|Home / Writing Feedback [23,741] - page 358 of 396|
|describing my friends (Putri)
Writing Feedbackranggapermanaa - Apr 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|Argument essay, Smoking in public
7 - Troy, why don't you post a revised essay and we'll comment. Notoman has given you plenty to work on...
Writing FeedbackTeerunky - Apr 18, 2010 / linmark - Apr 20, 2010
|My intro paragraph: a cause and effect essay on getting my first hamster
Writing Feedbacklydever91 - Apr 10, 2010 / lydever91 - Apr 19, 2010
|I think that wealthy nations are not required to share wealth among poor nations
7 - yes i agree with tityeu, in my opinion wealthy should helprd the poor nation in order to share their...
Writing Feedbacktityeu - Apr 16, 2010 / parker1234 - Apr 19, 2010
|"Modern Times: Man vs. Machine" Essay Feedback for my online English class
Writing FeedbackPharaoh - Apr 16, 2010 / Pharaoh - Apr 19, 2010
|Some kinds of paid work affect badly to mental, physical and spiritual development of children
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|Fatherhood should be considered as important as motherhood
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|argumentive essay on abortion - fallacies?
3 - I think the politically correct thing to say is "pro choice" rather than pro abortion! :-) You...
Writing Feedbackdjoats - Apr 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|A mystic path
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|Daddy's Little Princess - analytical essay
Writing Feedbackqomoco - Apr 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|Sometimes challenges bring out the best in us (a difficult medical condition)
NEW - CBEST sample writing prompt Unexpected challenges in our lives sometimes bring out the best in us. For example, we...
Writing Feedbackdees - Apr 18, 2010 / — -
|Essay:academic subjects and non-academic subjects.
2 - ...may not be healthy... ...to waste an increasinga lot of money... ...if you have a good health......
Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Apr 18, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 18, 2010
|IELTS TOPIC: Telecommuting ; GOOD OR BAD?
Writing Feedbacksharkondiet - Apr 12, 2010 / sharkondiet - Apr 17, 2010
|"Cogito ergo sum". (cause and effect)
2 - Matter exists for no other reason then than to allow our observation of it. That experiment where they...
Writing Feedbackwhatisgod - Apr 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
|IELTS essay: Do married women usually work? Why and why not?
3 - The title is a question: "Do married women usually work?" This is not the same as "Should married women...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Apr 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
8 - I DO LIKE YOUR SECOND ESSAY. AS ALWAYS , NO GRAMMAR ERRORS.CONCRADULATION. YOU HAVE JUST ONE PROBLEM TO FIX....
Writing Feedbackstranger4ever - Apr 9, 2010 / djanat - Apr 16, 2010
|Bertrand Russell's arguments agains the existence of God - my philosophy paper.
2 - I have been asked to provide a counterargument to one of Bertrand Russell's arguments against the existence of God,...
Writing Feedbackjlemaster1 - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 16, 2010
|you agree/disagree with ;'' it is better for children to grow up in the big city
5 - In addition they would not be affected by complicated social evils, such as drugs, drinking in bars, or discos.----...
Writing Feedbackvuhaiyen - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 16, 2010
|Let's face the music! ; School Uniforms Persuasive Essay
Writing Feedbacksphat952 - Apr 7, 2010 / sphat952 - Apr 15, 2010
|"to create original movie advertisements" - Personal essay
4 - Ahhh you reponded too late. but thank you for the helpful advice. I have already turned in my paper....
Writing FeedbackTeaCake - Apr 13, 2010 / TeaCake - Apr 15, 2010
|IELTS ESSAY WRITING - GOVERNMENT AND EDUCATION
2 - The government has to provide primary and secondary education, but for university education either students or their parents should...
Writing Feedbacknhan8 - Apr 14, 2010 / vothiha - Apr 15, 2010
|Many people think being single equals freedom; Disadvantages of Being Single
6 - Oh My god. I am planning to be a single girl. therefore i don't have to worry about anything,...
Writing FeedbackSarareh - Apr 5, 2010 / vuhaiyen - Apr 15, 2010
|Descriptive narrative on a person (a woman who is in an abusive relationship)
Writing Feedbacknatalie - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2010
|IELTS [Chart Interpretation]:Domestic access to modern technology by residents of UK
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 2, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 14, 2010
|IELTS: The Natural Resistance to Changes
6 - Thank you all for your replies and help. Thank you, Kevin. Practice is the best way for improvement,...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 2, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 14, 2010
|Does having a lot of options make people happy?
7 - Having a lot of options means no option. Many success businesspersons say things would have been totally different...
Writing Feedbackstranger4ever - Apr 6, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010
|View and your opinion on traditional culture protect/destroy by tourists
4 - Thanks Azeri for your sincere suggestion. Thank Kevin for your suggestion and encouragement. It is your encouragement that gives...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Apr 6, 2010 / cathyliu - Apr 13, 2010
|Motherhood in Mother Courage (needs grammatical editing or any other critique)
5 - This is full of excellent material, but I want to criticize the way you introduce paragraphs... I...
Writing Feedbackchocole - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|An invention we'd be better off without - essay critique
4 - What is unstructured voice? structure means to have topic sentences that tell the main idea of paragraphs and...
Writing Feedbacklesharo - Apr 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|"a freshly mowed lawn in summer" - Descriptive Senses Composition
7 - It depends on the teacher's expectations. If the teacher is trying to teach a particular method, follow it....
Writing Feedbacklibrarylover - Apr 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Mohammad and Nour - help me my comparison/contrast essay
Writing Feedbackcute girl - Apr 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Addressing the one or two problems of not utilizing your Course Textbooks
3 - I can't say I blame those kids!! The text books cost hundreds of dollars, and sometimes the prof...
Writing Feedbackhtrrkt - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Mercy & Grace - eternal life, eternal punishment
7 - I'm afraid I don't know the grading criteria!! Every person interprets criteria differently. I don't know how to...
Writing FeedbackPhoebe Su - Apr 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|In order to maximize the efficiency of our scientists we should put few restricts on them
2 - You need more practice with singular/pluraland with verb tense. to some extent ... some things which is...
Writing FeedbackTom and cat - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Essay: Learning to live with Big Brother
Writing FeedbackTikky - Apr 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|TOEFL:children should begin their formal education at a very early age
4 - I think you can give some specific examples to back up your argument. For instance, it is widely agreed...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Apr 10, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010
|Structuring essays for TOEFL and IELTS -01- Introduction paragraph
6 - djanat, in IELTS there are two general patterns of paragraphing, and either one is ok. But, apparently, pattern 1...
Writing FeedbackVakax - Apr 7, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010
|Essay:Studying at home by using technology or studying at traditional schools?
2 - College students already do! ...and that they are irreplaceable, but others,in contrast,deem ...------ I just added some...
Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Apr 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2010
|College education: available to all or to only good students?
Writing Feedbackhandonguyen - Apr 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2010
|Hotels in Taipei, Taiwan: need help on transitions between paragraphs.
Writing FeedbackKellychen1125 - Apr 9, 2010 / Kellychen1125 - Apr 12, 2010
|Should friends be honest to each other?
6 - What a good topic! for me, we first have to understand the true notion of friendship, which can be...
Writing FeedbackKokirisword - Apr 8, 2010 / dejavu - Apr 12, 2010
|Topic:The differences between Vietnamese and English culture.
Writing FeedbackMarco - Apr 6, 2010 / Marco - Apr 11, 2010
|"Don't put all your eggs in one basket"
Writing Feedbackxxkixzplayaxx - Mar 22, 2010 / xxkixzplayaxx - Apr 10, 2010
|Are people more likely to be productive/successful when they ignore opinions?
3 - Azeri, Thanks a lot for the suggestions. You do not need to support nor reject the statement, but you...
Writing FeedbackKokirisword - Apr 9, 2010 / Kokirisword - Apr 10, 2010
|Parental Mishaps: Compare/Contrast Essay of my mom and dad
4 - Thank you for your help Susan. My professor thought that my paper was well-written, due to your helping....
Writing Feedbacklydever91 - Mar 17, 2010 / lydever91 - Apr 10, 2010
|"cursing the unlucky circumstances" - A translated Passage, good in English?
5 - Thanks for help indeed Mr. Kevin. However you didn't grade the passage! Thanks for the explanation....
Writing Feedbacktasneemspring - Apr 8, 2010 / tasneemspring - Apr 10, 2010
|Comparison and Contrast essay: Solar power and Wind power
4 - Nice comparison between solar power and wind power. But I want the solar power generator. Because it is effective...
Writing FeedbackRoZe10 - Mar 16, 2010 / dextercath96 - Apr 9, 2010
|Basic archetypal hero essay on McMurphy from One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest
NEW - Hello, I need some help reviewing my essay on the hero from the story One Flew Over the Cuckoo's...
Writing FeedbackSikes - Apr 9, 2010 / — -
|Essay For My Right To Be Me- feedback
4 - Well, you talk about it several ways: What happened to freedom of expression? What happened to freedom of thought?......
Writing FeedbackTheMadHatter - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2010
|'The Advantages and Disadvantages of Globalization'
2 - Globalization has contributed a lot to the world today. It boosts countries' economies, advanced technologies and improves daily life...
Writing Feedbacksyahid - Apr 9, 2010 / PrinnyS04 - Apr 9, 2010
|Children of different abilities-teach students in accordance with their aptitude
9 - Hi,stranger4ever You can list your reasons or advantages about studying together. We can discuss it....
Writing Feedbackzhangqin - Apr 7, 2010 / zhangqin - Apr 9, 2010
|IELTS essay: Topic about dependence on computers
15 - Thanks Sharkonadiet! You have some excellent vocab and I hope you keep adding to it! As ET_Kevin...
Writing Feedbacksharkondiet - Apr 5, 2010 / ept1961 - Apr 9, 2010
|Age of marriage in today's world
5 - EF_Kevin Thank you very-very-very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =))))) I adjusted my essay, today I' going to pass it... I'll tell you...
Writing Feedbackthebest_kz - Apr 7, 2010 / thebest_kz - Apr 8, 2010
|Opinion Essay about how technology improve quality of human life
Writing Feedbackallisonpat - Mar 31, 2010 / allisonpat - Apr 8, 2010
|Obedience and Disobedience in their extremes!
Writing Feedbackcraver - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 8, 2010
|Paper on ethics of animal research.
3 - Because of extremely advantageous health advancements that have benefited, and will continue to benefit, the lives of human beings,...
Writing Feedbackgeorgexu316 - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 8, 2010
|TOEFL essay: People have too much free time nowadays. Do you agree or disagree?
4 - I see what you mean Kevin. This occurs because of my inattentiveness. Thank you for pointing it out. I...
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Apr 6, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 8, 2010
|Violance Against Women
2 - In western countries women are more independent and more-ormore or less equal to male in the society. It is...
Writing Feedbackasokapalama - Apr 7, 2010 / zhangqin - Apr 8, 2010
|TOEFL essay: The automobile is destroying our quality of life.
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Apr 4, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 7, 2010
|TOEFL essay: government should spend as much money as possible on social issues
7 - Oh, I see! Well, you create a problem when you refer in general to social issues. Social issues...
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Apr 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2010
|Home / Writing Feedback|