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|I would concede that knowledge from books is widely accepted - Ielts topic
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|IELTS-- important to prevent language extinction
4 - I am confused at one point of Sun's comment, and just checked. "agree sth." is more British, and...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 4, 2011 / jostar - Aug 5, 2011
|'creativity should be devised'; A gift can contribute to a child's development.
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Aug 5, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 5, 2011
|"want to learn any language" - ielts
Writing FeedbackArman177 - Aug 5, 2011 / Arman177 - Aug 5, 2011
|Do you think parents are the best teachers. Toefl IBt wrting excercise
Writing FeedbackXiaowang - Aug 1, 2011 / Xiaowang - Aug 5, 2011
|Modern technology can replace museums and art galleries agree or disagree?
2 - "replace many area" --> replace many areas "also can instead of museums " instead is not a verb...
Writing FeedbackFly109238 - Aug 5, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|Should a working mother be blamed for children's deviant behavior?
NEW - Hey, there, Thanks for every body who is willing to give me some advice about my essay. Wish...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 5, 2011 / — -
|IELTS---Advertising discourages us from being different individuals?
2 - Dear katie, I am confused with your introduction at the beginning. Since there are "different" kinds of products...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 4, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 5, 2011
|IELTS--Solve traffic and housing problems by moving companies to the rural areas?
3 - your grammar and vocabulary are so impressive. There are many phrases and new words useful to me. However,...
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 4, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|Ielts taks2: Father should share, parenting work more equally with woman. agree or no
Writing Feedbackoriole_baby9189 - Aug 3, 2011 / oriole_baby9189 - Aug 4, 2011
|Having less number of friends or more friends? Which is better?
5 - Let the topic be "some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Other choose to...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 4, 2011
|"Stone and Dylan": Who has made an impact on your life; how, why is he/she important
2 - ButSo were my two brothers, Stone and Dylan, who were positioned beside me with the same weary fate of...
Writing Feedbackmallorypreston - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 4, 2011
|essay about importance of truth in any relationship .
NEW - i believe that the truth is most important thing in our life because if we imagine that we live...
Writing Feedbackosos zizo - Aug 4, 2011 / — -
|[TOEFL] better to have rules about clothing that people wear at school or workplace
NEW - Topic: It's better to have rules about the type of clothing that people wear at schools or in their...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 4, 2011 / — -
|a single international language or not?------IELTS Practice
4 - any contributor could help me with this question? Thank you:) a friend of mine thought my argument in the...
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011 / Fiona_82075 - Aug 4, 2011
|"Music is a well-received art form" - IELTS - Music
3 - in the introductory paragraph, you do not mention that you will also discuss about "Is the traditional music of...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 2, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|This is a duty of parents to teach their children how to face the big society.
2 - Hi Saram: Few observation on your writing. Introduction should not start with the word "No Doubt". Also I...
Writing Feedbacksaram - Aug 3, 2011 / bimala73 - Aug 4, 2011
|IELTS--Air travel only brings advantages to the rich people?
2 - Hi Katie, Work on your grammar part,and also the spellings too. The arguments as I personally feel aren't very...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 2, 2011 / ajit88rai - Aug 3, 2011
|Toefl: "health improvement and time-saving" food has become easier to prepare...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 3, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 3, 2011
|'valuable and irrecoverable'; Should a city preserve its old buildings?
6 - First, maintaining the old, historic buildings is a money-consuming task. First, maintaining the old, historic buildings needs money-consuming task....
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 27, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|Structure and creators of the Stonehenge - TOEFL writing/
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 2, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|[TOEFL] In the past, people were friendlier than we are now. Agree or Disagree.
NEW - When dating back to the old times, people argue that we, as human kind, were friendlier than we are...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 3, 2011 / — -
|Should we read books that are based on real events, real people? NO
4 - Jostar thank you for you feedback. i found problem in the third part: "lots of people" not "lot of...
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Aug 3, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 3, 2011
|Possible effects of longer living for individuals and society[Report IELTs]
NEW - Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging...
Writing Feedbackspoontzc - Aug 3, 2011 / — -
|Economic development VS Loss of social values [IELTs]
Writing Feedbackspoontzc - Jul 28, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 3, 2011
|GRE:As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, humans thinking
Writing Feedbackego - Aug 2, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 3, 2011
|Do you think distance learning is more beneficial for students?
2 - With technology advanced----with advances in technology they promotespromote maybe the beginning of the last paragraph should add something...
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 2, 2011 / Fiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS- Education- should graduates pay the full cost of their education?
3 - Hi Wolverine, Since you were asked to what extent you agree or disagree with the statement, you should...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS - the arguments for and against keeping pets
4 - For many years it has been recognized that animals are not justonly helpers for our work, but also they...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / TTJudy - Aug 2, 2011
|Bowdoin: Comment on intellectual engagement, connection to place, or the common good
Writing Feedbacknicolew - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS "adult life at work" - What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
6 - Androidman and Vanessa000, thank you very much. it still has many functions to improve people to satisfy their...
Writing Feedbackinskychen - Aug 2, 2011 / inskychen - Aug 2, 2011
|'People are too busy' - Some prefer to spend their free time outdoors
4 - Thank you!!!...
Writing Feedbackkevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 2, 2011
|Should fatherhood be valued equally as motherhood?
NEW - Hey, everybody, I want to say thanks once more here to each of you who ever leave some ideas...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|The wolf + Strong relationships - help to the correction of these paragraphs?
Writing Feedbackp177 - Jul 30, 2011 / p177 - Aug 2, 2011
|Should people have just one career or possess several jobs at the same time?
4 - Thank you Annika, I will be more aware of using formal words in my articles. Thanks for reminding...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 2, 2011
|As everything has own pros and cons in this world, also computers impact on our life is debatable
NEW - Topic: Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others fell that...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|IELTS; Wealthy vs Poor Nations; not only a moral deed, but also a worthwhile one
3 - you should add up the detail reasons in the first para., it will make your outline more clearer~...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 1, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS; Government should spend money on ARTs, not only on public services
7 - Thus, a great number of people firmly believe that we will keep up this upward trend, achieving higher goals...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 2, 2011
|TOEFL- Do you agree or disagree? Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
3 - Thanks for the feedback, I know that the second paragraph is the weak spot of my essay. In fact,...
Writing Feedbacklykaon - Aug 2, 2011 / lykaon - Aug 2, 2011
|It is better to save money for unpredictable future than to spend it on a travel
NEW - Topic: It is better to spend money on travelling and vacations than to save money for future. AGREE or...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|"attended a catholic school" - Experiences that define you as a person
4 - @sunglyeol i know some capitalization of my words are wrong like "i", and thank you !! whats correct?...
Writing Feedbacklelou - Jul 31, 2011 / lelou - Aug 2, 2011
|TOEFL - the government should support the scientific research with no practical use?
5 - I like your point about the government and the real life. Good essay!! Therefore, I firmly believe that government...
Writing Feedbackblindside - Jul 14, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011
|"Your grandmother left you in her will 4 things to choose from" - Clep
3 - Thank you, Susan and ghafarimahsa for your time of reading and correcting my essay. I really appreciate your insights....
Writing Feedbackvanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011 / vanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011
|A Research Essay on Louis Riel, Hero of the Metis
NEW - Hi there, I am in social studies 10 summerschool course, my teacher had assigned my class to write an...
Writing Feedbackjanbreeze - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|READING FOR STUDENTS
4 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 30, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|Television for children. bad and good influences
6 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 31, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|when need to discuss upsetting problems, which do you prefer ? email or telephone ?
NEW - When meet upsetting or controversial problems, different people have different ways to discuss them with others. Personally, I choose...
Writing Feedbackhola bi - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|More money for successful sports professionals than others - fair or not fair?
3 - Thanks a lot katie.I appreciate your response.I know that i need to study more to do well and i'll...
Writing FeedbackLeonuous - Aug 1, 2011 / Leonuous - Aug 1, 2011
|(IELTS) Could predict criminal acts from 3 years old child? Thanks~
NEW - Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old children to see whether they will grow...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|Describe two charts about a survey of adult education..from Cambridge IELTs 1
5 - I think you should balance the description in two charts. Just one sentence about the figure in the second...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 27, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 1, 2011
|"What do you think are the environmental challenges in Southeast Asia today, and why?
3 - thanx Wang.. maybe for an easier movement from a place to another place should be from places to...
Writing Feedbackmonno - Aug 1, 2011 / monno - Aug 1, 2011
|In order to solve the problems , people should review the past. 【TOEFL EASSY】
5 - dear Zhang Yipeng your assey is good. it expresses enough about history. but its good to give some examples...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 28, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|[TOEFL] What are the best ways of reducing stress? 'I prefer doing exercise'
4 - dear wu i think that the topic is about getting rid of stress not the benefits of excercise. your...
Writing Feedbackmhh2531 - Aug 1, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|Topic: A time you have the courage to do something or face something difficult
5 - To EF_Kevin, Thank you for giving me these advice. Do you think this essay can pass the CBEST...
Writing Feedbackboxu53 - Jul 29, 2011 / boxu53 - Jul 31, 2011
|Should people follow their ambitious dreams and goals even they are not realistic?
NEW - Everyone has dreams and goals in his or her mind. Different people choose different goals. Some of them prefer...
Writing Feedbackbiran - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|Detail the factors that affect editors to choose broadcasting news.
5 - Dear EF_Kevin, I really want to acknowledge you for reading my essays and give advices to me. The...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|Describe the changes and development of a village called Chorleywood...IELTs test
6 - Dear Amrosca, I don't know how to show you my gradtitude rose from my deep heart after reading...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|'Music lifts up our souls and releases them'; traditional vs international music
5 - EF_Kevin, You really made my day, and I appreciate that every viewpoint you have made about my essay....
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 27, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|(IELTS) protect animals, zoos should be banned?
2 - I'll make a lot of small changes... Please study these changes and type the sentences to practice the correct...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|IELTS - school or parents have equal nurturing on students
NEW - It has been controversial issue, which of these have more influence on behaviour of children; parents or school. However,...
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