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|IELTS Writing- technology leads to dying out of traditional skills and ways of life
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - May 12, 2011 / lastielts - Jun 1, 2011
|Toefl: Technological Innovations that are important
6 - Okay, Elmar, practice by typing it again and using the corrections you got here. That way, you can form...
Writing Feedbackelmar - May 29, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 31, 2011
|IELTS: mixed nationalities and cultures promote countries develop more quickly
Writing Feedbackandrea1122 - May 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 30, 2011
|IELTS - do arts and music improve the quality of life?
2 - My view is that the government should give priority to investing more money in the basic social welfares, such...
Writing Feedbackyoyolo - May 29, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 30, 2011
|An unforgettable survey from my childhood (or "I should be a teacher too")
4 - Welcome to EssayForum, Harun!! I'll make some suggestions below: People have many childhood experiences to enrich their lives....
Writing Feedbackhrnkls - May 29, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 30, 2011
|computer made life more complex and stressful .
Writing Feedbackbahareh - May 24, 2011 / bahareh - May 30, 2011
|The Devastation of my life - memory, transformation and tons of discretion
3 - Do you mean discretion or digression? People usually capitalize God. Capitalize the first word of the...
Writing Feedbackwaquarali - May 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 30, 2011
|Academic subjects should be useful for future careers of students?
5 - ...Those, who really love art.. Yoyo Lo, your try is very nice. In the 4th paragraph, you can...
Writing Feedbackyoyolo - May 26, 2011 / dhammika1973 - May 30, 2011
|What changes should be made in U.S public education?
3 - ... is high in compared comparison with other countries. or ...is high compared with other countries. Either of...
Writing FeedbackKathyLala - May 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 29, 2011
|Moroccan reforms. To what extent are they serious?
Writing Feedbackstart208 - May 26, 2011 / start208 - May 29, 2011
|story based on the painting Scream
Writing Feedbacketruffle - May 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 29, 2011
|Some jobs are appropriate for men (military), and some jobs are for women (nursing)
NEW - 3. Men and women are different, therefore some jobs are appropriate for men to do (military), and some jobs...
Writing Feedbackyoyolo - May 28, 2011 / — -
|some people believe that sport have no place in school curriculum
4 - Dear Arefe Safaei, I think i might also include that sport competition in school is sin-qua-non to achieving educational...
Writing Feedbacka_safaei_m - May 25, 2011 / klatz238 - May 28, 2011
|IELTS; The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising!
Writing Feedbacknzx7jv - May 26, 2011 / yoyolo - May 28, 2011
|'High costs' - IELTS International sporting occasions
3 - I'll give some more ideas below: Apparently it seems that scenes alike provide us a unique and convenient...
Writing Feedbackjennychen - May 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 26, 2011
|Both parents and teachers have to be careful about their attitude to the children - behavior issue
4 - I'll give some more ideas here: Poor student behavior is a major problem faced by schools in the...
Writing Feedback2ral - May 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 26, 2011
|Only the minority of people can learn by themselves; 'better to have a teacher'
Writing Feedbackkevinhsin1124 - May 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 26, 2011
|Progress is not possible without sacrifice
2 - One cannot succeed in a difficult endeavor without toiling for months or years.---not necessarily true, as some things are...
Writing Feedbackkartcord - May 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - May 26, 2011
|IELTS - units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France
Writing FeedbackBukabaka - May 21, 2011 / Bukabaka - May 26, 2011
|IELTS--the characteristics we are born vs. our personality and development
2 - Sorry, my english grammar is poor and couldn't help you to correct. Overall, I think the meaning of...
Writing Feedbacknzx7jv - May 26, 2011 / yoyolo - May 26, 2011
|The changeable amount of water used globally / number of miles traveled - Two IELTS
5 - Thanks a lot! Are you currently preparing for the IELST exam too? May be you'd better give me...
Writing Feedbackyoyolo - May 23, 2011 / yoyolo - May 26, 2011
|IELTS--mobile phone and youngsters, a necessity or evil
6 - that a lot!...
Writing Feedbacknzx7jv - May 23, 2011 / nzx7jv - May 26, 2011
|TED talk by a David Christian on Big History; To fulfill our natural function
2 - Before reading this you should look at the TED talk by a David Christian on Big History.---This seems like...
Writing Feedbackalistaire - May 24, 2011 / EF_Susan - May 25, 2011
|When money speaks , Truth is silent
Writing Feedbackheena33 - May 18, 2011 / heena33 - May 25, 2011
|The sense of competition in children: co-operate rather than compete?
5 - Than k you for your all attention.I realy appriciate that.I `m glad that i`ve joined at forum. I`m so...
Writing Feedbackyas rose - May 23, 2011 / yas rose - May 25, 2011
|The importance to use leisure time for activities that improve mind
5 - Dear EF_Kevin, Thank you very much for your corrections and suggestions of my essay. It is very helpful...
Writing Feedbackdhammika1973 - May 23, 2011 / dhammika1973 - May 24, 2011
|"There are times when lying is acceptable"--TOEFL essay
2 - Lying is acceptable depended depending on what are The right time and good purpose for lying may...
Writing Feedbackkittensu - May 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 24, 2011
|Success is the definition based on persistence as well as the desire of people
Writing Feedbackiluvbee - May 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 24, 2011
|Numerous positive effects of the new technology on our daily life.
Writing Feedbackstart208 - May 7, 2011 / start208 - May 24, 2011
|TOEFL - I follow two steps; My approach to problem-solving?
Writing Feedbackzailn - May 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|Should violent video games be banned?
5 - Thank you Kevin for you comments. I need to learn how to get my essays out sooner, because my...
Writing Feedbackralph01 - May 12, 2011 / ralph01 - May 23, 2011
|Important factors to consider when choosing a university/college.
3 - Also students learn to be flexible, because they have to learn about different ways of living. In addition,...
Writing Feedbackdandlelion - May 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|"The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies
Writing Feedbackirs055 - May 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|My mother; she was a teacher: an important person
4 - The first sentence is not very effective. You should change it! What is the best sentence you can write...
Writing Feedbackbechir3 - May 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|America is so vast that almost everything said about it is likely to be true...
3 - America suffers from an epidemic of obesity, but the slim foods and diet industry is one of are among...
Writing Feedbackharu_no_natsu - May 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|IELTS--politicians and scientists, who are more important to the society
5 - You did such a great job here! Without their endeavor in experiments and explorations, we are still would still...
Writing Feedbackimnotjolin - May 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|TOEFL:Government should spend more on early education than on college education
4 - You don't have to worry about the toefl. The English is nearly perfect. Even people who grew up in...
Writing FeedbackSamuelWei - May 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|Research essay:The necessity of supernatural figures in society today
Writing Feedbackmpatel24 - May 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2011
|Final Honors English Paper- Why do I deserve to pass this class?
6 - Yes! Silverystars has great advice for the structure of the paper. There are A LOT of grammatical errors...
Writing FeedbackKingFrizzy - May 19, 2011 / Notoman - May 23, 2011
|Description of tea manufacturing process
2 - There are numerous steps in the manufacturing of tea. Firstly, the top of two leaves and bud are...
Writing Feedbacklovelysmile - May 22, 2011 / EF_Susan - May 22, 2011
|IELTS- Resist making changes-problem and solution associated with it.
9 - It's probably because you have such high standards for yourself. Keep it up until you reach the GOAL!...
Writing FeedbackNeeta - May 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 22, 2011
|"It is better to be safe than sorry" - TOEFL ibt
4 - Here is an example of "redundancy." Google that word if you don't know it. :-) In our life, safety...
Writing Feedbackmywill - May 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 22, 2011
|TOEFL essay - Stay in one place or move around?
Writing Feedbackzailn - May 8, 2011 / SamuelWei - May 22, 2011
|Good news vs bad news; What factors influence this trend? IELTS
5 - Hello! To begin with linking words are also known as organising words and if you succeed in understanding...
Writing Feedbacklastielts - May 20, 2011 / Neeta - May 22, 2011
|TOEFL:It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life
Writing FeedbackSamuelWei - May 19, 2011 / SamuelWei - May 21, 2011
|Should Guns be Allowed on College Campus? - my finals essay
6 - I have the utmost respect for the average, gun-wielding citizen, but let's face it: they a certain percentage...
Writing Feedbackmaggierose1978 - May 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 21, 2011
|No-doubt, children learn much more both sense of competition and co-operation.
Writing Feedbackmohsiniiii - May 17, 2011 / icy ciel - May 21, 2011
|Global warming; Climate change research paper.
Writing FeedbackToeiizZ00 - May 20, 2011 / icy ciel - May 21, 2011
|Toefl ibt: Zoos are useful or not?zoos are advantageous to both human and animals
Writing FeedbackCoolmam9x - May 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2011
|Stay-at-home parents should be paid by the government?
5 - I think that the first paragraph should talk about the problems or difficulties stay-at-home parents are facing, and then...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - May 15, 2011 / whitney - May 20, 2011
|What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be funded?--IELTS
4 - Hi Jennifer, I don't know how tough the ietls is, but I am pretty confident that you'll do well....
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - May 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2011
|IETLS-Importance of history and effects if not taught to children
Writing FeedbackNeeta - May 18, 2011 / Neeta - May 20, 2011
|"practical skills for the well-being of society" - IELTS Band 7 essays
4 - Some small mistakes. You capitalized Academic at the beginning, and it should not be capitalized. You wrote i instead...
Writing Feedbacklastielts - May 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2011
|Actions speak louder than words. TOEFL ibt writing
4 - In our daily life, actions and words are both reactions to any situation. Sometimes it is better to act...
Writing Feedbackmywill - May 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2011
|"What famous place would you you like to visit?" - TOEFL ibt writing
Writing Feedbackmywill - May 17, 2011 / heena33 - May 20, 2011
|Environmental pollution is becoming an international issue - IELTS
Writing Feedbackglory215 - May 14, 2011 / glory215 - May 19, 2011
|IELTS - mobile phones and youngstars-a necessary evil
Writing Feedbackheena33 - May 16, 2011 / mywill - May 19, 2011
|TOEFL> moving to different countries is not good because of losing old friends
10 - There are some words as well as structure you should make change. I do not mean it is meaningless...
Writing Feedbackddpddpzzz - May 15, 2011 / mywill - May 19, 2011
|"Ignorance is bliss". Agree or disagree? - my essay for CBEST
4 - I'll fix the grammar and punctuation. Practice typing it this way: "As hunger is cured by food, so...
Writing Feedbackfridaeman - May 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 19, 2011
|(LMU) (KCL) (ICL) - Compare and contrast three British Universities.
4 - Great job! The only thing that might need more details is the third one" library". I think there should...
Writing Feedbacklovelysmile - May 17, 2011 / bahareh - May 19, 2011
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