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|Honesty - one of the treasured values of human being
Writing FeedbackPhoebe Su - Apr 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2010
|TOEFL: The most important does not come from books
6 - Thanks for your kind words! Well, contributing here is all about helping lots of people. We ask that...
Writing Feedbackmajsiu - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2010
|"parants are the best teachers" - I want a band for my essay(IELTS task 2)
3 - Be sure to put a period at the end of this sentence. Tran gave excellent corrections! Let's see...
Writing Feedbackcharming - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2010
|Semester Paper Intro (what we did throughout the course of year)
2 - Don't say "many literature." You don't say many water, because water is a substance. Literature is like that. You...
Writing Feedbackqomoco - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2010
|'practice and hard work' - Successful sports professionals can earn huge money
3 - Today, famous and successful sports professionals are always on the top of among the rich who earn a huge...
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|Should Humanitarian Aid be provided for illegal immigrants?
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Apr 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|Homework every day - is it necessary for students? Why / why not?
Writing Feedbackzimone - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|SAT: Are people motivated by personal satisfaction rather than by money or fame?
3 - Streamline. Take out some of the modifiers and unnecessary words: Everyday, there are myriads of teenagers all over the...
Writing Feedbacksat_essay - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|Society should ban all forms of the advertising - Essay for IELTS
Writing Feedbackrashidjon - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|[IELTS] Children must be taught to have balance between competitiveness and co-operation.
Writing Feedbackfakeghost - Apr 23, 2010 / fakeghost - Apr 27, 2010
|Why should it remain the persian gulf? - Argumentative Essay
NEW - why should it remain the persian gulf? The Persian Gulf is located between these countries: UAE, Kuwait, Bahrain,...
Writing FeedbackSarareh - Apr 27, 2010 / — -
|TOEFL: students are the only direct receiver of the work of their teachers
3 - but also to help students inwith their studies. Secondly, some teachers need to be evaluated by their students...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Apr 23, 2010 / zimone - Apr 26, 2010
|TOEFL essay:Twenty years from now, people will have more leisure time than we do
4 - Great! It's hard to explain, though. With more freedom, we may become busier, because we have more competition. But...
Writing Feedbackahhajuly - Apr 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 25, 2010
|Preparing for future career and networking with others- Reasons for attending college
4 - Nowadays, nearly all students graduating from high school are trying to enter college or a university. Every person has...
Writing FeedbackMagsad - Apr 23, 2010 / rmarin - Apr 25, 2010
|Science and religion cannot coexist.Write your views.
4 - Science is based upon what is predictable, evidence, and the study of nature, whereas religion deals with the ideologies...
Writing Feedbackyuvly - Apr 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 25, 2010
|Education means developing mind,not stuffing the memory
4 - Hey ya I would also inclucde the sentence that education is power as knowledge is power example can be...
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 23, 2010 / alibaba 1983 - Apr 25, 2010
|Genes, physical traits - I need help in my point by point essay.
3 - I'm not quite sure I understand the point of this essay, that is, the topic that you are supposed...
Writing Feedbackfishergus - Apr 23, 2010 / McGregor10 - Apr 24, 2010
|Just relationship between society and the individual Paper for poli sci theory
2 - Simplify: Determining a just relationship between the individual and society is the basis of the tension between arguments supporting...
Writing Feedbackmett87 - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|Literary devices in in Dutchman and Native Son
Writing Feedbackxxyellow - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|Today artists pass their privilege of revealing of hidden facts and meaning to the audience.
2 - You have to say "accessible to (someone or something)" like this: Art is derived from everyday life, and at...
Writing Feedbacksolotripper - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|Teenagers work while they are studying - argumentative essay
6 - I think working part-time, while attending school is a good working experience. Especially in these economics times that are...
Writing Feedbackthuong_lethi - Apr 23, 2010 / babydoll - Apr 24, 2010
|I completely agree with the point that the ability to plan and organize is essential to young people
Writing Feedbackahhajuly - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|A Brief Essay on the Struggle of Coping with an Undiagnosed Eye Condition
3 - This is brilliant descriptive and introspective writing. One moment I would be reading a paragraph about Thomas Jefferson, and...
Writing Feedbackrupee2 - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|DISCONTENT IS VITAL TO GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 22, 2010 / singingbird - Apr 24, 2010
|The Warrior (telling a story): mark-up my essay and give any advice
2 - When you insert an "extra" word or phrase, use a comma on each side: My son, Nathaniell, was two...
Writing Feedbackreannen77 - Apr 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|TOEFL essay: It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy...
5 - Well, you write very well now and have a large vocabulary. The level of skill you have now is...
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Apr 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|Looking back for an understanding of the past
4 - I'll scratch out the first part, because it does not make sense: It is such point of view that...
Writing Feedbackvincentcgs - Apr 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|Solutions for traffic problems - using public transportation system
2 - In between the first and second sentence, it would be great to add another sentence to help introduce the...
Writing FeedbackSarareh - Apr 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|How to Make a Good Presentation
2 - You should begin sketching out the presentation first. And most presentations have three...(I suggest you do not use "and"...
Writing Feedbackbeginer - Apr 22, 2010 / thuong_lethi - Apr 23, 2010
|A Country's Development Should Thrive on Education
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010 / thuong_lethi - Apr 23, 2010
|SHOULD MODERN SOCIETY BE CRITICIZED FOR BEING MATERIALISTIC
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 21, 2010 / singingbird - Apr 22, 2010
|TOEFL:living in the dormitories or in an apartment
6 - Even though it is more expensive to live in apartment, some students prefer to pay more for rent so...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Apr 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|Football match - Creative essay; 'The tension was getting more and more intense'
3 - We were sitting in the dressing room, waiting to go out to Wembley Stadium, the dream stadium of every...
Writing FeedbackAlexjewkes - Apr 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1]Multi-chart Music Preference
6 - Yep. Some writers are skillful enough that they can get away with breaking the rules. When you write...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|'students' interests in culture learning'; Learning A Language Through Culture
4 - Ha ha, yeah, you are right. So the most powerful communicators speak in proverbs, like Yoda. "Do, or...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|GRE issue 40 Scholars and academic inquiry and research
Writing FeedbackZoe 10 - Apr 21, 2010 / Zoe 10 - Apr 22, 2010
|The role of technology in our lives today: have we become too dependent
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 19, 2010 / singingbird - Apr 21, 2010
|Descriptive Essay '' Half Way Tree''
3 - At On any given day, the Jamaican culture is flamboyantly displayed in a myriad of ways ranging from...
Writing Feedbackamuletchic - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2010
|To what extent does television a negative effect on society?
9 - Thank you......
Writing Feedbackwilly0123 - Apr 19, 2010 / leggs - Apr 21, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1] Progress Diagram of Seawater Desalination
6 - The chart illustrates the process of seawater desalination, which are coped with by totalincludes four steps in total to...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1]Bar Chart of the UK Economy Structure
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1]Bar Chart of the Welsh Highest Qualification 2001/02
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 14, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010
|"my best friend Lenka" - DESCRIPTION OF A PERSON
3 - She has got an oval face with bright blue eyes and a big smiling mouth.---In English, saying someone...
Writing Feedbacktobysek - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|'This issue is two-sided' - advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country
2 - Good corrections from Azeri... here is another option for thje first part: Make this 2 sentences: It is a...
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|Do you like living in a big city? It's a good opportunity for the students
5 - Even though living in the city has a number of difficulties and disadvantages, we cannot deny that living in...
Writing Feedbackthuong_lethi - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|People prefer to work with machines, not by hand - they are lazier
4 - I completely agree with kevin here. The essay was like a good hair day gone terribly BAD!!! However, the...
Writing Feedbackhoahongnhung - Apr 18, 2010 / Vakax - Apr 20, 2010
|describing my friends (Putri)
Writing Feedbackranggapermanaa - Apr 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|Argument essay, Smoking in public
7 - Troy, why don't you post a revised essay and we'll comment. Notoman has given you plenty to work on...
Writing FeedbackTeerunky - Apr 18, 2010 / linmark - Apr 20, 2010
|My intro paragraph: a cause and effect essay on getting my first hamster
Writing Feedbacklydever91 - Apr 10, 2010 / lydever91 - Apr 19, 2010
|I think that wealthy nations are not required to share wealth among poor nations
7 - yes i agree with tityeu, in my opinion wealthy should helprd the poor nation in order to share their...
Writing Feedbacktityeu - Apr 16, 2010 / parker1234 - Apr 19, 2010
|"Modern Times: Man vs. Machine" Essay Feedback for my online English class
Writing FeedbackPharaoh - Apr 16, 2010 / Pharaoh - Apr 19, 2010
|Some kinds of paid work affect badly to mental, physical and spiritual development of children
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|Fatherhood should be considered as important as motherhood
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|argumentive essay on abortion - fallacies?
3 - I think the politically correct thing to say is "pro choice" rather than pro abortion! :-) You...
Writing Feedbackdjoats - Apr 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|A mystic path
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|Daddy's Little Princess - analytical essay
Writing Feedbackqomoco - Apr 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|Sometimes challenges bring out the best in us (a difficult medical condition)
NEW - CBEST sample writing prompt Unexpected challenges in our lives sometimes bring out the best in us. For example, we...
Writing Feedbackdees - Apr 18, 2010 / — -
|Essay:academic subjects and non-academic subjects.
2 - ...may not be healthy... ...to waste an increasinga lot of money... ...if you have a good health......
Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Apr 18, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 18, 2010
|IELTS TOPIC: Telecommuting ; GOOD OR BAD?
Writing Feedbacksharkondiet - Apr 12, 2010 / sharkondiet - Apr 17, 2010
|"Cogito ergo sum". (cause and effect)
2 - Matter exists for no other reason then than to allow our observation of it. That experiment where they...
Writing Feedbackwhatisgod - Apr 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
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