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|Some people are in favour to live in a house, others see more advantages living in a flat
5 - @Holt thanks very much for your comment, i didn't mean really that i did a search on rent., but...
Writing Feedbackhe227803 - Jun 29, 2017 / he227803 - Jun 30, 2017
|Is Violence the Result of TV, computers, and video games?
Writing Feedbackhalib_2309 - Jun 26, 2017 / celinechan - Jun 30, 2017
|IELTS task 2: Protecting architectural heritage
4 - Hi Tran, I have read your article. Firstly, I think your introductory paragraph is good because you successfully paraphrased...
Writing Feedbacktran le hai anh - Jun 29, 2017 / celinechan - Jun 30, 2017
|Economic success and clean environment.
Writing Feedbackthanhtampy2000 - Jun 29, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Jun 29, 2017
|PTE Essays task 2 writing - 20 mins typing on direct form of communication
2 - Tav, this essay is near perfect to the best of my assessment. The fact that you engaged the use...
Writing Feedbacktavanloc - Jun 29, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Jun 29, 2017
|Some people say it is OK to use animals for our benefit, others say it is not good to exploit them
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Jun 11, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Jun 29, 2017
|Persuasive Essay about different issues caused by computers
3 - Kristi, there are several problems with the essay that you are presenting. The most glaring problem is that this...
Writing Feedbackk_triplett - Jun 28, 2017 / Holt - Jun 28, 2017
|Sport amenities as an optimal method of making the public healthier?
3 - Hi Duc. I am going to give you responds related your contents. I would not focus on your grammar....
Writing FeedbackDuc Mosby - Jun 23, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Jun 28, 2017
|Parents have a dilemma and are unsure if their children should compete or cooperate with others
3 - Great work, however, as pointed out you have only an answered a half of the question. I suggest you...
Writing Feedbackcelinechan - Jun 25, 2017 / Hidy - Jun 26, 2017
|[IETLS writing] In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing
4 - Hi Wang Gang.. I have read your essay closely and found a few improvement you have needed. Turning to...
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Jun 26, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Jun 26, 2017
|Art is considered an essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer a
2 - Adiya, due to the lack of the prompt instructions regarding the actual topic and discussion style, it it's difficult...
Writing Feedbackadiya - Jun 26, 2017 / Holt - Jun 26, 2017
|A lot of young people spend their time sitting in front of the television at home
3 - I also wrote six paragraphs in my first IETLS writting. The mistake should be avoided in the future....
Writing Feedbackkimyoongi - Jun 24, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Jun 26, 2017
|Television influences badly on children's creativity
4 - @Holt Thank you Holt for your review. I'm sincerely grateful. Firstly, I d'like to say that my full essay...
Writing FeedbackIris Riverside - Jun 22, 2017 / Iris Riverside - Jun 25, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2: Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents
3 - Thanks a lot @Holt. I will work on complex sentences and try to complete the sentences with proper...
Writing Feedbackmtrj - Jun 24, 2017 / mtrj - Jun 24, 2017
|The body of an ielts essay related to personal happiness achievement
2 - Duy, in all honesty, this is one of the most off tangent discussion for this topic that I have...
Writing FeedbackLeestorm - Jun 23, 2017 / Holt - Jun 23, 2017
|Writing task 1 in ielts about the table of poverty people in Australia in 1999.
3 - WRITTING TASK 1: The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in...
Writing FeedbackBLUESTONE - Apr 4, 2017 / BLUESTONE - Jun 23, 2017
|[Ielts task 2] Education's effectiveness in leading people to a healthy eating habit
Writing Feedbackthien_my - Jun 21, 2017 / tran le hai anh - Jun 23, 2017
|Should museums charge for admission? Benefits and drawbacks.
5 - Anna, I read the entire response and felt like there was so much more that you could say. Your...
Writing Feedbackdinosps9a4 - Jun 20, 2017 / brayan1996 - Jun 22, 2017
|[TOEFL] INCREASING THE PRICE OF GAS AND ELECTRICITY IS WISE, IN MY OPINION!
3 - @Holt thank you for your comment on my post! In response to your question, The prompt requirement asks "Do...
Writing FeedbackMinh Nguyen - Jun 22, 2017 / Minh Nguyen - Jun 22, 2017
|A movie that has inspired you and its impact on your life. Problem in usage and convention - CBEST
Writing Feedbackbaljinder - Jun 21, 2017 / baljinder - Jun 22, 2017
|Information about the private use of Internet, Cd player, mobile phone and home computer in the UK
2 - Alessandro, you have to always remember that you will lose points for writing single sentences instead of complete paragraphs....
Writing Feedbackyendo - Jun 21, 2017 / Holt - Jun 22, 2017
|Explain any risk you have taken in your life. Cbest level essay.
Writing Feedbackbaljinder - Jun 20, 2017 / baljinder - Jun 21, 2017
|The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university
2 - Darren, while you did a pretty good representation of the overall information in the essay, your summary statement lacks...
Writing FeedbackDarren Mai - Jun 21, 2017 / Holt - Jun 21, 2017
|[TOEFL] Because modern life is complex, young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Writing FeedbackERIC SUNG - Jun 20, 2017 / Holt - Jun 20, 2017
|Ielts task 2 : The title is magical inside, plz make it more magical
3 - Ethan, word of advice never end an essay with "in conclusion." The reader should get the idea that your...
Writing FeedbackEthan Truong - Jun 18, 2017 / brayan1996 - Jun 19, 2017
|Academic Writing: the daily audiences percentage of UK radio and television X-XII 1992
2 - Haiyin, you need to develop a more consistent presentation of your timeline in your English sentences. Try to familiarize...
Writing Feedbackravatrav - Jun 18, 2017 / Holt - Jun 19, 2017
|A new recreational facility in Tusk - GRE writing task: Argument Essay
3 - Sodiq, basing the result of your work on the 30 minute time constraint, I am confident that you can...
Writing FeedbackHidy - Jun 17, 2017 / Holt - Jun 18, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task: technology and the wealth gap
2 - Chen, consider the prompt instructions. It is clear threat you are being asked to defend only one side of...
Writing Feedbackyac803 - Jun 16, 2017 / Holt - Jun 17, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Discussion Essay - Homework effectiveness
Writing FeedbackDarren Mai - Jun 16, 2017 / Darren Mai - Jun 17, 2017
|Rates of smoking in Someland
2 - @Huyhiep231 Normally, these summary essays ask the writer to make comparisons whenever possible. From what I can tell, there...
Writing FeedbackHuyhiep231 - Jun 16, 2017 / Holt - Jun 16, 2017
|Unhealthy activities in modern society
3 - Hy, you are writing an academic paper, not a creative writing class narrative essay. Therefore, you should not be...
Writing FeedbackLee Hy - Jun 13, 2017 / Holt - Jun 14, 2017
|The number of population figures for India and China - the line gragh
2 - Trang, you need to work hard on improving your grammar structure, range, and accuracy. I understand that English is...
Writing Feedbackbinchocopie123 - Jun 13, 2017 / Holt - Jun 13, 2017
|The information of millions of television viewers in sports by four different country.
3 - It is difficult to understand your writing since you do not have any picture included. Please post the picture...
Writing FeedbackTylen - Jun 13, 2017 / eddies - Jun 13, 2017
|The amount of time people spent by the phone in the UK
3 - Thanks a lot for your correcting. Can you please tell me the highest possible score I could get for...
Writing Feedbackoanhcute - Jun 11, 2017 / oanhcute - Jun 12, 2017
|Kids, youth and elders in Italy and Yemen
2 - Khoa, the summary overview is only considered a complete paragraph when it indicates all of the forthcoming discussion information...
Writing Feedbackdaiha20082009 - Jun 11, 2017 / Holt - Jun 11, 2017
|IELTS Task 2: What should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women at work
Writing FeedbackRiley Nguyen - Jun 10, 2017 / Riley Nguyen - Jun 11, 2017
|Different views about what kinds of obligation a company should have
3 - @baosoftware1 I will be discussing only your opening statement. You need to paraphrase the topic because this is...
Writing Feedbackbaosoftware1 - Jun 9, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Jun 11, 2017
|The proportions of British students speaking another language in 2000 and 2010
Writing Feedbacknhidd - Jun 10, 2017 / nhidd - Jun 11, 2017
|Governments should control the amount of violence in the media. To what extent do you agree or not
4 - @BinZ I assumed that prompt requirement means the topic. You have to read the instruction carefully before you...
Writing FeedbackBinZ - Jun 10, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Jun 11, 2017
|Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare student
Writing FeedbackDunghoang - Jun 11, 2017 / Dunghoang - Jun 11, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2: What are the perspectives for study abroad?
Writing Feedbackimcloud16 - Jun 10, 2017 / imcloud16 - Jun 10, 2017
|IELTS Writing task 1 : Why young executives are stressed at work and the consequences.
4 - You should add an overall paragraph after the introduction and one more body paragraph (because the third paragraph seems...
Writing Feedbackguan721 - May 21, 2017 / Riley Nguyen - Jun 10, 2017
|IELTS Task 1: Electricity Production Change in Australia and France
4 - Be careful when using words in writing task 1. Not all words can be used, for example: "different pattern...
Writing Feedbacknuradiapuspa - Jun 9, 2017 / eddies - Jun 10, 2017
|IELTS 2: Education in prison is used to reduce the crime rate so that prisoners can get a job.
2 - Nhu, I cannot accurately review this essay in terms of form and content because you did not provide the...
Writing Feedbackthieman - Jun 9, 2017 / Holt - Jun 10, 2017
|[Task 1] The graph below shows the changing trend of the use of modern technology in homes in the UK
Writing FeedbackTung Anh - May 30, 2017 / baosoftware1 - Jun 9, 2017
|Should schools spend more time in teaching traditional subject or skills?
3 - Well, when it comes to introductory statement, then your task is to simply state the background or the rubric...
Writing Feedbackiisernaw - Jun 7, 2017 / eddies - Jun 9, 2017
|Some people say international sports events help in world peace. Agree or disagree?
2 - CJ, you have the potential to become a good essayist. You have a good handle on the background of...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Jun 8, 2017 / Holt - Jun 8, 2017
|People think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum age for driving.
4 - I reckon brainstorming the ideas first before writing. Your body paragraphs needed to present more clear points. ...
Writing Feedbackbaosoftware1 - Jun 4, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Jun 8, 2017
|Emotion based decisions will have high tendency to be wrong - they should be taken with free mind
2 - Jayati, I have a few points of major concern in your essay. The first of which is the incomplete...
Writing FeedbackJt548313 - Jun 7, 2017 / Holt - Jun 8, 2017
|The technological progress and globalization influence positively to human's life (with exceptions)
3 - There are some rules using apostrophe ('s) in English such as possessive form (e.g. the bird's cage) and plural...
Writing Feedbackhidzikatat - Jun 6, 2017 / iisernaw - Jun 7, 2017
|Age distribution of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for future
3 - Jade, you can improve upon your opening statement in order to get a better task accuracy score. At the...
Writing Feedbackkxwai - Jun 5, 2017 / Holt - Jun 6, 2017
|Immigration has a major impact on the society. Main reasons of immigration and its consequences.
Writing Feedbackutsi - Jun 2, 2017 / utsi - Jun 6, 2017
|IELTS-Task 1: The flow chart below shows the three stages of glass bottle recycling
3 - @Holt thank you very much. Your feed back have proven to be extremely useful and i really appreciate that....
Writing FeedbackLeonardo Nguyen - Jun 4, 2017 / Leonardo Nguyen - Jun 5, 2017
|Entertainment and sport or healthcare and education
2 - @thanhhoang12a7 your opening statement should represent the two points of view prior to the presentation of your opinion. That...
Writing Feedbackthanhhoang12a7 - Jun 4, 2017 / Holt - Jun 4, 2017
|Chances do not make a major contribution to the triumph of anyone
5 - Do you guys can check my rewritting again ? It is argued that fortune plays a leading role in...
Writing Feedbackanhdt117 - Jun 2, 2017 / anhdt117 - Jun 4, 2017
|The same educational opportunity should be given to both gender students
2 - Lung, you have developed a very interesting and highly appropriate discussion for the subject provided. Your lien of reasoning...
Writing Feedbackmrgreatteacher - Jun 4, 2017 / Holt - Jun 4, 2017
|Quick world means quick decisions to make.
2 - Trung, considering that the essay proves that you are not well versed in the English language, you should not...
Writing Feedbacktrungomega - Jun 4, 2017 / Holt - Jun 4, 2017
|Issue Essay for GRE AWA section - technology and human skills
3 - Thank you Holt, I will work on constructing fluent grammatical structure, I would also appreciate hint on how to...
Writing Feedbacktizentos - Jun 3, 2017 / tizentos - Jun 3, 2017
|Australian teenagers and junk foods in their diet
4 - 1. You wrote: ... of eaten per year for pizza, fish ... Feedback: The article is missing before...
Writing Feedbackd2ny - May 30, 2017 / thunga2603 - Jun 3, 2017
|IELTs Task one: You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
4 - Hi I think your letter is not formatted right.I think you should start what is your request and...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - May 30, 2017 / Ashkan123 - Jun 3, 2017
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