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|My grandfather is my hero; 'he was kind to his neighbors and homeless people'
Writing Feedback2writebetter - Jul 10, 2008 / 2writebetter - Jul 11, 2008
|vision 2020:A Mirage
2 - Good afternoon. What are the requirements for this assignment? The more information I have about what your instructor...
Writing FeedbackNicodemus - Jul 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 11, 2008
|Are rich children always happier than those who come from poorer families?
6 - You are very welcome. You will know if you can answer these questions by the "feel" of them; trust...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jul 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 11, 2008
|Pain at the pump. An electric vehicle should be your next car
4 - Hello! You are very welcome! I enjoy watching as your writing improves, and improving it is! I applaud...
Writing Feedback2writebetter - Jul 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 10, 2008
|Sickled red blood cells and homeostasis - essay
Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 8, 2008 / — -
|European Championship - football essay
Writing Feedbackoranje - Jul 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 8, 2008
|Television essay - "It is all about TV"
Writing Feedbackoranje - Jul 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 8, 2008
|Youth and Technology combined no doubt will bring a very aspiring future
4 - You are very welcome. Tense is something that all writers, no matter what their level, have to be...
Writing FeedbackGeist - Jul 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 7, 2008
|Chemical compounds and human life processes - short lecture
Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 7, 2008 / — -
|"Online plagiarism" - read my paraphrased paragraph!
2 - "A study regarding online plagiarism implied that the acts being committed may be big in number, but not actually...
Writing FeedbackGeist - Jul 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 6, 2008
|Establish a duty of care- Tort Law
8 - If you are going to post your essay with the corrections made, I can edit it again for organization...
Writing Feedbackpwincesspink - Jul 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 5, 2008
|The three traits of a good essay(Is this essay any good?)
2 - Good morning :) This is a good essay; you give clear, concise information. Just a few suggestions: ...
Writing FeedbackNoethe - Jul 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 4, 2008
|Problems are Opportunities in Disguise
1 - Problems are Opportunities in Disguise topic: Bob Maynard has said that "Problems are opportunities in disguise." Write an...
Writing Feedbackcutieiy - Jul 1, 2008 / — -
|the way of nominating homeroom teacher
4 - Thank you so much, Gloria. The essay topic question used the word 'nominate', in fact. The person who made...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jun 17, 2008 / je2ks2 - Jun 26, 2008
|Essay on Divorce Rates in Canada
2 - "The State of Divorce in Canada: Why individuals are choosing to have a divorce, rather than finding another method...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 25, 2008
|native English teachers vs non-native teachers
1 - Hello, here is another essay. :-) I am always thankful for your big help! Hope my essay is getting...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jun 24, 2008 / — -
|The beauty of an individual - essay
6 - If you have run a plagiarism check yourself then you know what is coming back as copied. The solution...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 24, 2008
|Attending service at Pilgrims' Rest Baptist Church - critique my essay
1 - Attending service at Pilgrims' Rest Baptist Church. On June 6, 2008, I was able to visit the Pilgrims...
Writing Feedbackcrystalcrj310 - Jun 23, 2008 / — -
|Sustainable Agriculture Research
3 - i dont understand, because the only source i used was the article. and i summarized it, i never copied...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 22, 2008 / sarahmk - Jun 22, 2008
|curriculum vitae - my first essay
5 - Thanks I like this suggestion: I've grown up, passing through both elementary and secondary school"...
Writing Feedbackoranje - Jun 21, 2008 / oranje - Jun 22, 2008
|Credit Card Invention - essay check
1 - My professor gave us a prompt about a best or worst invention. I thought credit card would be good....
Writing Feedbackpinks1026 - Jun 21, 2008 / — -
|45 minute essay (teaching and the public school system)
1 - Hello, I am practicing writing an essay in forty-five minutes because I am preparing for the clep exam....
Writing Feedbackbonechills - Jun 20, 2008 / — -
|"Teenagers nowadays have adopted a consumerist lifestyle."
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jun 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 19, 2008
|Willie Russel - making the cliff scene dramatic
Writing Feedbackpwincesspink - Jun 19, 2008 / — -
|Teenagers between the ages thirteen to nineteen should not be allowed to date.
1 - Teenagers between the ages thirteen to nineteen should not be dating. In their decisions of dating should have considered...
Writing Feedbackjames78 - Jun 18, 2008 / — -
|Essay on "giving up on hope."
1 - Can you please check this for grammar and spelling errors? thanks soo much If one's world is filled...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 16, 2008 / — -
|"Promised end" the soul yearns for to be thwarted by the demand of history
3 - thanks for everything i just need help with this assignment Can you help me with my grammar and...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 13, 2008 / sarahmk - Jun 15, 2008
|Essay about the history of the UK
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|I have been eighteen years existed in this world. Check my essay about myself
1 - I have been eighteen years existed in this world. Within those years, I had explored every thing to create...
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|Why do you want to do the short course to which you have been admitted?
1 - "Why do you want to do the short course to which you have been admitted? In Vietnam, accompanied...
Writing Feedbackkitty20111983 - Jun 13, 2008 / — -
|Literary Analysis Comparative Essay - suggestions for improvement welcome!
6 - Good afternoon :) Citation is tricky, but MLA is pretty straight forward and to the point. It looks...
Writing Feedbackjohn - Jun 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 12, 2008
|Super Rod - Essay about a super hero, I have a plot.
Writing Feedbackdeniece - Jun 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 11, 2008
|You know life moves on - doesn't it? ; A Farewell Note to the Class
5 - A note to the same people addressed in the note above, after the class dispersed. This is an attempt...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Apr 20, 2008 / Rajiv - Jun 9, 2008
|Media coursework, comparing 2 articles..
1 - Media coursework You are asked to compare item 1 and Item 2, explain which item you think will...
Writing Feedbackneedhelp01 - Jun 8, 2008 / — -
|Learning something new is always challenging to many of us - the same applies to a foreign language
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jun 1, 2008 / je2ks2 - Jun 8, 2008
|The Short Happy Life Of Francis Macomber Essay
1 - Mrs. Macomber shot her husband on purpose because she wanted to kill him and stay with his money. Mrs....
Writing Feedbackchimochi - Jun 6, 2008 / — -
|Can You Decide Where to Live?
Writing Feedbackhappyyoora - Jun 6, 2008 / — -
|'Vietnam's natural attractions' - something that make you proud about your country
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jun 6, 2008 / — -
|Topic 3: Any form of education other than co-education...
3 - Thank you your advise, I read ideas from the book in library,I don't know this book is copyrighted from...
Writing FeedbackSophie - Jun 5, 2008 / Sophie - Jun 6, 2008
|Ban Smoking - Help critique my controversial/ethics essay
2 - You have made a very important observation; very frequently writers do reread a work the way they "intended" it;...
Writing Feedbacklucero5 - Jun 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 5, 2008
|"Before Breakfast," Drama Essay
2 - Good morning :) You have a good rough draft so far. You support your viewpoints with the text....
Writing Feedbackbolivartech - Jun 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 5, 2008
|'household computers and internet' - Causal Analysis
2 - Good morning :) Adding examples and/or details is always a good way to "beef up" an essay; just...
Writing Feedbacksinginheaven - Jun 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 4, 2008
|A Doll House Essay - True Man Wants
1 - Can someone please check my grammar and see if the essay discusses how their relationship and how it presages...
Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Jun 3, 2008 / — -
|"America is Great" - Need help fast on argumentation essay
1 - I have an arumentation essay due tomorrow and I suck at writting so any help would be greatly appreciated....
Writing Feedbacklafayettejohn - Jun 3, 2008 / — -
|Qualitative research methods coursework review
1 - Hello, Can you kindly help me review my attached coursework. The question for the assignment is shown below...
Writing Feedbackmophe - Jun 1, 2008 / — -
|How did Juno Beach on D-Day effect Canada?
Writing Feedbackerindalestudent - May 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 29, 2008
|Three defining moments in Canadian history - History Argumentative Essay
2 - I'd say probbly a 9 or 9.5; you've got good research and good organization. If you fix the few...
Writing FeedbackRishadNoori - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 29, 2008
|A new challenge in my forties as an English teacher
2 - You have the beginnings of a very good essay here, though it is a little discombobulated :). Let's work...
Writing FeedbackPark Taesik - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 28, 2008
|New Government's Policy on English Education
2 - Good morning :) Thank you for posting your essay. What kind of feedback do you need? Regards,...
Writing Feedbackweonshiin - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 28, 2008
|One year struggling to be a better mom
Writing Feedbackchonggis - May 28, 2008 / — -
|Essay on "Why do Korean students go abroad to study?"
1 - Why do more and more Korean students choose to study abroad? Nowadays, more and more students are leaving their...
Writing Feedbackbottletenc - May 28, 2008 / — -
|First Essay - D-Day Canadian Contributions
1 - Ok my first post. This forum is great - helpful people doing good things. Ok I wrote this essay...
Writing FeedbackShardul - May 27, 2008 / — -
|Quality or characteristic that helps be a good parent - my 1st Formal Essay
5 - Gloria, Thanks for all your help. I'll be back soon enough with a research paper! I'll let you...
Writing Feedbacknclester - May 25, 2008 / nclester - May 27, 2008
|Smoking ban in all public places - persuasive essay
Writing Feedbackbonechills - May 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 21, 2008
|Selfishness and politics research paper and outline
13 - Good evening! You are welcome. For examples of MLA in text and work cited pages, do an internet...
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - May 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 20, 2008
|Death penalty in the code of King Hammurabi of Babylon
1 - i have written the directions for my assignment. is my research paper ok? Direction: in a 10-12 page...
Writing Feedbackice tea - May 20, 2008 / — -
|Thesis essay on "Adoption issues"
11 - Good afternoon! A thesis statement usually lets the reader know right away what your stance on an issue...
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - May 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 20, 2008
|Mr. Nowack - need help with grammar for a narrative essay
1 - This scruffy looking guy won't quit staring at me. I look away from him and then back again and...
Writing Feedbacklafayettejohn - May 18, 2008 / — -
|Natural fiber-reinforced composites paragraph (improve grammar question)
2 - Good morning! OK, how about, "This, coupled with the distinctiveness of being an environmentally friendly option in that...
Writing FeedbackLovely Girl - May 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 18, 2008
|Essay on describing traffic jam
10 - Good evening. If you are looking for solutions for traffic congestion in a specific area, I suggest doing...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 17, 2008
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