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|"Terrorism is not new." - can sb help me edit this analytical writing piece?
5 - Hey Yin! Tnx a lot. I actually agree wid you that the first paragraph completely seems bizzarre and out...
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|essay on sovereignty, MA International politics essay
5 - Thank you very much for the answer. "Relative equality of states and the ungoverned international arena" is a practical...
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|"Faker?" - Somatization Disorder (abnormal psychology essay)
4 - Is it possible to feel physical pain from a psychological disorder with no traceable cause? In the 1980's the...
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|How to write an argumentative essay Modern technology has increased material wea
Writing Feedbackngothanhtam - Dec 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Talk about how the poets show their respect to animals.
4 - This confused me... Agamemnon is ancient mythology, and it has been told many times, but when I google...
Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Media essay - GRE (Issue Topic)
4 - The structure is pretty good; those grammar errors Susan caught are most important. For the structure, you hae...
Writing Feedbackivanka22 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|the gap between poor people and rich people - ielts writing
Writing Feedbackmanda - Dec 30, 2009 / Seong - Jan 6, 2010
|The Lessons of Groundhog Movie
3 - Thanks Kevin...
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|Journal. Why do people hurt each other.
Writing Feedbackkayyao - Jan 3, 2010 / kayyao - Jan 5, 2010
|For good or ill, I a feel intensely drawn toward adventure, risk and excitement
2 - When you want to post an essay, please select "New Thread." Don't post your essay in someone else's thread....
Writing Feedbackhadi - Jan 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2010
|Cheating in School- Satire Essay Help
2 - Hi Anna, I think this seems forced and uninspired. What are you making fun of exactly, the whole college...
Writing FeedbackAnnAsburY - Jan 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2010
|Essay for a Contest: Living in Suburbia- Looking for some criticism
Writing FeedbackLewisClark13 - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2010
|'unusual behaviors' - Games are as important for adults as they are for children
4 - Your feedback is very useful to my understanding a given prompt. each time i write an essay, i...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 28, 2009 / Keng - Jan 3, 2010
|'first thing people think about work is salary' - job satisfaction essay
NEW - Topic : As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an...
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|TOEFL "Having job while studying or not"
NEW - 19. In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good...
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|Toelf essay Some people believe that success comes in life from taking risks
4 - Hi, ...attend to a famous and cannot be friendly with other people working in a office Maybe it's...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Jan 1, 2010 / hitchhike - Jan 2, 2010
|Innuendo in "Ode to Billy Joe". Check my grammar!
3 - garfunkel129 Garfunkel129, Thank you so much for your comments. I will definitely look into these changes....
Writing Feedbackkayyao - Dec 30, 2009 / kayyao - Jan 1, 2010
|teacher's teaching ability, a salary rise and a promotion to a higher level - teachers evaluation
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 31, 2009 / Keng - Dec 31, 2009
|historical event stanford grammar; "bulldog running along at the feet of Jesus"
Writing Feedbackshannon92 - Dec 31, 2009 / medelman2010 - Dec 31, 2009
5 - Its a cynical piece on an attitude I find much too often in the people in Western countries. ...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Dec 20, 2009 / Rajiv - Dec 31, 2009
|Why Harvey Mudd College-This student asked and answered his own question
4 - Harvey mudd actually has something like a Why XXX college? essay on their supplement. It goes like this... ...
Writing Feedbackyf8651 - Dec 16, 2009 / opeakapo - Dec 31, 2009
|Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute: They say I impacted the 21st century...
8 - The world has entered an era of rapidly increasin g change. The people who lead Leading scientists of this...
Writing Feedbackmstickel - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2009
|Talk about the metaphor of a movie "The PaintedVeil".
Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009 / KAJAL - Dec 30, 2009
|'a diary in English' - TOEFL optional essay - English ability
Writing Feedbackmafia - Dec 29, 2009 / mafia - Dec 30, 2009
|Pieces of Literature (section of a magazine)
2 - It seems like you could use a 'lead in' sentence at the beginning. One sentence perhaps giving an idea...
Writing Feedbackjeffliwin - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 29, 2009
|Viet Nam traffic
7 - "In order to reduce the number of traffic accidents, we should seriously punish traffic violators, encourage people to obey...
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|nutrition for biology essay: becoming obese.
NEW - i'm not completely done with my essay. but i would love some suggestions or comments about my essay so...
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|TOEFL "working by hand vs. using machines"
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 26, 2009 / hitchhike - Dec 28, 2009
|Essay about a valuable life lesson that you have
3 - what are types of your writing? Narrative, descriptive, explanation or just a storyline. I think you write...
Writing Feedbacksujujun - Dec 26, 2009 / Keng - Dec 28, 2009
|introduction paraghraph about equal numbers of male and female in universities
3 - In paragraph 1, You should begin with what do you think about the prompt, then write opinions of the...
Writing Feedbackmona80 - Dec 24, 2009 / Keng - Dec 28, 2009
|Computer is useful tool - has many functions
3 - Keng Thank you Keng so much! I still remember that you instruct me how to post essay into essay...
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|Toefl essay Image that you have received land
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 24, 2009 / Keng - Dec 28, 2009
|IELTS: Television has changed the way children spend their leisure time.
5 - Hi, I'm Seong and I am also studying IELTS course of english. When I learned introduction of IELTS,...
Writing FeedbackROKO - Dec 26, 2009 / Seong - Dec 28, 2009
|Toefl essay A person you know is planning to
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 23, 2009 / Keng - Dec 26, 2009
|An IELTS about ads targeting younger and younger children
3 - I agree with your idea! You have introduced your topic clearly. Just pay attetion to grammer mistakes like "Parents...
Writing Feedbackleonardo092 - Nov 27, 2009 / linhexi - Dec 26, 2009
|Do you agree to "Watching Television is bad for children"?
5 - Today, children prefer to got go overseas for their education , and for this reason it is necessary...
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|How computers have affected the way we work today vs. 100 years ago - CLEP
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|TOEFl "ability to read and write more important today than.."
2 - This seems like it should be one sentence, not 2: How can I neglect the importance of writing and...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
|Fatherhood - fathers have now same obligation as much as mothers have
2 - Don't forget to capitalize the first word of every sentence. In the past, time this role was mostly...
Writing Feedbackarvind143 - Dec 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
|'freedom and independence' Do you learn better by yourself or with a teacher?
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|Some people are born with certain talents..
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|Change one thing about education in VietNam
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|TOEFL "growing in countryside vs big cities..."
2 - Hello! I noticed you've been helping a lot of people with their essays, thank you! Some people believe...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 21, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 22, 2009
|Expense for each consumer goods among all mentioned countries performed a visibly contrasting value
6 - EF_Kevin thanks for your kind offer to help me, and is it appropriate that I use "Initially" instead of...
Writing Feedbackyoungcatherine - Dec 16, 2009 / youngcatherine - Dec 22, 2009
|the relationship between Jews and Christians, how to write about a film?
2 - Use italics instead of quote marks: James Carroll's Constantine Sword is a... James Carroll was a former priest...
Writing Feedbackstylegirl100 - Dec 20, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
|Biological perspective on Sexual Orientation - "nature or nurture" approaches
14 - Well... *they are not actual bullets *they cannot holler, ha ha, and *they are harmless in every way....
Writing FeedbackMcGregor10 - Dec 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
|essay about universities should give the same money tos student's lib and sport
4 - hi, here is some minor corrections sports sport activities Obtain obtaining qualifications...for keeping the parallel structure with next phrases...
Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 14, 2009 / hitchhike - Dec 21, 2009
|IELTS composition G class Task1 (Fitness facilities renovation)
Writing Feedbackfzhongjie - Dec 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
|Toefl essay "such as: improvement in their reading and writing skills, helping "
2 - For the reasons above, rich people not equal to unhappy people.----> in this sentence, you should write that being...
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Dec 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
|Toefl essay: Governments should pay more attention on health care issue than ..
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Dec 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
|TOEFL "A gift can contribute to child's development..." - BOOK
5 - When you put 2 complete sentences together as a compound sentence, you are supposed to use a comma....
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
|Toefl essay. people succeed because of hard work
2 - hi, Some suggestions: In my idea, it's better to introduce names used in your essay, for example: Karen,...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 20, 2009 / hitchhike - Dec 20, 2009
|TOEFL Essay "read only factual books or not.."
NEW - 13. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about...
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|Toefl essay. The twentieth century
5 - Excellent, I sure respect that. I hope you will read some books by Stephen Kind, and read them...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
|Toefl essay, People with different interests and personalities cannot be friends
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Dec 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 19, 2009
|toefl Essay What the 21century will bring
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 17, 2009 / Keng - Dec 19, 2009
|Essay about the best advise and given - feedback
Writing Feedbackerinhcho - Nov 30, 2009 / yang - Dec 18, 2009
|Toefl essay A government plans to build a new research center
5 - Hello my friend! In conclusion, that whether people use the research center for business or agriculture depends on...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 18, 2009
|Creativity is much more needed process today to survive the future of mankind
7 - I wrote are becoming because it is present continious structure) When I noted their . I meant that you...
Writing Feedbackgms - Dec 14, 2009 / birzhanfm - Dec 18, 2009
|Correct my writing (IELTS Task1: Describe chart about USA marriage and divorce rates)
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