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|using computers in schools results in the rise in the illiteracy rate?
3 - Great corrections, caonhungchi! Here is another one: There is no doubt that the computer is one of the...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Jan 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 23, 2010
|Dream Job essay (independent films)
3 - Thank you two for all you input. And to Juniper this essay is for Western Washington University, i'm also...
Writing Feedbackalejandrocastil - Jan 20, 2010 / alejandrocastil - Jan 23, 2010
|Advantages and disadvantages of computer to run a small business!
7 - you use too many linking words. This may make your essay incoherent or maybe sometimes illogical...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Jan 9, 2010 / hatung94 - Jan 23, 2010
|Trafficking in human beings - My 500-words essay
7 - After studying a number of publications on this subject I made the following conclusions. Non-governmental organizations are doing a...
Writing Feedbackmalenkaya_ya - Jan 22, 2010 / malenkaya_ya - Jan 23, 2010
|"Recent Moscow State University bachelor in psychology came to an unknown world"
Writing Feedbacksarapultseva - Jan 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 22, 2010
|governments should try to promote alternative energy resources?
NEW - i am preparing for ielts, however, my writing skill is not good.could u check this essay for my mistakes....
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|Compare and Contrast Paragraph - Frogs and Toads
2 - I think you could come up with something more interesting as the first sentence! :-) It might...
Writing Feedbackilovetowrite - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|Some people prefer to work for large company. I belong to the technical domain
2 - The choice of company for an individual generally depends upon two factors -- namely, the salary package and the...
Writing Feedbackshraps - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|[TOEFL]Governments should spend much money on exploring outer space?
Writing Feedbackyin - Jan 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 20, 2010
|[TOEFL]I dont agree that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit!
Writing Feedbackyin - Jan 15, 2010 / yin - Jan 19, 2010
|MySpace Not Responsible for Predators (an argumentave essay)
3 - He backs his claim with four very strong and direct points, which include the following: MySpace is not there...
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Jan 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|Evaluate: Is it more important to learn more about business or about agriculture
3 - Today with new technologies and globalization the world is shrinking and it has become difficult to define the differences...
Writing Feedbackjagk2j - Jan 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|learning from experience or learning from books - compare essay
Writing Feedbackpinpin - Jan 19, 2010 / Keng - Jan 19, 2010
|Problem Solving Essay:Contradicting Characteristics-Correct my essay
5 - Well, it should be something that resonates with ou. Think of what you feel strongly about; what problems are...
Writing Feedbackmilkee_0923 - Apr 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|1500 word report on a letter by the author Norman Angell appeared in Times 1914
NEW - FULLY UNDERSTAND AND EVALUATE OF SOURCE PROVENANCE 10% UNDERSTAND AND APPLY WHERE APPROPRIATE WIDER CONCEPTUAL QUESTIONS REGARDING SOURCE MATERIAL...
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|the rise in good consumption reflect the power of advertising not for real needs
NEW - i am preparing for ielts test. however, my writing is bad, please help me to check for my essay....
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|Industrial Revolution (essay on a respectable topic)
2 - They showed us a powerful video/audio footage of Rachel's life and the Columbine tragedy that led everyone, including me,...
Writing Feedbackawaterbottle38 - Jan 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|IELTS: The money spent on Leisure and Education was a very little amount in all 5 countries
2 - This is very good! You should feel confident in your communication skills. Whenyou put 2 complete sentences together...
Writing FeedbackRuah - Jan 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|Essay about responsible for bringing children up
Writing Feedbackcavin301 - Jan 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|toefl essay - Human is a threat to an another human
Writing FeedbackKeng - Jan 8, 2010 / Keng - Jan 16, 2010
|education at schools is necessary for all people, not just excellent students
Writing Feedbackyin - Jan 16, 2010 / yin - Jan 16, 2010
|TOEFL "Playing game is fun when you win?"
5 - In my point of view, the latter group's idea due to some significant reasons which will be discussed in...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 31, 2009 / yin - Jan 16, 2010
|Clean energy / threat to life on Earth - Benefits and risks of Nuclear Technology
2 - Do the people rate you on just your structures and grammar or including your ideas? If they rate you...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Jan 8, 2010 / yin - Jan 16, 2010
|Toefl essay Advertising can tell you a lot about a country
4 - Usually, people say More importantly More importantly, it can draw a lot of tourists to visit your country....
Writing FeedbackKeng - Jan 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|Are Juveniles Responsible for Their Crimes
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Jan 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|IELTS practice writing for music.
3 - In my opinion, traditional music in the past seemed to be more important than modern , international music but...
Writing FeedbackSeong - Jan 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|" GRE essay: Laws should not be rigid or fixed. ..
Writing FeedbackDipD - Jan 4, 2010 / Dulie - Jan 14, 2010
|"Miss Wordy" strikes again. I have to chop oh, about 193 words.
4 - This sentence gives chills. It is very powerful the way you place it here. It's a very powerful...
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Jan 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 14, 2010
|dormitory or apartment - comparison essay
NEW - please correct my essay and give me some tips how to improve my essay ?Students at universities often...
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|Animal and music lover - NCSSM Essay #1
Writing Feedbackfishbish4 - Jan 11, 2010 / salbazili - Jan 14, 2010
|A girl who decides to stand up for what is right - Antigone essay
Writing FeedbackBenk84 - Jan 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 11, 2010
|Taking one long vacation has more educational benefits than it used to be.
3 - Hi Panyapon, Don't capitalize student in that first line. They will have a good opportunity to do...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 10, 2010
|An essay about Building up our Immune System.
8 - Thank you everybody for all your help! I really appreciate your prompt reply to my questions. Regards...
Writing Feedbackabd85 - Jan 6, 2010 / abd85 - Jan 9, 2010
|The overpopulation leads many serious problems
4 - Thanks you for helpful comments. I wil continue to write and share them to you. Your advice and encouragement...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Jan 5, 2010 / vothiha - Jan 7, 2010
|"Terrorism is not new." - can sb help me edit this analytical writing piece?
5 - Hey Yin! Tnx a lot. I actually agree wid you that the first paragraph completely seems bizzarre and out...
Writing Feedbackmarpals - Jan 2, 2010 / marpals - Jan 7, 2010
|essay on sovereignty, MA International politics essay
5 - Thank you very much for the answer. "Relative equality of states and the ungoverned international arena" is a practical...
Writing FeedbackUmbyboy - Dec 28, 2009 / Umbyboy - Jan 7, 2010
|"Faker?" - Somatization Disorder (abnormal psychology essay)
4 - Is it possible to feel physical pain from a psychological disorder with no traceable cause? In the 1980's the...
Writing Feedbackdas74d - Dec 29, 2009 / psitutor - Jan 6, 2010
|How to write an argumentative essay Modern technology has increased material wea
Writing Feedbackngothanhtam - Dec 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Talk about how the poets show their respect to animals.
4 - This confused me... Agamemnon is ancient mythology, and it has been told many times, but when I google...
Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Media essay - GRE (Issue Topic)
4 - The structure is pretty good; those grammar errors Susan caught are most important. For the structure, you hae...
Writing Feedbackivanka22 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|the gap between poor people and rich people - ielts writing
Writing Feedbackmanda - Dec 30, 2009 / Seong - Jan 6, 2010
|The Lessons of Groundhog Movie
3 - Thanks Kevin...
Writing Feedbackraiya - Jan 3, 2010 / raiya - Jan 5, 2010
|Journal. Why do people hurt each other.
Writing Feedbackkayyao - Jan 3, 2010 / kayyao - Jan 5, 2010
|For good or ill, I a feel intensely drawn toward adventure, risk and excitement
2 - When you want to post an essay, please select "New Thread." Don't post your essay in someone else's thread....
Writing Feedbackhadi - Jan 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2010
|Cheating in School- Satire Essay Help
2 - Hi Anna, I think this seems forced and uninspired. What are you making fun of exactly, the whole college...
Writing FeedbackAnnAsburY - Jan 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2010
|Essay for a Contest: Living in Suburbia- Looking for some criticism
Writing FeedbackLewisClark13 - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2010
|'unusual behaviors' - Games are as important for adults as they are for children
4 - Your feedback is very useful to my understanding a given prompt. each time i write an essay, i...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 28, 2009 / Keng - Jan 3, 2010
|'first thing people think about work is salary' - job satisfaction essay
NEW - Topic : As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an...
Writing FeedbackSeong - Jan 2, 2010 / — -
|TOEFL "Having job while studying or not"
NEW - 19. In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good...
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|Toelf essay Some people believe that success comes in life from taking risks
4 - Hi, ...attend to a famous and cannot be friendly with other people working in a office Maybe it's...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Jan 1, 2010 / hitchhike - Jan 2, 2010
|Innuendo in "Ode to Billy Joe". Check my grammar!
3 - garfunkel129 Garfunkel129, Thank you so much for your comments. I will definitely look into these changes....
Writing Feedbackkayyao - Dec 30, 2009 / kayyao - Jan 1, 2010
|teacher's teaching ability, a salary rise and a promotion to a higher level - teachers evaluation
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 31, 2009 / Keng - Dec 31, 2009
|historical event stanford grammar; "bulldog running along at the feet of Jesus"
Writing Feedbackshannon92 - Dec 31, 2009 / medelman2010 - Dec 31, 2009
5 - Its a cynical piece on an attitude I find much too often in the people in Western countries. ...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Dec 20, 2009 / Rajiv - Dec 31, 2009
|Why Harvey Mudd College-This student asked and answered his own question
4 - Harvey mudd actually has something like a Why XXX college? essay on their supplement. It goes like this... ...
Writing Feedbackyf8651 - Dec 16, 2009 / opeakapo - Dec 31, 2009
|Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute: They say I impacted the 21st century...
8 - The world has entered an era of rapidly increasin g change. The people who lead Leading scientists of this...
Writing Feedbackmstickel - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2009
|Talk about the metaphor of a movie "The PaintedVeil".
Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009 / KAJAL - Dec 30, 2009
|'a diary in English' - TOEFL optional essay - English ability
Writing Feedbackmafia - Dec 29, 2009 / mafia - Dec 30, 2009
|Pieces of Literature (section of a magazine)
2 - It seems like you could use a 'lead in' sentence at the beginning. One sentence perhaps giving an idea...
Writing Feedbackjeffliwin - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 29, 2009
|Viet Nam traffic
7 - "In order to reduce the number of traffic accidents, we should seriously punish traffic violators, encourage people to obey...
Writing Feedbackhalongphutu - Dec 16, 2009 / Kellyli - Dec 29, 2009
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