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|my mother Pamela Miller, need help. descriptive essay :)
Writing FeedbackStarbucksxo - Jan 27, 2010 / kiwitahi1 - Jan 28, 2010
|Musqueam and UBC Golf Course Research Paper, Part 2
3 - Thanks, I just really dissaprove of our current Premier cause he is repeatedly abusing his power and adding extra...
Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - Jan 26, 2010 / icemaster2340 - Jan 27, 2010
|the defendant's past criminal record - IELTS Writing Task 2.
2 - Crime is one of the most discussed problems in the world, and governments of countries spend lots of time...
Writing Feedbackgabrielesan - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2010
|Air Pollution in Hong Kong - ( 500-word essay )
2 - Let's begin with the cause of the problems, which includes three main aspects. You should add this sentence to...
Writing Feedbacknarrow1234 - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2010
|My Assignment: My New Year's Resolutions (200 words)
Writing Feedbacklvnnk - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 27, 2010
|Narrative My life changing moment
3 - I joined the Army to become a strong , disciplined and a courageous person. --- I think it sounds...
Writing Feedbackmellyp74 - Jan 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 27, 2010
|Evolution of Federalism
2 - The word federalism is not seen in the constitution; however, throughoutthe many years in history, federalism has gradually... ...
Writing Feedbackpacers7ind - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 26, 2010
|Organic foods against conventional foods - Can you check my essay
4 - Organic foods are getting more popular among the people of the world, and people are often choosing them over...
Writing Feedbackkichikov - Jan 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 26, 2010
|Toefl essay: Students learn better when they are not threatend
4 - Thanks a lot! @RabiaG: I'm in first steps of writting an essay,I will try to improve it! @soarer:I think...
Writing Feedbackreiihane - Jan 22, 2010 / reiihane - Jan 26, 2010
|Take a trip to Vietnam? (persuasive paragraph)
3 - I think that you shouldn't summerize what you're going to talk about in your intro. Just give out key...
Writing Feedbacknicolethuynh - Jan 25, 2010 / lic12 - Jan 26, 2010
|computers have complicated people's life- agree disagree TOEFL essay
Writing Feedbackpinpin - Jan 25, 2010 / pinpin - Jan 26, 2010
|rejected for Early Action - SHORT AND QUICK EMAIL
9 - I'm sorry that you didn't get accepted. Maybe you should try setting up an appointment with the undergraduate admissions...
Writing Feedbackalexakrivoniak - Jan 17, 2010 / wongtongsoup22 - Jan 25, 2010
|marriages should be arranged by the parents or not?
6 - Yes, I'm getting to them all as quickly as I can. Are there any particularly urgent ones? Also,...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 21, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 25, 2010
|the Musqueam Reconciliatory Agreement: Part 1
3 - Keep this as part of the intro paragraph: In my opinion: Contrary to the... That is great thesis...
Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - Jan 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 25, 2010
|How I learnt English
2 - I think you should start off where you came from, then proceed on to telling us where you work...
Writing FeedbackGSK - Jan 23, 2010 / lic12 - Jan 25, 2010
|My grandfather - Essay for school.
Writing Feedbackjgv115 - Nov 24, 2009 / jgv115 - Jan 25, 2010
|Question about the structure of discussion essay according to IELTS exam.
2 - these sentences below are interesting because of the rule called "number agreement." As a result, many employees may...
Writing Feedbackgazel - Jan 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2010
|TOEFL ESSAY:HOW TO USE THE LAND THAT YOU WISH?
Writing Feedbackhatung94 - Jan 23, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 23, 2010
|Descriptive essay of a person you know (family first, himself last)
Writing Feedbacktwillis32 - Jan 22, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 23, 2010
|My Existentialism Beliefs-Free Will, karma, and reincarnation
3 - It depends on whether or not you care about showing "good composition," whatever that is. If you want...
Writing Feedbackrosschang - Jan 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 23, 2010
|people should try to earn money as much as possible??
5 - There are Hundreds of thousands of deaths around the world are caused every year by smoking. or There...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 23, 2010
|using computers in schools results in the rise in the illiteracy rate?
3 - Great corrections, caonhungchi! Here is another one: There is no doubt that the computer is one of the...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Jan 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 23, 2010
|Dream Job essay (independent films)
3 - Thank you two for all you input. And to Juniper this essay is for Western Washington University, i'm also...
Writing Feedbackalejandrocastil - Jan 20, 2010 / alejandrocastil - Jan 23, 2010
|Advantages and disadvantages of computer to run a small business!
7 - you use too many linking words. This may make your essay incoherent or maybe sometimes illogical...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Jan 9, 2010 / hatung94 - Jan 23, 2010
|Trafficking in human beings - My 500-words essay
7 - After studying a number of publications on this subject I made the following conclusions. Non-governmental organizations are doing a...
Writing Feedbackmalenkaya_ya - Jan 22, 2010 / malenkaya_ya - Jan 23, 2010
|"Recent Moscow State University bachelor in psychology came to an unknown world"
Writing Feedbacksarapultseva - Jan 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 22, 2010
|governments should try to promote alternative energy resources?
NEW - i am preparing for ielts, however, my writing skill is not good.could u check this essay for my mistakes....
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|Compare and Contrast Paragraph - Frogs and Toads
2 - I think you could come up with something more interesting as the first sentence! :-) It might...
Writing Feedbackilovetowrite - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|Some people prefer to work for large company. I belong to the technical domain
2 - The choice of company for an individual generally depends upon two factors -- namely, the salary package and the...
Writing Feedbackshraps - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|[TOEFL]Governments should spend much money on exploring outer space?
Writing Feedbackyin - Jan 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 20, 2010
|[TOEFL]I dont agree that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit!
Writing Feedbackyin - Jan 15, 2010 / yin - Jan 19, 2010
|MySpace Not Responsible for Predators (an argumentave essay)
3 - He backs his claim with four very strong and direct points, which include the following: MySpace is not there...
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Jan 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|Evaluate: Is it more important to learn more about business or about agriculture
3 - Today with new technologies and globalization the world is shrinking and it has become difficult to define the differences...
Writing Feedbackjagk2j - Jan 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|learning from experience or learning from books - compare essay
Writing Feedbackpinpin - Jan 19, 2010 / Keng - Jan 19, 2010
|Problem Solving Essay:Contradicting Characteristics-Correct my essay
5 - Well, it should be something that resonates with ou. Think of what you feel strongly about; what problems are...
Writing Feedbackmilkee_0923 - Apr 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|1500 word report on a letter by the author Norman Angell appeared in Times 1914
NEW - FULLY UNDERSTAND AND EVALUATE OF SOURCE PROVENANCE 10% UNDERSTAND AND APPLY WHERE APPROPRIATE WIDER CONCEPTUAL QUESTIONS REGARDING SOURCE MATERIAL...
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|the rise in good consumption reflect the power of advertising not for real needs
NEW - i am preparing for ielts test. however, my writing is bad, please help me to check for my essay....
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|Industrial Revolution (essay on a respectable topic)
2 - They showed us a powerful video/audio footage of Rachel's life and the Columbine tragedy that led everyone, including me,...
Writing Feedbackawaterbottle38 - Jan 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|IELTS: The money spent on Leisure and Education was a very little amount in all 5 countries
2 - This is very good! You should feel confident in your communication skills. Whenyou put 2 complete sentences together...
Writing FeedbackRuah - Jan 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|Essay about responsible for bringing children up
Writing Feedbackcavin301 - Jan 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|toefl essay - Human is a threat to an another human
Writing FeedbackKeng - Jan 8, 2010 / Keng - Jan 16, 2010
|education at schools is necessary for all people, not just excellent students
Writing Feedbackyin - Jan 16, 2010 / yin - Jan 16, 2010
|TOEFL "Playing game is fun when you win?"
5 - In my point of view, the latter group's idea due to some significant reasons which will be discussed in...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 31, 2009 / yin - Jan 16, 2010
|Clean energy / threat to life on Earth - Benefits and risks of Nuclear Technology
2 - Do the people rate you on just your structures and grammar or including your ideas? If they rate you...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Jan 8, 2010 / yin - Jan 16, 2010
|Toefl essay Advertising can tell you a lot about a country
4 - Usually, people say More importantly More importantly, it can draw a lot of tourists to visit your country....
Writing FeedbackKeng - Jan 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|Are Juveniles Responsible for Their Crimes
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Jan 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|IELTS practice writing for music.
3 - In my opinion, traditional music in the past seemed to be more important than modern , international music but...
Writing FeedbackSeong - Jan 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|" GRE essay: Laws should not be rigid or fixed. ..
Writing FeedbackDipD - Jan 4, 2010 / Dulie - Jan 14, 2010
|"Miss Wordy" strikes again. I have to chop oh, about 193 words.
4 - This sentence gives chills. It is very powerful the way you place it here. It's a very powerful...
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Jan 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 14, 2010
|dormitory or apartment - comparison essay
NEW - please correct my essay and give me some tips how to improve my essay ?Students at universities often...
Writing Feedbackpinpin - Jan 14, 2010 / — -
|Animal and music lover - NCSSM Essay #1
Writing Feedbackfishbish4 - Jan 11, 2010 / salbazili - Jan 14, 2010
|A girl who decides to stand up for what is right - Antigone essay
Writing FeedbackBenk84 - Jan 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 11, 2010
|Taking one long vacation has more educational benefits than it used to be.
3 - Hi Panyapon, Don't capitalize student in that first line. They will have a good opportunity to do...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 10, 2010
|An essay about Building up our Immune System.
8 - Thank you everybody for all your help! I really appreciate your prompt reply to my questions. Regards...
Writing Feedbackabd85 - Jan 6, 2010 / abd85 - Jan 9, 2010
|The overpopulation leads many serious problems
4 - Thanks you for helpful comments. I wil continue to write and share them to you. Your advice and encouragement...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Jan 5, 2010 / vothiha - Jan 7, 2010
|"Terrorism is not new." - can sb help me edit this analytical writing piece?
5 - Hey Yin! Tnx a lot. I actually agree wid you that the first paragraph completely seems bizzarre and out...
Writing Feedbackmarpals - Jan 2, 2010 / marpals - Jan 7, 2010
|essay on sovereignty, MA International politics essay
5 - Thank you very much for the answer. "Relative equality of states and the ungoverned international arena" is a practical...
Writing FeedbackUmbyboy - Dec 28, 2009 / Umbyboy - Jan 7, 2010
|"Faker?" - Somatization Disorder (abnormal psychology essay)
4 - Is it possible to feel physical pain from a psychological disorder with no traceable cause? In the 1980's the...
Writing Feedbackdas74d - Dec 29, 2009 / psitutor - Jan 6, 2010
|How to write an argumentative essay Modern technology has increased material wea
Writing Feedbackngothanhtam - Dec 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Talk about how the poets show their respect to animals.
4 - This confused me... Agamemnon is ancient mythology, and it has been told many times, but when I google...
Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
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