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|SAT prep essay about materialism
3 - While countries like America and England enjoy ... Because of low production costs, and because of American and...
Writing Feedbackjordansearches - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|TOEFL:Sport may be dangerous if we will become possessed by it too much.
3 - You didn't capitalize the first letter of the essay. Whatever the reasons for the sport practiced by young...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|Photographs/ Reminisce about the past ; Classification Essay
6 - Sounds like a tough class, but it will make you a good writer! I think you should google dianna...
Writing FeedbackGYG17 - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|History & Literature Vs Science & Mathematics; Every subject is important
2 - Taylor, that's really nice of you to spend so much time with it. The argument over... Some people may...
Writing Feedbacketaewoo - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|Sharuk Khan! He is my favorite hero.
6 - Sorry!! I can't give an accurate grade, because I don't know how these are scored. But if it's...
Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|GRE issue 153 skepticism in studying
Writing Feedbackclaire echo - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
|TOEFL:A person' childhood years are the most important years of a person's life
3 - Great job, Sabuhi, thanks!!! I think this correction is great, but it might be a misundersanding of...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
|should or should not schools create single sex education
Writing FeedbackSpitFires - Mar 8, 2010 / SpitFires - Mar 10, 2010
|IELTS Essay -250words - Technology Progression has a negative impact on us?
3 - You write almost perfectly. I want to tell you, though that your first paragraph seems incomplete. It should have...
Writing Feedbackvictorp_sv - Mar 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2010
|GRE issue 48 History is like a puzzle
4 - Yeah, your sentences seem complex, like sentences used in formal writing. I notice that you are good at varying...
Writing Feedbackclaire echo - Mar 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2010
|SAT practice essay about the possibility of knowing oneself
Writing Feedbackjordansearches - Mar 9, 2010 / jordansearches - Mar 9, 2010
|TOEFL topic: wheter or not to build a school in your hometown
Writing Feedbackpeter007 - Feb 24, 2010 / djanat - Mar 9, 2010
|Life in symmetry - Essay.
2 - You have a verb tense problem at the beginning. You can do this: Today, I spent almost two hours...
Writing FeedbackWanderer_x - Mar 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2010
|Email and text messaging threats written language
Writing Feedbackmalek1406 - Mar 3, 2010 / malek1406 - Mar 6, 2010
|University education is mandatory to get a good career. Discuss opinion. IELTS
Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Mar 4, 2010 / usalma2002 - Mar 5, 2010
|the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activty.
2 - People believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. According to me me "Earth is better place...
Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 4, 2010 / Ariel - Mar 5, 2010
|Toefl:Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking)
3 - Thanks Azamat! Please check out the contributor page! My preference is based on several reasons. --- this is...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|"great feeling of cooking" - Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.
3 - That's what we're here for! Sometimes maybe you just want to correct a few of the mistakes, and...
Writing Feedbacksaruul2004 - Mar 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|gre issue7 video camera provides an accurate and convincing record.
NEW - TOPIC: ISSUE7 - "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has...
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|Leave the land in its natural condition? 'harmony with modern cities'
4 - Nowadays, people tend to concentrate more on economic growth and leave the environmental problems behind by constructing more buildings...
Writing Feedbackbinhdt101 - Mar 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|Proof/edit my cause & effect paragraph about unemployment- collegeEnglish
3 - Some of the common causes of unemployment are due to getting fired, getting laid off, the market economy,...
Writing Feedbackxoqtpie609xo - Mar 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|sedating music - There are many different types of music in the world today.
4 - Thesis statement: Music is a part of our lives, and it is meaningful regardless of whether it is traditional...
Writing Feedbackplotophyte - Mar 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|Illustrative Essay, The Dairy Farmers Life
Writing Feedbackmsdenna - Mar 3, 2010 / msdenna - Mar 5, 2010
|5. mixed --21st century=opportunity,you agree/disagree, changes you hope--
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Mar 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
|Commitment,Intellectual ability & Enthusiasm; Recommendation by academic advisor
Writing FeedbackHanna - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
|Compulsive buying disorder (CBD): Conceptualization and classification
Writing FeedbackMcGregor10 - Feb 21, 2010 / McGregor10 - Mar 4, 2010
|Explain why you like (or do not like) to work in a team.
5 - i have some corrections i hope that help you - never begin a sentence by because/ the sentence must...
Writing FeedbackN2N - Mar 1, 2010 / djanat - Mar 4, 2010
|"Make all you can, save all you can, give all you can" it's better to save money
4 - Otherwise is one word. Also, this is a run on sentence: For basic needs, we should have money; otherwise...
Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
|Essay on describing MY REGULAR WALK
7 - Thank you EF_Kevin, I got several inspirations on the expression about my writing. Anyway, I will try more times...
Writing Feedbackwinwin - Feb 20, 2010 / winwin - Mar 4, 2010
|business and cultural contact + development - views and your opinion
NEW - 1 .Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development, while others...
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|desirable lifestyle: as a celebrity or common people. argument IELTS
Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Mar 1, 2010 / usalma2002 - Mar 2, 2010
|Comparison and Contrast : Differences between two lives
Writing Feedbackpurplespongy22 - Mar 2, 2010 / cathyliu - Mar 2, 2010
|Do you like to eat at home or hotel?
6 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackmegha - Feb 23, 2010 / megha - Mar 2, 2010
|essay about studying abroad in spain
2 - I enjoyed reading your essay, it was very well thought out and interesting. Here are a few small mistakes...
Writing Feedbackdefnite - Feb 28, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 1, 2010
|Informational and persuasive essay on travel
3 - Thank you very much! I truly appreciate your insight. As times passes and my writing skills improve I hope...
Writing FeedbackJ Carpenter - Feb 27, 2010 / J Carpenter - Mar 1, 2010
|the town of Garlsdon: Maps, roads - IELTS cambridge 5 writting task1
2 - Capitalize the first word: The central part is the town centre and surrounding it is the housing district with...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 1, 2010
|"That birthday card" - Besides the Point? A Re-thread
Writing FeedbackChenalaska - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2010
|Maps, roads - IELTS cambridge 5 writting task1 check out the grammar
5 - Thanks everyone! You are all making this forum a great place by helping each other so much. In...
Writing Feedbackmerchant - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2010
|Your school days, an enjoyable event description
5 - The enjoyable event I would like to talk about here is the spring outing activity that happened on my...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 27, 2010
|what is advantage and disadvantage of a new shopping mall ?
4 - A mechanisms of free-trades of consumerism in modern times, shopping malls are large places full of goods and service...
Writing FeedbackBBOY - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 27, 2010
|Havisham: My Story based on the Poem Havisham
Writing FeedbackAdamking120 - Feb 25, 2010 / Adamking120 - Feb 26, 2010
|personal narative -mexico tattoo
NEW - started writing this personall narrative for a senior english assingment..feeling kinda stuck. please helppp Laying my head back...
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|micheal jackson : rock with you
4 - 1958: when Michael was born in lower middle class family with a curse of being black. ---- if you...
Writing Feedbackkasi_gem - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|A healthy person: What do people do to stay healthy in your country?
3 - Children at an early age learn to do exercises and have fun playing team games, like football and volleyball...
Writing Feedbackplotophyte - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|descriptive essay about my favorite animal (the lion)
Writing FeedbackESCRIBE - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|which one do you think--- a wide range of courses --most/least important
3 - Nowadays, along with the emphasis on the overall development of individuals, students now stay ... ---- you don't need...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers, we should build our buildings in traditional styles
5 - Well, it is a very difficult language to learn! You are doing very well. The way to practice is...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|How to Apply to Universities in America from Indonesia (process analysis)
3 - ...but something always goes gets in their way. Some people just cannot afford it, and some people just...
Writing Feedbackpurplespongy22 - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|a narrative reflective essay regarding education
2 - If you are writing in the present verb tense, keep consistent about it: When his class mate, Ken Harvey,...
Writing FeedbackDeedames - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|Indian-White Relationship in Colonial New England, can you check my essay
3 - You can't just start by saying something had been some way without saying "when" you are talking about: When...
Writing FeedbackJuan8897 - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|"Freedom to Failure" - Definition & Example paper, passive voice, prepostion use
2 - Yes, isn't it interesting that we crave that sense of connectedness, so we blog and twitter about what...
Writing Feedbackkjwerner - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|TOEFL essay (compare work of artists and scientists)
3 - Good advice, Peng! I also think this essay needs an intro paragraph that talks about both artists and...
Writing Feedbacksheryl82 - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|[TOEFL essay] Teachers should update their knowledge every 5years.
Writing Feedbackduke616 - Feb 22, 2010 / duke616 - Feb 25, 2010
|Personal Story - The Child Hood
Writing Feedbackhyori14 - Feb 23, 2010 / cathyliu - Feb 25, 2010
|Green Change - "cause and effect" essay
6 - What a powerful line this is! When people deeply understand the cultural turbulence that takes place, they really...
Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Jan 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|Essay-Mommy Makeovers, Newest Trend in Cosmetic Surgery-Feedback Welcome!
4 - Questions are good attention grabbers, for sure. They are almost a little cliche, though, because of how overused rhetorical...
Writing Feedbackamymich79 - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 24, 2010
|Personal Essay- How the children from India transformed me
Writing Feedbackjenniferrchan - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 24, 2010
|Reasons-winners are be motivated by money & fame, what impacts on youth & itself
5 - You're welcome! Some phrases and wordings are used a certain way in a certain time and if you aren't...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 22, 2010 / klusterfunk - Feb 24, 2010
|ESSAY 250 WORDS - IELTS - Politicians and Scientists
Writing Feedbackvictorp_sv - Feb 20, 2010 / winwin - Feb 24, 2010
|Politicians and scientists have the greatest influence on earth.discuss IELTS GT
4 - I like your argument that politicians and scientists have influence on earth. It seems very vague though as to...
Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Feb 15, 2010 / hey_millie - Feb 24, 2010
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