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|ESSAY - READING ENTERTAINMENT BOOKS INSTEAD OF EDUCATIONAL BOOKS - FEEDBACK
2 - Capitalize the titles of books. If we are to compare the difference between the reading habits of today's...
Writing Feedbackprince303 - May 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 26, 2010
|IELTS ESSAY : FINANCIAL AID TO DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
Writing Feedbacksheldon - May 24, 2010 / sheldon - May 26, 2010
|Art history paper about looted artwork during WWII
NEW - I just need general feedback like if my sentences and grammar make sense and if I'm answering the question...
Writing Feedbackqueensuri - May 25, 2010 / — -
|Factory is always links to the pollution problem
2 - I'll give some help here, too. I hope you will tell us if you have questions about the changes...
Writing Feedbackkevinhsin1124 - May 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 25, 2010
|TOEFL: THE INTERNET - problems or information? 'most powerful media'
8 - I think like these: To begin with/The first factor(/belief/reason/catalyst...) is that/I believe/.../(TRY NOTHING in replacement, just leave a gap...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - May 4, 2010 / triplesmickey - May 25, 2010
|Should crimes committed many years ago be forgotten? - Essay writing advice
7 - Well, some sentences like the one above are very, very impressive. You write like someone who is...
Writing Feedbacklentan - May 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 24, 2010
|IELTS TASK 2 : Study abroad (advantages and disadvantages)
3 - Comments: - Grammatical mistakes are quite visible, proving you not to have proofread. This field of errors includes...
Writing FeedbackNguyenXuanKien - May 23, 2010 / triplesmickey - May 23, 2010
|People are moving in to the big cities for more comfortable and convenient life
10 - Mickey, you seem seriously interested in helping people. Everyone participating in this thread made such a unique contribution; I'm...
Writing Feedbackprince303 - May 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 23, 2010
|Art Self-Evaluation piece: the process of creating your art portfolio
Writing FeedbackJd87rh - May 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 22, 2010
|Technology, one offspring of science, is a world of imagination being made true
7 - to some extent* :? Interesting way of approaching the prompt. placing down arguments for the assertive and...
Writing Feedbacktriplesmickey - May 12, 2010 / meisj0n - May 22, 2010
|It is easy to welcome innovation and accept new ideas
Writing FeedbackGary1986 - May 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 22, 2010
|Today we have a variety of food and we have various choices to prepare food
3 - I also think that eating "fast food", whether it McDonald's or the Olive Garden it's not as healthy as...
Writing FeedbackArshin - May 21, 2010 / haeddleman - May 21, 2010
|Music and art in school essay
6 - In conclusion, undoubtedly, this is the era of computers and science. Therefore, schools must be flexible enough to...
Writing Feedbackprince303 - May 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 21, 2010
|ESSAY- Comment on freedom on choice of clothing in schools - FEEDBACK
2 - No comma necessary here: School is the place which lays foundation ... progress or their overall personalities ....
Writing Feedbackprince303 - May 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 21, 2010
|Marine Pollution Introductory paragraph
2 - Source of survival is a strange phrase. It might be better to write: Water is the most crucial factor...
Writing Feedbackeveehp - May 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
|My hero, Terry Fox born in Canada
3 - Yes, that is true. It seems that Namon is struggling to improve her/his English, though, so let's help...
Writing Feedbackthailand - May 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
|Parents should encourage their high school students for part time jobs !
4 - Working twenty years at an inconsequential job may not give as much satisfaction as a highly prolific and demanding...
Writing Feedbackshalini singh - May 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
|SAT: even though having a good leader is important, we should not blindly follow his decision
Writing Feedbackpuroodsy - May 18, 2010 / puroodsy - May 20, 2010
|"True beauty" is the good humanity
6 - I think your grasp of English is really good actually, but it just takes practice Tips on writing:...
Writing Feedbackyangzom - May 14, 2010 / meisj0n - May 20, 2010
|IELTS; MOVIES & TELEVISION CAN POSITIVELY INFLUENCE PEOPLES' BEHAVIOR
2 - try to avoid writing firstly, secondly.. instead use sentences like one of the significant reasons.. over all good ideas,...
Writing Feedbackphuocqui - May 17, 2010 / prince303 - May 19, 2010
|"Failure is necessary for education to take place?" - grade my essay
Writing FeedbackMizo Metallic - May 13, 2010 / Mizo Metallic - May 19, 2010
|ielts essay: Advantages of attending school from a young age
2 - HI..SEPIDEH You have some grammatical errors in your essay.Which i guess, already been corrected by other users. Just remember...
Writing Feedbackgingerpopo - May 17, 2010 / prince303 - May 18, 2010
|'dark metal genre'; About the Music and why it's important to many people?
4 - thanx alot bro for your notes,but unfortunately most of them are typos. i just want you to give...
Writing FeedbackPink1 - May 16, 2010 / Pink1 - May 17, 2010
|Control over happiness - 'people gain happiness differently' (SAT)
5 - The first sentence, which should aptly give the first impression, is quite prolix and obscure. To say that...
Writing FeedbackSA51 - Apr 28, 2010 / triplesmickey - May 17, 2010
|Theatre Under The Stars
NEW - The popular musicals titled Shrek the Musical and West Side Story will be joining another popular musical that had...
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|"Fifty-Four Forty or Fight" History Research Essay
2 - Capitalize "River" because it is part of a proper noun. Columbia River I see a little typo: rejection...
Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - May 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 16, 2010
|Term Paper: Sailor Mentality
3 - Don't use a semi-colon here: ...when he writes: "With a philosophical flourish... or ...when he writes, "With a philosophical...
Writing Feedbackwilcerf - Jan 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 16, 2010
|The important lesson is life. The best teachers for the life are parents.
4 - Generally, people should count( consider) their parents as their life's teacher.Because they had got more experienced life. They could...
Writing FeedbackShukur - May 7, 2010 / babydoll - May 16, 2010
|Children have trend to be significantly more violent and careless in their study and social life
Writing FeedbackPink1 - May 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 16, 2010
|Text messaging: write about an invention that has changed your life
3 - The invention that made the biggest change in my life was text messaging. This discovery changed my way of...
Writing FeedbackLordBartosz - May 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 15, 2010
|CBEST Writing: My favorite subject/course in school (Korean Literature)
2 - Don't capitalize high: When I was in high school, my favorite... Thanks, Shalini, for the work you did...
Writing Feedbackimhe - May 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 15, 2010
|Questioning authority is important for improvements and innovations in many fields.
Writing Feedbacktyro - May 14, 2010 / — -
|About Malaysia's problems
NEW - Every country has it own problem, for example, Iraq/Iran is facing a terrible war, Africa is facing poverty, and...
Writing Feedbackcelineccky - May 14, 2010 / — -
|My research assignment on binge drinking and the health effects, review request
12 - This is a case where you say 2 things, and each thing should have a whole paragraph written about...
Writing Feedbackbondsemerson - May 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 14, 2010
|School teach for career or general knowledge (IELTS test)
NEW - i'm prepairing for the IELTS test and my teacher give me this topic question. help me to check for...
Writing Feedbackviebboy - May 14, 2010 / — -
|What factors do you think influence news editors' decisions?
4 - THanks so much! i often type wrongly english words but it could be better when i use pencils!:)......
Writing Feedbacktityeu - Apr 21, 2010 / tityeu - May 14, 2010
|fossil fuel energy, "The Power and the Glory"
Writing Feedbackgotten - May 6, 2010 / gotten - May 14, 2010
|"Is personal satisfaction the motivation for people to achieve?", covers point?
Writing Feedbackstephen1341 - May 10, 2010 / stephen1341 - May 12, 2010
|"She pulls the knife out..." - Short Story Help
4 - Don't switch verb tense: She stabbed Liam in the stomach. Liam was yelling... Yes, you certainly seem to...
Writing Feedbackchitown31 - May 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 12, 2010
|Sex Education In Schools and Colleges Is A Must.
2 - Pathetic is a word that seems judgmental, so it is better without it: ...It indeed is the pathetic plight...
Writing Feedbackabhisheksahai - May 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 11, 2010
|"beauty" and "travelling"
Writing Feedbackhallohallo - May 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 11, 2010
|Mrs. More: Describe a person you most admire, and the impact they had on you
2 - Please, check the Tenses you have used in your essay. In several phrases you are mixing them by using...
Writing Feedbackyahyabluecat - May 8, 2010 / milan2003_07 - May 10, 2010
|Toefl ibt writing Q2: University classes attendance, requirement or option ?
3 - Great corrections, "name here" Notice that "name here" added an apostrophe like this ' optional to enhance students'...
Writing Feedbackfrederic80 - May 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 10, 2010
|Childhood Experience-Writing Practice ("my parents are still my best friends")
Writing Feedbackimhe - May 9, 2010 / willy0123 - May 10, 2010
|Does advancement of Technology cause Pollution?
Writing Feedbackkayyao - May 3, 2010 / kayyao - May 8, 2010
|The Internet and Collegian Populace - checking the validity and soundness
6 - Honestly, this sort of paper, for which I have a high level of vested interest, was completed in the...
Writing FeedbackManDan88 - Apr 30, 2010 / ManDan88 - May 8, 2010
|Happiness for my school leaving examination :)
Writing Feedbackvalentina - May 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 8, 2010
|Growing up in a rural area provides an easy-going life pattern to children
3 - Since there are various specialized education systems in the city, it will help the children for education. - Existence...
Writing Feedbackbillryu94 - May 6, 2010 / Azeri - May 8, 2010
3 - Okay, the good news is that this essay is obviously very well researched and informative. However, it seems to...
Writing FeedbackG_D087 - May 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 8, 2010
|"health" again for my school leaving examination :)
Writing Feedbackvalentina - May 8, 2010 / valentina - May 8, 2010
|The Reverse Culture essay
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 19, 2010 / Rajiv - May 7, 2010
|Machines have many great features that are impossible for human to compete it
3 - many thanks for your help. i must work hard. god willing i won't have these kinds of problems in...
Writing Feedbacksina1989 - May 5, 2010 / sina1989 - May 7, 2010
|Difficulties faced today are greater than yesterday - GRE Essay Preparation
NEW - I am a beginner here. I am trying to improve my essay writing skills. Below is my first practice...
Writing Feedbacktyro - May 6, 2010 / — -
|Thesis: "Hybridity and Metamorphosis"
4 - Hi again, so if you didn't entirely toss out "self fashioning" just yet, you can still save it. I...
Writing FeedbackBnoel - May 4, 2010 / meisj0n - May 5, 2010
|magnificent historical buildings should not be destroyed: protection by law
2 - ... while others say that it only consumes the place of new ones and they should immediately be knocked...
Writing Feedbackbaris alibeyogl - May 4, 2010 / EF_Susan - May 5, 2010
|Eating at restaurants or at home? TOEFL essay.
Writing Feedbackvijaya - May 4, 2010 / vijaya - May 5, 2010
|GRE-issue8 political leaders withhold information from public
Writing Feedbackcasablancahp - Apr 26, 2010 / casablancahp - May 5, 2010
|City Managar: What is Your Ideal Career Essay
Writing Feedbacknewmt2008 - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2010
|Anti-Bullying Informative Paper (Our Brother's Keeper)
NEW - This is to be a Informative Paper in MLA format. Can someone proof read this? I dont see on...
Writing Feedbackqueenlyblessed - May 3, 2010 / — -
|"always obey your parents" Childhood experience which changed my life completely
NEW - Many childhood experinces leave lifelong impressions on people. Write an essay in which you describe a memorable childhood experience...
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