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|Advertising confuses consumers between what they need and what they want
4 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback. I will take your lesson and improve my writing skill....
Writing FeedbackMai Nguyen - Feb 2, 2018 / Mai Nguyen - Feb 2, 2018
|[TOEFL] Why go to a university - reasons for education
Writing FeedbackYuChiehQin - Jan 31, 2018 / YuChiehQin - Feb 2, 2018
|Should mathematics and philosophy be optional in schools?
3 - Thanks a lot for spending your valuable time to review my essay. Your comments are really helpful. I am...
Writing Feedbacksenuthilini - Feb 1, 2018 / senuthilini - Feb 2, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Problems caused by media's projected image of beauty
5 - Hi there, here is my opinion I think the introduction did not totally satisfy the requirement of both background...
Writing Feedbackeilagandhali - Jan 13, 2018 / vietduccan - Feb 1, 2018
|IELTS Taks 1: The construction and number of passengers for different underground systems.
3 - Hi there, here is my opinion In the overall statement, it is quite long. You should pick no more...
Writing Feedbackthaisonvg - Jan 22, 2018 / vietduccan - Feb 1, 2018
|Homework is unnecessary, do you agree?
6 - From the skills I have developed from authoring several essays, I have come to realize that it is often...
Writing Feedbackannyht - Jan 20, 2018 / inok26 - Feb 1, 2018
|It is better to find and install alternative energy sources rather than increasing the fuel prices
3 - Thank you very much for your valuable comment. I understood the issue and will try to focus on it....
Writing Feedbacksenuthilini - Jan 31, 2018 / senuthilini - Feb 1, 2018
|If you are required to obtain a second specialty, what specialty would you like to study and why?
3 - Mia, consider that you are applying for a job and you are seen to be less skilled than possible...
Writing Feedbackmiawang1121 - Jan 31, 2018 / Holt - Jan 31, 2018
|Over packaged products and its implications PTE
3 - Peter, you seem to have gotten a bit confused in your opening statement. You were unclear about simply having...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Jan 30, 2018 / Holt - Jan 31, 2018
|IELTS: student's basic curriculum - with or without art?
5 - I will assume that you followed the prompt. ... is completely useless ,which I strongly disagree. Thesis statement...
Writing Feedbackkrisujing - Jan 19, 2018 / PeterBrown - Jan 30, 2018
|IELTS- Are the arts a good government investment?
Writing FeedbackinderGTR - Jan 13, 2018 / PeterBrown - Jan 30, 2018
|Should the Government or Family Pay for retirement medical cares.
3 - The following are some of your grammar mistakes: 1) ... had better live life? ... 2) Therefore, the ......
Writing FeedbackHanNguyen0510 - Jan 21, 2018 / PeterBrown - Jan 30, 2018
|"Are all Whites generous givers?" based on a picture
4 - @Hueiru On your good essay, I suggest that you make a conclusive sting that can portrait the aim of...
Writing FeedbackHueiru - Jan 28, 2018 / Godluck - Jan 29, 2018
|Age limit, Who is obliged to work?
3 - Any sentences shouldn't be too long (probably within 20words). There is a very long sentence in the 2nd paragraph,...
Writing Feedbackellielou_alipoon - Jan 27, 2018 / yungcwy - Jan 28, 2018
|Sports and social activities great influence on study should be noted and supported by goverment
2 - Do, I understand that you are most likely self studying for the IELTS test and as such, you are...
Writing Feedbackdohoangvananh - Jan 26, 2018 / Holt - Jan 27, 2018
|Teacher is a person who believes in you, tugs, pushes and leads you to the next plateau
3 - @Holt I passed my CBEST exam. Thank you so much for your constructive and quick feedbacks. :)...
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 14, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 27, 2018
|Video games having an adverse effect on the people who play them - is that truth, give your opinion.
Writing Feedbackchitrinh_389 - Jan 26, 2018 / Holt - Jan 27, 2018
|Introduction "Impact of Globalization"
2 - @loveofenglish As I read this introduction, I found it wanting in terms of specific, introductory information. The first missing...
Writing Feedbackloveofenglish - Jan 26, 2018 / Holt - Jan 26, 2018
|A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Providing keys and instructions.
2 - LAI, there are number of grammatical errors that distract from the reading of this letter. The first problem that...
Writing Feedbacklineline - Jan 26, 2018 / Holt - Jan 26, 2018
|Some believe that vegan diet is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world
3 - @vinu460 your essay is not going to pass in an actual test setting. For one thing, the essay that...
Writing Feedbackvinu460 - Jan 25, 2018 / Holt - Jan 25, 2018
|Prevention: The Only Solution To Our Health Problems
Writing FeedbackDragonyu - Jan 23, 2018 / Holt - Jan 24, 2018
|Presentation of the employee sick leave issue
3 - I've added this in the post also. Here is the question : The argument claims that according to...
Writing Feedbackrahul07 - Jan 23, 2018 / rahul07 - Jan 23, 2018
|Changes of the propotion of population aged 65 and over
2 - Dang, even though you wrote more than the required 150 words, there are a number of errors in your...
Writing Feedbackdangtam - Jan 20, 2018 / Holt - Jan 20, 2018
|The number of youngsters reading newspapers or watch the news is declining. Reasons and solutions?
Writing Feedbackvinu460 - Jan 19, 2018 / vinu460 - Jan 19, 2018
|Some believe that work experience is way more crucial than what is currently being taught at schools
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Jan 19, 2018 / Holt - Jan 19, 2018
|IELTS task 2 - essay about reasons why young people have a negative attitude towards learning?
2 - Yu, are you responding to a direct question essay? You forgot to indicate what kind of essay type you...
Writing FeedbackDragonyu - Jan 19, 2018 / Holt - Jan 19, 2018
|Essay: Describe what you usually do in your leisure time.
Writing Feedbackxiaolin06041993 - Jan 16, 2018 / shan2 - Jan 17, 2018
|Qualities that are important to be a good supervisor. Use examples and details to answer why?
2 - KGayatri, please make sure that you outline the paper in the proper manner. At first I thought that you...
Writing FeedbackKGayatri - Jan 17, 2018 / Holt - Jan 17, 2018
|People have contrasting views about volunteering activity for pupils
3 - Fitri, your essay is not properly representing the original prompt discussion topic. This has forced an error on your...
Writing Feedbackwinata7 - Jan 17, 2018 / Holt - Jan 17, 2018
|Creating IELTS task 2 : young generation of reality life
NEW - Question: In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school...
Writing Feedbackagustina - Jan 17, 2018 / — -
|Should children be immunised against diseases? Could both parents decide about it?
3 - Valentina, are you responding to an IELTS or TOEFL practice essay question? You need to indicate the type of...
Writing Feedbackvalkoval - Jan 16, 2018 / Holt - Jan 17, 2018
|No hiring so no need to pay for maternity leave later on? Opinion essay.
3 - @Holt, honestly, I have been focusing on constructing the 2,3,4 paragraphs that I did not spend much time to...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Jan 14, 2018 / Jimmy879873 - Jan 14, 2018
|Consumer items have become most important part of people's life.
2 - JASEEM, what is the prompt that you are responding to with this prompt? I am unable to accurately review...
Writing Feedbackjaseem5201030 - Jan 14, 2018 / Holt - Jan 14, 2018
|My own ways to improve the life in my hometown
5 - KGayatri, the prompt of this essay works on the principle of "pick battles small enough to win but big...
Writing FeedbackKGayatri - Jan 13, 2018 / Holt - Jan 14, 2018
|Some children are born with certain talents, however others claim that skills can be taught
3 - Many research provides information... Secondly, birth ratio ... is lower than ... children are talented person, as a...
Writing Feedbackwinata7 - Jan 12, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 14, 2018
|Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems.
3 - ... advent of technology also make contribution contributes to protecting the environment. ... should live a simple...
Writing Feedbackvuthiquynhchi - Jan 13, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 14, 2018
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: FAMILY ROLE CHANGES (Causes and Positive/Negative)
2 - Nguyễn, your opening paraphrase is not as accurate as it should be. To say "in the recent few decades"...
Writing Feedbackhanhndvn - Jan 13, 2018 / Holt - Jan 13, 2018
|IELTS Writing task 2 - essay about Country's goal, Economic progress or others?
2 - Sri, unfortunately, you were short by one word in order to meet the minimum word requirement. You wrote only...
Writing Feedbackeilagandhali - Jan 13, 2018 / Holt - Jan 13, 2018
|IELTS TASK2: It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history
2 - Than, the first problem with this essay is that it is not formatted properly. While you do have more...
Writing Feedbackstephenphan - Jan 13, 2018 / Holt - Jan 13, 2018
|Leaf Economic Traits Vary with Stand Age in Cunninghamia lanceolata
2 - jinli, your abstract is a detailed presentation of the research that you did. However, the thesis statement and result...
Writing Feedbacki6031 - Jan 13, 2018 / Holt - Jan 13, 2018
|Mars is the focus of scientists' attention and this money could be spent better
2 - Khushoo, I will not be scoring you on this IELTS test because the writing that you did in this...
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 13, 2018 / Holt - Jan 13, 2018
|IELTS TASK 2 - Some people think art is an essential subject while others think it's a waste of time
3 - Fitri, the main problems that you are facing in this essay are a lack of proper presentation and discussion...
Writing Feedbackwinata7 - Jan 12, 2018 / Holt - Jan 13, 2018
|Do you think eating together is important to people in your country?
5 - speacial ... character For instance, Vietnam people have one culture before ... - You can elaborate a little more...
Writing Feedbackdongbinh_44 - Jan 12, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 12, 2018
|CBEST ESSAY- Have you face any rejection/defeat ? How did it affect you.
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 11, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 12, 2018
|Essay about the role of parents and school in children education.
Writing Feedbackcongviec18 - Jan 11, 2018 / congviec18 - Jan 12, 2018
|IELTS Task 2 essay - Do parents play a vital role in success in a person's life?
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your very informative and motivational feedback. I would like to summarize your...
Writing Feedbackphimai_trex - Jan 11, 2018 / phimai_trex - Jan 12, 2018
|The preparation of food have become easiest task with modern innovative domestic appliances
5 - Thanku so much. Actually i am struggling with how to make complexity in an essay.. I need some help...
Writing FeedbackJas preet - Jan 11, 2018 / Jas preet - Jan 12, 2018
|[IELTS GT Writing Task 1] Write a letter to your manager to ask for some time off work.
3 - K, you have not properly formatted this letter. The format for an inter-office letter is as follows: Ms....
Writing Feedbackkeithsimpsons - Jan 11, 2018 / Holt - Jan 12, 2018
|I took the risk and become an elementary teacher. CBEST- Any risk that you have taken in life!
3 - Thank You so much for your constructive feedback! I shall try harder now. Apart from focussing on the topic,...
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 10, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 11, 2018
|How color effect companies and people's decisions
Writing Feedbackkobato_tuuyen - Jan 11, 2018 / kobato_tuuyen - Jan 11, 2018
|CBEST ESSAY! CONTRIBUTION OF TECHNOLOGY - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE ?
3 - Khushboo, what happened? You already scored a 3 with your previous exercise and now you are back to a...
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohra - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 11, 2018
|IELTS writing task 2: Celebrities must have wonderful lives.
3 - Peter, your opening paraphrase is not aligned with the original prompt even though the rest of your discussion is...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 11, 2018
|The amount of energy used and manufactured in the United States
Writing FeedbackAnn Ngo - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 11, 2018
|Foreigners should adapt the host country's customs and tradition when settling in
Writing Feedbackvietduccan - Jan 8, 2018 / KhushbooVohra - Jan 10, 2018
|Ieles Task-1 The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia.
Writing FeedbackJon Wang - Jan 10, 2018 / PeterBrown - Jan 10, 2018
|Happiness is now and here. To what extent do you agree with this statement
4 - @Holt thanks for your constructive criticism. I will conform to what you recommend to improve my writing skill...
Writing Feedbackbaothu - Jan 8, 2018 / baothu - Jan 10, 2018
|Punishment for learn distinction between right and wrong/ at least 250 words
2 - Gina, the lack of original prompt reference in this essay has made it extremely difficult for me to review...
Writing FeedbackGina Chu - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 10, 2018
|Vegetarians do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Is it a good way for others too?
3 - Can, this is an opinion essay. Therefore, in the thesis statement for your opening paraphrase, you should include your...
Writing Feedbackvietduccan - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 10, 2018
|IELTS writing task 2: Should women join the army? Just like men do.
3 - I think the way that you organized the essay was probably wrong because of some reasons.The topic requires you...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrown - Jan 7, 2018 / vietduccan - Jan 10, 2018
|Accident at the waterfall. Memorable childhood incident - Exam essay
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