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|<Ielts> traditonal skills should be protected?
5 - Here are some ways to write that sentence: When people are confronted by the situation in which our traditional...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Apr 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2011
|Sports professionals are able to make more money than other occupations
3 - Hello, Baxil! Nice to see you, too. :-) ... it is an unfair distribution of human welfare wealth....
Writing FeedbackBaxil - Apr 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2011
|Access to defendants' past criminal record - helpful and fair or not?
Writing Feedbackwaterolily - Apr 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2011
|When does someone become an adult? Responsibility of an adult.
2 - Great idea. This is the age of COLLABORATION, and it is great to get a diversity of ideas. Posting...
Writing Feedbackxuelai - Apr 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2011
|[GRE] I-3-AW-NO.1 - Salt - Education
2 - Several tips from aosi 1.The structure and template of the essay is so good, your core idea is...
Writing Feedbackxyzyanxue - Apr 13, 2011 / aosi111 - Apr 14, 2011
|[IELTS] fixed punishment or take into account circumstances
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Apr 10, 2011 / Panda271 - Apr 13, 2011
|The best way to learn English
Writing Feedbackmoonlighting - Mar 25, 2011 / moonlighting - Apr 13, 2011
|TOEFL writing: A new university will be established in the community. Agree or not?
Writing Feedbackjennyelbow - Apr 5, 2011 / jennyelbow - Apr 12, 2011
|Similar or different friends? What do you want most in a friend?
4 - ...and stress from living in the concrete jungle, my sporty friend can encourage me to go camping or... ...
Writing Feedbackadychang - Apr 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2011
|Cultural, economical, and political globalisation - is it worth it?
3 - Yep, this is a strong essay, for sure. I like that intro paragraph a lot. I wish, though, that...
Writing Feedbackbenzhu1985 - Apr 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2011
|Criminals who break the law will get punishment, and some of them will be put into prison
3 - I think you might need to avoid the complex sentences,some times it just feel confused in your essay. Keep...
Writing Feedbackqingsong - Apr 9, 2011 / findthetime - Apr 12, 2011
|"doing the same things and avoiding change?" - my target is 7 band
Writing Feedbackben123 - Apr 10, 2011 / ben123 - Apr 11, 2011
|GRE ISSUE 130 Do children's socialization determine destiny of society?
2 - Hello there, thanks for participating! I'll try to help you improve this: The influence of eduction to ...
Writing FeedbackOscar_C - Apr 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2011
|It is important that universities take a serious look at the sport facilities investment
4 - Although investment in library facilities is absolutely vital for universities, I disagree with any discrimination against spending money for...
Writing FeedbackBehroozz - Apr 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2011
|Which is major influence in our life, characteristics we are born with or experience
Writing Feedbackqingsong - Mar 31, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2011
|Are Photographs Representations of Real Life or Just Artistic Creations?
4 - Everyone has seen pictures, and many have taken pictures as well.---I fixed the grammar, but actually this sentence should...
Writing FeedbackLily Rose - Apr 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2011
|IELTS task 2: Developed nation should tackle refugee problem
8 - Ratree~~ personally, too many sentenses begin with "To..." or "The...", maybe you should make your sentenses more changable~...
Writing Feedbackratree - Mar 31, 2011 / ekekek - Apr 11, 2011
|Ielts graph: Mobile Phones Market in 2005 & 2006
3 - Samsung was another giant manufacturer of cellulars. Itwhich produced 12.7% of all mobile phones in 2005 and with a...
Writing Feedbackprostyle - Apr 7, 2011 / ekekek - Apr 11, 2011
|[Ielts]anti-social behavior,why and solution..
4 - I appreciatie that you could write so long in the limitted time~~ Generally speaking, I think the second paragragh...
Writing Feedbackfindthetime - Apr 7, 2011 / ekekek - Apr 11, 2011
|(IELTS) old building preserve or demolish?
Writing Feedbackekekek - Apr 8, 2011 / ekekek - Apr 11, 2011
|(IELTS topic) innate talent or pratice makes perfect?
Writing Feedbackekekek - Apr 7, 2011 / ekekek - Apr 11, 2011
|"What is a good son or a good daughter?" - TOEFL iBT sobject
Writing Feedbackmahrou - Apr 8, 2011 / mahrou - Apr 11, 2011
|Should Schools Offer Moral Class? (SAT and homework)
4 - Thank you, Kevin! Parallelism is important, but I didn't notice. Thank you, Aria! Your illustrations are good and...
Writing FeedbackLily Rose - Apr 8, 2011 / Lily Rose - Apr 11, 2011
|IELTS Task 2: people will spend less time on cooking food
Writing Feedbackautumnvagabond - Apr 8, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2011
|IELTS: Making an ideal society (opinions and solutions)
5 - Hello again, Annika, I just wanted to tell you that I think you are helping more people that anyone...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 8, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2011
|The main reason of spreading rubbish on planet Earth
2 - In our contemporary world, people are not concerned about spreading waste all over the planet Earth. I like...
Writing Feedbackshahabj13 - Apr 8, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2011
|Are we free to make our own choices in life, or are our decisions always limited
6 - Yes, excellent! It is supposed to be impracticable or impractical. Either of those words would work, but I don't...
Writing Feedbackxialiyu - Apr 8, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2011
|IELTS task 2:People nowadays are more easily influenced by fashion
4 - It is okay in formal writing, but I hate it! People should not say "firstly" and "secondly"... but...
Writing Feedbackcouhe - Apr 8, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2011
|Some people think widening the roads is as solution for traffic.Do you agree?
3 - oh.thank u...
Writing Feedbackkatayun - Apr 7, 2011 / katayun - Apr 10, 2011
|[TOEFL]Do you agree or disagree the young children spend most of their time playing?
Writing Feedbackmhh2531 - Apr 6, 2011 / mhh2531 - Apr 9, 2011
|"how stupid I am"; 5 minutes down-town
Writing Feedbackvafa - Apr 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2011
|Why are people attracted to dangerous sports, activities? 'to expose themselves'
2 - Great edit, Turbina! I am seeing a lot of helpful advice from you. Please consider joining our contributors (see...
Writing Feedbackmahrou - Apr 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2011
|[ielts graph] Underground Railway Systems / popularity
2 - Oh, I see that Turbina has a good idea. Instead of saying "London was opened in XXXX," you should...
Writing Feedbackkiraz - Apr 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2011
|IELTS: People are more fashionable now. What factors contribute to this?
4 - Excellent advice here. Kevin, please type the essay again using her corrections. If you have questions, ask us, and...
Writing Feedbackkvnpeng - Apr 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2011
|Nature or Nuture: the talent is important, but tenacity and perseverance are more.
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Apr 5, 2011 / jamliu0229 - Apr 9, 2011
|IELTS: The Internet has transformed lives and economies but it turning the world ...
9 - Hi there, Borislav was totally right. I'm preparing for IELTS test too. I have found out that,...
Writing Feedbackdaquoc - Mar 2, 2011 / englishlearner1 - Apr 8, 2011
|[IELTS] attitude to Space Research
9 - ^0^ Add some my advices~ I had wrote some similar topic. After reading yours, I found maybe the beginning...
Writing Feedbackkelp0308 - Mar 30, 2011 / ekekek - Apr 8, 2011
|IELTS: How to measure one's experiences and knowledge?
Writing FeedbackReal Fog - Apr 5, 2011 / Real Fog - Apr 8, 2011
|Essay about Prevention and Health Education is better than cure
5 - Thank you all for your support! I will try to correct and take it into consideration when writing!...
Writing FeedbackPanda271 - Apr 3, 2011 / Panda271 - Apr 7, 2011
|Independent life or living with family?
Writing Feedbackganaanaiz - Apr 4, 2011 / ganaanaiz - Apr 7, 2011
|(charts) EDUCATION ACHIEVEMENT IN WOMEN IN 1945-1995.
Writing FeedbackARIA - Mar 31, 2011 / ARIA - Apr 7, 2011
|A Two-page essay discussing how the rest of the world view America.
2 - For many decades, America has been known as the... After the September of 2001 tragedy, the position has...
Writing FeedbackZubaida - Apr 6, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2011
|TOEFL: TV has destroyed communication among friends and family?
4 - Annika, you are so great! Let me work on that first paragraph: Some people consider television to be...
Writing Feedbackyecochi - Apr 6, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2011
|Children at work: damaging and wrong?
2 - On one hand, some people assert that employing children could be productive and gainful, and those who hold this...
Writing Feedbacksalam237 - Apr 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2011
|People should place emphasis on improving the skill of working within groups, not independently
Writing Feedbacksabrinayaa - Apr 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2011
|"Why are groups or organizations important to people?" - my writing practice
3 - Birdman did give some great advice. Birdman, please check out the contributor page! You do great work here. (see...
Writing Feedbackadychang - Apr 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2011
|Choosing desirable subjects to study in the university?
3 - what?! When would it ever be appropriate for the government to decide what people study? It is not...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2011
|Someone is worth us telling the truth, someone isn't.
4 - We all make grammar mistakes. It's okay. The great thing is that you have brilliant philosophical ideas. ...
Writing FeedbackFrank zhao - Apr 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 6, 2011
|Which is more important family or friends?
3 - Wow, very nice... or example, even we were adapted children, we couldn't adopted children cannot stop...
Writing FeedbackMarsha2809 - Apr 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 6, 2011
|Toefl: spend leisure time outdoors or indoors?
6 - however, being outdoors seems to allow recreation to happen more easily than being indoors does Thank Kevin and...
Writing Feedbackyecochi - Apr 4, 2011 / yecochi - Apr 6, 2011
|A Good Employee Definition Essay
6 - Great Essay! It really gets the point across. But yes, more details in the last paragraph would be a...
Writing Feedbackmarzyola1 - Apr 4, 2011 / sbhb0831 - Apr 5, 2011
|Has learning about the past been beneficial to our present life? Help me correct it.
3 - Have we even wondered that why we have the subject of history as a pre-requisite course in school. ...
Writing Feedbackngocnam - Apr 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2011
|IELTS - old buildings were rebuilt or redesigned
4 - However, there are increasingly many old buildings are becoming the victims during the process of the city's modernization. ...
Writing Feedbackliang_yielin - Apr 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2011
|Ronnie Coleman; Celebrity question - what would you ask a famous person?
Writing FeedbackBorislav - Mar 31, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2011
|Our children today spend too much time watching TV _AnhTrung
3 - One word: outdoor ...outdoor activities to make them healthier both mentally and physically. The child must do...
Writing FeedbackAnhTrung - Apr 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2011
|College English Composition 1. Essay over "Personal Identity"
3 - The content requirements for this particular assignment are quite ironic -- ironic in that I was misunderstood even before...
Writing Feedbacknuclear_med23 - Apr 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2011
|Do you argee that playing computer game is a waste of time? Children should not play?
3 - Good essay I should say! I think that somebody should control children. Take for example their parents or elderly...
Writing Feedbackangelinee827 - Mar 30, 2011 / birdman - Apr 5, 2011
|"My cousin is really an emotional person" - A descriptive paragraph
Writing Feedbackvafa - Apr 2, 2011 / butterbescotch - Apr 5, 2011
|"English-Opening to Horror story" - Is my horror story effective?
Writing Feedbackmabcoll - Apr 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 4, 2011
|Parents should give money to their children for their high marks at school.
Writing Feedbackhaley_w - Apr 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 4, 2011
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