2011 / charpay_k - Jan 15, 2011
|Theory of Knowledge: Evidence to support beliefs
2 - I think every area of knowledge required requires a varied amount of evidence. Ethics is also an...
Writing Feedbacktanyasilva11 - Jan 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 14, 2011
|TOEFL: small town has some advantages such as healthy life and better facilities
4 - ... according to some factors, Some people prefer to live in tall ... One of the conditions that...
Writing Feedbackazar1921 - Jan 4, 2011 / linying - Jan 14, 2011
|People with talents: BORN OR MADE?
3 - Thank you very much, perhaps i can use Albert Einstein as my example? What do you think? I really...
Writing FeedbackPaulaine07 - Jan 12, 2011 / Paulaine07 - Jan 13, 2011
|IELTS : government spend money on old buildings or new buildings. agree, disagee?
3 - Thanks for your advice. This is really helpful :) i will try much to correct my mistakes and also...
Writing Feedbackjennifer92 - Jan 12, 2011 / jennifer92 - Jan 13, 2011
|Smoking should not be permitted in restaurants
3 - Thanks Maria for useful suggestion. I need help in both grammar check and ideas I expressed. I...
Writing Feedbackvaishali1980 - Jan 10, 2011 / vaishali1980 - Jan 12, 2011
|Student, not teachers or administrators, should be in control of their own education
4 - Great job here... I'll identify some erors: Who is better at the decision for education? Is it the student,...
Writing FeedbackBNMS - Dec 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 12, 2011
|Sporting Events: Outlet for a patriotic feeling or the way to reduce the tension?
5 - Suggestions are helpful, thank you. I don't know whether u can see or not, i rewrote the essay. I...
Writing FeedbackBobur - Dec 28, 2010 / Bobur - Jan 12, 2011
|Factory farming food. Your opinion about what it's better to eat.
Writing FeedbackBobur - Dec 28, 2010 / Bobur - Jan 12, 2011
|"When someone's dancing over a clover, don't slow their step"
Writing Feedbackem2always - Jan 7, 2011 / canes4life - Jan 12, 2011
|"Ehhlo dis is five Sta Pandah callin" - essay about self
4 - I think I would just rewrite your line where you pretend you're a waitress with correct spelling/ grammar, and...
Writing Feedbackashleymc16 - Jan 10, 2011 / mwgstan - Jan 11, 2011
|TOEFL: Smoking in restaurants should not be permitted, agree or disagree?
4 - need to give opposite opinions' views about how it is their freedom to smoke where they want but then...
Writing Feedbackjunerosie - Jan 10, 2011 / atham64 - Jan 11, 2011
|"I'm from Kuala Lumpur" - Essay about my self
4 - There are eight members in my family which is my father, my mother, two older brothers, one older sister,...
Writing Feedbackthenadi - Jan 11, 2011 / atham64 - Jan 11, 2011
|Describe a diagram that shows the enviromentl issues raised by a product
2 - Hi Ilaria! I'll try to improve this... you should put all these sentences into one paragraph. The...
Writing Feedbacksweetheart87 - Jan 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 11, 2011
|No matter if it's original, more important is how useful is this idea for the people in a new way?
Writing Feedbackrajeshaaidu - Aug 27, 2010 / rajeshaaidu - Jan 11, 2011
|ielts essay: zoos should be built to protect rural animals, do you agree?
3 - This is so excellent. The grammar is great, and the style of writing is rhythmic and clear... I think...
Writing Feedbackstarwish - Dec 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 10, 2011
|Describe a music video or a concert has made an impression on you.
Writing Feedbacksweetheart87 - Jan 7, 2011 / sweetheart87 - Jan 10, 2011
|Eating at food stands or restaurants OR Prepare food at home?
NEW - Nowadays, eating becomes very important for each people.Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants because it's...
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|ielts: cultural heritage used to attract tourists and promote tourism
Writing Feedbacksakura0v0 - Jan 5, 2011 / waqar - Jan 9, 2011
|IELTS: Should the government choose university subject for students?
3 - What do you mean by these people? If you mean sociologists I would prefer "These sociologists" or "They"....
Writing Feedbackriny - Jan 7, 2011 / saloca7 - Jan 8, 2011
|"to fund the building of affordable housing for students" - GRE Arguments
Writing Feedbacksaloca7 - Jan 5, 2011 / saloca7 - Jan 8, 2011
|IELTS essay-unhealthy diet and do not enough exercise
3 - Humans health has become ...when you talk about the time (present) you have to use the parfect tense. ...
Writing Feedbackmelodybai - Jan 2, 2011 / riny - Jan 7, 2011
|University is the place where people seek to further develop their expertise
4 - their expertise and knowledge support their causes (?) to take a degree that's more widely accepted, to...
Writing Feedbacksweetgoofy - Jan 2, 2011 / riny - Jan 7, 2011
|Conscience upholds a string of moral values in life; SAT practice essay
5 - How is this? 1st paragraph Conscience is a precursor that determines one's acts. The question if conscience is...
Writing Feedbackjtpl - Jan 4, 2011 / jtpl - Jan 7, 2011
|I need a good headline for my newspaper article based upon Jim Carrey
6 - embarrassed others but in Carrey's case ...need a comma after others it doesnt seem like a full article...its...
Writing Feedbackallstarz000 - Jan 4, 2011 / em2always - Jan 6, 2011
|Ethan Frome Analytical Essay - Sledding Passage
2 - Please do not paste content that appears on other websites! :-) Does this sentence accurately express the...
Writing Feedbackkisskill16 - Jan 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2011
|Competition and cooperation is both important as children are growing up - my IELTS writing
3 - The issue of children's education has been constantly debated in our society. ...and less time consuming in cooperation...
Writing Feedbackxiaofeixia2013 - Dec 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 5, 2011
|Essay about exercise which is element of healthy lifestyle
2 - F itness is how much ability or work that body can do. Also, it depend on endurance, flexibility, strength...
Writing FeedbackMahrooo - Jan 5, 2011 / leia624 - Jan 5, 2011
|"disadvantages than advantages of using a computer" - my summary - computer
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|Self-Portrait-- SMU RA Position Essay
Writing Feedbackericao2010 - Jan 4, 2011 / ericao2010 - Jan 4, 2011
|'paying for communal expenses is quick' - internet has given people access to information on a level
3 - People who live in countryside the countryside The Internet gives good opportunity to people to have connections...
Writing Feedbacklilly1234 - Jan 2, 2011 / Nanoluvv8D - Jan 4, 2011
|Mass media have been influencing our daily lives from various aspects
Writing FeedbackShrek - Dec 22, 2010 / Shrek - Jan 3, 2011
|causes and solutions for problems with student behavior
Writing Feedbacktrang_12934 - Jan 2, 2011 / LUDACRISS007 - Jan 2, 2011
|"We should teach these personal fiancé skills" -An issue that is very important to me
3 - i change it....
Writing Feedbackkekeibra - Dec 27, 2010 / kekeibra - Jan 2, 2011
|Sex Slavery--Intro to the prompt "problem in america right now"
Writing Feedbackem2always - Jan 2, 2011 / canes4life - Jan 2, 2011
|what is your horoscope predictions and do you believe in it??... i want to improve it
NEW - Although I do not believe in horoscope predictions. But, according to horoscope predictions, it seems that I would experience...
Writing Feedbackhasgc - Jan 2, 2011 / — -
|Describing Bordeaux - France; especially known for its wine
Writing Feedbackbanhbichqui_nt - Dec 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2011
|"Parents must stimulate their children to study" - essay help revision
2 - Although a comfortable life became the main reason to have an education , most students wish everyday would be...
Writing Feedbackhasgc - Jan 1, 2011 / bluedog2004 - Jan 1, 2011
|Violence against women - essay suggestions
NEW - Violence against women Since thousands of years human beings' lives have been affected by violence. Year after year...
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|AN ACCIDENTAL, OCCIDENTAL PLAN: (Political leadership) Writing an exploratory essay
Writing Feedbackwriterblock - Dec 24, 2010 / writerblock - Dec 31, 2010
|What ways could technology be useful to old people? How to encourage them to use?
Writing Feedbackstarwish - Dec 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 31, 2010
|Perceptions of Muslims/Arabs
8 - Any Muslims or Arabs who would like to clarify the substance and misconceptions of your culture and/or religion in...
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|Privacy of celebrities - the inevitable price of a public figure?
Writing Feedbacksubhash_ghosh - Dec 20, 2010 / subhash_ghosh - Dec 31, 2010
|How to phrase or start an essay to highlight network license?
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